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My DS9 Rewatch Odyssey

Go figure: Picard learned how to play what is essentially an Irish tune on what is essentially an Irish tin whistle; O'Brien learned how to draw lines in the sand.

O'Brien must suffer indeed!
 
Go figure: Picard learned how to play what is essentially an Irish tune on what is essentially an Irish tin whistle; O'Brien learned how to draw lines in the sand.

O'Brien must suffer indeed!

According to this since Pcard is a name from the north of France, Picard's favorite hobbies should be to throw lawn darts, arm-wrestle, and casting fishing.
 
According to this since Pcard is a name from the north of France, Picard's favorite hobbies should be to throw lawn darts, arm-wrestle, and casting fishing.
Sorry if I wasn't clear, but I was speaking of Picard's experiences in Inner Light (the instrument recorded for the flute was a tin whistle playing a hybird of a Scottish and an Irish tune).
 
Sorry if I wasn't clear, but I was speaking of Picard's experiences in Inner Light (the instrument recorded for the flute was a tin whistle playing a hybird of a Scottish and an Irish tune).

I know that. That's not my point. You said that O'Brien should be unhappy because drawing on the sand wasn't an Irish pastime and I responded with what Picard pastimes should be. My point is that for all we know O'Brien can't stand the typically Irish Pastime just as sometimes you meet an American that doesn't like baseball or an Italian that can't stand Soccer (although the latter had better keep quiet about it or he would risk his life.)
 
Take for example Neil Armstrong, he had something prepared for his first step on the moon, for weeks likely, and yet he managed to screw it up. :D

And he wasn't dying at the time!!!

Give Neil a break. He's a test pilot, not an actor. And even if the speech wasn't letter perfect the meaning got across perfectly well.
 
Give Neil a break. He's a test pilot, not an actor. And even if the speech wasn't letter perfect the meaning got across perfectly well.

That was just to show how unlikely it is that someone will say something important just before they die.
 
“ONCE MORE UNTO THE BREACH”

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“I’m not crazy, I’m the DAHAR MASTER!! Who’s the Dahar Master?! I’M THE DAHAR MASTER!!”

As I’ve stated more than once, I’m not generally a fan of Klingon episodes and Berman-era Klingons in general. Even though DS9 has delivered some strong Klingon episodes (“The Way of the Warrior”, “Sons of Mogh” and “Soldiers of the Empire” are all varying degrees of excellent) the Klingons are exceptionally overexposed by this point. In fact, I’m not sure what the numbers are on this, but it feels like we’ve had more Klingon episodes than Bajor episodes across the series. Right now, however, all is forgiven, because “Once More Unto the Breach” is legitimately one of the finest episodes of the entire series. Indeed, it’s probably the best Klingon episode Star Trek has done since their very first appearance 31 years previously in TOS’s “Errand of Mercy”. That seems only fitting considering these episodes mark the first and last appearances of the magnificent John Colicos as the franchise’s very first Klingon, Kor.

I’m always a little apprehensive about episodes primarily set on Klingon ships because the sets and lighting make for muddy visuals—and DS9’s picture quality is not, sadly, something that has stood the test of time. Yet, that’s about the only complaint I have about this episode. It’s otherwise a brilliantly conceived episode, beautifully and poetically written by Ron Moore, and brought to life by some superb directing and, above all, tour de force performances by all involved. The Klingon stories have always lent to themselves a theatrical, Shakespearean tone and nowhere is that more evident than here, and not just in title alone. “Once More Unto the Breach” is a surprisingly moving exploration of life and death, the power of fame, reputation and myth, the pain of ageing and loss, class oppression and revenge. There’s actually a huge amount of depth and resonance here, and it’s remarkably well done.

John Colicos, in what I believe was his final acting role, is simply marvellous throughout. It’s painful to see a man of Kor’s stature reduced to begging for scraps from Worf. Given the reaction he gets from the crew of the Ch’Tang I do find it somewhat hard to believe Kor doesn’t have ANY influence or power left at all, but it’s a concession nevertheless played with so much conviction that it works. What does become of living legends once they pass their prime and reach old age? There’s an inevitable pain and loss that accompanies ageing, and I’d imagine it’s particularly acute for those who had significant fame and renown in their prime. What makes it even sadder is seeing the gradual glimpses of Kor’s cognitive decline which culminate in him completely losing the plot in the heat of battle. On a personal note, I’m afraid I’m seeing early signs of cognitive decline in my father—primarily forgetfulness and an inability to focus at times. Alas, that made the episode all the more poignant and painful to me.

The core conflict is between Martok and Kor, and it’s brilliantly executed. It turns out Martok has harboured a burning grudge against Kor for decades and he is filled with hatred for the aged Dahar Master. His viciousness and cruelty toward Kor is genuinely wrenching to watch—and yet, J.G. Hertzler is so magnificent that we, or at least I, never ended up hating Martok for it. His grievance was a legitimate one. The mess hall scene where Martok and his crew taunt Kor is a punch in the gut—and infinitely more compelling than the usual “Mess Hall Fight Scenes” (TM) we normally get in Klingon episodes. Kor’s moving response is one of my favourite moments of the entire franchise and a magnificent feat of writing and acting:

“Savour the fruit of life, my young friends. It has a sweet taste when it is fresh on the vine. But don’t live too long. The taste turns bitter, after a time...”

One of the highlights of the episode is Martok’s aide, Darok, a man of a similar age to Kor. Neil Vipond is superb in the part, bringing an enormous sense of gravitas and empathy to the role. It’s almost hard to believe Darok only appeared in this one episode, because he’s such a vivid and beautifully drawn character that it feels like we’ve known him for years. If this hadn’t been so late in the show’s run, I’d like to think he could have become a recurring character. His relationship and sense of kinship with Kor is highly poignant, as is his solution to Kor’s situation: finding a way for the Dahar Master to redeem himself and earn his place in Sto’Vo’Kor. Kor’s farewell to Worf as he knocks him unconscious with a hypospray is a moment that always brings me to the verge of tears: “When I reach the halls of the hallowed dead, I shall find your beloved and remind her that her husband is a noble warrior, and that he still loves no one but here. Goodbye, my friend—and live well.”

What makes this one of the best Klingon episodes by far is that instead of a bunch of grunting, brawling, knuckle-dragging Neanderthals we see a competent crew pulling together, with some complex, intelligent and thoughtful characters. Yeah, Martok’s crew lose points for tearing Kor to shreds in the mess hall, but that was sadly realistic and behaviour all too common in real life. The reactions in this episode all felt authentic and I felt as though I was watching actual three-dimensional people as opposed to generic “Klingon warriorrrrr” stereotypes. The insights we got into the Klingon class system also added some much needed nuance and depth to their culture, which I greatly appreciated.

Interestingly, although this is one of Michael Dorn’s favourite episodes, Worf gets a little sidelined in the script. His involvement, although important, is a little tangential, and Michael Dorn is overshadowed by the tour de force performances of Colicos, Hertzler and Vipond. He does, however, get one of the absolutely coolest Worf moments of all-time: specifically, the moment where Worf grabs the dagger Martok sends flying at Kor with one hand, while knocking Kor unconscious with the other. Magnificent.

Allan Kroeker’s directing is typically first rate and he really adds tremendous finesse to the episode. The special effects are also spectacular and the aerial shot of the Klingon birds of prey departing the station is one of my all-time favourite shots. Kor’s fate is left to the imagination, and I think that’s an inspired touch of storytelling. Bashir and O’Brien’s earlier discussion about the Alamo and Davy Crockett’s fate foreshadows this brilliantly, with Worf declaring that what matters most is not the facts, but the legend. No one quite knows what happened when Kor faced down the Jem’Hadar but his legend will live on forever. It’s been a true joy watching all his appearances on Star Trek, from “Errand of Mercy” to “Blood Oath”, to “Sword of Kahless” (the weakest of the bunch, alas), to this superb swan song. Oh, there’s also a Ezri/Quark sub-plot which is a tad unnecessary, but is nevertheless short and sweet. Rating: 10
 
Excellent, excellent review!

This is an outstanding episode, and one of Ronald D. Moore's finest. I can't really add much that you haven't already said.

(I am sorry to hear about what you said about your father. That's a tough thing to watch.)

My wife really hates Klingons and Klingon episodes, as she says they are 'ridiculous and so over the top you can't take them seriously'. I have to disagree. I will concede they can be over the top sometimes, but it's actually part of their charm. Comparing them to being Shakesperean by nature is spot on. The best Klingons have that ingrained in them... Kor, Martok, Worf, Chang, Kang. Personally, I really enjoy Klingon episodes. They have a zest for life that is quite refreshing.

One thing I noted about Martok in the end is how he opened the bottle to honor Kor, but did not sing with everyone else. He honored him only to a point, which I found very realistic given his lifelong anger toward him.

Great quoting, by the way. LOVED those lines, along with this...

"If they succeed, you can drink to their courage. And if they fail... you can still drink to their courage."

That is powerful stuff. The whole episode is full of that. It's also possibly the single best line to describe Klingons.

Absolutely agree with your rating of 10. One of the best Klingon episodes of the franchise, and that's a hard bar to clear in my view.
 
Great review, Ananta! And I absolutely love that episode. I think it's the best Klingon episode of all time, all series, hands down! To tell you the truth, I can't find anything wrong with it. So just like you did, I give it a ten... plus!!:)
 
The mess hall scene where Martok and his crew taunt Kor is a punch in the gut—and infinitely more compelling than the usual “Mess Hall Fight Scenes” (TM) we normally get in Klingon episodes. Kor’s moving response is one of my favourite moments of the entire franchise and a magnificent feat of writing and acting:

“Savour the fruit of life, my young friends. It has a sweet taste when it is fresh on the vine. But don’t live too long. The taste turns bitter, after a time...”
It is a great moment. I suspect you know, but you neglected to include, that Kor is completing a thought from Errand of Mercy?

Great quoting, by the way. LOVED those lines, along with this...

"If they succeed, you can drink to their courage. And if they fail... you can still drink to their courage."

This is the quote from Star Trek I use the most in real life, especially during election seasons: it is important to honor those who fought and lost.

The insights we got into the Klingon class system also added some much needed nuance and depth to their culture, which I greatly appreciated.

And it sets up what happens between Martok and Gowron.

Interestingly, although this is one of Michael Dorn’s favourite episodes, Worf gets a little sidelined in the script. His involvement, although important, is a little tangential, and Michael Dorn is overshadowed by the tour de force performances of Colicos, Hertzler and Vipond. He does, however, get one of the absolutely coolest Worf moments of all-time: specifically, the moment where Worf grabs the dagger Martok sends flying at Kor with one hand, while knocking Kor unconscious with the other. Magnificent.

Although Worf isn't as central to the action, I think he still plays an important part as the narrator or the human perspective on what is happening. The conflict between Martok and Kor might have fallen flat had there not been Worf, who is largely an assimilated human, being critical of the tension between aristocracy and peasantry. Perhaps more importantly, this episode does set up Worf's growth as he becomes more critical of Klingon culture and politics. When he brings back Davy Crockett's story ("Does is matter?"), it becomes clear that only Worf could have witnessed the story, and his viewpoint was critical to how it is presented.
 
Superb, heartfelt review. As you note, Kor’s honorable death scene was left to the imagination, like Davy Crockett’s….the episode is partly about legends mattering more than fact.
Hertzler said he was actually glad that Martok does not forgive Kor for his past offense, because it added a note of weakness to his otherwise sympathetic character.
Wonder if Quark transfers his feelings to Ezri so strongly, because he's still fixated on the “legend” of Jadzia.
 
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This episode is one of the few Klingon ones I fill drawn back to, largely due to Kor. I like Martok well enough but Klingons are so over the top in their annoyance that I just pass on most of it. In this episode though each part is wonderfully woven together to show the highs and lows of each character, and Klingons in general.

I still don't like Klingons all that much but it is episodes like these that make them far more believable.

Excellent review.
 
Great review of a superb episode! I re-watched Errand of Mercy as well as Once More Unto the Breach. Errand of Mercy is a good episode because of the ending, Kirk embarassed at being furious with the Organians for stopping a war that he didn't want.

And if Once More Unto the Breach was John Colicos' swan song, I'm sure he was proud of it. A bit of personal conflict to go with the war story.
 
“THE SIEGE OF AR-558”

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“There are dark episodes and then there are DARK episodes!”

I may be going against the grain here. Back when the show originally aired (or came onto VHS as was the case with me), I thought of “The Siege of AR-558” as an unqualified 10/10 and an emotional powerhouse. The years have changed my perspective somewhat and while I still think it’s a very powerful episode, it’s nevertheless beset with problems and, frankly...is not an episode I particularly like. Of course, the sledgehammer message of this episode is simply “war is hell”—and that’s not something that’s meant to be “liked”. Yet, the thing is, I already know that war is hell; I don’t need Star Trek to tell me that. What we have here is basically the result of Ira Behr and co’s proclivity to cannibalise old movies for story ideas and it was inevitable the Dominion war would, at some point, lead to an out and out war movie homage.

I will say that much of the execution is fantastic. The performances are strong for the most part, and Winrich Kolbe’s taut, visceral directing is superb (he himself was a war veteran and somehow it shows just how genuine and authentic so much of it feels). There’s a great score by Paul Baillargeon and some extremely tense drama—and consequences for at least one of our characters, too.

The problems, however, with attempting to translate old war movies to a 24th century setting are manifold. “The Siege of AR-558” not only succumbs to just about every war movie cliche in the book, but it also makes absolutely NO sense to me that war in the 24th century would be conducted in such a primitive, low-tech manner. This is trench warfare WW1 or WW2 style. I know the writers’ intention was to get away from fantastical space battles and exploding consoles to show the true cost of war at a human and psychological level, but very little about this particular conflict makes sense.

For a start, I’ve no idea why the Dominion didn’t simply nuke everyone from orbit. Furthermore, why are regular Starfleet officers dispatched to defend this rock? Starfleet wasn’t even intended to be a military organisation. I know the idea of MACO troops weren’t invented until ENTERPRISE, but they really needed some kind of designated combat force to serve on the frontlines rather than regular Joe Starfleet officers who simply aren’t trained for such combat. I simply can’t believe that such forces don’t exist in the 24th century. I mean, can you imagine a Starfleet officer going from milling around a ship like the Enterprise, frequenting Ten Forward and going to violin recitals only to end up on AR-558 slaughtering or being slaughtered by Jem’Hadar? And, if this communications relay truly is so important to Starfleet, then why aren’t there starships defending it from orbit? Moreover, why aren’t the officers equipped with body armour (these guys are literally just wearing t-shirts for crying out loud!) and protective force fields? Heck, Worf jury-rigged such a force field using a com badge in the holodeck episode “A Fistful of Datas”.

Behr and Beimler were basically so obsessed with recreating all standard the war movie cliches and making it seem like a legitimate depiction of trench warfare that they pretty much forget we’re meant to be in the 24th century. This kind of warfare is even dated by today’s standards. Realistically, Starfleet and the Dominion ought to be using drones at the very least, and possibly battle robots. Why waste so many lives unnecessarily when they can use technology? Heck, even in the 1960’s TOS was showing how wars in the future are likely to be fought with advanced technology (“A Taste of Armageddon”). The “Houdini mines” were a nice touch and a rare utilisation of futuristic technology, but it just wasn’t enough. Another thing—given the sheer number of those mines, I have a hard time believing as many Jem’Hadar would survive their detonation. And why the heck didn’t the Jem’Hadar use their personal cloaks when attacking? A stealth attack would have been far more effective than charging like a bunch of Klingons howling war cries?

There are so many things that just don’t ring true upon reflection, which probably explains why I wasn’t as moved by the episode this time around. The idea was to put all the show’s characters inexperienced in battle into the mix. That maybe makes sense dramatically, but less so in terms of logic. Quark’s presence requires a huge suspension of disbelief (frankly, I simply don’t accept that he wouldn’t have wrangled his way out of having to go into a frontline war zone), and it also made no sense that their landing party consisted not of Worf and O’Brien, but Ezri the neurotic counsellor who has precisely no reason to even be on the Defiant. You’d also kind of think that since she was there, she might have used her counselling skills to try to help these traumatised shells of human beings, but heck no. I almost wondered if the writers forgot that they weren’t writing Jadzia here, because she’s basically only there to help with the tech.

The most successful elements of the episode involve Nog and Quark. This is the episode where Nog goes from being a zealous, gung-ho wannabe-model Starfleet officer to almost losing life and limb. Well, he does, of course, lose a limb, and barely escapes with his life. It’s genuinely painful to watch, and it’s wonderful to finally see just how much Quark cares about his nephew in spite of the fact Nog is just a bit of a dick to him early in the story. As happens on rare occasion, Quark is used as not as comic relief, but as social commentator, questioning why the war is even necessary in the first place, stating that the Ferengi would have negotiated a deal with the Dominion. He makes an important point—this episode focuses on “war is hell” but I don’t think at any point we explore whether “war is necessary”. Personally, I believe there are times when war may be necessary—and many times when it isn’t. Certainly, this isn’t a petty war over disputed land, property or an overblown grudge, but I’m sad we didn’t get more sense that Starfleet was still trying to reach a peace and compromise. So, some of Quark’s speeches were thought-provoking and prescient, while others felt unnecessarily harsh. At one point he states that humans are fine as long as they have full bellies and creature comforts, but that without those things, they descend into brutal, barbarous savages. Gene Roddenberry would certainly have been spinning in his grave at that, and I found it an unfortunate indictment because these people weren’t displaying character flaws—they were displaying PTSD. They were broken, traumatised people, and this rendered Quark’s evaluation of human nature incredibly off the mark.

I do hope that this wasn’t the entire point of the episode: to override Roddenberry’s assertion that the human race is capable of evolving beyond savagery. That would be incredibly cynical. Whether you believe that idea or not, it’s nevertheless part of the fabric of Star Trek and what makes the franchise aspirational and inspiring. In many ways, “The Siege of AR-558” is the darkest, bleakest, most cynical episode of Star Trek ever made. It lacks the spark of hope that makes Star Trek what it is, in favour of simply recreating a standard war movie formula. Even the closing scene with Sisko in his office offers not a glimmer of hope, but a somber lamentation for the dead. He’s right, we should never forget those that sacrificed their lives. But, equally, we should never take our eyes off the reason they did so: peace, hope and freedom. There’s just none of that in this episode. Again, I know that war is hell—mercifully, not through first-hand experience, but through knowing history. That’s just not a message I need from Star Trek. Especially, I suppose, in these dark times.

The guest characters aren’t a huge amount more than walking war movie cliches. There’s nothing quite as bad as the wounded officer from “Nor the Battle to the Strong”, but Raymond Cruz is pretty close with a performance so uncomfortably over-the-top, particularly in the earlier scenes, that it almost borders on parody. The others are fine, if a little broadly drawn, and Bill Mumy is charming as the engineer Kellin, even if he’s not really given a whole lot to do or have any kind of real arc.

Anyway, I’ve said more than enough. I find it extremely hard to rate this one, because my feelings are so incredibly mixed. My rating is liable to change. Ultimately, for all the cliches and plot holes, it’s definitely a powerful episode due to the performances of Avery Brooks and most the rest of the cast and Kolbe’s excellent directing. It’s a tense and taut forty-five minutes which still packs quite an emotional punch. Production-wise it’s not the best: the sets look like the studio stage they are, and the low lighting renders it a visually murky episode. I still have a number of complaints at the unimaginative and astonishingly primitive way this ground war is fought, but the episode nevertheless sets out to do what it intended and it is, for all its flaws and my personal reservations, a strong one. Oh, and aside for the tonally jarring teaser with Rom “singing” “The Lady’s a Tramp”, Vic is used wonderfully here, and his singing adds a note of real poignance as the battle commences. It also sets up what would be one of the finest episodes of the season, “It’s Only a Paper Moon”. Rating: 8
 
Very insightful take on “The Siege of AR-558” --I tend to agree, too much resemblance to 20th century war movies. I did appreciate the way the episode serves as a companion piece to “Once more unto the breach”-- two views of the Dominion war, the Klingon ideal of dying as a noble warrior; and the grueling horrors of combat —war as glory vs war as hell. I admired Nog for his courage, and Quark for his protectiveness. Worf’s line about the great victory worthy of song and story, felt so out of place here.

The opening scene with Rom auditioning at Vic Fontaine’s lounge came across as more awkward than comedic. Vic may not have the voice of Sinatra, but his looks and personality are much more likable.
 
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Great review... so so episode. I am not a big fan of war movies even if I've seen the great ones, back in the days... anyway, this is definitely not my cup of tea. Clichés are all over the place, plot points that are so stupid that you'd better not think about them... Like the Jemadhar's holograms... I mean now they can make holograms appear anywhere... It's even better than the Doc's mobile emitter... They solve the Houdini's problem in like five minutes... so why the hell did they let it plague their lives and kill most of them.. for MONTHS!!! Why can't Starfleet provide them decent knives? Why do they need to make their own? They should have asked O'Brien to come down. He would have solved the communicator's problem in two minutes top with time to spare. The guy with the bandage really got on my nerves, what a prick! I don't care if he's PTSD'd. Plus it's a wonder that he hadn't developed gangrene if he hasn't changed his bandage in days!
Anyway, this episode stinks. Truth be told, it was fighting an uphill battle with me, to begin with.
 
I don't mind that DS9 decided to make a war movie. Just like boy meets girl movies, the plot can be used many times and they can still find something new to add.

Yes, the technology used seems very primitive. Even in WW I, one or both sides would have fully automatic machine guns that would make an infantry charge... well, ineffective, to say the least.
Air strikes? Drones? Artillery? They know where each other's camps are and they aren't all that far apart, they should be able to hit each other from that distance. Why wasn't the Dominion communications relay destroyed rather than letting it fall into Federation hands?

For all that though, I still rank it as a good episode. Mostly it's the good acting all around that saves it.

Yes, PTSD'd people do act like pricks a lot of the time, especially with people who haven't suffered in the same way they have.
 
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Yes, PTSD'd people do act like pricks a lot of the time, especially with people who haven't suffered in the same way they have.

I disagree; That guy doesn't act like a prick. He is a prick. He might as well have that tattooed on his forehead. Plus I don't like that actor, I have seen him in several other short parts and each time I detested him.
 
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