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Mankat: "The Overthrow" Episode 1

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Forward from the author​

Hi everyone,
What follows is a fantasy based superhero series. This is one of my original creations.

The work you’re about to read has been around for a very long time. Mankat and Oilslick and their epic struggle against evil are well known to my friends and family. They’ve been slumming in my imagination for at least twenty years-----thirty years if you count their first incarnation when I was in junior high school.

Over the last two decades there were some false starts. At first, I tried to draw it myself as a comic book series. I’m not a bad artist, but not good enough to meet my standards of quality.

So I tried more than once to hire illustrators. But financially, this didn’t prove feasible.

Eventually, it came down to either beginning the project as written stories or not beginning at all.

Later this year Mankat will have his own website with at least some accompanying artwork. Further down the road, I intend to rework this into a graphic novel. But in the meantime, I thought I would share this “pilot episode” with all of you.

Thanks for indulging me.
 
Prologue​


There was a time that the gods of mythology walked upon the Earth. They quarreled with one another, made love among themselves and punished disbelievers who dared to shun them.

Yes, some of these mythological deities were every bit as real as you and I.

But how could such a thing be, you ask?

The answer lies within you.

There is a primal energy within the human spirit, a force that manifests itself through imagination and the fervor of belief. Smoldering within a single person, this energy is impotent-----as insignificant as a grain of sand separated from the desert.

But multiply that single belief by a hundred, by a thousand; add the passion of blind faith. Do this and maybe, just maybe, those embers will spark into flame-----a flame that can burn with a life and a will all its own.

In a strange quirk of cosmic irony, the worshiper, then, becomes the god and the god the worshiper.

One such entity was born in this way by the passion of the ancient Egyptians. She was known as Bastet, the cat-headed goddess who symbolized fertility and vengeance. She not only garbed herself in the persona of the cat, but in time, the specific life force of those animals comprised the whole of her essence.

This goddess knew her time upon the Earth was finite. The believers, who had brought her into being, would one day turn their backs. Their faith and thus the energy that sustained Bastet would eventually decay.

Other deities were also wise to the true nature of their existence and the dependant relationship they had with humans. A few decided upon a plan for self-preservation. While at the zenith of their power, they looked beyond their earthly confines and beyond the barriers of their own universe and found new realities-----places where they could continue their existence unmolested by human neglect. The more cautious ones fled early before their power waned.

But one of them was not content with mere survival. He was a dark and venomous being that resented his human masters. He despised being a slave to a race of primitive creatures. He looked out across the sands of Egypt and a terrible hatred swelled in his chest.

Yes, he would accept exile. But not forever.

He would find his way back. He would do whatever was required to return, no matter how long it took. One day, he vowed, his worshipers would consume the world, washing away all other beliefs before him-----sustaining his name and his power for eternity.

Bastet, on the other hand, had a curious love for humanity. Perhaps she understood that humans were both her children and her parents, and she felt fiercely protective of them, as any human would of their family.

She knew of the malevolent hatred of the Other. She knew that darkness was poised to strike at humanity’s collective soul. It would be a threat beyond their comprehension-----beyond their ability to defend against.

When that time came, she resolved to be ready.

And so it was that the cat goddess Bastet, daughter of Ra, child of humanity, left something of herself behind: a vessel that would hold her “Ka”, or life force. It would be her conduit to this universe-----that she might stand upon the Earth one last time.

And find a champion to weld her strength…
 
Chapter 1
A Creeping Dread​


Michael Chase walked through his father’s front door with reluctance. He had to remind himself for what seemed the hundredth time that this was also his front door. He lived her now, after all. But he couldn’t for the life of him think of the stuffy penthouse as home. It would always be “dad’s place” no matter what head tricks he pulled to imagine otherwise.

Still, after three days in the hospital, the damn place still should have looked more inviting.

Michael was thirty years old. He could easily have passed for one of those empty-headed surfers you see in bad movies. He had a well-toned muscular build with striking green eyes and a thick head of blonde hair. The only thing missing was a golden tan and surfboard. But he lived in San Francisco, not southern California. And his job as a physical therapist kept him firmly indoors and out of the sun’s reach.

After a shower and change of clothes, he chose the kitchen as his next destination. One of his friends had sneaked him in a salami sandwich while he was in the hospital, but other than that, he had been stuck with hospital food. He was known as a voracious eater and his body had protested the small portions doled out during his incarceration.

He was halfway through a tuna sandwich when his father rolled in from the study. The older Richard Chase always insisted on pushing his own wheelchair whenever at home. He only used the motorized model outside. He was adamant about keeping his arms in the best condition they could afford. It was a matter of pride that he could still press 170 pounds, even at the age of 65.

His father was a self-described former hippie who had accidentally become respectable after inheriting the family museum. He sported a full beard and mustache, all of which was gray now. But the ponytail gave him a hint of creative flair, which pleased San Francisco’s liberal investors-----even if it was a trite and over exposed signature these days. Richard topped off the suggestion by openly bragging about his arrest at a Viet Nam protest. What was more, he wore a peace medallion around his neck, where it was conspicuous to all. (An honest to God peace medallion, no less.) Michael often wondered how much of his 60’s caricature was for show.

“Glad you’re back, “ He said to Michael, as though he had just returned from the corner deli. “You doing ok, kid?”


“Yeah, I guess. There’s nothing wrong with me that they could find, anyway.” What he had not mentioned was the gut-wrenching nightmares he had experienced while in the hospital. There were so real, so frightening, that for the first time in his life, he hadn’t been able to tell dreams from reality. Luckily, he had never cried out in his sleep so the doctors or nurses had no idea. He had decided to keep it that way, just in case the episodes were used to keep him longer, or worse, landed him with a psychiatric evaluation.

He watched his father roll over and pull a beer from the refrigerator. “Well, I’ve made some calls. I want you to get a PET scan.”

Of course. No preamble. No small talk. No settling in period. His dad just gets right to it, oblivious to his son’s emotional state.

“I don’t need a PET scan.” Michael said around a mouthful of tuna. “I just need to get back into my routine.”

Richard took a swig of beer. “Horseshit. You had some kind of, I dunno, breakdown or something. Normal people don’t go sleepwalking into museums.”

“Jesus Christ, Dad. You almost sound disappointed that they didn’t say I was on crack or something.”

Richard stuck out his lips, an expression halfway between pout and leer. “Yeah, actually I am, if you wanna know the truth of it. Drugs I know about, believe me. I can handle that. But this is something else. Maybe something very serious.”

Michael downed the last of his sandwich in a hurry. “Sure, or maybe you’re just pissed off at the bad publicity I created for your museum. Especially in light of the fact that I’m due to manage the business next year.”

His father actually looked hurt for a moment, but the expression passed quickly. “Listen, smartass; the museum’s in trouble for other reasons. I just hope there’s some of it left when you come over.” His eyebrows rose into their customary positions of concern. “It’s you I’m worried about. It’s not just the sleepwalking or whatever, it was your mental state afterward…”

Michael rolled his eyes. “I was a little disoriented that was all. I went to bed like normal, the next thing my bare butt is stuck on the museum’s floor. I’ve got the guard’s flashlight in my face-----“

“You were sitting under the Bastet artifact, the new one that’s been causing me all the trouble lately. I guess that tracks…ever since you were a little kid you’ve had this obsession with cats-----“

“Oh, I have not. C’mon, Dad.”

Richard folded his hands atop the table and waited until he could capture his son’s elusive eyes with his own. “And,” He said pointedly, “You were babbling about the end of the world. You kept calling it the ‘Overthrow’ or something. In fact, that’s about all you said in the ambulance.”

Michael did his best to lasso his anger, which had just started a bull’s run. “What do you want me to say? I don’t remember how I got into the museum. I don’t remember how I got past security. I’ve been telling everyone that from day one. Do you think I’m lying about something here?”

Unfortunately for Michael, his father was in one of his famous “I would have made a great analyst” moods, fueled by twelve units of psychology from his distant college years. “Listen, you and I both know what this is really about…”

The younger man stood up. “Dad, please don’t do this…”

But his father went right ahead and did it anyway. “Your marriage fell apart a while ago. Rachel broke your heart and took you to the cleaners. That’s why you’re stuck here with your old man. And let’s face it. That job as a physical therapist is okay, but it’s not taking you anywhere. Now, once you start at the museum…”

And so it went. It seemed the more Michael protested, the more his father was convinced that his life had inexplicably taken a wrong turn and that only the family business would correct his course. If only he would quit his job and start working for this father just a little sooner…

Finally, Michael extracted himself by proclaiming the need to leave for work.

Richard was both concerned and suspicious. “You’re serious? You’re going in today? You just came back from the hospital for Christ’s sake.”

His son sighed in exasperation. “It’s only for a few hours. There’s a backlog of patients. I’ll be back at seven to pick you up.”

“Pick me up? For what?”

“I’m still planning to help out with preparations tonight for the museum’s reopening, like you asked before.”

Richard became uncomfortable. He looked down at his hands. “Mike, you don’t have to come tonight. I have enough help. And you need rest. Going back to that place so soon could trigger another…well, I mean it may not be good for you right now.” Richard moved his eyes from his hands to his beer. “In fact, if you can’t make the reopening tomorrow, I’ll understand.”

His son absorbed the words knowingly. “So you don’t want me there. After what happened I guess I’m bad for business.”

Richard swished another gulp of beer around in his mouth. “Hey man, you know that’s not what I meant. Would I want to you come on board if I thought that?”

Michael was unmoved. “I’ll be here at seven tonight.” He said with finality. “You let me worry about what I can or can’t handle. Cool?”

His father mock toasted him with his beer can. “Not so much. But you’re a big boy. See you later, then.”

Michael finally walked away. For the hundredth time, he considered putting off working for the museum for a year or two longer. Considering all the problems it was having, he certainly had a ready-made excuse.

But hell. He had promised his old man. The guy loved the place and wanted desperately for it to remain in the family. And it would only be part time for the first few years anyway. He could continue his day job for that long. Who knew? Maybe the financial crisis would blow over by then.

He used to get incensed over his dad’s misguided meddling, but somehow he just wasn’t in the mood to rage about it. He had plenty of other things to rage about these days, after all.

He was back at the front door when Oilslick stepped in front him. His pet cat was the second new member of his dad’s household. To Michael, Oilslick was no mere animal. He was a member of the family. He had been with him since his marriage to Rachael and leaving him behind had been unthinkable.

He smiled, thinking Oilslick was demanding affection before he left. But something about the cat made him pause. Oilslick wasn’t blocking Michael’s path in a cute “pet animal kind of way”. There was something very deliberate about how his black body was posed.

As he looked at Oilslick, a bizarre impression took hold of him. He thought that it wasn’t just the cat staring at him, but rather, someone or something else was behind the cat, probing him, seeing through him. The animal’s eyes seemed to burn with intelligence and urgency.

And then, impossibly, his nightmare was back, despite the broad daylight around him.

Once again he saw the surreal cityscape, dominated by ancient Egyptian architecture. Prisoners…no, ordinary people of today’s world-----they were being rounded up like victims of a modern day holocaust.

Screaming. So much screaming. Great rivers of blood rushing down a temple.

Horror and suffering on a worldwide scale, beyond anything in history.

He remembered a woman-----a woman sobbing in terror just before a knife plunges into her chest. She dies in front of her family, her children…

And they cheer her sacrifice.

Dirty non-believer!

He blinked furiously, trying to claw his way back to the waking world. He had a moment of real terror in which he feared that he wasn’t really dreaming after all-----that what he was experiencing was real, while the world he knew was the dream. He might become lost in that terrible reality, unable to return…

Michael…

He jumped in surprise. The voice had whispered into his ear. He was sure its owner was standing right next to him. It had been a melodious feminine tone-----something that sounded both young and old at the same time. It was also familiar somehow…

Only at the beginning can the end be undone…

He flashed his eyes around the room, distrustful of his own senses. It continued to remain empty. By the time he looked back at Oilslick the powerful daydream had dissipated.

But the dread remained. It was hard to rationalize what he was feeling. He was experiencing the grim anticipation of one standing under an enormous weight that could fall and crush him at any moment.

Fixing him with a laser like gaze, Oilslick stepped aside, allowing him to open the door. The gesture was purposeful, almost human-like.

The sensation of a looming disaster went up another notch.

His heart was now pounding with anxiety. He stepped out the door quickly and closed it with a snap, wanting nothing more than a barrier between himself and his odd companion.

He couldn’t help being amused on some level. Here was Michael Chase, one of the biggest cat-lovers in California, running from his pet feline.

All of those thoughts vanished with the arrival of Leonard Shelvin. The thin man with his spectacles and severe haircut had nearly barreled into Michael as he trotted up the staircase to the front door.

The blood drained out of Shelvin’s face. He looked just like a fugitive who had accidentally tripped over a police officer.

Forced into a greeting, Shelvin nodded curtly to Michael. “Oh, hi Mike.” He mumbled as he tried to shimmy past him on the staircase.

Michael grabbed a fistful of his cheap suit, pulling him to a stop.

“Hey, hey!” Shelvin exclaimed in fear. “C’mon, what’s this going to accomplish?”

“Calm down, idiot. I just want you to give Rachel a message for me.”

Shelvin harrumphed loudly and immediately began smoothing his suit. “Uh, I really don’t want to get in the middle of this thing, you know…”

“Knock off the BS. I know you’re living together. Just tell her to call me. She hasn’t returned even one call I made. After five years together, I deserve that much.” He climbed up two steps so he could loom over Shelvin. “I deserve that one conversation. One conversation isn’t too much to ask. Wouldn’t you agree?”

“Sure. Uh, okay, Mike. I’ll tell her. But if you just speak with her attorney, I’m sure-----”

Michael stomped down the stairs, leaving the flustered man behind him.

Wiry little asshole, he thought. But Shelvin was more than that. Shelvin was shacked up with Rachel. It just didn’t make sense. Nothing made sense anymore. It was like the world was turning upside down.

Above him, black clouds moved over the sun.
 
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Chapter 2
A Gathering Storm​


Richard Chase watched his museum’s chief financial advisor lounge against the railing of his outdoor patio. He didn’t know which was thinner, the metal poles that ringed his balcony or the man’s frail looking arms.

“Look,” Leonard Shelvin said after what had been an uncomfortable silence between them. “We’re still dealing with the fallout from this. I did my best to contain the damage, but I’m not a publicist.” He seemed to stir within his saggy suit; a movement that bore a resemblance to shrugging only if one paid it close scrutiny. “We’ve lost all of our investors. And we were hanging to them by our fingernails to begin with. Worse, private donations have all but dried up.”

“We still have potential investors who are coming to the re-opening of the museum tomorrow night, don’t we?”

Shelvin pinched the frame of his glasses with thumb and forefinger. In fact, his glasses needed no adjusting, but the gesture was an ingrained part of his body language. “We do. But I want you to be realistic. They’re not known for having loose purse strings.”

Richard took a long drag on his cigarette and studied Shelvin through a cloud of smoke. “Or maybe my financial guy here invited the wrong people.”

Shelvin pushed off the railing, then reached down to grab a small business journal. He held it up for Richard’s inspection, as if to remind him of whom his real enemies were. The paper’s lead article read: Chase Museum’s future uncertain in wake of mis-authentication fiasco. A sub heading announced: Bankruptcy rumors spread as investors suspend funding.

“There aren’t many people left to choose from.” Shelvin replied.

Richard looked out over his balcony. His penthouse sported a breathtaking view of San Francisco Bay. Normally on a July day like this, he could observe sailboats drifting on the water, even hear the cry of seagulls. Oddly enough however, the air was unseasonably cold. A heavy layer of dark clouds covered every patch of sky. The breeze that began to scratch its way through his balcony and around his body felt shrill and icy. If he hadn't known better, he might have fancied the thought of snow.

Somehow, it all seemed to work in harmony against him; the frail and irritating man before him who seemed to relish in delivering bad news, the biting air, his tarnished reputation. He could feel the fight oozing out of him, as if Shelvin were some kind of vampire who was bleeding the life from his body.

“It wasn’t a fake.” He heard himself say. He was disappointed at how bleak and empty his voice sounded to his own ears. It was the type of noise a tired old man made, the aging hippie that many saw, rather than the dynamic youth he nourished in his heart. Hell was becoming the person the world thought you should be. “I don’t know what happened, but all of our carbon dating, the hieroglyphics; all of it indicated an authentic carving.” He persisted.

Shelvin regarded him with the type of sympathy that one might express for a dying rodent, happened upon on in the street. “Richard, you know that data was flawed. It had to be. You should never have used inside people to authenticate the find. And then to announce it so publicly. You know, independent studies by the Historical Society indicated-----“

He began to roll towards Shelvin, bearing down on him like a small tank. “Hey, do you think I need you to stand around here repeating the same crap I hear from everyone else? Is that what I’m paying you for?” He snatched the paper from Shelvin and flung it carelessly over the balcony railing. The sheets flapped away like large white birds.

Shelvin sat down on the edge of a brick tree planter. He removed his glasses. His eyes softened. “I’m not your enemy.” He offered submissively, like a small boy trying to befriend his bully.

Richard’s face kept its rigid shape. “Hey man, you’re supposed to be my financial advisor, you’re supposed to offer me solutions. Lemme tell you what I don’t need: another vulture biting at my ass before I’m even dead. Are you pickin’ up what I’m laying down, here?”

Shelvin was still looking down, wiping his glasses on his baggy white dress shirt. His formerly waxen complexion was beginning to look flushed. “Are you sure you’re not taking my remarks personally? The fact that I’m engaged to your son’s ex-wife…I mean, I hope you’re not blaming me for his breakdown…“

Richard crunched out his cigarette in a nearby ashtray. “I don’t give a rat’s ass about that. This is business. And for the record, my son didn’t have a ‘breakdown’; it was a one-time bout of sleepwalking. So let’s keep our personal remarks to ourselves, capeesh?”

Shelvin put his glasses back on and finally met his employer’s gaze. “Sure, sure. You know, I might be able to move some things around…shore up the books a little until we get funding again. I just need some time. Maybe by tonight I’ll have some numbers for you.”

“Far out. That’s exactly what I wanted to hear in the first place. Now, unless you have something new for me, I have a lot to do tonight for the reopening tomorrow.” But his indignant anger, and the strength that he drove from it, was already waning. He turned away, hoping Shelvin would leave before his conviction reached the end of its life expectancy.

Wraith like, Shelvin slinked from the balcony and retreated through the penthouse. There was the faint noise of the front door clunking shut, and then Richard was alone.

For what would not be the last time, he wondered from what type of brain damage he had been suffering from when he decided to hire the man.

More and more, he was beginning to long for the simpler times in his life-----the era of riding his Harley around Sausalito and smoking pot.

Something wet tapped him on the forehead. He tilted his face up in time to see glistening water falling from a black sky. The drops seemed to all hit his patio at the same time, making a loud “plash” as they began smattering the deck like a hail of machine gun bullets.

He was drenched within a thimble of seconds, as quickly as if someone had upended bucket of water atop him. He nearly gasped at how cold the rain was, even for San Francisco. In fact, damned if it wasn’t freezing cold. He decided that a strategic withdrawal was in order. He started to roll back into the house…

The dizzy spell came without warning. He gripped the rubber armrests of his chair, fearing momentarily that the deck had tilted and might pitch him over the side. And then, as quickly as it had arrived, the spell departed like a passing shadow.

Must be shock, he surmised. The cold water had drenched him so quickly, his body had protested, that was all.

He started forward again but brought the chair to a stop. The rain was still hammering at him, pounding the roof, the top of his head as though it were trying to punch through whatever it struck.

He weathered it a moment longer. Something was clearly wrong, and whatever that something was, it bothered him in such a fundamental way, he couldn’t bear not knowing its source.

He just couldn’t decide what the source was.

He spun the wheelchair in a lazy 360-degree circle, inspecting the patio, his living room, the nearby cluster of tables and chairs near the far railing, all the while getting pummeled by water.

After a few more darting looks into the deluge, Richard threw in the metaphorical towel in favor of a literal one.

By the time he rolled into his living room and shut the sliding door, he was shaking violently. After a few minutes, he had bundled himself in towels and topped off the affair with a few shots of brandy.

He nearly missed it. He was turning his chair to head into the bedroom, when his passing gaze swept the skyline beyond his window.

He snapped his head back like an old time Vaudeville comedian doing a classic double take. Slowly, he rolled towards a side window.

The double paned glass seemed to be supporting a waterfall. The other side of the window was being hit hard by the rain splatter while run off from the roof was cascading just beyond it. All things considered, it was a minor miracle that the image had caught Richard’s eye in the first place.

He cupped his hands to the cold glass and squinted through the transparency. He understood immediately why he had been able to notice the anomaly despite the downpour.

Well, this can’t be, he thought simply.

There, against the skyline was the silhouette of an enormous structure-----a building that had not been there an hour ago. It was roughly triangular shaped and must have been no less than seventy stories high, judging by its comparison to the surrounding buildings. It reminded him very much of a pyramid. It was as if the Luxor hotel in Las Vegas had suddenly been teleported into the middle of downtown San Francisco. But this structure was no modern facsimile of a pyramid made of glass and aluminum. Everything about this thing said it was solid and dense. He could almost feel its weight-----it might as well have been carved from a granite mountain. He could also see what appeared to be a snake like creature wrapped around the pyramid with its massive head resting atop the structure’s apex, jaws yawning towards the sky, as if to swallow passing aircraft.

He flinched. He knew it was a gigantic statue that was no doubt part of the building, but…

For one awful moment, he could have sworn it had moved.

Like dutiful little soldiers, a number of possible explanations presented themselves within Richard’s mind. They went from optical illusion to publicity stunt to hallucination. And one by one, he dismissed them all.

Ordinarily, if a person were confronted with an unexplained event such as this, the rational choice would be to investigate. Turn on the news or get closer for a second look.

But his intellect was not calling the shots on this. His gut was. That thing out there almost seemed to be pressing on him, pushing at him-----short-circuiting his will to act.

There is a type of fear that few people ever experience. It’s a terror that comes about when something utterly beyond one’s control and outside one’s comprehension manifests itself. This brand of dread can dismantle a human’s intellect as easily as a solar eclipse might terrorize a chattering primate.

It was this kind of fear that now held Richard Chase captive.
 
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Very cool and ominous opening to this tale. The end evoked a bit of Ghostbusters (the dark scary parts) or better yet H.P. Lovecraft.

I particularly like that your superheroes/villains are based on Egyptian mythology. That's real nice touch.

The pyramid was real freaky. Imagine something like that suddenly show up in your town? But I thought that a fifteen story pyramid wouldn't stand out that much against the San Fran skyline which actually has a massive skyscraper already shaped like one.

Great stuff though!
 
Very cool and ominous opening to this tale. The end evoked a bit of Ghostbusters (the dark scary parts) or better yet H.P. Lovecraft.

I particularly like that your superheroes/villains are based on Egyptian mythology. That's real nice touch.

The pyramid was real freaky. Imagine something like that suddenly show up in your town? But I thought that a fifteen story pyramid wouldn't stand out that much against the San Fran skyline which actually has a massive skyscraper already shaped like one.

Great stuff though!
yeah..heh, heh...I sort of meant to change that at one point. I must have forgot.
I'll probably use the edit feature here pretty soon.
Thanks for the feedback.
Sometime early next week I'll put up the next two chapters.
 
Well, I'm intrigued and looking forward to more. I like your explanation concerning gods, "it's people who create God" taken literally. The characters have an authentic feel to them. Your story is well-written, too.
 
Well, I'm intrigued and looking forward to more. I like your explanation concerning gods, "it's people who create God" taken literally. The characters have an authentic feel to them. Your story is well-written, too.
Thanks...I've always felt that we should never underestimate human imagination.
More coming soon.
 
A very strong beginning with fascinating characters. I have to admit, having a character in a wheelchair, living in San Francisco, brought back a flash of the old "Ironsides" TV series with Raymond Burr. Can't picture him in a pony tail, though. :lol:

Looking forward to more!
 
A very strong beginning with fascinating characters. I have to admit, having a character in a wheelchair, living in San Francisco, brought back a flash of the old "Ironsides" TV series with Raymond Burr. Can't picture him in a pony tail, though. :lol:

Looking forward to more!
I hadn't thought about Ironside in years. LOL.
Yeah, a hippie Ironside. :)
Now I would have watched that!
 
Chapter 3
Descent and Disarray​

The elderly Mr. Cheng struggled to pull his foot closer to his buttocks, with a little help from his therapist. Like everyone around him, Cheng was finding that physical therapy was not the same as a day at the spa. In fact, it was grueling and often painful, work.

“Great, you made that extra inch. You’re becoming more limber all the time.” Michael coached helpfully.

“I ain’t no contortionist!” Cheng barked out, his wrinkled face crunching with exertion.

Gently, with practiced care, Michael helped him straighten out again.

“That’s enough for one day,” Michael said, patting Cheng’s shoulder. “Just keep doing these stretches, okay?”

The Asian man struggled to an upright position-----then quickly popped out his middle finger. “How’s this for a stretch, blonde?”

“Needs more work. I have some exercises for that, too.” Michael replied deadpan.

Their weekly farewell ritual now complete, Cheng trudged out of the therapy ward on legs that not too recently had been in casts.

It wasn’t much longer before he was with his next patient for the day. He was a young African-American boy who was confined to a wheelchair. According to his file, he had been injured in a football skirmish during his freshman year of high school. He had the use of his legs, but was learning to walk again.

As Michael went out to greet him in the waiting room, he noticed the boy was looking at a photo album.

“Dustin Gray?” he asked. “My name’s Michael. I read your file. Are you ready?”

The boy shrugged without looking up. Slowly he closed the album and put it in the side pocket of his wheelchair. Michael could see that the album was very old, probably a family relic pasted down through the generations. He thought it an odd companion for a 15 year old. Most kids in his condition tended to get hooked on Internet games or lost in their ipods. They certainly didn’t tote around photo albums.

The kid looked up at him and chuckled. “Oh, man. You’re going to make some man real happy.”

“I’m sorry?”

Dustin grinned at him wickedly. “Come on. With those beach boy looks of yours, I bet men all over this city are getting in line.” Dustin wagged his eyebrows playfully. “I mean I’m straight and all, but damn. You’re like the illegitimate son of Jennifer Aniston and Ken.”

Taken by surprise, Michael burst out laughing. He laughed longer and harder than he normally would have, but with the pressure valve suddenly open, he began venting stress.

“Great,” Michael complained playfully, “another comedian patient.”

“Na, I’m not funny. But Mother’ Day, on the other hand, is funny. At least at my house.”

“And why is that?” Michael inquired, going along with the set up.

“Because at my house, Mother’s Day is celebrated by this cool game my daddy came up with. But we have to go downtown to play it.” Dustin looked philosophical. “It’s called ‘guess which hooker is your mamma’.’”

Michael laughed again.

“It’s not funny,” Dustin, said indignantly, “When you don’t know, you gotta give Mother’s Day cards to everyone. You know how much it costs to buy cards for like, fifty different hookers? And then you gotta go and buy their pimps something too. Shit.”

The rough poor kid act was something Dustin was using for his comedy, inspired by generations of stand up comics. He had to work at it. His real disposition was just the opposite.

The sharp-witted teenager continued his routine as Michael put him through his opening exercises. In the half hour that followed, Michael learned that Dustin had recently abandoned his dreams of playing professional football. His back injury convinced him to switch career paths. Not surprisingly, he now wanted to be a comedian, with particular aspirations of becoming a Saturday Night Live member. This prompted Michael to accuse of him of being “old school.”

Dustin dropped into his best ghetto accent. “Don’t make me get up outta this chair,” He threatened.

The kid was so self-assured, so unapologetic about his humor and his identity, that it was Michael who benefited more from their meeting. The strangeness of the preceding week began to fade.

Time went by far too quickly; as he lost himself in his work and in the pleasant company he was keeping.

When Dustin yelped out something about “attack of the 50 foot woman,” Michael at first wrote it off to another one of his jokes. Then he realized that a real person had prompted the barb.

Smiling, he glanced over his shoulder to see who the target of Dustin’s sarcasm was.

Rachel was before him. After months of avoiding him, of refusing to return his calls, of talking through her legal mouthpiece, here she was, in the flesh.

“Hi Mike.”

Michael’s smile and good cheer evacuated faster than the air in a deflating balloon. He ignored her for several minutes while he helped Dustin down from the parallel bars and back into his chair. “Hey Dustin, let’s take a break, okay?”

“Oh, hell yes.” The boy agreed eagerly. He made no effort to hide his interest in Rachel. He looked like a gossip hungry housewife, as he reluctantly rolled out of earshot.

Only after Dustin was safely into his chair and at the other end of the room, did Michael give his soon to be ex-wife his undivided attention.

She was very tall, evening out to six feet four inches. Even after five years of marriage her height still impressed him. He remembered once being turned on by her stature, imagining that he was dating some type of Amazon warrior. In retrospect, this had not been the foundation upon which to start a relationship. Not that It had mattered in the end. He had fallen in love with her nonetheless.

Rachel was wearing an expensive trench coat and designer sunglasses that had probably fetched five hundred dollars. Her dark blonde hair was ruler straight, and parted down the middle. It now hung to her shoulders. The only flaw in her appearance was her continued habit of applying eyeliner too heavily.

Coldly, he walked away from her to a small lounge area at the far side of the ward. A well-worn sofa and a few padded chairs occupied the space.

“So that’s it.” He huffed. “You ignore me for seven months. You don’t even look me in the eye while we’re in court, and now you show up and say ‘hi’”.

She removed her glasses and raised a perfectly shaped eyebrow as if surprised by his objection-----but of course she was relishing his irritation. She reached into the designer portfolio and removed a folder.

He eyed the folder with bemusement before snatching it from her hand. “You just had to do this at work, didn’t you? You couldn’t wait until I got home.” He snorted and shook his head. “Typical.”

“You’re not at home very much these days-----and after I heard how they found you in your father’s museum, well, I was a little worried about how this divorce is affecting you.” She took a moment to look around the therapy ward, watching the various staff members do their best to mend the bodies and spirits of the people around her. She observed their efforts with a removed fascination, no more able to fathom their motivation than she might have understood the psychology of a suicide bomber.

“So you’re worried about me. Cool.” He sneered. “If that’s what it took for you to materialize, I’d have started sleepwalking a long time ago.”

He opened the folder and found the document he needed to sign. He nearly slapped her hand away when she offered him a pen, instead retrieving his own from a shirt pocket.

His anger faltered just as he laid the pen to the paper. He had rehearsed different speeches over the last seven months, imagining what he would say to her when she finally gave him a chance to speak. At first, he had planned a sound and reasonable oratory, emphasizing his desire to save their marriage. But when it became clear that she was avoiding him, that she was intent on divorcing him with both barrels blasting, he changed his script. He then fantasized about how he would admonish her, lay blame and guilt and force her to see the harm she had done to him. In some scenarios, he imagined cussing her out in a highly public display.

But reality was far more sobering. His courage and eloquent accusations deserted him. All he felt was guilt and a sense of hopelessness.

He signed the divorce papers, ripped off his copy and then thrust the folder back at her.

She could have left at that point, but something was keeping her in place. She shifted her weight from one booted foot to the other.

Michael seized the opportunity. “We could have worked this out if you had talked to me,” He said, finding his indignation once more. “You didn’t have to be so damn ruthless-----“

Her eyes watered with pure misery. Her pretense of being smugly aloof vanished. “Talk about what? Were you going to say you were sorry? Is that it?” She let out a wretched choke that apparently had been meant as a laugh. “Tell me. Tell me how you were going to make it better. Really, I want to know.”

He bit down on his lip before trusting himself to speak. “You’re putting it all on me. But I never forced you into it. I never-----“

There was another hoarse bark from her. “Stop.” She turned from him, and then whirled back, her face shifting from hurt into abhorrence. “You selfish prick,” She breathed tightly.

Michael recoiled from the hatred in her voice.

“You knew the condition I was in,” She whispered furiously. “But you kept pushing and pushing and before I knew it I was on that God damned table…” Her voice cracked. She replaced her sunglasses with hands that were visibly shaking. Hugging her portfolio like a teddy bear, she stomped away, her booted heels clacking hard against the linoleum.

He could only gape stupidly at her back, watching her disappear from his life for good. He fought back tears. Seven months of pent up anxiety, anger and anticipation and it had all climaxed in this pathetic fizzle.

He shoved his copy of the divorce papers into his pants pocket and looked away, trying to pull himself together. Luckily, no one was near enough to see him.

Five years. Five years of his life were now filed away neatly as if they had been nothing more than a failed business venture.

No matter how many times he replayed events, he could never decide if she was right. Had he forced her into the abortion? Had he taken advantage of her temporary weakness, just because he wasn’t ready, because he was afraid? Or was she redirecting her own guilt at him?

He didn’t know. But the worst part wasn’t even his destroyed marriage.

What a difference one year can make, he reflected miserably.

Yes indeed. Because now, he wished they had kept the baby.
 
Chapter 3 continued​

Once he had cooled his overheating adrenal glands, Michael tracked down his patient. He found him on the ward’s far side, his photo album spread over his lap.

“Hey bud, sorry about that. Ready to finish up?” Dustin didn’t hear him at first. Michael came up and looked over his shoulder. “That’s some cool pictures.” He ventured.

“Thanks.” Dustin’s mood had down shifted from wired performer. For the first time, he detected a note of vulnerability in the teenager.

Michael looked at the old pictures that adorned the open page. Come to think of it, they were pretty cool pictures. The photos were taken during the 1920’s or 30’s by the look.

One striking picture was of a group portrait. A mature black man was in the center of the crowd, sitting in an old style wheel chair. He stared back from that long ago era with a proud defiance. Around him were other people with disabilities. Michael spotted a couple of amputees and a blind woman. A badly faded banner hung behind them that read: “Bay Area Association for Disabled Americans.”

The man in the wheel chair graced other pages of the album as well. In some photos, he was younger and wearing a police uniform. His eyes were eager and confident and in the earlier pictures, rather than defiant.

There was definitely a family resemblance.

“If you don’t mind me asking; was that your grandpa?” He asked.

Dustin became animated with genuine pride. “Yeah, he was a cop. One of the few black cops on the force at that time.”

Michael took a chair beside him. “He looks a lot like you.”

“Why? Because we’re both in chairs?” He meant the remark to sound flip, but this time, real bitterness churned to the surface.

“No, no. I meant your faces. You both look kinda the same.”

Dustin pondered if Michael had a point or was just trying to snow him with BS. “He was shot in the line of duty.” He volunteered abruptly.

“Being a cop is dangerous.”

He smiled coyly. “Oh yeah, especially if you’re black. You know it was one of his fellow cops that shot him, right? They didn’t even apologize for it. Just said it was an ‘unfortunate accident.’”

Michael nodded somberly. “Yeah, well…not an easy time to live in.”

“Weird though.” Dustin concluded. “We both ended up in chairs. Almost like a curse, hunh?”

“Just a coincidence, Dustin. And the difference is you’ll be back on your feet soon. You know, my dad’s in a wheelchair, too. Motorcycle accident when he was young. He still made his own destiny.”

“Thanks for that, Obi Wan.”

He patted the boy’s shoulder. “What say we get back to work, OK?”

Michael stood up. As he did so, the mounted TV that hung above him on the wall captured his attention. The volume was turned down, but subtitles narrated what was being said in the newscast. “Breaking News.” Was displayed at the top of the screen. An exited newscaster was on location somewhere in downtown, speaking to his colleagues in the studio.

Again, the population here in San Francisco is absolutely stunned over this event. John, I’m standing at the foot of a monstrous structure that as everyone knows by now was not here an hour ago. And so far, no one has any theories to explain how a building this size could have appeared, seemingly out of thin air.” The camera panned back to show the slope of what was either a mountain, or giant pyramid.

Dan,” said the studio anchorman, “we know that several people have so far tried to enter this building, do we know their whereabouts?

Not so far, John. I have just learned that San Francisco police are in route and are planning to cordon off the blocks surrounding the structure. They want us to stress that no one should approach this area until this remarkable situation has been investigated.”

Dan, the most obvious question is: what happened to the other buildings and structures that were there previously?”

Michael felt as if ants were crawling over his body. The nightmare was back. He could feel it smothering him like quicksand.

A ferocious blast of thunder boomed outside. The noise rolled across the landscape, reverberating through the concrete canyons and green hills of the city. The hospital windows rattled with its power.

The rain drummed with renewed fury, as if an ocean had been dropped upon the city.

Licking dry lips, he took in the familiar ward around him. Everything looked the same, but for reasons he couldn’t articulate, he knew something was very wrong.

Dizziness came upon him for just a moment. He found the TV again. The newscasters were still talking, but now their appearance had changed. Their overly styled hair was missing. They now sported crew cuts that would have made a marine proud.

Once more, John, I’d like to say how excited everyone is down here. The crowd is absolutely wild. Our Most Holy Temple is about to finally reopen its doors to our faithful multitude. Some people have been waiting since 6pm last night. As you might recall, our temple was first built in nineteen------or rather, it was first built seventy-eight years ago. So this renovation has been a long time in coming.”

The studio anchorman nodded respectfully. “We all envy you right now, Dan. Any word on when the first group of infidels will be sacrificed?” The anchorman couldn’t help but notice that Dan had almost made a public reference to the old Judo-Christian calendar, a crime punishable by imprisonment or death. He made a mental note to distance himself from the man.

Dan shook his head, putting a hand to his ear-mounted receiver. “Not so far, John. As we all know, only his Holiness can decide how soon the sacrifices will occur.” He grinned enthusiastically. “But it’s likely to be spectacular. The newly renovated Holy Temple has improved run off drains to handle the expected quantity of blood.”

“We gotta finish.” Said Dustin, making him jump.

But Dustin had changed also. He was no longer the same boy he had been a few minutes ago. His cheeks were sallow and his nervous face retained none of the brash self-assurance that had been present before.

When Michael didn’t answer right away, Dustin said again, “We gotta finish.”

“We will.”

Dustin looked with fear at the TV. Then he dropped into a frantic whisper. “You don’t get it, man. Some people think I’m a non-believer. But I ain’t! I do believe, I do!”

His urgent pleading made the hair on Michael’s neck stand up. “Dustin, it’s ok----“

“No, man. It ain’t ok. If I don’t get better real fast, I’ll end up there.” He jerked his head at the screen. “They’ll cut me up if I ain’t healthy.”

Dustin had changed in other ways. His “ghetto” persona, which had been an act a little while ago, was now authentic. A frightened street kid had replaced the sharp and refined fifteen year- old.

The boy grabbed Michael’s shirt, tugging on it forcefully. He was approaching hysteria. “You’ve gotta fix me up right away! Do you hear? Right away ‘fore they gut me like all them others! I don’t wanna die up there, I don’t wanna die!”

It was too much.

Michael fled, feeling as if he were trying to run underwater.

Once he was in the men’s room, he slumped towards a toilet bowl and vomited several times, each upheaval seeming to turn him inside out.

It was a while before he worked up the courage to return. His legs trembled with protest all the way back.

When he finally jerked open the main door, he was struck speechless.

It was all changed. The ward was smaller, and there were fewer patients. Of those, none had serious injuries.

Dustin Gray was nowhere to be seen. Disoriented, he turned his head back and forth. If he were new to the building, his first thought would have been that he had taken a wrong turn. But he knew the small corridor very well. There were no other entrances, and no other exits from the men’s room. And no other wards on this floor.

This was the same room he had just left, and yet it wasn’t.

His life was becoming an exercise in dementia; fantasy, reality, hallucinations, it was all mixed up. He didn’t know what was real anymore.

“God dammit,” He croaked desperately. “God dammit, make this stop. I can’t take any more.” He didn’t know whom he was begging: God, Santa Claus or his own chaotic brain, which more than likely was betraying him, taking his sanity on a one-way trip down the rabbit hole.

A familiar nurse stepped in front of him, as if in answer to his pleading. He remembered that the nurse’s name was Diane. She was in her early thirties with dark hair and a prominent nose. She had a bad habit of always calling him “Mr. Chase.”

“Diane, I don’t know what’s going on around here.” He blurted miserably. She was a familiar component in his life, one of the only ones he recognized at the moment. His reeling senses fixed onto her as if she were a lighthouse beacon.

Diane rewarded him with a warm smile. “Mr. Chase, it’s not too late. What was done may be undone.”

He dissected her words, hunting for sanity and meaning, anything that might ground him to the real world.

She stepped closer to him. Reaching out, she laid her fingertips against his cheek. His entire body tingled at the contact. It wasn’t a flirtatious or erotic gesture. There was an aspect of it that felt almost maternal. “The Overthrow is upon you. Accept me. Accept me and our strength will be joined.”

He yelled out. In panic, he backpedaled away from her, and ended up bouncing into the wall behind him.

Her eyes…!

She tilted her head, studying him with inhuman irises and pupils-----inhuman because they were identical to those of a large feline.

“At the beginning, Michael…” She said soothingly, “Only at the beginning can the end be undone.”

Squeezing his lids shut, he took his fear and mangled it into anger. “What do you want from me?” He demanded through clenched teeth. “What the hell do you WANT FROM ME?”

“Mr. Chase? Do you need me to call someone?”

He looked up to see a perfectly normal, and very nervous Diane standing before him.


“I’m fine.” He said, his mouth running on autopilot.

Diane was hardly convinced. “You know, Mr. Chase…you should probably get some more rest. Maybe go home for a while?” He could see her brain running calculations on how fast she could travel to the exit.

He pulled himself together as best he could. Despite the self-serving nature of her advice, it wasn’t entirely without merit. But first…

Excusing himself, he made his way to the ward’s sign in desk. He searched the files at the counter and made some inquires. All things considered, he wasn’t completely surprised at the final result of his investigation.

There was no such patient as Dustin Gray.
 
A very intense chapter. The way you described Michael's feelings felt quite real. I also like how much work you put into the other characters.
I'm really excited how this will develop.
 
A very intense chapter. The way you described Michael's feelings felt quite real. I also like how much work you put into the other characters.
I'm really excited how this will develop.
Thanks for the comments and the support, Count Zero. If I come close to making the characters feel real, then I'll count myself lucky.
Chapter 4 will go up towards the end of next week.
Have a good weekend.
 
The whole bit about Dustin Gray was very cool and appropriately creepy.

And talking about creepy, what's the deal with this alternate universe/dimension Michael jumped into? An omen of things to come, perhaps? If only there was a hero who could save the world from such a terrible fate ...

Great chapter!
 
The whole bit about Dustin Gray was very cool and appropriately creepy.

And talking about creepy, what's the deal with this alternate universe/dimension Michael jumped into? An omen of things to come, perhaps? If only there was a hero who could save the world from such a terrible fate ...

Great chapter!
Much appreciated...
Hopefully, you'll find the coming chapters just as interesting.
 
Chapter 4
Partners in Deceit​

Leonard Shelvin was working late. He sat alone in his office in the Chase Museum building, tapping away at his computer. He was the museum’s executive financial officer, a lofty title that conjured up the image of a huge corporate staff.

The reality was, that including him; there were only two other “executive managers” that ran the small operation. They included a curator (who performed at least three other functions.) and Richard Chase, the museum’s owner.

This evening, he was supposedly looking over the financial reports to see what expenses could be moved around to keep everything afloat. He had told Richard Chase he would see what he could do to minimize the financial hemorrhaging that was now taking place. After all, that was another of his jobs: pulling a rabbit out his hat whenever there were money problems. Richard trusted him in that capacity.

In a perverse way, this trust was not misplaced. After all, Shelvin was good at his job. In fact, he was a near genius at managing budgets sheets and expense reports, a wizard at finding tax shelters.

But above all, he was brilliant at embezzling. He had stashed away a tidy sum over the years, enough to enjoy a high standard of living when the day came. Every penny had come from the Chase Museum. His bleeding of the business had gone unnoticed over the years. As the bottom line dipped and rose, Richard had logically attributed the seesawing profits to other factors, such as competition, inflation, the ‘89 quake, you name it. And it had all been plausible, because within each of Shelvin’s manufactured excuses was a kernel of truth.

The money he had squeezed out had been nothing impressive in the beginning. But after Shelvin had washed and dried it, the funds went into other investments that had produced a high rate of return. Within ten years, he had quadrupled his “starting capital”, most of which was now taking up residence in one or two offshore accounts.

His intention had been to cover his tracks completely, what with all the people looking closely at the balance sheets these days.

But all that had been before the new business arrangement he had brokered. Now, as a major storm erupted outside his office window, he realized that this new deal was about to close, and it would render all of his previous affairs obsolete.

Yet, he went through the motions anyway. Number crunching was in his blood, after all.

By the time he finished, there was a knock at his office door.

“Come in,” he said excitedly.

A tall, angular woman appeared in the entrance.

“What’s a nice vixen like you doing out on a night like this?”

Rachel smiled, although it did nothing to brighten her expression. “I’m glad I’m not marrying you for your wit.”

He stood from his desk and kissed her. For this maneuver to succeed, his fiancé had to bend low.

“Did you-----finish the business we discussed?”

He pushed his glasses up with a forefinger. “Done.” He caressed her buttocks with a sweaty hand. “Just like you wanted. How about you?”

She stepped away. “I am now officially divorced.” She tried to prop up a faltering smirk. “Michael can kiss his family business goodbye. The museum’s finished.” She patted the computer screen as though it were a pet. “And thanks to you, we have a cushion to land on, once we leave.”

“I have to admit, replacing the Bastet artifact with a forgery was a stroke of genius.” He told her, admiringly.

“Well, they asked for it. I mean, using in house people to authenticate something like that? Easy enough to discredit with a little creativity.”

It had been a match made in heaven. Or so she had led Leonard Shelvin to believe. Rachel was a business consultant, a successful one until the economy had tanked. During the divorce, she had gained access, through her own means, to the museum’s financial records. It had taken less than a New York minute to see that Shelvin was cooking the books. Instead of exposing him, her anger and hatred had led her to cut a bargain with the little worm, in exchange for his help in discrediting the museum. She had even gone as far as making him think she would marry him afterward. Shelvin was left with visions of a Bonnie and Clyde team, living out their days in Switzerland or someplace as they spent their misbegotten bounty.

She allowed him this fantasy. For the time being, it suited her purposes. He would soon enjoy a rude awakening, but she would deal with that when the time came.

Her pain over the abortion had threatened to destroy her. So she gave into a part of herself that was dark and cruel, in a desperate bid to find strength. In doing so, she had opened the cage and given her Hyde personality carte blanche to get the job done by any means necessary.

Up until today, that had worked just fine. She had filled up her time with schemes of retribution and the goal of crushing out Michael’s future. All of it had helped to keep her sorrow at bay. There was comfort in knowing that someone else was to blame for her misery. Punishing that person had given her purpose again.

But some of that had unraveled when she saw him today.

There he was again, in her mind’s eye, alone in the therapy ward. After stomping away, she had stood out of sight, fighting back the desire to return. She watched him, sitting there, clearly restraining the urge to weep. He had looked so lost in that moment, so hurt…

She ground her teeth against the memory. Dammit, why the hell had she given in to the impulse to see him in person? She had been doing so well until then.

“And once I get rid of the real Bastet artifact, we can-----“

Rachel’s face turned into a scowl. Her ears had just caught up with Shelvin’s last remark. She was almost grateful to be jolted out of her conflicting thoughts. “What are you talking about? You mean you still have the Bastet artifact?”

“Look,” He began nervously.

“Where IS it?” both of her large hands were now upon her hips.

“Just hold on.” He replied defensively. “I had to hide it here until it was safe to be moved.” He tapped the top of his desk. “It’s right here, in a false compartment.”

She stumbled away from his desk as though it were on fire. “You had that piece of incriminating evidence here in your office the whole time? God, how STUPID are you?”

Something happened to Shelvin’s eyes. He looked at her with a glassy, dead stare. “Don’t call me names.” He said shakily. “I’ve never liked it when people call me names. Say other stuff, just don’t call me things.”

She wanted very badly to laugh at him. He sounded like a small boy and not at all like the decisive crook who had coldly helped her ruin the Chase Museum.

But this new side to Leonard wasn’t funny. He had almost become someone else just now. Not just a child-----a disturbed child.

Her instincts for self-preservation quickly informed her to ease off, then re-evaluate later.

“Okay,” She said in a softer tone. “Just get rid of it, alright? It’s dangerous.” Her own choice of words struck her as funny. She hadn’t said It’s dangerous to have it here. She had said, IT’S dangerous. Even funnier, this idea resonated with truth. She just couldn’t explain why.

Shelvin continued to stare at nothing with that same glassy look, as if he were a mannequin. “I don’t like how you talk to me sometimes.” He protested quietly. “You act like you’re the…well…you know?”

She took his hand and led him to his feet. “Like I’m the man? Is that what you mean?”

He removed his glasses and began cleaning them on a handkerchief. “You know, we’re doing this together. You and me. We’re partners. We’re gonna be husband and wife pretty soon.”

She restrained a shudder. “Leonard, please don’t tell me that you’re like all the rest of those adolescent boys out there-----the ones who wet themselves every time a strong woman begins making a mark.”

Shelvin returned the glasses to his nose. He looked at her with restored confidence. “Don’t be ridiculous. You know I’m not a chauvinist, or whatever.”

Rachel smiled for the sole purpose of testing his mood. When he smiled back, she knew he was himself again. She didn’t relish his normal personality, but at least she knew how to deal with it. “Come on, what do you say we get rid of that cat artifact and get out of Dodge?”

Lightning went off like a flash bulb, nearly blinding them. The stark illumination stretched out their shadows to the far wall. Thunder came a second later, a long rumbling noise, as if a ghostly freight train were racing over the roof.

Someone outside screamed. The noise came from very far away. It was the long wail of someone in the throes of either great terror or unbearable agony.

Or both.

They listened to the shriek rise and fall over the pounding rain, until finally it died away.

Rachel moved hesitantly towards the window. “Leonard, what do you think is going on out there?”

“What do you mean?”

She hugged herself, something she hadn’t done since she was a child. “This weird storm. The way things have started looking different…”

Leonard seemed oddly impassive. “It’s just a storm, Rachel.”

And that was the short answer, of course. But it wasn’t just the storm. The storm seemed a symptom of something bigger-----some kind of change that nature found objectionable.

“Tell you what,” She said, “let’s get out of this place. I’m not ga-ga about black, empty buildings.”

Shelvin compressed his lips into a razor-thin smile. “Sure, sure. But do you mind if I show you something first?”

She sighed, weighing the pros and cons of disappointing him-----particularly since he had on his puppy dog face. They needed to get rid of the Bastet artifact soon, before more people arrived to set up for tomorrow’s reopening. She wasn’t keen on the idea of lingering for show and tell. She decided to acquiesce, but with a condition.

“Whatever it is, you’ve got five minutes. We really need to get going.”

“You’ve got it.” He said quickly. “Follow me.” Shelvin walked out of his office door.

But Rachel didn’t move. “We’re not going into the museum are we?”

He reappeared in the doorway. “Of course. The guards know I’m here working late. The alarms are disabled-----at least the interior ones. We won’t get arrested if that’s what you think.”

But that wasn’t what she thought. She was thinking about wandering around in a dark, vacant museum in the middle of the night with a volatile thunderstorm for company. The prospect was hardly a charming one.

She glanced at her watch, wavering on a decision. She supposed there would still be time. Besides, she had already more or less committed.

“At least turn on some damn lights.” She ordered, following him out of the office.

It wasn’t long after that they both found themselves in the Egyptian Wing of the building. Before them stood a six-foot high representation of what Rachel assumed was an Egyptian god from long ago. The plaque below said it was “Seth” or “Set” or something. The figure had the standard headpiece and staff.

“So what do you think?” Shelvin inquired with a melodramatic waive of his hand.

She looked between him and the display. “Am I missing something?” The “statue” wasn’t even an authentic artifact. It was a plaster replica that was nothing more than Egyptian window dressing.

He glared at her with bare contempt. “You’ve missed a lot. But I, on the other hand, don’t miss a thing.” He looked back at the display, his mood shifting to that of a lovesick teenager. “You might say that I’ve been working on a side deal.” He winked at her the way a sociopath might wink at someone he was about to kill. “You’re going to be included, just not the way you might expect.”

Rachel let out a suffering exhale. “C’mon Leonard, I don’t have time for this crap. Neither do you. We have to-----“

“Did you really think I wouldn’t know, you disloyal whore?”

Her jaw dropped open.

Shelvin was now projecting an aura of viciousness that made her heart falter. It was then and there, that an epiphany came to her. She knew, somehow, that what she was standing before was a darkness many degrees beyond anything she harbored in her soul. This man, this creepy little man, was a conduit for a hatred that made Rachel’s look like a dim echo.

He continued to leer at her, his jaw muscles bouncing in fury. “What? You didn’t think I would find out? You’re using me, I know that. Even after everything I’ve done for you.” He held up an index finger. “But now we’re going to see who uses whom.”

Thunder split open the sky. She flinched. To her, it had seemed more like an explosion than a thunderclap. The entire building rattled with its intensity.

“Leonard, I don’t know what idiot idea you’re fixated on, but I’ve had enough. As far as who is using who here, we’re both getting something out of this.” She ignored the true meaning behind his accusation-----the idea that their engagement was a sham. “I’m leaving.” She put as much authority as she could muster into this indignant statement.

That was when it began.

At the foot of the display a large snake was suddenly writhing at her feet.

Startled, she jumped back. She wasn’t afraid of snakes per say, but it was certainly prudent to keep out of its reach. It might be poisonous, after all.

“Leonard, watch out!” She exclaimed, for he hadn’t moved. He only slid his lovesick expression from the statue to the creature below him.

Rachel’s eyes jumped between Leonard and the snake. The reptile was now coiling around his shoes, almost as if it were caressing him with affection.

She was evaluating how to safely yank him away, when the second snake appeared. It had come from nowhere. She looked around, franticly trying to see if there was a hole in the ceiling or the floor. But she saw no discernable point of entry.

Then a third snake materialized.

And a fourth.

And a fifth.

Each time her eyes darted in one direction, a new snake appeared within her peripheral vision.

There was now a small mountain of snakes piled around Shelvin and the statue. He was knee deep in them. And the squirming pile of serpents was growing before her astonished eyes.

Rachel lurched forward, willing her long legs into action. But the pile of reptiles had now grown so large; she was cut off from the exit. She was trapped. Her only way out was through a literal snake’s nest.

The nest now filled the entire hallway and was spreading towards her as the creatures multiplied. It was at least six feet high and still expanding. Shelvin was already buried within its midst.

“Help!!” She screamed. She clawed for her purse and the cell phone within it. But there was nothing there. Her eyes bulged upon remembering she had left her purse in Shelvin’s office.

“HELLPP!!” She screamed again, this time thinking of the museum’s elusive security guards.

And now the avalanche of creatures was rolling towards her as if a single organism. There was a blur. Two cylindrical objects leaped out of the mound and ensnared her arms. She gasped in shock. The things that had wrapped around her were massive reptilian bodies. They were so thick and muscularly, her outraged mind at first mistook them for elephant trunks.

She got the chance to jerk her body just once, trying desperately to free herself.

It was impossible. Her arms were being held with such force they might have been cemented to a concrete wall.

Rachel cried out as she was yanked off her feet.

She disappeared within the depths of the tangle, yelling and kicking. She couldn’t see or breathe for long moments. Twitching, shuddering reptiles pressed against her face, hissed in her ears. She felt them tangle in her hair. They wormed through her clothing. The smell of snakeskin was smothering, overpowering. She gagged violently.

Utter panic and helplessness consumed her, reducing her to a small girl. “Michael,” She whimpered. “Help me---!”

But it wasn’t her ex-husband’s face that appeared before her. It was Leonard Shelvin’s.

Her mind teetered as a new and horrific understanding dawned; the things that held her tightly, that had pulled her into this den of monsters, was non other than Leonard Shelvin’s arms-----arms that were now serpentine bodies, squeezing her with terrible pressure.

He was no longer human. At least, not entirely.

His half-human head gibbered at her. He opened his mouth and a forked tongue wiggled out to explore her face, even as she howled with revulsion.

“Rachel…” He gurgled through scaly lips, “You will complete me, my darling.”

Only then did she surrender to madness.
 
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Wow. I wasn't sure what to make of this when I started reading, but you really developed a nice little world here. Chapter 4 really "sold" me on what you're doing here. Very good work. You've got a good sense of character and description.

If I had to suggest anything, it would be some editing. You have a lot of run-on sentences. You also use dashes a bit too much. Two is plenty for just about any situation, but I've seen you use three to six! It's a bit overkill.

I like this very much so far, though. I hope you'll post more, this is really engaging stuff, even if it isn't technically perfect.
 
Interesting twists and turns in this last chapter. Rachel isn't quite as evil and Shelvin clearly isn't quite as ... uhm ... human?

The snake-thing was gross. But effective. Is there any hope for Rachel? And what is Shelvin and his masters up to? My guess is world domination. But it could be worse.

Tense and gripping stuff.
 
Thanks to both of you for the comments.
Robert, I appreciate the note on editing. As it happens, an old friend of mine is a professional editor and has agreed to work her magic on the remaining chapters.
However, I'm glad the content is at least appealing.
More to come.
 
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