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June Writing Challenge: Hope

TimmyWl

Commodore
Commodore
Author's note: This is obviously written post-Dominion War and from a Reman perspective. Yes, one might argue that the Remans are not Cardassian space but I am supposing there is a population there due to a reference in ST:Nemesis on Shinzon getting his experience/troops there. I have also incorporated some continuity from the books post Dominion War although the actual details are somewhat elusive since I haven't read them.

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[This letter has translated from the Reman dialect of the Romulan language and been written with Earth idioms to best capture its meaning. ]

Sir -

I understand where you are coming from. The Federation has invaded the Romulan Star Empire. The Federation has fissured the Star Empire in twain. They have corrupted the Star Empire all in the name of the much missed Praetor Shinzon and his misguided actions against Captain Picard, whom I have always heard of but never met.

Oddly enough they are all right here; by here I do infer the ruined state of the Cardassian Union. Yes, I do note that most of the forces in the overthrow were from here and that the late Praetor was a veteran of the late war. Yes, I do note that they are a distrustful lot in our homeland.

Yet, they are the complete opposite for those that have embraced the war as a new starting point. You might think I am insane; after all, there is a reason why they were slave troops. They lost the war so many years ago and we were the Empire until we got involved in the late war.

Somehow they were changed by exposure to the Federation. The leading advocate here goes by the name of General Sulla (although retired) who has embraced the Federation (read: the ancient United States of America although the reason why I am unclear of) as his own culture. He has recognized the faults of the former Praetor and created this state within a state due to the general lack of Cardassians and a unified government within their own space.

There is hope in these hills. You might argue – I have been overtly exposed to the Federation ideals myself. You might argue – I have spent too long in the occupied territories given over by the treacherous Federation in the late war. The only reason that you are talking to me is our own familial ties and the moderate success that our unit has enjoyed while everything of the Star Empire has burned into utter chaos with the Senate gone, the Empire broken, and so on.

There is hope in these hills – hills being a metaphor as the Federation uses. It is simple; the Federation is too invested in our homeland while the opposite is true in the former Union. It is an open sore here; the only thing that is of might by the Federation is the sold-off fleets in their desperate attempt to become “not of war” even though they are the only ones holding power ten years after the war.

I have known General Sulla only for about four years and there is something to his approach. They only speak English. None of them are Romulan; it is only by the tools they use that are of that heritage. The main unification is not of embracing Vulcan but rather of a Federation that has ‘shown up’ their older cousins. If they are the barbarians that the Federation press dictate they are according to the death of Data (whomever that maybe; news is slow here), then why not play their own game? Why not show that they are civilized to the point that such criticism can be used – against- them. Yes, you heard me right – against them.

Such a concept is equal to the creation of the cloaking device before that irritating Captain Kirk stole it.

You might be arguing – look, I have clearly gone native. That is wrong; our unit has not struck an alliance with anyone except the shriveled up version of the Temporary Authority stationed on what used to be Cardassian Prime. We have kept the peace here. We have – ironically – fulfilled the very role that the rebels used in supplying the late Praetor. The only problem is the questionable success of the supplies we have seized and sent to you; of which you know more about that than I.

What I am arguing is the possibility that exists in the wake of the Federation’s pulling out of Cardassia and the filling in of their forces in the Star Empire. It is a frightening possibility of abandoning our beloved home; but really, what is there to claim as ours? In fact, there might be people in our own numbers that argue against such a supposition – such as the humans do in their own senate, arguing that they should pull out everywhere, since the war is done, and exploration is the reason behind Starfleet’s existence.

The Federation is willing to abandon their own territories in the name of peace and exploration. The only place they are willing to hold on to is the Star Empire and … there is nothing there but war. Here – the Cardassians are too weak, too dependent on what remains of Starfleet, and have no centre. General Sulla and his kin do – with no opposition! The Federation has done the dirty work for us in their state sponsored rebellion! Their press has even published the very methods in their own media! Such a thing would result in death in our own homeland.

That is my humble opinion.

If such a thing can be allowed, then perhaps the hope can be capitalized on the wayward sorrows of the Federation.

I await your reply,

M.

Postscript;

Sir, I do infer the "Transitional Authority for the Re-unification of the Star Empire" and the "Transitional Democratic Authority of Cardassia" in the mis-label of "Temporary Authority". Please accept my apologies. The Federation tend to use the same words for their puppet governments so it is hard to keep up with them.
 
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Very good...and I think you're making definite improvements in giving people a way to grasp the politics and characters of your stories and how they relate to each other. In that regard, this was easily your best piece so far! :)
 
A lot of things going on here, some of which I don't understand.

But it felt right .... yeah, I'm not sure what I mean by that, either.
 
In order to clarify things, this is the revised edition so that people can follow it. The "Troubles" as the author notes is a reference to the proposed Romulan Civil War as noted in the officially sanctioned books.

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[This letter has translated from the Reman dialect of the Romulan language and been written with Earth idioms to best capture its meaning. ]

Sir -

I understand where you are coming from. The Federation's concern, intrusion, and inserting of Starfleet into the Troubles that our Star Empire is facing is not wanted. The reason why the troops (including our unit) chose not to get involved in that mess is the lack of resistance we have here in the Cardassian Union.

As you know, the Federation actually blessed us in getting rid of the Cardassian Union in supporting their ill-fated rebellion. I would insert some commentary on their attempts at subterfuge but given the matter involving Praetor Shinzon... I can't say anything. It is hard to say, but the problems in the Star Empire were simply waiting to manifest ... and that is the reason why there isn't a Star Empire around anymore.

Yes, I do note that this matter has no relation to the current problems.

Yes, I do note that the Unification movement by Ambassador Spock is a futile attempt. All we have to do is to unite the Star Empire once more again and not kill ourselves to the extent that the Cardassians have in the late War.

Yes, I also note that Captain Picard's supporters are wrong in stating that there has to be some justice to the death of that android (although I have never come across him.)

The reason why I am sending this missive is the sudden change the Remans have under the Federation. Somehow they were changed and they aren't the treacherous lot that Shinzon had when burning the Senate. The Remans here have become.... yes... civilized.

It's hard to believe it.

The leading reformer of this movement goes by the name of General Sulla, the rank gained through battle. His horde settled on a cleansed world. (I call it that due to it being a horde instead of an army unit. It was a normal outcome in the early stages of the Dominion War- as you know it. Luckily the cohesion of our unit survived.) Somehow he has embraced the Federation (read: the ancient United States of America although the reason why I am unclear of) as his own culture. He has recognized the faults of the former Praetor and have even invited our unit to join in his coalition.

What is the hope you may ask? Why would I be base enough to ally with a Starfleet "stooge"? After all, you might say, I am from a very high class family with a stake in reviving the Star Empire, and should support that cause.

The hope is simple; the Federation is too invested in stopping a major Alpha Quadrant power from slipping into utter chaos. This is constrasted with their outright ignorance of what is occuring in the Cardassian Union. They are pulling out. They have pulled out. I look through their archives and all I see is peace advocates so desperate in moving to exploration and Starfleet "not of war".

It's foolish, I know. When we defeated the Remans long ago, we did not care for their feelings. We simply drove them into slavery.

I have known General Sulla for about four years and there is something to his approach. The main point of their reform is to "show up" the Federation; to play their game and to show them that Remans are civilized. At a future point they can be a better Federation, the type of interstellar state that follows up on its promise/conquest, and doesn't subtract immediately for a moot subject.

It's almost like Earth wants to be blissfully ignorant that the Vulcans started the Federation and everything started of them, always exploring, and never of war.

If you don't get it - sir - well - it's akin to that Romulan Commander that forked over that cloaking device to Ambassador Spock. It was only by the sheer stupidity of the Federation that they did not use it. We still have that edge against them.

You might be arguing - why do we want to go to Cardassia - if that is what I am arguing - and indeed, that is what I am arguing for. To put it bluntly sir, they have lost their political capital, they have lost their cohesion, and a good number of them were killed in the last days of hte Dominion War. The Transitional Authority on Cardassia Prime is little more than a joke than anything else due to the prevailing/popular belief (stated above but I will repeat it here) of Earth being exploration not war.

Thus, as a result, there is empty land here in Cardassia due to the Cardassians not being of a large population that can resist settlement. Secondly, the Federation is of a small number because they would rather be shoring up peace in the Star Empire or going home. Thirdly, there is empty land. I note that sir - empty land. Entire systems are depopulated from either internal strife from the Federation withdrawl or the cleansing of the Cardassians.

I know that it is a very long supposition and we would be abandoning our own homeworlds to Starfleet - but empty lands! We could settle here and not have a problem of those whom want a Star Republic instead of an Empire. We could be new here with all those space ships that the Federation simply handed over to the Cardassians in their willingness to get out. We could be a new Empire here. The Federation withdrawl is a blessing not a minor note of history!

That is my humble opinion - a hope in the wake of Earth's indecision and involvement in our politics. I do note that from those empty lands we could even follow up on a surgical strike to Earth - even causing them to do their own overthrow and civil war - instead of our Star Empire falling apart. Their media even made that a focus of their wandering eye. Can you imagine that? Such a thing would be heresy in the Star Empire.


I await your reply,

M.

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Very interesting and very alien, my only quibble is that you suggest the author is a Reman, yet the way he writes would seem to suggest he's actually Romulan?
 
Well - I would imagine that in the wake of the Dominion War, the whole term of "Reman"/"Romulan" doesn't mean anything given that the Star Empire has crumbled and (Praetor/the Reman leader) Shinzon has been killed. What security that either native does have is in force or the places where they can get supplies (hence the revision) for the "Troubles". Thus the point of the story.

It's that or I wanted the character to be Reman but ended up Romulan when I did the revision.
 
An interesting overview of post-Nemesis interstellar politics. I never considered just how chaotic the Alpha and Beta Quadrants were likely to become after the events shown in DS9 and Nemesis. The developments you describe seem quite plausible, in that context.
 
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