interactive Trek + Avatar (nick) crossover project

[J Shasha]

hello!
i am new to writing fanfic but i write poems & make videogames a bunch with @sundaemonth.
i'm working on a series of short int.fic games based on the star trek tv series (+ STO) & the 2 avatar nickelodeon series.

here is a WIP of the first installment. i would be extremely grateful for any feedback- at this stage i'm still exploring a lot of ideas, so hearing any impressions you get would be really helpful <3

the setting is about ~350 years after the end of Legend of Korra. the year is 2394, and the avatar's planet, Nuna, is starting to recover from a devastating war with the Federation. i'm trying to stay as canon as is feasible, but also write in the trek-verse from a new perspective.

also: this draft was made in twine, but i'd like to eventually start producing this in unity & with a small amount of 2D art. as a prototype, i put together a prototype game which is a bit of a prologue to this story.

thanks !

 

[Count Zero]

Just to clarify: I only see texts where I can click certain words which advances the story. Is that how it's supposed to be? (I'm asking because the prototype game seems to have graphics - I can't install it because I'm on Linux.)

I haven't gotten far into the story, yet, but so far, it seems quite interesting.

 

[J Shasha]

Just to clarify: I only see texts where I can click certain words which advances the story. Is that how it's supposed to be? (I'm asking because the prototype game seems to have graphics - I can't install it because I'm on Linux.)

yep! this draft is made with twine and has no graphics, only CSS styles.

 

[J Shasha]

i realized there was a broken page at the very end.

here's a fixed version