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In Her Stead - Gibraltar Short Story

Gibraltar

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The newest of her four rank pips shone a little brighter than the others, but it was of no consequences to Captain T'Velah. What did matter was clearly delineated in her thoughts as she took her place in the command chair of the starship Yassim for the first time. Her crew, her ship, and her mission weighed foremost on the Vulcan officer's mind.

No matter that the vessel was understaffed due to the end of Starfleet's wartime stop-loss program, an unfortunate necessity that had extended a full year after the end of the conflict. They would accomplish their assigned tasks to the best of their ability. They had sworn to do no less years (or in some cases only months) before as they had taken their individual oaths upon graduating Starfleet Academy.

That she was not the first person selected to command this ship was immaterial. Circumstances had changed, a vacancy had been created, and the opportunity had been offered to her. Thus her career path had been unexpectedly accelerated and T'Velah had been given the chance to challenge her formidable intellect in a new and unfamiliar environment.

The Norway-class vessel stood poised to begin its first mission, an escort assignment to safeguard relief supplies to the Federation colonies savaged in the recent border incursion by the Talarians. A 'milk run' her new XO had called it. Perhaps so, but the mission would still give T'Velah occasion to observe her crew at work, to judge how best she might encourage them to collaborate more effectively and gel into a functional whole more easily and more quickly than they might otherwise.

"Operations, inform docking control that we are ready to depart. Engineering, secure from umbilicals and moorings. Helm, prepare to engage thrusters at fifty kph. You may accelerate to three-hundred kph at the one-kilometer boundary marker. At the outermost marker initiate one-quarter impulse drive."

The communications panel at the Ops board chirped suddenly. "Incoming transmission, Captain."

"Source?" T'Velah asked.

"The starship Gibraltar, sir."

T'Velah indicated that the communication should be routed to the main viewer as she stood smoothly.

A middle-aged male human clad in a Starfleet uniform sat at what T'Velah presumed to be his ready room desk. A brief flicker of discomfort seemed to flash across the man's features before he inclined his head. "Captain T'Velah, I presume?"

"I am she," T'Velah replied dispassionately. "I am afraid you have me at a disadvantage, Captain...?"

"Sandhurst," he replied softly. "Donald Sandhurst."

"Is there something you require, Captain Sandhurst?"

He smiled fractionally at T'Velah's no-nonsense inquiry. "I simply wanted to offer my congratulations on your new command, Captain, and to wish you and your crew safe journeys."

T'Velah raised a curious eyebrow even as she remarked, "Such gestures are always welcome, Captain, most especially at the beginning of any new endeavor." Her mind raced as she sought to divine why this particular man, whom she had never met, would extend such a kindness so randomly.

She examined a host of potential factors, ticking through them quickly as each was found wanting. Finally, almost at random, the associative factors coalesced. Her eyes widened ever so slightly as she grasped the meaning behind this transmission. This was to have been her ship, T'Velah surmised silently.

"I believe I understand, Captain Sandhurst." She raised her hand in the Vulcan salute. "Know that I grieve with thee. I will endeavor to honor both her commitment, as well as my own."

Sandhurst's eyes gleamed with intensity as his silent message was received. "I am grateful. Your dedication honors us both." He raised his hand to answer her salute in kind. "Peace and long life, Captain."

"And to you," she answered simply. The link terminated and T'Velah observed the confused expressions of her senior staff as they whispered to one another at their posts. She resumed her seat fluidly. "Status?"

"Traffic control signals we are clear to depart, Captain."

T'Velah settled into the chair. Her chair. "Helm... " she paused a beat to savor the moment, "...engage."
 
A very nicely done short vignette--there's a lot of angst and pain in just a few words--not a wasted word in the entire story.

Most excellent.
 
A very nicely done short vignette--there's a lot of angst and pain in just a few words--not a wasted word in the entire story.

Most excellent.


I don't really have anything to add to this, it just bears repeating. :techman:
 
It's nice to see Sandhurst at a calmer moment than his confrontation with Glover, and anything with Vulcans is full of win, IMO. Very enjoyable!
 
It's nice to see Sandhurst at a calmer moment than his confrontation with Glover, and anything with Vulcans is full of win, IMO. Very enjoyable!

God, I hope that means you have plans for said Vulcans vs devoting yourself full-time to Cardies. Nerys has that one very heavily covered and we could use a Vulcan specialist.:techman:
 
It's nice to see Sandhurst at a calmer moment than his confrontation with Glover, and anything with Vulcans is full of win, IMO. Very enjoyable!

God, I hope that means you have plans for said Vulcans vs devoting yourself full-time to Cardies. Nerys has that one very heavily covered and we could use a Vulcan specialist.:techman:

Yes, I agree! It would be wonderful to read more Vulcan stories! Maybe you can find a niche. :vulcan:
 
Very good stuff. As to be expected of course. I think one of the endearing things about Sandhurst is his empathy and sympathy he is capable of showing. Particularly here, when he congratulates the new captain knowing that Ramierz should have had the command. His own grief and survivor guilt complex would be preying on his mind at that time.

Very short but that fits the tone and Sandhurst not wishing to dwell on the matter or the fact that the Vulcan CO would not be indulging a long winded conversation. very succinct and as David said, every word counts and is pared down to the absolute and to be ver effective for it.
 
It's nice to see Sandhurst at a calmer moment than his confrontation with Glover, and anything with Vulcans is full of win, IMO. Very enjoyable!

God, I hope that means you have plans for said Vulcans vs devoting yourself full-time to Cardies. Nerys has that one very heavily covered and we could use a Vulcan specialist.:techman:

Yes, I agree! It would be wonderful to read more Vulcan stories! Maybe you can find a niche. :vulcan:

I don't think there's any danger of my devoting myself full time to Cardassians, although I confess they're my first area of interest. I like to think there's enough room in the Cardassian Union for two writers, aaaannnddd it also seems that she and I have pretty divergent tastes and interest in characters.

Vulcans are easy to love, hard to write. I'll have to think about that one.
 
I'm very much enjoying your short stories and this one is no exception. A brief but touching moment whereby two Captains honor a fallen comrade. Succinct yet you definitely touched an emotional chord - well done!

Here's hoping you write some more vignettes about Sandhurst, Lar'ragos and others from the Gibraltar crew - both past and present.
 
Writing short, short stories is a bit of an artform and one which you master beautifully.

I always thought that on its own this story doesn't mean much but taken in it's broader context, it's a true gem. No hidden criticism here. Just plain complimentary.
 
I'm very much enjoying your short stories and this one is no exception. A brief but touching moment whereby two Captains honor a fallen comrade. Succinct yet you definitely touched an emotional chord - well done!

Here's hoping you write some more vignettes about Sandhurst, Lar'ragos and others from the Gibraltar crew - both past and present.
Thanks. Short and bittersweet is what I was aiming for. It's nice to know I didn't miss the mark.

Writing short, short stories is a bit of an artform and one which you master beautifully.

I always thought that on its own this story doesn't mean much but taken in it's broader context, it's a true gem. No hidden criticism here. Just plain complimentary.
Yeah, I was thinking that when I wrote it. If you aren't aware of the emotional context and backstory to this tale, it doesn't seem like much... but the impact comes in knowing what this all really means. Thanks!
 
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God, I hope that means you have plans for said Vulcans vs devoting yourself full-time to Cardies. Nerys has that one very heavily covered and we could use a Vulcan specialist.:techman:

Yes, I agree! It would be wonderful to read more Vulcan stories! Maybe you can find a niche. :vulcan:

I don't think there's any danger of my devoting myself full time to Cardassians, although I confess they're my first area of interest. I like to think there's enough room in the Cardassian Union for two writers, aaaannnddd it also seems that she and I have pretty divergent tastes and interest in characters.

Vulcans are easy to love, hard to write. I'll have to think about that one.

Don't forget that Cardassians always operate in threes;).
Mind you I might try my hand at the Romulans.
 
Don't forget that Cardassians always operate in threes;).
Mind you I might try my hand at the Romulans.

I'd be interested to see that, for sure. Or you could stick to Cardassians, and we can take over the world.

Huh? What? Who said that? :evil:

(Sorry, Gibralter, not trying to hijack your excellent short story thread here!)
 
Don't forget that Cardassians always operate in threes;).
Mind you I might try my hand at the Romulans.

I'd be interested to see that, for sure. Or you could stick to Cardassians, and we can take over the world.

Huh? What? Who said that? :evil:

(Sorry, Gibralter, not trying to hijack your excellent short story thread here!)
Be my guest. :lol: How dare you keep bumping my thread back to the top! HOW! DARE! YOU!!! :guffaw:
 
Okay, I just remembered I still had this print out to read and all I have to say is ... damn you!!! In 2 flippin' pages you got my eyes to well up. Bastard! :klingon:

And you know I mean that as the highest compliment. Very nicely done. Seriously. As someone above said, not a word was wasted, and what an impact. :techman:

Here's to Liana Rimerez, may her memory live long. :beer:
 
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