Imagine you're reading a graphic novel. That's why it's in present tense. I'm describing the "art".
"Small Wonder, Part One"
Communications Officer's Log, Stardate (insert date here): As of 0900 hours, the interference Lieutenant Burr noted at 0314 hours is still present on all channels. We have been attempting to determine its origin point with no success thus far. I am hoping that Engineering may be able to clear this up.
Scotty stands next to Uhura, who is seated at her station, frowning and sticking her finger in her ear, waggling it to ease her discomfort.
"Understand you've had a rather….difficult morning, Lieutenant. What's the matter?"
She picks up her earpiece from the desk and hands it to him. "See for yourself, Scotty…..or should I say, 'hear for yourself'."
He picks up the earpiece and holds it next to his ear -SCREEEEEEE!- before dropping it with a clink! "You weren't kidding, Lieutenant….that's enough to drive someone stark raving mad! How did Shane stand it for half a shift?"
"He didn't; this is my-yawn- 4th cup of coffee. Last I saw him, he was bound for sickbay, holding his head." She takes a sip.
Scotty bends over the console, staring at the screen. "Tsk, tsk. Poor lad….. I wonder if there's a commendation for this kind of thing?" Keenser comes to stand beside him.
Kirk strides onto the bridge. "If there isn't, there should be. What's the latest?"
Uhura stands up. "No progress, Captain. We haven't been able to find its origin or decipher it….right now we're not even sure it's a signal."
Kirk sits down in his chair and leans forward. "Mr. Chekov?"
Chekov turns to face Kirk. "It's wery veak, sir…..nothing in the immediate area could cause zat kind of interference. No radiation, no other ships…."
Kirk looks thoughtful. "That's a lot of unknowns…."
Scotty is still looking at the computer screen. "I'll try running some diagnostics, but that'll take – " He sees Keenser listening to Uhura's earpiece. "How can you stand that unholy noise?"
"Not noise."
"The plasma coils it's not-"
"Voice. Very high pitch." Keenser taps the screen a few times, adjusting the settings. He hands the earpiece back to Scotty, who listens for a second.
"Well, I'll be…." He passes it back to Uhura, who puts it back on.
"He's right, sir…" She turns to face Kirk. "I can definitely hear it now. Somebody keeps repeating the same phrase over and over again…..with urgency." A display screen shows a repeating series of sound waves mapped out on a graph.
"A distress call then?" Kirk asks.
"Yes, I think so. Probably automated."
"Which means we may already be too late." Spock stands next to Kirk, hands behind his back. "Time may or may not be of the essence."
"Yeah, well, either way….try to enhance the signal. Let's see if we can pin down a location." Kirk steps down from his chair.
"Attempting to do so now…" Chekov taps a computer screen at his station several times.
"Mr. Sulu, system's edge."
"Aye, aye, sir." The ship warps briefly before stopping.
"I think zat did the treek, sir….ze signal ees coming een better now. Ve have a location." A blinking light appears on the grid map he is looking at. "ETA at warp 4 ees…..17 minutes. "
"Shall we?" Kirk waves his hand. "Warp 4, Mr. Sulu."
"After all this time, you'd think I'd know where everything is." Dr. McCoy is grabbing some small containers off a shelf and adding them to a bag, even as his eyes are looking for something else. "Are you sure we're not just running a fool's errand, Jim? The place could be toast by now."
Kirk is standing at the door to the room, leaning against the doorpost. "Long range scans of the planet were inconclusive. So I'd guess no. Hope it's a false alarm." He smiles. "Don't forget your dancing shoes."
"Hmm…you think I'll have time for- Jim!" McCoy goes from thoughtful to annoyed, his head turning to face Kirk.
Kirk shrugs. "What? Ensign Bruckner's coming along, and I've seen the way you looked at her yesterday." Silly grin. "Just so it's not a total loss if nothing happens..."
"If nothing happens, I will be more than happy to return to the comfort of the ship, thank you very much." McCoy walks towards the door of the storage room, his bag slung over one shoulder. "But I highly doubt it."
A security team is standing around in the transporter room dressed in environmental suits. One of the transporter officers looks up. "Where's the rest of the away team?"
"Getting ready. We're going down first to clear the area." Zahra adjusts something on her sleeve. She turns to her fellow security members. One is a woman with shoulder length black hair held back by twin blue clips. (Presumeably Bruckner.) "As always, stay alert and be on your guard. We're going down there blind – no intel. Conditions are liveable, but until we know the nature of the crisis…we can't afford to miss a trick." She slips her phaser into its holder as the other security team members step onto the transporter pad.
Kirk strides down the hallway, followed by McCoy. He is listening to his communicator.
"Sir, the security team landed safely on the planet 3 minutes ago."
"Good. Put me through to them, will you, Lieutenant?" Kirk looks at McCoy with a "so far, so good" expression on his face; McCoy's hand is raised in a "wait for it" gesture.
"Captain?"
"What's the good word, Zahra?"
Zahra is standing on top of a rock in a desert-like environment, while behind her the other security team members are scanning or sweeping their immediate area. "All clear, sir. If there's any peril to be had on this planet, it isn't here. Signal's coming in stronger but we can't tell from what. Transport at will."
"What's the matter? Getting lonesome?" Kirk asks.
"All four of us? Not likely, Captain." She smiles, arms crossed. "See you in a flash. Zahra out."
Kirk stops with his back to the transporter room door. "That's odd. Better reception but no danger in sight?" He turns around and bumps into Scotty, who is geared up. "Ooof!"
"Watch out, sir." Scotty dusts imaginary dust off his suit. You can see Spock on the transporter pad already behind them.
"Of course he beat us here. Probably ran all the way." McCoy mutters under his breath to no one in particular, a snide look on his face.
"On the contrary; it would be most illogical to overexert myself prior to undertaking a mission of unknown risk, length and activity level." Spock faces McCoy as he steps onto the pad.
McCoy stands next to Spock, facing Kirk as he and Scotty join them. "I take it back; he wouldn't have to run. You know, some shifts I'd trade half my good looks for a fraction of his endurance." He pinches the air to indicate the fraction.
"An exchange which would have a rather unfair result, in your favor." Spock replies.
"Did he just-" McCoy looks confused.
"I think he did, Doctor." Scotty smiles, and Kirk laughs. Spock is stoic as always.
Kirk addresses one of the transporter officers. "Ms. Chavez, four to beam down."
"Just a minute, sir. Resetting the calculations." She types on the screen and shares a look with the other officer, who confirms. "Good to go."
"Energize." All four are posed on the transporter as light swirls around them. An alert beeps and a light flashes on the other officer's console.
"Huh? That shouldn't be so –" he says as the transporter room explodes with a flash of brilliant light and smoke. KA-BLAM!
"Small Wonder, Part One"
Communications Officer's Log, Stardate (insert date here): As of 0900 hours, the interference Lieutenant Burr noted at 0314 hours is still present on all channels. We have been attempting to determine its origin point with no success thus far. I am hoping that Engineering may be able to clear this up.
Scotty stands next to Uhura, who is seated at her station, frowning and sticking her finger in her ear, waggling it to ease her discomfort.
"Understand you've had a rather….difficult morning, Lieutenant. What's the matter?"
She picks up her earpiece from the desk and hands it to him. "See for yourself, Scotty…..or should I say, 'hear for yourself'."
He picks up the earpiece and holds it next to his ear -SCREEEEEEE!- before dropping it with a clink! "You weren't kidding, Lieutenant….that's enough to drive someone stark raving mad! How did Shane stand it for half a shift?"
"He didn't; this is my-yawn- 4th cup of coffee. Last I saw him, he was bound for sickbay, holding his head." She takes a sip.
Scotty bends over the console, staring at the screen. "Tsk, tsk. Poor lad….. I wonder if there's a commendation for this kind of thing?" Keenser comes to stand beside him.
Kirk strides onto the bridge. "If there isn't, there should be. What's the latest?"
Uhura stands up. "No progress, Captain. We haven't been able to find its origin or decipher it….right now we're not even sure it's a signal."
Kirk sits down in his chair and leans forward. "Mr. Chekov?"
Chekov turns to face Kirk. "It's wery veak, sir…..nothing in the immediate area could cause zat kind of interference. No radiation, no other ships…."
Kirk looks thoughtful. "That's a lot of unknowns…."
Scotty is still looking at the computer screen. "I'll try running some diagnostics, but that'll take – " He sees Keenser listening to Uhura's earpiece. "How can you stand that unholy noise?"
"Not noise."
"The plasma coils it's not-"
"Voice. Very high pitch." Keenser taps the screen a few times, adjusting the settings. He hands the earpiece back to Scotty, who listens for a second.
"Well, I'll be…." He passes it back to Uhura, who puts it back on.
"He's right, sir…" She turns to face Kirk. "I can definitely hear it now. Somebody keeps repeating the same phrase over and over again…..with urgency." A display screen shows a repeating series of sound waves mapped out on a graph.
"A distress call then?" Kirk asks.
"Yes, I think so. Probably automated."
"Which means we may already be too late." Spock stands next to Kirk, hands behind his back. "Time may or may not be of the essence."
"Yeah, well, either way….try to enhance the signal. Let's see if we can pin down a location." Kirk steps down from his chair.
"Attempting to do so now…" Chekov taps a computer screen at his station several times.
"Mr. Sulu, system's edge."
"Aye, aye, sir." The ship warps briefly before stopping.
"I think zat did the treek, sir….ze signal ees coming een better now. Ve have a location." A blinking light appears on the grid map he is looking at. "ETA at warp 4 ees…..17 minutes. "
"Shall we?" Kirk waves his hand. "Warp 4, Mr. Sulu."
"After all this time, you'd think I'd know where everything is." Dr. McCoy is grabbing some small containers off a shelf and adding them to a bag, even as his eyes are looking for something else. "Are you sure we're not just running a fool's errand, Jim? The place could be toast by now."
Kirk is standing at the door to the room, leaning against the doorpost. "Long range scans of the planet were inconclusive. So I'd guess no. Hope it's a false alarm." He smiles. "Don't forget your dancing shoes."
"Hmm…you think I'll have time for- Jim!" McCoy goes from thoughtful to annoyed, his head turning to face Kirk.
Kirk shrugs. "What? Ensign Bruckner's coming along, and I've seen the way you looked at her yesterday." Silly grin. "Just so it's not a total loss if nothing happens..."
"If nothing happens, I will be more than happy to return to the comfort of the ship, thank you very much." McCoy walks towards the door of the storage room, his bag slung over one shoulder. "But I highly doubt it."
A security team is standing around in the transporter room dressed in environmental suits. One of the transporter officers looks up. "Where's the rest of the away team?"
"Getting ready. We're going down first to clear the area." Zahra adjusts something on her sleeve. She turns to her fellow security members. One is a woman with shoulder length black hair held back by twin blue clips. (Presumeably Bruckner.) "As always, stay alert and be on your guard. We're going down there blind – no intel. Conditions are liveable, but until we know the nature of the crisis…we can't afford to miss a trick." She slips her phaser into its holder as the other security team members step onto the transporter pad.
Kirk strides down the hallway, followed by McCoy. He is listening to his communicator.
"Sir, the security team landed safely on the planet 3 minutes ago."
"Good. Put me through to them, will you, Lieutenant?" Kirk looks at McCoy with a "so far, so good" expression on his face; McCoy's hand is raised in a "wait for it" gesture.
"Captain?"
"What's the good word, Zahra?"
Zahra is standing on top of a rock in a desert-like environment, while behind her the other security team members are scanning or sweeping their immediate area. "All clear, sir. If there's any peril to be had on this planet, it isn't here. Signal's coming in stronger but we can't tell from what. Transport at will."
"What's the matter? Getting lonesome?" Kirk asks.
"All four of us? Not likely, Captain." She smiles, arms crossed. "See you in a flash. Zahra out."
Kirk stops with his back to the transporter room door. "That's odd. Better reception but no danger in sight?" He turns around and bumps into Scotty, who is geared up. "Ooof!"
"Watch out, sir." Scotty dusts imaginary dust off his suit. You can see Spock on the transporter pad already behind them.
"Of course he beat us here. Probably ran all the way." McCoy mutters under his breath to no one in particular, a snide look on his face.
"On the contrary; it would be most illogical to overexert myself prior to undertaking a mission of unknown risk, length and activity level." Spock faces McCoy as he steps onto the pad.
McCoy stands next to Spock, facing Kirk as he and Scotty join them. "I take it back; he wouldn't have to run. You know, some shifts I'd trade half my good looks for a fraction of his endurance." He pinches the air to indicate the fraction.
"An exchange which would have a rather unfair result, in your favor." Spock replies.
"Did he just-" McCoy looks confused.
"I think he did, Doctor." Scotty smiles, and Kirk laughs. Spock is stoic as always.
Kirk addresses one of the transporter officers. "Ms. Chavez, four to beam down."
"Just a minute, sir. Resetting the calculations." She types on the screen and shares a look with the other officer, who confirms. "Good to go."
"Energize." All four are posed on the transporter as light swirls around them. An alert beeps and a light flashes on the other officer's console.
"Huh? That shouldn't be so –" he says as the transporter room explodes with a flash of brilliant light and smoke. KA-BLAM!