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I drew Jaylah

down to earth

Lieutenant
Red Shirt
I saw the movie last night!! It was great!
I dunno how I feel about this drawing though (been staring at it for way too long).. feedback would be awesome :ack:
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The actual black stripy bits are not correctly located, but other than that minor technical point, it's a beautiful piece. I dig your style.

--Alex
 
Wow! Thank you all so much! Happy to hear you guys like it :D

And @Albertese oh, I see... :wtf: Looking at it again I think the marks on her cheeks are too far apart from her lips, if that's what you meant. Thanks for pointing that out!
 
Very nice work. I wish I still had the fire to create art like I once did.

My only critique would be the area where here jaw, ear and neck meet seems a bit off somehow. Like maybe her jaw-line is too high. But that may be just my personal taste talking.

She is one of my favourite character designs of recent sci-fi.
 
@BJ Wagner

Oh, I see what you mean; I think that may be because the shadow I painted there is a bit too conspicuous so it's making her jawline/neck look weird. Thank you for the feedback! :D And, I love her design too. She's one of my favorite Star Trek characters now!
 
Do you have a deviantart or blog or something with other stuff you've done? I'd love to see some more.

Oh! I unfortunately don't have a formal art blog/portfolio site anymore, but if you google 'voisb' (my old screenname on tumblr/deviantart), some of my old art should come up! I do also have an instagram, but it's pretty casual and random, for any miscellaneous things I make.
 
Cool, thanks. I'll check 'em out. :)

Edit: Already seen several pieces on your instagram that I really like, so thank you again!
 
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