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February challenge: "Midnight Closure"

Galen4

Captain
Captain
Series: ST: Intrepid (Part of the United Trek universe)

Notes: This story takes place in March 2377, approximately three weeks after the conclusion of “Treacherous Waters.”

Length: 2,681 words





Commander Shantok, executive officer of the USS Intrepid, rose from the meditative position she had occupied on the deck to greet the new arrival.

“Mother,” She said to the visitor. “It’s agreeable to see you again.”

“Is it?” The other woman asked. “One could hardly tell by your attire.” She gave her daughter a suffering look. “If I’m intruding, we can reschedule this reunion for a more convenient time.”

“I wasn’t aware that your visit required pomp and circumstance.” Shantok rejoined dryly. “Perhaps I should have prepared a dinner party and honor guard attachment.”

Sha’Ler sniffed indignantly at the sarcasm. At the age of one hundred and seven, she was considered middle aged for a Vulcan, yet still within what was considered her “functional prime.” Her blonde hair was stacked into two disheveled buns that overlooked restless green eyes; eyes that seemed to abhor prolonged contact. Altogether, she appeared almost flighty, if such a term could be applied to someone of her species. In fact, humans from the distant past might have compared Sha’Ler to an aging ‘flower child’ from their era of social revolution.

Shantok’s jet-black hair was in direct contrast to her mother’s. It hung ruler straight to her shoulders, a customary arrangement when she was off duty. She indicated a decanter, which squatted on an end table. “May I get you some tea?”

Sha’Ler wrinkled her nose at the offer. “I loath tea.” Then she brightened upon seeing the replicator across the room. “But I wouldn’t mind some Risian chocolate.”

“The replicators are offline. As I’m sure you know, Intrepid sustained heavy damage during our last mission in the Gamma Quadrant. Extensive repairs are underway.”

“Hmmf.” Her mother groused. “You’ve served on this ship for three years, and you pick now to invite me; when it’s drained and empty.”

Shantok picked up the pot and refilled her cup with hot tea. “It’s hardly empty. There are no less than three repair teams aboard. However, none of them are scheduled for work on this deck tonight.”

Her mother folded her arms, examining the lounge with mock approval. “On the other hand, perhaps a gloomy room in the dead of night is the appropriate venue for our reunion----given how our last encounter went.”

Wisely, Shantok decided against opening that particular Pandora’s box.

Instead, she gestured to a leisure chair. When Sha’Ler was settled into it, Shantok took the seat across from her.

Sha’Ler appraised her with the same skittish gaze that Shantok had always found so unsettling as a child. “As you stated, I know of your last mission in the Gamma Quadrant.” Her mother brokered softly. As usual, her moods were unpredictable. For the moment, she was offering an olive branch. “And I know about the sacrifice you made; unleashing your telepathic gifts against an enemy that was determined to destroy your crewmates.” Sha’Ler’s chin dropped. “And I know better than anyone what it cost you.”

“I’m mending,” Shantok sipped her tea methodically as if to diminish the importance of the subject. “I took the only logical course available to me. The matter needs no further attention, mother.”

Sha’Ler looked down at hands that stirred continuously in her lap. They moved in rhythm to her emotions, which she had given up controlling years ago. “Then there is Captain Zorek, who was lost on that same mission. I can only imagine your grief.” She looked trepidatiously at her daughter. But whether she was afraid of an outburst or hoping for one was a matter for debate.

Shantok stiffened imperceptibly. “While my loss is great, the loss to Starfleet and the Federation is incalculable. Zorek was a great man and a revered officer.”

Sha’Ler nodded meekly. “He meant every bit as much to me, Shan’Tel.”

“Mother, I have not answered to the name ‘Shan’Tel’ since I was a youth, as you well know.”

Sha’Ler patted her hair bun distractedly. “Forgive me, it must have slipped my mind. After all, it’s unheard of for a Vulcan to forsake her birth name in favor of one she made up herself.”

“I have been Shantok for many years now.’”

“Well,” She harrumphed, “It hardly rolls off the tongue.”

“Never the less, I’m asking that you respect my choice.” Shantok set her cup on the table harder than she intended. The resulting “clack” echoed through the deserted lounge. Hot tea sloshed over the rim of her cup and puddled.

Pleased at the reaction, Sha’Ler pressed the subject. “Shan’Tel is the birth name I gave you,” She persisted. “At least be honest about why you’ve forsaken it.”


Shantok looked sideways at the older woman, unconsciously imitating her. “You mean…you don’t know?”

“Don’t know what?”

She leaned forward in her chair. “Shan…TOK,” She emphasized carefully.

At first Sha’Ler frowned with impatience. She opened her mouth to tell her presumptuous offspring that she knew perfectly well how the word was pronounced, thank you very much…

And then it registered.

Her hand fluttered to the base of her neck and her eyes widened. “I never saw it before.” Sha’Ler said in chocked wonder. Her gaze went off on another roaming expedition before coming back. “Tok. As in Bredon Tok.”

Her daughter lowered her head in confirmation.

“Bredon Tok,” Sha’Ler echoed with growing amazement. “Your biological father.”

“Yes,” Shantok confirmed coolly. “The Betazoid fugitive whom you harbored from Federation authorities. Back when you were a revered priestess.”

Sha’Ler smiled humorlessly. Then she put her head back and looked beseechingly at the ceiling. “Well, at least your judgmental assessments are being delivered with more calm this time.”

“I’m stating facts, mother…nothing more. And the fact is, you were once a disciple of Surak’s philosophy. And it’s true you gave up that life up because of your infatuation with a criminal. And while it’s also true you abandoned me----“

“I take back that last observation. I do believe I preferred the angry accusations over this.” Her mother noted philosophically. “Now you’re embalmed with icy contempt. Now you hit with surgical strikes.” She cocked an eyebrow, but it trembled. “Your Starfleet training is serving you well.”

Shantok looked openly surprised. “You’re mistaken, mother. I harbor no animosity towards you.”
 
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CONT...


Sha’Ler barked out a dry laugh. “Really?” She came to her feet in a swift movement. Her decorative robes flowed majestically around her with a purr of sliding fabric. Standing tall in the dance of candlelight, she looked regal, glaring down at her daughter with haughty disapproval. Time rolled backward, history parted its curtains for an instant and Shantok saw her mother, as she once was, a priestess of renowned dignity and influence.

“Then tell me, child…tell me that you’re not still angry that I left you behind. Tell me you feel nothing at being cast to the mercy of your weaponized mind. Convince me there’s no rage at having to carry my shame.” Sha’Ler’s voice reverberated with a righteous authenticity not heard in years. “Tell me this, if you can, through Surak’s dispassionate façade!”

Shantok rose to meet her. “I can say all of that and much more!” She felt the heat of passion threaten to consume her and she fought to smother the flames and redirect their energy. Weeks earlier, she had torn away her mental disciplines to tap into the full vein of her power. Since then, her control had teetered upon a precipice. Her mother could push her over the tipping point if she were careless enough to allow it. ”Yes, I was resentful once. And although it shames me, there was a time I even hated you and father for my telepathic gifts.”

Sha’Ler’s eyes widened at that. Her indignity faltered. “The Vulcan masters who tutored you in my absence----”

“In our culture, intolerance is often justified by tradition and questionable logic. Those who didn’t disapprove of me were wary of my abilities. They withdrew after making a token effort. Only Captain Zorek was sincere----only he would train me in spite of the danger I presented.”

“And you’re telling me no resentment burns within you still?”

Shantok brought her upswept eyebrows together, as if considering the question for the first time. “You would have me play the resentful daughter. But the teachings of Surak---which you were so quick to abandon---encourage us to accept the past. And to cultivate the present. That is why I joined father’s name to my own. There’s no logic in disavowing my heritage.”

Her mother looked like someone who wanted to believe a sales offer that was clearly too good to be true. “After all that you said to me last time…”

“I eventually came to a realization; you left Vulcan so that your own stigma wouldn’t compound my own. You sacrificed much by removing yourself from my life. And for that, I’m grateful.”

Sha’Ler was now stunned into silence. A historical first.

“Mother, I may not approve of the choices you made, but I don’t resent you for making them.”

Some of Sha’Ler’s petulant luster returned. “One of those ‘choices’ brought about your birth.”

“Which doesn’t negate the impropriety of the original action.”

“Aghh!” Her mother exclaimed, rolling her eyes.

Shantok touched her mother’s shoulder, gently turning her around to regain the other woman’s complete attention. “You wondered why I asked you here tonight. It’s because I wish to make a declaration.”

“And that would be?”

“You will always have my respect and my affection.”

Sha’Ler’s face went slack. “Now you’re being facetious.”

“If my sincerity is in doubt, then take my thoughts. I have nothing to hide. “

Her mother blinked rapidly, hoping the mirage wouldn’t vanish. “You’re saying… that you love me?”

Shantok looked offended. “There’s no need for overly emotional language. I believe I’ve made my thoughts clear.”

“Humph. Well, regardless of what language you’re using, you’ve just admitted to feeling a powerful emotion---nearly an act of blasphemy for a student of Surak. How do you reconcile that?”

“I don’t,” She admitted. “I know only that you’re my mother. And you will ever be a part of me.”

Sha’Ler looked upon her estranged daughter and barely resisted the impulse to hug her. But she made no effort to hide the naked emotion that now rendered her features.

They were interrupted by a loud thump followed by a muffled curse. Both women turned towards the closed doors of the lounge. Just beyond the circular window, a head bobbed into view before moving away.

Remembering that the doors were locked, Shantok excused herself and crossed the room. She stepped into the shadowy corridor in time see the back of an Andorian man receding away from her. One of his arms tapered into a bottle of some sort.

“Commander!” She called out.

Lt. Commander Adol stopped and turned around. “Sorry!” He yelled back. “I thought the crew had left!”

“I believe we’re the only members aboard.” She answered.

He walked over to her. He took a swig from his bottle. She noticed that his antennas were waiving in discord.

“I didn’t know you had company in there.”

She made a point of looking at the bottle of Andorian whiskey in his hand. “You’re inebriated. Is something troubling you?”

“First of all, I’m not en-abo-rated, all right? It takes more than this to put me under the gurney.” He glared at her long enough to make sure the misconception had been laid to rest. “Secondly, I am a little upset if you must know.”

“About what?”

“I lost my Shredder.”

“I beg your pardon?”

“My Kull Shredder. The combat knife I’ve had with me since the war? I can’t find it anywhere.” He sighed miserably. “I really loved that knife.”

She raised an eyebrow. “I doubt the feeling was reciprocated.”

“I wouldn’t expect you to understand. It was like an old friend. There’s a complicated story behind how I acquired it, you know.”

“As I recall, you stole it from a Nausican after nearly beating him to death in a bar fight.”

He squinted at her. “All right…maybe it’s not that complicated.”

“We spent a tumulus year in the Gamma Quadrant. Perhaps it was mislaid on an away mission.”

“Maybe,” He agreed doubtfully. “Anyway, this ship feels like a mausoleum when no one’s aboard. I was just about to head down to Deep Space Nine.”
 
CONT...


Shantok couldn’t resist. “Perhaps you can find a Nausican there and procure a replacement.”

“Well, look who’s evolved into a comedian.” He retorted. The Andorian security chief began to move past her. He gestured over her shoulder, using the neck of his bottle as a pointer. “I’d invite you along, but I know you have company---and I think you’ve neglected your guest long enough.”

“On the contrary, “ She said, “please come in.”

Adol looked stricken. “I wouldn’t make the best impression right now.” He protested. He didn’t know who the visitor was, but he figured Shantok wasn’t meeting with a crewmember, judging by her timbre from the other side of the door. Probably some important muckity muck from DS9---which meant Adol would have to practice etiquette, something he had no patience for at the moment.

He objected again, but the XO was already in motion, gliding back through the lounge entrance. He rode her heels reluctantly, trying to smooth away the web of wrinkles that covered his civilian shirt.

Before stepping into the room, he self-consciously held the bottle of whiskey behind his back like a child of the past, trying to conceal a bad report card from his father.

He blamed his initial confusion on the dark lighting, then on the half wall that obscured his vision. He circled the wood and glass divider with its frosted Federation insignia so he could see the lounge area in its entirety.

At that point his confusion came back and settled in.

A teapot with an abandoned cup sat on one end table, keeping a lit candle company. But other than that, he saw no one.

The room was completely empty.

Adol held up his whiskey bottle and gave it the evil eye. “I could have sworn I heard you talking to someone in here.”

Shantok picked up the candle and blew it out. “I was meditating. Since this deck is deserted, I decided to take advantage of the accommodations.”

“You were mediating out loud?”

“Vocalizing a mantra is common practice.”

Adol watched her pick up the PADD and give it an idol glance before turning it off. He couldn’t help noticing the header on it was stamped “personal”.

“Not bad news I hope?”

She dropped the PADD into an oversized pocket of her blouse. “Why would you think that?”

“No reason I suppose. Maybe I’ve just come to expect it now. As you said, we spent a tumulus year in the Gamma Quadrant.” He wound his way around the assortment of oversized leisure chairs and stood before the rectangular windows. Below them, subjectively speaking, lay Deep Space Nine. “Besides all that, our last mission didn’t exactly end well.”

“No,” She agreed quietly. “It didn’t.”

Adol looked with sudden distaste at his whiskey. It occurred to him that he could get better brew on DS9. He turned away from the window. “I don’t know about you, but I’m ready to disembark. I’ve had enough of this old Excelsior boat for one year.”

“May I?”

Incredulous, he looked at her outstretched hand. Then he handed over the whiskey.

Shantok drank deeply. “A smooth batch.” She assessed, while daintily giving her lips a finger pat. She handed the bottle back to him. “May I accompany you to the station?”

His antennas stood up in surprise. “I thought you’d want to enjoy the solitude for a bit longer.”

Oddly, she peered down into the emptiness of a nearby chair. “I’ve enjoyed a sufficiency.”

Together, they stepped out of the VIP lounge. The doors hissed shut behind them, leaving only darkness and the faint aroma of candle smoke.


The end.
 
Great story, Galen4! - Loved the interchange between Shantok and Sha'Ler. Throw in a drunk Andorian and you have a winner! :lol:
 
Thanks for commenting!
This challenge was good practice for making deadlines, which I've never done for a fan fic.
 
Child-parent relationships are sometime not easy, even between Vulcans. Or maybe especially between Vulcans, who wouldn't just talk about it to clear the air but would pretend there are no emotions or that they are irrelevant. Obviously, that is not true :)
 
Really enjoyed this one. I always like Vulcan stories and you really made good on the opportunity to further explore Shantok's character with this little tale. You are a master at writing engaging dialogue which is not easily done with Vulcans. Also a terrific twist at the end.

Awesome stuff.
 
Really enjoyed this one. I always like Vulcan stories and you really made good on the opportunity to further explore Shantok's character with this little tale. You are a master at writing engaging dialogue which is not easily done with Vulcans. Also a terrific twist at the end.

Awesome stuff.

Thanks, Cejay. I appreciate the generous compliment regarding Vulcan dialogue. I suppose anyone that can keep a reader interested in a scene between two Vulcans should take their winnings and leave the table happy. Glad to know it worked for some you.

Gul Re'jal, yes, it's safe to say Vulcan family emotions even surpass ours at times. Thanks for posting.
 
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