Hi Maurice, again kudos, especially for sticking with this worth while project. I'm one of those who actually waited for completion before viewing past the Teaser. I'd check in every couple of years and be surprised to find some source hinting that the project still had breath (such as this very BBS).
The scene with the yeoman in the conference room just prior to Act IV kicking in is subtly telegraphic of the ending, and exquisitely detailed. Very cool. It left me with a tinge of regret I couldn't quite place until later.
While the computer graphic displays are wonderfully explanatory, they seemed, quite naturally, a tad out of step with the simple switches and square-disc props that interfaced the Captain with the computer. This at first left me thinking that, well, of course it would seem simplistic, what with our current 21st century technology. Then SIRI came to mind.
Then, oh my, Roddenberry's initial computer interface paradigm came in a flash. In the 1960's, it simply wouldn't matter dramatically how simple or non-specific computer control might appear, because the computer can converse with language. Hearing Barrett's mechanized computer voice in my mind instantly begged a question.
Was voice interface considered for that scene? Even if not initially a decade ago, for whatever reason, did you consider asking Jimm about perhaps writing and doing some voice-overs? Having a few choice pieces of vocal interface, Jimm's during the screen close-ups, the computer's during those and any other shot, like perhaps a "Specify.." just before the Captain inserts the disk, etc., and human and computer snippets of inquiry and explanation to go along with the superb graphics, might have added some sweet icing to a very nice cake.
I've watched the scene a couple of times since my tiny revelation, and oh my, does it ever call out, to me anyway. And who am I?
I hope I haven't caused any kind of a "doh!" thump on your forehead with the palm of your hand here. And hey, if the idea has merit, an audio refit certainly isn't out of the realm of possibility. Apologies for any nagging thoughts the idea might cause.
You are yours deserve an Emmy. Ranks with the best TOS, right up there with City On The Edge Of Forever.
-Johnny
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