I'm pleased to contribute to a "Wink of an Eye" thread for my first post here (I'm not sure what took so long; I've only been a Star Trek fan for about 40 years!).
I love this episode. When I was a kid I'm pretty sure I liked it because of all of the fun shots of the crew "frozen" in place, the extensive use of the Enterprise sets - one of the reasons why I quite like S3, in fact - the fast pace and, of course, Deela, Queen of Scalos, who in my mind then (and now) was the ultimate Star Trek babe. And not just because she was gorgeous: she was also in charge, pretty clever, and resolute about her role in the preservation of her species. She seemed, more than just about any other of Kirk's romantic interests or conquests, to be an excellent match for him.
As an adult, my admiration of Kathie Browne (whoa) and the terrific job she did on this episode has only increased. If Deela had less nuance or was acted with less skill, the episode wouldn't have worked nearly as well. I've never counted but I suspect she has close to the most lines of any female romantic interest on TOS; she had to work or the episode wouldn't.
I've also discovered over time another reason I probably liked this one so much as a kid and still do: the dialogue absolutely crackles, with hardly a wasted line in the entire script. Of the many times the Enterprise was seized by aliens, this is easily the best. The methodical way the Scalosians take over the ship, shown mostly in minor lines in the dialogue (the hangar deck controls and the deflector controls being frozen, the Scalosians taking down the intercom system) is very precise and cool. I love Kirk's order to distribute phasers and communicators to all personnel and how Spock quickly and wordlessly hands him a phaser and communicator in the corridor moments later when they meet on the run on the way to environmental engineering. Deela's dialogue is very well written too and the interactions between her and Kirk are even better for it. Spock's brief report to Kirk after examining the area of the city near the beamdown point is also very interesting. It's just a terrific script in terms of believable and effective dialogue.
The ending is doubly tragic: the Scalosians appear to be destined to wither away without any help (unless Kirk managed to impregnate Deela, or Compton got the unnamed Subsidiary Scientist pregnant - - they appear to have had plenty of time), and I think Kirk sees a truly awesome, yet completely impossible relationship elude his grasp. I'm moved more by this pairing than by any other one Kirk ever had except for Edith Keeler.
So for me, this is always the one with the beautiful space gal, the cool takeover of the ship, the awesome premise of the hyperacceleration, and the fantastic dialogue. I give it a 10.
A few problems/questions:
-People have touched on it above, but shouldn't the bridge crew have noticed a sudden phaser stun beam? (As the phaser was operating at normal speed.) Just a quick effect or line of dialogue would have been cool.
-I've never cared much about the discrepancy in how fast the Scalosians move versus the Enterprise crew. I've seen it broken down quite logically and it just doesn't bother me. However, I've never been able to figure out an in-universe reason for Spock sending Scotty to the transporter room. The real-world explanation is so that you can have the transporter room scenes at the end without the issue of how the Scalosians get through the closed door; Scotty's there as a handy doorstop, and he also provides Kirk with someone to talk to after McCoy's antidote to the Scalosian water takes effect. (However, Scotty's line asking if Spock is coming too makes little sense, as Scotty should have no way of knowing that Spock also became hyperaccelerated.) But what basis does Spock have for sending Scotty to, of all place, the transporter room? Maybe he planned to use the transporter to lock on to the Scalosians and beam them forcibly off the ship? That would seem to violate TOS beaming protocols, but anyway. Maybe someone here has a good suggestion.
-For that matter, Spock's plan once he drinks the Scalosian water does not bear close scrutiny. He saunters down the corridor on his way to life support (lacking, I believe, a tricorder, which always struck me as odd) and only when he gets close does he whip out his phaser, just before Kirk runs up behind him and there's the great moment of wordless recognition and mutual appreciation (another nice script touch). First, shouldn't Spock have had the phaser out earlier? And what about deducing that it wouldn't work? Further, he didn't know anything about the Scalosians except their number as relayed by Kirk on the message, and he almost certainly deduced that they were the same five seen on the distress call, so he had an idea of what they looked like. He should also have known that they were armed since his and Kirk's phasers disappeared when they first encountered the suspended animation unit. Strolling down the hall in full view with a weapon he ought to have known wouldn't work just didn't seem like the best plan. Maybe he intended to "freeze" and "play decelerated" if he spotted a Scalosian?
-I just don't buy that the Enterprise simply leaves at the end. Starfleet/the UFP apparently helped the Kelvans, who murdered Yeoman Thompson in cold blood. Compton dies as a result of Rael's actions, but it's not premeditated. And Deela (if not Rael) was certainly less menacing than the Kelvans were. So why fly off and allow the Scalosians to die? I prefer to think that Starfleet returned later and worked something out, but it would have been nice to find a way to indicate that while still maintaining the poignancy of the "Goodbye, Deela" at the end.