Ok here's some selections from the book I'm working on about the Earth-Romulan War. I'm looking for any comments/criticisms(Except for the fact I do not count Enterprise as canon). Yes, it's true, I do not consider ENTERPRISE as part of the Star Trek Universe. My Earth-Romulan War story centers around an ancient Vulcan weapon that when used can bring more devistation than the largest fleet of starships. It features Captain Jonathan Stiles, captain of the S.S. Enterprise UEV-47(the ring ship seen on TMP).
These selections are from the first couple chapters of the book. Well here's the first one. This selection is the start of teh book. It takes place just after the events of the TOS episode Balance of Terror. I tried to write it in a way so that anyone not familiar with Star Trek or that episode would understand.
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Captain James Kirk strode down the corridor on his way to the briefing room. He had a lot on his mind. Only a few hours ago he had barely defeated a Romulan ship. In fact, it was the first Romulan ship seen by humans in over one hundred years. It had crossed the Neutral Zone into Federation space and attacked several Earth outposts. These outposts had been established over a century ago after the conclusion of the Earth-Romulan War.
Kirk's victory over the Romulans was, however, bitter-sweet. During the battle one of his crew had been killed, Lieutenant Robert Tomlinson. Losing crewmen was not a new experience for Kirk, yet he still felt each death as if it were his own son. But there was something even more painful about this one. Tomlinson’s wedding had been interrupted by the Romulan attack.
Kirk had just finished consoling Tomlinson’s ex-fiancee. But the world of starship captains had little room for mouring and now he had some more business to take care of. He had ordered his half-vulcan science officer, Commander Spock, and one of the ship’s navigators, Lieutenant Stiles, to wait for him in the briefing room...he needed an explanation. The doors to the briefing room swished open and Kirk entered. Both Spock and Lieutenant Stiles stood up as he entered. Captain Kirk looked at both of them and nodded, telling them to sit down. He sat down at the angular table and looked at them.
“Spock, Mr. Stiles,” Kirk said. He paused for a moment as he pondered on what he should say. “You know why I called you down here. I want an explanation.”
Both Mr. Spock and Stiles sat quietly. Kirk looked at Stiles.
“Mr. Stiles, this ship requires all officers to be at their peak performance all the time,” Kirk said.
“Yes, I know sir,” replied Lieutenant Stiles. Kirk cut him off before he could continue.
“Your behavior during this conflict was unacceptable,” Kirk continued boldly.
Stiles felt ashamed for what he had said to Spock but how could he help it? He could never forget the evil that the Romulans had done to his ancestors. And after learning earlier that Romulans looked exactly Vulcans he was sure that Mr. Spock could have been a Romulan spy. After all, all he wanted to do was protect his ship, and being defeated by Romulans would have been the worst possible defeat.
"Commander Spock is the First Officer of this ship and you will give him proper respect regardless of your personal prejudices," Kirk said. He searched for words that would appropriately reprimand the Lieutenant Stiles but also give him motivation to improve himself.
“It’s been over one hundred years since humans stopped judging people based on how they look, and I expect you to behave according to that heritage.”
"I know sir," Stiles said. He tried to think of something to say to make this uncomfortable situation end quicker.
“Mister Stiles, I understand that you have a personal interest in the Earth-Romulan War, but I need you to put that aside when you’re on duty.”
"Yes, sir, you're right, it was my ancestor’s war, not mine." Stiles said. He could see Kirk was thinking of what action he should take.
"Mister Stiles," Kirk began, but was cut off my Spock.
"Captain, I believe Lieutenant Stiles already feels sufficient regret for his actions earlier. I see no reason to pursue it any further."
Kirk was well aware of Spock's logical, unemotional Vulcan background. But he also was aware of his human half and even though Spock refused it, he knew that Spock was affected by Lieutenant Stiles' earlier accusations. But he still had the human instinct to try and make Spock feel better.
“Sir, I apologize for accusing Spock of being a Romulan spy,” Stiles began, “It was unprofessional of me. And even after that he saved my life when I was trapped in the phaser control room.”
“As I said earlier,” stated Spock matter-of-factly, “I did that to save a highly skilled navigator, nothing more.”
The mood of the room suddenly lightened as Kirk slightly chuckled. Even though Mr. Spock was unemotional he sometimes seemed to have an emotional motivation, like saving someone’s life. And Kirk thought that sometimes he did this just to irritate him. But Kirk knew that Spock would never admit to giving in to the emotional impulse of irritating somebody.
Realizing the lightness of the mood Stiles spoke up, “Actually Captain, while I was in sickbay I had Mr. Spock helped me with some research. I found two very interesting things.”
“And what are those,” Kirk asked.
Lieutenant Stiles was very excited about family history and was always excited about finding new things about his family’s past. While at Starfleet Academy his classmates sometimes teased him for spending so much time looking through old records. Be it fragmented records from the nineteen nineties, electronic flash tapes from the mid twenty-first century, or some other primitive period in earth’s history; it all fascinated him.
“Well Captain,” said Stiles excitedly, “one of my ancestors during the Earth-Romulan war was a friend of Mister Spock’s grandfather Solkar.”
“Spock your family seems to have an interesting relationship with humanity,” said Kirk.
“Yes, so it would seem,” Spock replied, so unemotionally that he almost sounded unenthusiastic.
Kirk knew that Spock struggles with his human heritage. But the idea that the descendants of two friends would meet after one hundred years, and even more parsecs of space travel, we amazing. And the fact that they came together during a conflict with the Romulans was even more incredible.
Stiles spoke again, “The second thing, is that the Stiles family has been involved in the Earth-Romulan War thousands of years before it even began.”
Kirk was puzzled. From what he knew of the Earth-Romulan War it had only lasted three years and ended in the year 2160, one year before the founding of the United Federation of Planets, and Starfleet.
“What do you mean thousands of years,” asked Kirk.
Spock sensed that Lieutenant Stile might have difficulty explaining the historical event accurately and spoke up,“Captain, I may be able to explain. According to my research there were a few ancient events that lead up to the Earth-Romulan Wars.”
Kirk leaned back in his chair preparing himself to listen to one of Spock’s overly long and detailed explanations.
Spock continued, “The events that lead to the war are buried in ancient myth. I had not believed many of them true until speaking with Mister Stiles. The first of these started two thousand years ago on Vulcan during the revolution led by Surak to bring all Vulcans to logic...
Surak felt the small red pebbles through his thin sandals as he walked the narrow path between the Trinam rainbow pools. The pools were so named for the beautiful rainbow of colors made by bacteria growing in the extremely hot water. Steam from the pools rose into the hot Vulcanian atmosphere. Surak inhaled deeply as he looked around the wide valley filled with various sized pools of boiling hot water. He looked toward the horizon and saw the conference center rising above the distant parkland.
These selections are from the first couple chapters of the book. Well here's the first one. This selection is the start of teh book. It takes place just after the events of the TOS episode Balance of Terror. I tried to write it in a way so that anyone not familiar with Star Trek or that episode would understand.
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Captain James Kirk strode down the corridor on his way to the briefing room. He had a lot on his mind. Only a few hours ago he had barely defeated a Romulan ship. In fact, it was the first Romulan ship seen by humans in over one hundred years. It had crossed the Neutral Zone into Federation space and attacked several Earth outposts. These outposts had been established over a century ago after the conclusion of the Earth-Romulan War.
Kirk's victory over the Romulans was, however, bitter-sweet. During the battle one of his crew had been killed, Lieutenant Robert Tomlinson. Losing crewmen was not a new experience for Kirk, yet he still felt each death as if it were his own son. But there was something even more painful about this one. Tomlinson’s wedding had been interrupted by the Romulan attack.
Kirk had just finished consoling Tomlinson’s ex-fiancee. But the world of starship captains had little room for mouring and now he had some more business to take care of. He had ordered his half-vulcan science officer, Commander Spock, and one of the ship’s navigators, Lieutenant Stiles, to wait for him in the briefing room...he needed an explanation. The doors to the briefing room swished open and Kirk entered. Both Spock and Lieutenant Stiles stood up as he entered. Captain Kirk looked at both of them and nodded, telling them to sit down. He sat down at the angular table and looked at them.
“Spock, Mr. Stiles,” Kirk said. He paused for a moment as he pondered on what he should say. “You know why I called you down here. I want an explanation.”
Both Mr. Spock and Stiles sat quietly. Kirk looked at Stiles.
“Mr. Stiles, this ship requires all officers to be at their peak performance all the time,” Kirk said.
“Yes, I know sir,” replied Lieutenant Stiles. Kirk cut him off before he could continue.
“Your behavior during this conflict was unacceptable,” Kirk continued boldly.
Stiles felt ashamed for what he had said to Spock but how could he help it? He could never forget the evil that the Romulans had done to his ancestors. And after learning earlier that Romulans looked exactly Vulcans he was sure that Mr. Spock could have been a Romulan spy. After all, all he wanted to do was protect his ship, and being defeated by Romulans would have been the worst possible defeat.
"Commander Spock is the First Officer of this ship and you will give him proper respect regardless of your personal prejudices," Kirk said. He searched for words that would appropriately reprimand the Lieutenant Stiles but also give him motivation to improve himself.
“It’s been over one hundred years since humans stopped judging people based on how they look, and I expect you to behave according to that heritage.”
"I know sir," Stiles said. He tried to think of something to say to make this uncomfortable situation end quicker.
“Mister Stiles, I understand that you have a personal interest in the Earth-Romulan War, but I need you to put that aside when you’re on duty.”
"Yes, sir, you're right, it was my ancestor’s war, not mine." Stiles said. He could see Kirk was thinking of what action he should take.
"Mister Stiles," Kirk began, but was cut off my Spock.
"Captain, I believe Lieutenant Stiles already feels sufficient regret for his actions earlier. I see no reason to pursue it any further."
Kirk was well aware of Spock's logical, unemotional Vulcan background. But he also was aware of his human half and even though Spock refused it, he knew that Spock was affected by Lieutenant Stiles' earlier accusations. But he still had the human instinct to try and make Spock feel better.
“Sir, I apologize for accusing Spock of being a Romulan spy,” Stiles began, “It was unprofessional of me. And even after that he saved my life when I was trapped in the phaser control room.”
“As I said earlier,” stated Spock matter-of-factly, “I did that to save a highly skilled navigator, nothing more.”
The mood of the room suddenly lightened as Kirk slightly chuckled. Even though Mr. Spock was unemotional he sometimes seemed to have an emotional motivation, like saving someone’s life. And Kirk thought that sometimes he did this just to irritate him. But Kirk knew that Spock would never admit to giving in to the emotional impulse of irritating somebody.
Realizing the lightness of the mood Stiles spoke up, “Actually Captain, while I was in sickbay I had Mr. Spock helped me with some research. I found two very interesting things.”
“And what are those,” Kirk asked.
Lieutenant Stiles was very excited about family history and was always excited about finding new things about his family’s past. While at Starfleet Academy his classmates sometimes teased him for spending so much time looking through old records. Be it fragmented records from the nineteen nineties, electronic flash tapes from the mid twenty-first century, or some other primitive period in earth’s history; it all fascinated him.
“Well Captain,” said Stiles excitedly, “one of my ancestors during the Earth-Romulan war was a friend of Mister Spock’s grandfather Solkar.”
“Spock your family seems to have an interesting relationship with humanity,” said Kirk.
“Yes, so it would seem,” Spock replied, so unemotionally that he almost sounded unenthusiastic.
Kirk knew that Spock struggles with his human heritage. But the idea that the descendants of two friends would meet after one hundred years, and even more parsecs of space travel, we amazing. And the fact that they came together during a conflict with the Romulans was even more incredible.
Stiles spoke again, “The second thing, is that the Stiles family has been involved in the Earth-Romulan War thousands of years before it even began.”
Kirk was puzzled. From what he knew of the Earth-Romulan War it had only lasted three years and ended in the year 2160, one year before the founding of the United Federation of Planets, and Starfleet.
“What do you mean thousands of years,” asked Kirk.
Spock sensed that Lieutenant Stile might have difficulty explaining the historical event accurately and spoke up,“Captain, I may be able to explain. According to my research there were a few ancient events that lead up to the Earth-Romulan Wars.”
Kirk leaned back in his chair preparing himself to listen to one of Spock’s overly long and detailed explanations.
Spock continued, “The events that lead to the war are buried in ancient myth. I had not believed many of them true until speaking with Mister Stiles. The first of these started two thousand years ago on Vulcan during the revolution led by Surak to bring all Vulcans to logic...
Surak felt the small red pebbles through his thin sandals as he walked the narrow path between the Trinam rainbow pools. The pools were so named for the beautiful rainbow of colors made by bacteria growing in the extremely hot water. Steam from the pools rose into the hot Vulcanian atmosphere. Surak inhaled deeply as he looked around the wide valley filled with various sized pools of boiling hot water. He looked toward the horizon and saw the conference center rising above the distant parkland.