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DS9 11x12 - "Vigil"

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Hi all

Time for episode 12.

Here's the links:

Deep Space Nine Season 10 - eps 1 to 22


11x01 - "Systems Under Repair" (Ad Astra, pdf, ebook)
As Ro settles into command, Prynn pleads for help with rescuing her father.

11x02 - "Structural Integrity Compromised" (Ad Astra, pdf, ebook)
While the Defiant responds to a distress call, Prynn tracks down answers.

11x03 - "Self Destruct Initiated" (Ad Astra, pdf, ebook)
A survivor of the Ascendant attack causes havoc in the Bajoran system.

11x04 - "Separation Manoeuvres Complete" (Ad Astra, pdf, ebook)
Things fall apart for Kira, Odo and the Dominion alliance.

11x05 - "The New Normal" (Ad Astra, pdf, ebook)
After Vaughn’s return to the station, new crew arrangements need to be made.

11x06 - "Two Steps Forward" (AdAstra, pdf, ebook)
Cardassia sends a new representative to the station, but not everyone welcomes him.

11x07 - "In Love and War" (AdAstra, pdf, ebook)
Vaughn assigns Prynn, Nog and Candlewood to a secret mission on Empok Nor.

11x08 - "Puppy Love" (AdAstra, pdf, ebook)
As Pif tries to find a job on the station, Quark and Ro babysit the puppies.

11x09 - "The Laughing Policeman" (AdAstra, pdf, ebook)
The station’s new security chief arrives, leaving Major Cenn with a dilemma.

11x10 - "Gut Feelings" (AdAstra, pdf, ebook)
When Raiq falls ill, the situation could lead to catastrophe for the crew.

11x11 - "The Crucible" (AdAstra, pdf, ebook)
When Vaughn takes Ro on a training voyage, things go from bad to worse.

11x12 - "Vigil" (AdAstra, pdf, ebook)
Sisko’s friend Prylar Eivos dies, leading to problems between him and Kasidy.



NOTE: This story dramatises events first described in the licensed Star Trek novel Rough Beasts of Empire, written by David R George III.


I also owe thanks to TrekBBS.com member DerangedNasat for his work on translating the Bajoran language, as seen in this thread, some of which I used in this story.


Enjoy!
 
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TEASER​



FADE IN:



1 EXT. SISKO’S HOUSE - DAY



It’s moving towards winter in Kendra province. Trees are shedding their leaves, the sky is grey and cloudy, and the air is damp with drizzling rain.



2 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE


A roaring natural fire burns in the fireplace. SISKO sits cross-legged on the living room floor, back against the sofa, playing the jacks and marbles game with REBECCA. They giggle and shout together as they play.

After a few moments of happy, carefree play, KASIDY emerges from the kitchen, hovers in the archway. She’s anxious but trying not to be. Sisko looks up at her, sees her mood.

SISKO
Don’t worry. He’ll be here soon.

KASIDY
He’s just not usually late. It’s
not like him.

SISKO
Things happen. He’s the docent in
charge of excavations at B’Hala.
It’s a big job. I’m sure he’ll be
here when he can.

KASIDY
(not reassured)
Yeah, I guess.​

Kasidy comes and sits on the couch, her hand resting on Sisko’s shoulder. He clasps his hand over hers to comfort her while continuing to play with Rebecca.

KASIDY
Are we sure it’s a good idea to
have Rebecca here this time?

SISKO
Why wouldn’t we?

KASIDY
We’ve always handed her over to
Jake and Rena before. Or sent her
round to the Fenliks’ house to
play with Joasha.

SISKO
(chuckle)
Why, are you worried we’ll start
beating each other with bat’leths
in front of her?

KASIDY
Just that I always wanted to keep
her away from all of that. Anyway,
mine’s in the shop being polished.​

Sisko turns, grips Kasidy’s hands more firmly, looks her in the eye. Rebecca continues to play on her own.

SISKO
Kasidy... we’re getting better.
We’ll be fine.​

Kasidy nods in agreement, if a little hesitantly.

There’s a KNOCK at the door.

SISKO
See? Told you he’d be here.​

Kasidy stands from the sofa, straightens her outfit, goes to the door.

She opens it, not to Prylar Eivos, but to a human woman of Malaysian descent, nevertheless wearing a Bajoran Militia uniform. Mid-to-late-20s. Her name is JASMINE TEY.

She’s received with surprise, and not a little alarm.

JASMINE
Captain Sisko, Captain Yates?

KASIDY
Yes, that’s us.

SISKO
(standing)
Is there a problem, Sergeant?

JASMINE
Ummm... may I come in? I’m afraid
I have bad news.

SISKO
Yes... yes, of course.​

Kasidy holds the door open. Jasmine steps tentatively into the room, looks around politely, disguising a security officer’s scan of the territory.

KASIDY
Rebecca, honey? Why don’t you
go play in your room for a while?

REBECCA
Okay, mommy. Love you!

KASIDY
Love you too, sweetheart.​

Rebecca picks up her jacks and marbles and takes herself off deeper into the house. Jasmine hovers awkwardly, but Sisko directs her to the sofa.

SISKO
Can I get you anything?

JASMINE
Thank you, no. I should introduce
myself – my name is Jasmine Tey.

KASIDY
So you are human – I thought so.
Just surprised that you’d be in a
Bajoran uniform.

JASMINE
I’m on First Minister Asarem’s
personal security detail. I signed
up shortly after Bajor joined
the Federation.

SISKO
We weren’t expecting a visit from
the First Minister’s staff. We were
rather expecting Prylar Eivos
from B’Hala.

JASMINE
Eivos Calan, yes. He’s actually
the reason I’m here. And since
it’s you, Captain, the First
Minister assigned me personally.

KASIDY
Sergeant... what’s wrong?

JASMINE
There’s been an incident. There
was a fire, and Prylar Eivos and
his wife... I’m afraid they’re
both dead.​

Off Sisko and Kasidy’s reactions to that…



FADE OUT:



END OF TEASER​
 
ACT ONE​



FADE IN:



3 EXT. BAJOR – EIVOS’S HOUSE



A different house, but this one is a burned out husk. Walls scorched and fallen, holes in the roof, smoking piles of incinerated rubbish. Bajoran deputies move around the area.

A few steps away, a TRANSPORTER deposits Sisko, Kasidy and Jasmine. Sisko and Kasidy look over the sight with dismay.

SISKO
You didn’t have to come, Kas.

KASIDY
You came.

SISKO
But I’ve seen things like this
before. You shouldn’t have to.

KASIDY
Calan and Audj are my friends
too, Ben. ...Were my friends.​

Sensitive to the situation, Jasmine leads them closer to the house. But before they enter, she stops them again.

JASMINE
Captains... you should prepare
yourselves. We haven’t been able
to clean up much of the mess yet.
In fact, the bodies are still inside.
I asked you here so that you could
provide a definitive identification,
but if you’d rather not...

SISKO
We’ll be fine. Please, carry on,
Sergeant.​

Jasmine opens the scorched and warped door, holds it for them, and they step inside.



4 INT. EIVOS’S HOUSE - LIVING ROOM


Inside, the house is a disaster zone. A Bajoran DEPUTY is busy cataloguing and scanning and inspecting. He gapes in awe at the sight of the Emissary. But at a subtle glare from Jasmine, he remembers himself and gets back to work.

Stepping carefully, Jasmine leads Sisko and Kasidy through the house.

SISKO
Was it deliberate?

JASMINE
We don’t know for sure yet. But
from all the available evidence
so far... No.

KASIDY
An accident? How can something
like that happen in this day and
age? Aren’t there safeties attached
to... well, everything?​

Sisko offers her a gentle hand on the shoulder in comfort.

JASMINE
Many Bajorans prefer to live
without all that technology. I
think it reminds them too much
of the Cardassians. They’d
rather keep things simple.

KASIDY
I understand that. But I didn’t
realise Calan was one of them.

SISKO
Did we really know him enough
to say that? He came to us
whenever we asked... but we
never bothered to come to him.

KASIDY
He would never have asked.​

They step through another doorway…



5 INT. EIVOS’S HOUSE - BEDROOM


Inside this room, a Bajoran Militia DOCTOR has his back to them at first. He turns to greet them, revealing two BODIES placed on a singed bed and draped in grey sheets. Everyone is quiet, respectful.

JASMINE
Doctor?

DOCTOR
Ah – Sergeant Tey. And Emissary.
It’s a pleasure to meet you, sir.
I only wish it were under better
circumstances.

SISKO
Likewise, Doctor. May I...?​

Sisko reverently approaches the dead bodies of his friends. He gently lifts the sheet from one. We don’t need to see what’s underneath, but we assume it’s not pleasant. Sisko moves to the second body, does the same. He steps away.

SISKO
Yes, it’s definitely them. Was
there anybody else?

JASMINE
A neighbour saw the flames and
alerted the local authorities.
Then she tried to help, and got
a bad case of smoke inhalation.
But other fatalities... no.

KASIDY
And you’re certain there was no
foul play? Doctor?

DOCTOR
I’d rather withhold any final
pronouncements until my autopsy
is complete. But for the moment
I agree with the Sergeant. This
was nothing but a tragic mistake.​

Sisko is obviously wounded – the Doctor tries to comfort.

DOCTOR
I understand he was your friend,
Emissary. If it helps, I’m quite
certain he’s with the Prophets.

KASIDY
(quiet mutter)
He served them all his life.
I should hope so.

JASMINE
I imagine his colleagues at the
B’Hala site will want to arrange
a memorial of some kind.

SISKO
I’d like to attend that.​

Jasmine nods, and leads them back out of the room.



6 EXT. BAJOR - SISKO’S HOUSE


Back to the cold and blustery day in Kendra province.



7 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE


Sisko and Kasidy re-enter the house, wrapped up from the cold, both downcast and muted.

JAKE and RENA have been babysitting Rebecca. They both stand. From the expressions on Sisko and Kasidy’s faces, it’s clear that the worst has been confirmed.

Jake steps to his father and hugs him tight. Rena likewise to Kasidy. Then they swap. The hugs break. Rena gestures that she’ll put the kettle on. Jake smiles his thanks.

As Sisko and Kasidy move deeper into the house and slump onto the sofa, Rebecca picks up the mood. She comes from where she had been drawing in a book and sits between them.

She doesn’t know why, but she knows her mummy and daddy are sad. So she reaches out to hug Kasidy too. Kasidy holds her tight, strokes her hair. Takes comfort from her daughter.

Sisko watches, and smiles sadly.



8 INT. BAJORAN SHRINE


A rustic temple in the Bajoran countryside. Stone walls, the usual Bajoran signifiers. This is a small place, local and intimate, and its trappings are suitably modest.

There is one large duranja lamp burning at the front of the shrine, and two simple wooden coffins on either side of it. Over each coffin’s head stretches a temporary grave arch.

A low-level PRYLAR, probably still the most senior cleric in the area, stands by the lamp, reciting the traditional prayers. A middling crowd chants quietly. Nothing grand, just friends and neighbours. Eivos wasn’t a big deal.

A creak of wood as the door at the far end of the temple opens, and Sisko tentatively steps through. He immediately knows he’s interrupting, and feels ashamed.

The nearest row of worshippers notice the newcomer and gape in astonishment – the Emissary! At our tiny little church! Whispers begin to spread through the small crowd, confusion and excitement. Even the prylar is distracted.

Sisko curses himself. He shouldn’t have been the centre of attention here. He slips sideways into a spare place and tries his best to blend into the crowd. The prylar calls attention back to himself, and begins his prayers again.



9 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE


This is a different day from earlier; Jake and Rena have gone. Kasidy now moves around the kitchen, doing ordinary domestic work. Simple things to keep herself occupied.

She dries pots and puts them away in the cupboard. She wipes down the surface of the replicator. She folds towels and hangs them over a rack. She’s alone in the house.

Eventually, Kasidy stops at the window and looks out to the back of the house. The enormous tree in their back yard is stripped bare of leaves, stark and jagged.

Rebecca runs around out there, wrapped up warm in a big coat and hat and mittens, quite happy entertaining herself.

Kasidy stands at the window, watching her baby girl play.



10 INT. BAJORAN SHRINE


The funeral continues. The prylar chants. The crowd have now got used to the fact that the Emissary is among them - mostly. Aside from a few nervous glances his way, the ceremony is continuing as normal.

At the back of the room, trying not to be noticed, Sisko joins in as best he can. He doesn’t know all the words. He feels bad about that. He should know them.

The prylar gently casts two handfuls of sand, one for each of the deceased, into the flames of the duranja lamp. The sand burns away quickly in colourful bursts of flame.



11 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE


Evening now. Kasidy and Rebecca sit at the dinner table, both eating. Rebecca’s plate is an adorable miniature version of the same thing Kasidy is having, and the little girl is tucking in heartily.

Kasidy is more hesitant, distracted. She looks towards the window at the front of the house. It’s getting dark. Ben should have been home by now. She knows he’s unlikely to be in any danger, but she doesn’t like him not being here.



12 INT. BAJORAN SHRINE


The funeral is over, and the congregants are slowly filing out of the temple. But almost every one of them wants to say a polite hello to Sisko on the way out.

He greets them all demurely, offers murmurs of condolence and encouragement that they are thrilled to receive. They won’t stop coming, and they all mean well, but he really doesn’t want the attention.

At last they have all gone, and Sisko is relieved. He turns towards the front of the shrine, where the prylar gathers his things, tidying away. Sisko approaches quietly.

The prylar greets him warmly. Sisko apologises for the disruption; the prylar will have none of it. He’s grateful that the Emissary should bless their little community.

Left alone at last, Sisko stands and gazes into the flames.



13 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE


Full night now. The lights inside are dimmed. Kasidy sits in the rocking chair by the fire, reading a book. Rebecca has long since gone to bed. The front door opens.

Tired and cold, Sisko slouches into the house. Kasidy looks up, and sees the exhausted look on Sisko’s face.

KASIDY
It’s late. I was starting to get
worried.

SISKO
I know, I’m sorry. I got caught
up talking to people. They all
wanted to talk to the Emissary.​

She gets up and gives him a peck on the cheek in welcome. He holds her firmly in response. Kasidy pulls away.

KASIDY
I’ll make you a hot drink. Get the
blood running again.

SISKO
Wait...
(Kasidy hesitates)
I think I’ve decided something.
I wanted to tell you.

KASIDY
What’s that?​

Sisko heads over to slump onto the couch; Kasidy follows and sits with him.

SISKO
It was... quiet. Too quiet.

KASIDY
The funeral?

SISKO
(nods)
I know it’s only a small temple,
but he deserved more than that.

KASIDY
He was a humble man, Ben. He
didn’t put on all the airs and
graces so many of them do.
It wasn’t his style. I thought
that was why we liked him.

SISKO
But he was doing good work. At
B’Hala, and with us. We needed
him. And now he’s gone...

KASIDY
Are you saying we can’t do this
without him?

SISKO
No, that’s not what I’m saying at
all. I’m saying I want to carry on
his work.

KASIDY
What do you mean?

SISKO
I want to go and work at B’Hala.​

Off Kasidy’s reaction to that…



FADE OUT:



END OF ACT ONE​
 
ACT TWO​



FADE IN:



14 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE



Kasidy is instinctively unhappy with Sisko’s declaration. But she is determined to hear him out and not react badly.

KASIDY
Work at B’Hala? Why would you want
to do that?

SISKO
It’s important work, Kas. They’re
exploring the ancient history of
Bajor. Doesn’t it fascinate you?

KASIDY
Not particularly.

SISKO
It’d be nice to get out of the
house for a change, do something
constructive with my time.

KASIDY
So... spending time with me and
Rebecca, that’s not constructive
for you.

SISKO
What? No! I mean, yes! Of course
it is. That’s not what I meant.

KASIDY
What do you mean, Ben?

SISKO
I haven’t had a job since I left
Deep Space Nine. I just want to do
something again. Going to B’Hala
would give me that. And it’s a way
I can honour Eivos’s memory.​

Kasidy tries to order her thoughts, make them calm.

KASIDY
I know you miss Starfleet –

SISKO
It’s not Starfleet I miss. Or at
least not Starfleet per se. I
miss being useful.​

Kasidy gets up from the sofa, gives herself some space.

KASIDY
Useful. Again, all that sounds
like to me, Ben, is that you don’t
think being with me and Rebecca
is useful.

SISKO
How could you think that?

KASIDY
Well, you’re talking about going
to B’Hala. About honouring Eivos’s
memory. Maybe it’s just me, but
all I can hear is more reasons for
you not to be here.

SISKO
This again? I’ve been here for you
as much as I can, Kasidy. I’ve
barely left this house for the
last two years.

KASIDY
Except for that time you left on
a mission you had no intention
of coming back from.

SISKO
I did come back.

KASIDY
And I should think myself lucky,
is that it? I should be happy to
be second best to all of Bajor.​

Getting indignant now, Sisko joins Kasidy in standing up.

SISKO
You’re my wife, Kasidy. The woman
I married. The mother of my child.
The one I do everything for.

KASIDY
Then why am I not enough? Why
do you have to take every chance
to run off to practically the other
side of the planet –

SISKO
Oh, don’t exaggerate. B’Hala is
hardly on the other side of the
planet. I walked it from here.

KASIDY
Ah, I see. It’s my fault. I threw
you out of the house after you
attacked Rena, forced you to go
all the way to B’Hala. Eivos gave
you a bed when I wouldn’t.

SISKO
Eivos is a good man, Kasidy. And
yes, he took me in when I had
nowhere else to go. He didn’t
ask questions, he didn’t make
demands. He just understood.

KASIDY
He understood that you called your
daughter-in-law a ‘thing’? That
you got so caught up in all your
Prophets and Ascendants crap that
your own son had to punch some
sense into you?

SISKO
They both accepted my apology.

KASIDY
I didn’t.

SISKO
Obviously.

KASIDY
You know what? Go. Go to B’Hala.
Run back to your precious Bajor,
Emissary. Maybe it’ll understand
you better than I can.

SISKO
Fine. I will. I’ll leave first thing
in the morning.

KASIDY
Why wait?
(points at sofa)
You might as well get used to
sleeping on rocks right now.​

Kasidy turns her back on him, stalks to the bedroom. She opens the door, enters, and SLAMS the door behind her.

Sisko stands alone in the middle of the darkened room, the lights of the fire flickering on his face.



15 EXT. SISKO’S HOUSE - NIGHT


Outside the house, the wind is still whipping up. The trees wave, drizzle dampens the whole area. The light from the house and the flickering fire through the windows are nowhere near enough to warm up the scene.



CROSS-FADE INTO:



16 EXT. BAJOR SURFACE – B’HALA



Establishing the archaeological dig at the ancient city...



17 INT. B’HALA CAVES


The warrens and excavated spaces of the buried city, last seen in 10x21 “In the Stars”. Bajoran iconography and ancient statues. Artificial lights are strung up, and monks and prylars work painstakingly by them to reveal yet more.

Sisko stands with a handful of other people, mostly Bajoran but perhaps one other race for colour.

A young female ranjen, SOOL, stands at the front, greeting them all with an official spiel.

SOOL
Alright, thank you for coming. The
B’Hala Restoration Project is a
vital initiative for both the past
and future of Bajor, and we are
grateful for the help of anyone
who wishes to offer it. Volunteers
such as yourselves are the life
blood of this project, and we
couldn’t do it without you. Now,
each of you will be paired with a
more experienced worker, who
will answer all your questions,
show you around the base,
explain our procedures and
teach you how to use the tools.
Some limited refreshments will
be made available later. Again,
thank you all, and may you
walk with the Prophets.​

The volunteers begin to split up, Sool introducing each of them in turn to their work buddy.

As usual, the other Bajorans offer admiring glances and giggling whispers at Sisko’s presence. He nods to them politely, but tries not to get involved.

Because Sisko has been shyly hanging back, he’s the last in line to meet his buddy. Sool bows her head.

SOOL
Emissary. We’re all honoured to
receive you.

SISKO
Please, just call me Benjamin.

SOOL
As you wish, Emissary.​

Turning away, she doesn’t see him grind his teeth.

SOOL
Luka? Could you come here, please?​

A man emerges from the depths of the caves, a bit dirty and covered in the dust of the excavation. It’s LUKA, the older Ohalavar man from 11x06 “Two Steps Forward.”

SOOL
Emissary, please meet Luka Tirem.
He’ll be your guide and your work
buddy here at B’Hala.
(tense)
Luka – be on your best behaviour.​

With a slightly obsequious bow to Sisko, and a warning glare to Luka, Sool leaves them alone. Luka wipes his hands on his pants and reaches out to shake Sisko’s hand.

LUKA
Captain Sisko. A pleasure to meet
you, sir.

SISKO
You didn’t call me Emissary.

LUKA
I’m with the Ohalavaru, Captain.
We don’t believe the Prophets
are gods... and we don’t believe
you’re the Emissary. No offence.

SISKO
(relaxes)
Absolutely no offence taken, Mister
Luka. In fact, it makes a nice change.

LUKA
Please, call me Tirem.

SISKO
Then don’t call me Captain, either.
Call me Benjamin.

LUKA
Happy to. Follow me, Benjamin.​

Sisko is already more relaxed in Luka’s company that he has been in days. The older Bajoran leads him further into the caves, past other pairs of volunteers and ranjens showing them the ropes. While they walk...

LUKA
I have to say, we were all a bit
surprised to see you come in with
the latest batch of volunteers.
I would have thought the famous
Captain Sisko of Starfleet had
bigger batos to bury.

SISKO
I was a good friend of Prylar Eivos.
I wanted to carry on the good work
he was doing here. My son worked
here for a few months while I was
away. I thought it was only right
I do the same.

LUKA
Oh... you knew Calan. I... I didn’t
know that.

SISKO
Sorry, I didn’t mean to just blurt
it out. Were you close?

LUKA
He was kind of my sponsor here.
He was a good man. I owed him
a lot. I’m sorry he’s gone.

SISKO
Aren’t you going to assure me
he’s with the Prophets?

LUKA
I told you, the Ohalavaru don’t
believe in the Prophets. Not as
gods, anyway. They’re obviously
there, and they’re important and
powerful. But why would you go
to powerful aliens when you die?

SISKO
I guess I’m not used to Bajorans
not worshipping the Prophets.

LUKA
With Kai Solis in the Apex Chair
now, the Ohalavaru are growing
all the time. There’s more and
more of us out there every day.
I’m guessing you don’t know a
lot about us, though.

SISKO
To be honest, Tirem, I’ve tried
to keep out of Bajor’s religious
problems. I’m afraid that any
position I take, any support I
might give, someone would
blow it out of all proportion just
because I’m the Emissary.

LUKA
Probably a wise precaution. I know
from personal experience just how
passionate Bajorans can be about
their beliefs. This dent in my skull
right here can tell you all about it.​

Luka taps his own head, seeming so casual about it. But Sisko is horrified to hear it. They reach a new sub-cave.

LUKA
Ah, here we are. Benjamin Sisko,
welcome to your new quarters.​



18 INT. B’HALA CAVES – BUNK ROOM


Sisko looks into the smaller cave, which is laid out with a dozen sleeping bags on the ground, rickety metal lockers on one wall, and a portable cooking range on the other.

SISKO
Okay. This is good. Back to basics.
I can appreciate that.​

Luka chuckles. He knows Sisko is lying. They enter the room and Luka begins pointing things out.

LUKA
This’ll be your bed roll. You can
store your tools and any personal
items in the lockers.

SISKO
Personal items? Like what?

LUKA
Like your secrets.

SISKO
Secrets? What secrets?​

Luka steps up close, a conspiratorial gleam in his eye. Sisko is little wary.

LUKA
I found something. In the caves.
They don’t believe me. They all
think I’m crazy. But I know what
it is. It’s a clue.

SISKO
A clue? To what?

LUKA
The location of Ohalu’s grave.​

Off Luka’s excitement, and Sisko’s guardedness...



FADE OUT:



END OF ACT TWO​
 
ACT THREE​



FADE IN:



19 INT. B’HALA CAVES – BUNK ROOM



Sisko reacts to Luka’s pronouncement. The man is excited, eyes gleaming, but wary of anyone over-hearing.

SISKO
His grave? Why would you even
think Ohalu is buried here?

LUKA
Where else? This is where Istani
Reyla found the book. This is
where the ten-thousand are buried.
The place is named after him!

SISKO
Really?

LUKA
B’Hala. Ohalu. You never put it
together?

SISKO
I guess not.

LUKA
Alu comes from his Eav’oq name.
But in ancient Bajoran, it also
means ‘the one place’. The only
place. And adding the B’ prefix
makes it sacred.
(to the sky)
B’Hava-el.
(the ground)
B’Jaara.
(grasps Sisko)
B’Hala. The only sacred place of
Ohalu. Where else would he be?

SISKO
Then you know he was an Eav’oq?
And you’re okay with that?

LUKA
I admit I wasn’t happy at first.
I felt like they were taking Ohalu
away from me. I lashed out. Got
into trouble. But with some time,
I realised... I don’t care what he
was. I only care who he was.
(beaming)
Now stop dawdling. We’ve got
work to do!​

The man is certainly passionate. It’s infectious. Sisko grins, and lets Luka show him to the tool lockers.



20 INT. B’HALA CAVES - TUNNELS


Hours later, deeper into the excavation site. Luka forges ahead through the tunnels at a pace, with Sisko trailing behind. There are electric lights periodically along the passages, but they are getting fewer and farther between.

LUKA
Come on. It’s this way.

SISKO
Wow. I guess I’m out of shape.
You’re really excited about this.

LUKA
Oh, Benjamin. I can’t even begin
to tell you how much better I feel
since I came here. And I promise
you will too.

SISKO
What makes you think I need to
feel better?

LUKA
You said you came here because
of Prylar Eivos. Why – is there
some other reason?

SISKO
No... No, just Eivos. So, what led
you to volunteer?

LUKA
Ah... well... strictly speaking, I’m
not a volunteer. I’m here for...
rehabilitation.

SISKO
What do you mean?

LUKA
I’d been in protests before. Even
a couple of fights. But this was
the first time I’d ever taken it
so far. Stupid stupid stupid...
(gathers self)
Luckily, the other guy decided not
to press charges. And the magistrate
accepted that I wasn’t quite in my
right mind. The brain damage, you
know? So I got off with community
service. Prylar Eivos took me in,
looked after me.

SISKO
Yeah. He does that.

LUKA
That’s why I was the last one to
be assigned to anybody. And why
they gave me to you – if I went
crazy again, you could take me.​

It was meant as a joke, but when Luka turns around to see Sisko’s reaction, Sisko isn’t smiling.

LUKA
Don’t worry, Benjamin. I’m not a
danger to anybody.
(carries on)
You know what? I think it’s fate
that brought me together with you.
You’re the one who rediscovered
B’Hala. And it was Kira Nerys the
Truthgiver, and your own wife,
Benjamin, who uncovered... this.​

Luka turns a corner, Sisko follows him, and they see…



21 INT. B’HALA CAVES - MAUSOLEUM


As briefly seen in 8x03 “Avatar, pt 3”. The burial place of the ten-thousand, foretold in Ohalu’s book. A giant underground hall with notches along the walls, carrying ancient crypts and mummified remains as far as the eye can see.

Sisko steps into this, gazes at it with genuine awe.

LUKA
Step carefully. It was perfectly
preserved for thousands of years.
Since they broke through a few
years ago, they’ve tried their
best to keep it that way. So don’t
touch anything.

SISKO
This is... I don’t have words. It’s
beautiful. And so... sad. Why did
you bring me here?

LUKA
Because this is where I found it.
Come with me. Carefully.​

Luka begins to pick his way carefully through the cavern, making sure not to touch anything. Sisko follows.

After a while, they reach somewhere near the middle of the giant room. There’s a statue, something like the weathered shapes at Yyn, but more complete. It could be a depiction of an Eav’oq – tall and thin, with one great smiling eye.

SISKO
So this is Ohalu.

LUKA
Blessed student of the Teacher
Prophets. Whose words brought
light, and wisdom, and peace.
Ohalu was the original Bajoran
religion, you know.

SISKO
I have a feeling the Vedeks would
argue with you on that.

LUKA
(sharp)
Then they’d be wrong.​

Sisko looks askance at him – that was a bit harsh. But Luka is already crouching down, brushing the dust away from something on the ground. He’s harder now, angrier.

LUKA
Who do you think brought knowledge
of the Prophets to Bajor?

SISKO
I thought that was the Orbs.

LUKA
(dismissing it)
The Orbs only started appearing
ten-thousand years ago. Ohalu
was here thirty-thousand years
ago. He was here first.

SISKO
Okay...

LUKA
But the others – they suppressed
us. Tried to pretend we never even
existed. Took the legend of B’Hala
for themselves. This is our place!
They don’t have the right!​

Sisko reaches out to touch Luka’s shoulder, comfort him. Luka spins to glare at him - Sisko flinches back a bit.

LUKA
(manic)
Look at this. Come on, look!​

Sisko crouches down by Luka, looks at what he’s been brushing. There are carvings around the base of the statue, runes in ancient Bajoran. Luka relaxes somewhat.

SISKO
Ancient Bajoran runes. I can read
these.

LUKA
See? Fate.

SISKO
You can’t read them? But you –

LUKA
I learned everything about Ohalu.
Every word, every interpretation.
But I can’t read ancient Bajoran
just like that.
(grin)
I knew you would, though. You’re
the Emissary.

SISKO
(wary)
You said you didn’t believe I was
the Emissary.

LUKA
Well, okay, yes, I did say that.
But... that’s missing some of the
nuances. I mean, obviously you are
the Emissary, being defined as the
man who contacted the Prophets.
But... if we don’t think of the
Prophets as gods, then obviously
the guy who talks to them isn’t a
god either. You’re just not that
important to us. Sorry, that was
probably a bit blunt.

SISKO
No, it’s okay. It's... humbling.

LUKA
Which is not to say that we don’t
respect you. I mean, your daughter
is the Avatar, the symbol of a new
age for Bajor, foretold by Ohalu
himself. We still follow you on
the news.

SISKO
That’s very flattering.

LUKA
Benjamin... you don’t seem happy.
Admittedly I don’t know you that
well... yet... but I’d kind of got the
impression you were getting more
comfortable with being the Emissary
of the Prophets.

SISKO
I was. Until I started to understand
better what it really meant. What
they expected me to do for them,
how they kept taking me away
from my friends and family...

LUKA
I’m sorry.

SISKO
That’s part of why I barely left
the house. To try to show Kasidy
I would never leave her...

LUKA
But also to escape all of the
Bajorans calling you Emissary.

SISKO
Yes... I could avoid it most of the
time when I lived on Deep Space
Nine. There I was just a Starfleet
captain. But here, on Bajor, there’s
no escape. People always wanting
to meet me, shake my hand, almost
genuflecting wherever I go.

LUKA
Well, if it’s any comfort to you, I
won’t genuflect. I’m not sure my
back could take it.

SISKO
(sad smile)
It’s selfish, I know. But I wish more
of your people felt that way.​

Luka turns back and starts brushing more dust away from the carvings, in a happier mood now. But Sisko is darker.

LUKA
Speaking of Deep Space Nine, I was
there recently.

SISKO
Really? Why?

LUKA
Well, you know I mentioned some
trouble with the law... that was
where it happened. It’s not anything
I’m proud of, but... oh, I might as
well just say it. I tried to kill someone.

SISKO
You did what?

LUKA
The Cardassian ambassador. I told
you, I wasn’t in my right mind. It was
the stupidest thing I’ve ever done –

SISKO
Did you kill Prylar Eivos?​

Luka turns to Sisko, astonished. Sisko’s face is like thunder, dark and deadly.

LUKA
What?

SISKO
He was my friend. Him and his wife.
Did you kill them both?

LUKA
Benjamin – no! I would never -​

Sisko pulls Luka roughly up by the shoulders, shoves him violently against the statue. Shakes him back and forth.

SISKO
Are you a murderer? Is that what
you are? Did you set their house
on fire? If you’re the one who -​

Luka SCREAMS, a terrified whimper-wail of utter fear. Sisko lets go in shock. Luka throws his arms up around his head, protecting himself, shrieking and cowering in terror. He crouches back down to the ground, as small as possible.

SISKO
Luka, I...​

But Luka only SCREAMS even louder.


LUKA’S POV


We look up, the mausoleum dark and ominous, closing in around us. Sisko looms over us, a sneer of absolute hatred on his face, a metal pipe in his hand. He raises the pipe, swings it down towards us, ready to pummel us...


BACK TO SCENE


Luka shrieks all over again, scampers to his feet and tries desperately to escape. Sisko reaches out to try to comfort him – Luka only screams all the louder. Sisko watches him flail, horrified. What has happened to the poor man?

Luka runs across the giant underground room, dashes into one of the crypt slots in its huge stone walls. He backs himself into a corner, curls up into a ball, arms wrapped around his knees, rocking himself back and forth, head BANGING against the stone wall hard enough to break skin.

LUKA
Please don’t hurt me please don’t
hurt me please don’t hurt me...​

Sisko approaches, slowly and gently, trying not to spook Luka any further. Luka is obviously a psychological wreck.

SISKO
Luka... I’m so sorry...​

Luka just whimpers again, keeps banging his head...

Sisko crouches down to his level, hands up to show there’s nothing in them. He shuffles forwards one slow step at a time, careful not to appear threatening.

LUKA
Please don’t hurt me please don’t
hurt me...

SISKO
I won’t hurt you. I promise I
won’t hurt you. I’m sorry.​

Sisko is finally able to reach Luka, who is practically catatonic with fear and panic. Sisko gently wraps his arms around the man, pulls him in close. He holds Luka against his chest, cradles him, rocks him back and forth.

SISKO
I’m sorry. I’m sorry. I’m sorry.
I’m sorry...​

Oh Sisko’s sad, upset, horrified face...



FADE OUT:



END OF ACT THREE​
 
ACT FOUR​



FADE IN:



22 INT. B’HALA CAVES - MAUSOLEUM



Sisko and Luka now sit side by side on the stone ground, Luka still curled up into a ball but no longer whimpering or rocking himself. Sisko is sad and pensive, talking to himself as much as to the silent and traumatised Luka.

SISKO
I always do this. Take it too far.
This is exactly what Kasidy was
talking about. Why I hurt Rena
and Jake. Why she threw me out
of the house. And she was right
to do it. I get so caught up...
(shakes head)
I take it too far.

LUKA
(quiet, small)
I know how that happens.​

Sisko turns to him, relieved that he’s talking again.

SISKO
Tirem... I’m so sorry. I never
meant to hurt you. I won’t hurt
you again. And I don’t believe
you hurt Calan and Audj.

LUKA
I didn’t. I didn’t. I wouldn’t.

SISKO
I believe you. Sergeant Tey said
it was a terrible accident, and I
have no reason not to trust her.

LUKA
He was a good man.

SISKO
And so are you. I’m sorry.​

Sniffling, Luka raises his head, gazes at the statue.

LUKA
I understand. It’s not always easy
living here, where we live. Among
all these people who don’t think
the way we do. Who always expect
something else from us.

SISKO
I can’t begin to know what you
went through –

LUKA
(turns to him)
Yes you can. You’re a good man
too, Benjamin. You don’t deserve
what’s happened to you either.

SISKO
(grateful, sad)
At least one person forgives me.​

Sisko and Luka sit with each other, inside the crypt...



23 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE


On Kasidy, as she sits at the dining table, padds in front of her. She’s doing paperwork for her shipping business.

The house is quiet around her, she’s alone. Then there’s a KNOCK at the door. Not really thinking much of it, Kasidy gets up to answer the door. It’s Jasmine Tey.

KASIDY
Oh – Sergeant Tey. Is there a problem?

JASMINE
No no, not a problem. May I come in?

KASIDY
Yes, of course. Can I get you anything?​

Kasidy holds the door open for Jasmine to enter.

JASMINE
You wouldn’t happen to have any
Earl Grey tea, would you?

KASIDY
As a matter of fact, my brother
sends me some from Cestus Three
twice a year. Come on through,
I’ll brew you up a cup.​

Grinning, Jasmine follows Kasidy through to the kitchen, where Kasidy starts rooting in cupboards.

JASMINE
That would be fantastic. I’d never
have thought, now that Bajor is in
the Federation, it would still be so
difficult to get human food and
drinks. I haven’t had a decent
cup of tea in years.

KASIDY
(chuckle)
Well I have to warn you, I’m no
chef. But I think I can manage to
boil some water without burning
the house down.​

Kasidy realises with horror what she just said.

KASIDY (cont)
Wow... that was...

JASMINE
It’s okay. Don’t worry about it.
That’s actually why I came – to
tell you that we’ve finished the
investigation.​

Kasidy finds the tea, starts preparing it.

KASIDY
And?

JASMINE
And it’s exactly what we thought.
There’s no evidence of any foul
play. Just an electrical fault in
the central heating. Probably
had it on high for the winter.​

Kasidy leans back against the counter, sighs sadly.

KASIDY
There’s nothing you can say to
that, is there? Just... fate, I guess.

JASMINE
The Bajorans would say it was the
will of the Prophets.

KASIDY
(scorn)
To take the life a man who served
them seventy years, and his wife,
just because it got cold? Not any
kind of god I’d want to follow.​

The tea is ready. Kasidy hands a mug to Jasmine, who wraps it in her hands, warming her fingers. They stand and chat.

KASIDY
So, Sergeant Jasmine Tey. How does
a human woman end up on Bajor
as part of First Minister Asarem’s
personal security squad?

JASMINE
Didn’t really plan it. I came to
Bajor just to visit and explore a
new culture. But it was soon after
the whole mess with those nasty
parasites. Asarem was looking to
beef up her security. Or at least
her advisers were. So I decided
to sign up.

KASIDY
Just like that?

JASMINE
I’d had all sorts of security and
combat training at home. I had
nothing tying me to Earth. And I
thought it would be a chance to
really dig deep, learn about
Bajorans from the inside. Plus,
I have a feeling I was a bit of a
status symbol to them. Proof that
they were really one of the gang
now. So they snapped me up.

KASIDY
And how do you like it? Living and
working with Bajorans, and so few
other humans around?​

Kasidy is kind of giving herself away here. Jasmine sees it, wonders how to address it. Is it even her business?

JASMINE
We’ve all had to make adjustments.
But then, that’s just a part of the
life. You’ve been here longer than
I have, from what I hear. You
haven’t... adjusted?

KASIDY
It’s funny. When I first set up
this house, I felt comfortable.
Beautiful world, perfect place to
build a home and raise a family.

JASMINE
And now?

KASIDY
I don’t know. Somewhere along the
line, I think I started resenting
them. And I don’t even know why.
They haven’t really done anything
wrong. Maybe it’s all in my head.

JASMINE
That doesn’t necessarily make it
wrong.​

Kasidy smiles at the unexpected support. Nobody’s really said that to her before.

JASMINE
I hope I’m not out of line here,
Mrs Sisko. Please stop me if I am.
But I did sense some tension
between you and your husband.

KASIDY
(quiet)
You’re not out of line. It’s a relief
to be able to talk to someone
about it. Someone who’s not going
to assure me that it’s all part of
the Prophets’ plan. It just feels
like... Bajor is coming between us.

JASMINE
Bajor? Not the Prophets?

KASIDY
Is there a difference? Prophets,
Bajor, Ascendants, Cardassians,
Eav’oq... it’s all the same.
(beat)
Is it my fault? Am I letting them
come between us? Eivos said it was
in our hands. And I’ve got nothing
to complain about, not really. Ben’s
right, I knew what I was getting into.

JASMINE
Kasidy... if you’re not happy, you
have every right to those feelings.
And you have every right to let
people know it.

KASIDY
Thank you, Jasmine. It’s good to
hear someone say that.​

Jasmine smiles back. They go back to drinking their tea.



24 INT. B’HALA CAVES - TUNNELS


On their feet again, Sisko and Luka now tread through a darkened tunnel. No electric lights hang here – they find their way by old-fashioned flame torches. Sisko takes the lead, now just as eager and determined as Luka was earlier.

Sisko stops, shines some light onto the paper in his hand.


PAPER


It shows pencil etchings of the ancient Bajoran symbols that were around the statue of Ohalu.


BACK TO SCENE


Sisko points out each scribbled icon in turn.

SISKO
Close... light... community...
lessons... spirit... earth...
beloved... and source.

LUKA
(wild guess)
The source of light... is close?

SISKO
But these were written right at
the base of the statue. Anyone
who could read the words could
see Ohalu standing there.

LUKA
So what would be the point of
telling them he was close?

SISKO
Exactly. Let’s keep walking.​

They get on the move again.

LUKA
This must be the deepest anyone’s
ever gone at B’Hala. Just think...
thirty-thousand years of Bajoran
history over our heads right now.

SISKO
Let’s just hope it stays there and
doesn’t decide to come down on
our heads.

LUKA
Earth... You said earth, right?

SISKO
Right.

LUKA
As in, what’s over our heads. What
we’re inside of right now.

SISKO
What are you getting at?

LUKA
Close to the earth. To the ground.

SISKO
But it’s all the ground.

LUKA
But it wasn’t. Thirty-thousand years
ago, this might have been open air.
(gestures up)
All of this is what’s built up over
the years on top of that.

SISKO
So ‘close to the earth’ would mean
we have to go even deeper.

LUKA
Where are we right now? How far
have we walked?​

Sisko stops, pulls out a tool – a complex compass device. He holds it, lets it steady itself, interprets the results.

SISKO
We’re almost immediately beneath
the mausoleum.

LUKA
Underneath the statue.

SISKO
Of course! Close, but in a downward
direction. Into the earth.

LUKA
Where the source of the light and
lessons lies beneath his beloved
spiritual community.

SISKO
We have to go deeper.​

Excited all over, Sisko strides further into the tunnels, his torch out before him, trying to find a way down.



25 MONTAGE


-- More hunting through tunnels.
-- A lava tunnel angling down through rock. Sisko goes ahead eagerly; Luka follows rather more hesitantly.
-- Sisko studying his compass device by fire light.
-- More general trudging.
-- Sisko helps Luka climb through a small gap in the rock.



26 INT. B’HALA CAVES


They reach the bottom of the tunnel, and there doesn’t seem to be anywhere else to go. Sisko holds out his compass, and looks around, frustrated.

SISKO
I can’t find a way to get any
deeper than this. It’s solid
bedrock underneath us. But
it has to be here! I can feel it!

LUKA
You know what I do in times
like this? I pray.

SISKO
All due respect, Luka, but I’m not
sure that’s going to work.

LUKA
It doesn’t matter if it works.
That’s not what praying’s for.​

Sisko looks at him confused. Luka just smiles, amused, then takes a deep breath, closes his eyes, stands there silent. Meanwhile, Sisko returns to looking around with his torch, inspecting the walls, checking his scribbled notes.

After a moment, Luka opens his eyes again, and smiles.

LUKA
“The Emissary shall search for the
source. And he will keep the guide
close, and together they will heed
the lessons, and the spirit of Ohalu
shall surround them both.”

SISKO
What?

LUKA
It’s right there in the book. All
those symbols, so only someone
who’d read the book could
understand them.
(looks around the cave)
Thirty-thousand years. There is no
grave, not anymore. How long ago
must the body have decayed away,
dissolved into dust?
(a revelation)
The spirit shall surround them.​

With amazement, Sisko gets it. The puzzle solved, they stand together by the flickering light of their torches and gaze at the walls of stone around them.



FADE OUT:



END OF ACT FOUR​
 
ACT FIVE​



FADE IN:



27 INT. B’HALA CAVES



The two flaming torches have been jammed into a crack in the ground by their bases, so that they stand up. Sisko and Luka sit on the ground nearby, almost like a campfire, sitting and pondering by the fire light.

LUKA
How many times have I read those
words? Back to front, over and over,
I know them by heart. I just assumed
they were metaphor. But they were
more literal than I could have ever
imagined.

SISKO
From what little I know of him,
Ohalu tended to keep the usual
flowery language to a minimum.

LUKA
And the guide... Obviously the
Emissary is you. But the guide...
(w/ wonder)
That’s me. Ohalu foresaw me.​

Luka gazes into the flames, overcome with amazement at this concept. Sisko is glad to see him happy.

LUKA
All of this is Ohalu. All of it. All
around us. Including me.
(beat)
Thank you, Benjamin. You’ve given
me something I could never have
dreamed of.

SISKO
I should be thanking you. You’ve
given me someone I feel like I can
talk to. That’s more than I’ve had
in a long time.

LUKA
I’m glad I could help, in whatever
small way.

SISKO
I’m just sorry it took Eivos’s death
to bring us together.​

Luka thinks a moment, then gets up to stand. He picks up a handful of sand from the ground, and gently casts the sand into the flames. The sand burns away in a quick flash.

LUKA
Eivos Calan, and Audj.​

Sisko smiles, touched. He gets up to stand, grabs a handful of sand, and throws it into the flames.

SISKO
Eivos Calan, and Audj.​

They take a moment to remember their mutual friend.

SISKO
So now, the question is... can we
find our way out of here?

LUKA
(smile)
I’m sure we can.​

Going off the flames of Sisko and Luka’s torches...



28 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE


...to the flames of the roaring fire in the Sisko household’s living room fireplace. It’s night outside, with a blustery wind audible. But inside it’s warm and secure.

Jasmine is sat cross-legged on the floor, playing jacks and marbles with Rebecca. The little girl is in her jim-jams. Kasidy sits in the rocking chair watching them play, happy and relaxed, laughing along with them.

After a while, the door opens, and Sisko re-enters. They all look up at him in some slight surprise.

Rebecca jumps up and runs to her father in glee.

REBECCA
Daddy daddy! She’s human! Like me!

SISKO
She certainly is, sweetheart.​

Jasmine gets up too and approaches Sisko with her hand out to shake.

JASMINE
Good to see you again, Captain.

SISKO
You too, sergeant. Is there a problem?

JASMINE
Oh no, not at all.

KASIDY
Jasmine came by to update us on
the investigation, and then we got
to talking. Didn’t realise how late
it had gotten.

SISKO
(to Rebecca)
Late enough that little girls ought
to be in bed.​

Rebecca pouts and grabs onto Sisko tight, trying to be the perfect daddy’s girl. He prises her away again.

KASIDY
I think that sounds like an excellent idea.

REBECCA
Oh, mommy...

KASIDY
Come on, young lady. No arguing.
Ben, would you...?​

Sisko nods his agreement warmly, hefts Rebecca up with a giggle, and carries her off towards the bedrooms. With them gone, Jasmine pulls herself together.

JASMINE
Right, I should be off.

KASIDY
Thanks for coming, Jasmine. Are
you sure you’ll be warm enough?
I can lend you a coat...

JASMINE
I’ll be fine. Us trained security
operatives are a hardy breed.​

Kasidy opens the door for Jasmine to go, but hesitates.

KASIDY
Really, Jasmine... thanks. For listening.

JASMINE
My pleasure.

KASIDY
Do you think we could... I don’t
know, meet up again some time?
Try and teach Bajor how to make
a good cup of tea?

JASMINE
I’d like that.​

Jasmine pulls Kasidy into a quick half-hug, then turns and leaves. Kasidy closes the door behind her.



29 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE - BEDROOM


Last seen in 10x20 “In the Stars”. Kasidy quietly opens the door to find Sisko already there, preparing himself and the room for bed. Kasidy enters and begins doing the same.

KASIDY
Rebecca in bed already?

SISKO
She was tireder than she let on.​

Pulling the curtains.

Folding down the bedspread.

Stripping off the day clothes.

Putting them in the laundry hamper.

KASIDY
She absolutely adores Jasmine. They
were playing half the day.

SISKO
Good. It’s nice for her to meet
other humans.​

Getting into bed clothes.

Brushing teeth.

Taking out hair pins and brushing it out.

KASIDY
I wasn’t sure I’d actually see you
tonight.

SISKO
Well, the accommodations weren’t
exactly luxurious. And it’s not so far
away. Just a moment by transporter.​

Moisturising face and hands. Rinsing out with mouthwash.

KASIDY
Do you want a hot drink or anything?
Replicator’s still warm.

SISKO
No, thanks... it’s been a long day,
and I’m tired. I just want to go
to sleep.​

So they do. They climb into bed.

KASIDY
So did you have a good time?

SISKO
Actually... yes. Met some good people.
Talked about Eivos a lot. It was nice.

KASIDY
Are you going to go back?

SISKO
Yes... yes, I think I am.​

Kasidy reaches up and clicks off the light over the bed. They both settle down into the covers, each facing outward.

SISKO
Night.

KASIDY
Night.​

On SISKO, as he stares out into the darkness on his own side of the bed.

On KASIDY, as she stares out into the darkness on her own side of the bed.

A TOP VIEW of them both, in bed, in the dark, backs turned to each other, a yawning chasm between them.



FADE OUT:



END OF SHOW​
 
Hi Martin

Seasons 8 and 9 are just adaptations of the existing novels. Season 8 is the parasites arc - Avatar to Unity. Season 9 is the WoDS9/MU arc - Unjoined to The Soul Key. That's why 10 picks up immediately after The Soul Key.

I was never really comfortable uploading those scripts openly for everyone, because that would effectively be giving away those authors' work for free, which is probably illegal. But if you've read those stories, then you already know what happens, aside from some minor tweaks and necessary editing for space.

On the other hand, if you've already bought and read the books, and you just want to see the adaptations, then I suppose that's fair enough. PM me and we can discuss it.

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lvsxy808

Unfortunately, it seems that because I'm a new member to this BBS, that I have to make a minimum of 50 posts before I can send/receive PMs.

I would like to read your scripts though: so what do you suggest?

Thanks

Martin O'Shea.
 
Okay, well as soon as you can, PM me. I don't think either of us want to put our personal emails right in the thread, but in PMs is fine. Don't worry, they're not going anywhere.

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If you're okay putting an address here, then yes, go for it. I only have seasons 8 and 9 as pdfs at the moment - I never got around to formatting them for ebook. I can do that but it would take me a bit longer to get through them all.

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If you can give me a day or two to set up a special email account, then .pdf files will be fine.

Thanks. I happen to be London-based as well.
 
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