• Welcome! The TrekBBS is the number one place to chat about Star Trek with like-minded fans.
    If you are not already a member then please register an account and join in the discussion!

DS9 11x10 - "Gut Feelings"

DS9Continuing

Rear Admiral
Rear Admiral
Hi all

Time for episode 10.

Here's the links:

11x01 "Systems Under Repair" - Ad Astra, pdf, ebook
11x02 "Structural Integrity Compromised" - Ad Astra, pdf, ebook
11x03 "Self Destruct Initiated" - Ad Astra, pdf, ebook
11x04 "Separation Manoeuvres Complete" - Ad Astra, pdf, ebook
11x05 "The New Normal" - Ad Astra, pdf, ebook
11x06 "Two Steps Forward" - AdAstra, pdf, ebook
11x07 "In Love and War" - AdAstra, pdf, ebook
11x08 "Puppy Love" - AdAstra, pdf, ebook
11x09 "The Laughing Policeman" - AdAstra, pdf, ebook
11x10 "Gut Feelings" - AdAstra, pdf, ebook


Enjoy!
 
TEASER​



FADE IN:



1 EXT. JANIR MONASTERY



Another lovely morning in the Janir valley, the bright sun glinting off the river.



2 INT. JANIR MONASTERY – CHAPEL ANTEROOM


Bajorans are emerging from the chapel, services over for today. KIRA is among them. As she emerges, she finds RAIQ waiting for her. She smiles warmly, and they begin to walk.

KIRA
Good morning.

RAIQ
What do you even do in there?

KIRA
We just pray. Vedek Yevir leads
the ceremony, and we pray.

RAIQ
He is not of your faith.

KIRA
No. But I'm starting to find that
doesn't really matter. Yes, he can
be a bit of a pompous ass at times,
but he can also be surprisingly...
compelling. Are you sure you don't
want to join me, one morning?

RAIQ
I do not. Prayer to the True is a
solitary pursuit.

KIRA
Not for us. We find strength in
the communal aspect of it.​

They continue to walk. Kira is quite encouraged that Raiq sought out her company, and she'll make the most of it.

KIRA
Come to think of it, I've never
seen you pray.

RAIQ
Of course you have.

KIRA
You mean when you were sitting
and staring into the flames?
Was that prayer?

RAIQ
Every action I take is a prayer
to the True. That is our way.

KIRA
So you don't need to set aside a
time to pray every day. For you
there's no difference.

RAIQ
To pray is to fight, to fight is to
pray. You disapprove?

KIRA
Actually, no. I mean, maybe not
the fighting part, but the idea
that everything I do, no matter
how small or insignificant, shows
my love for the Prophets... I
think that's a lovely idea.​

Raiq pauses, rests lightly against one of the stone walls for a moment. She seems tired, out of breath.

KIRA
Are you okay?

RAIQ
I am perfectly well. Leave me
be, woman.

KIRA
You came to find me.

RAIQ
Perhaps I should not have.

KIRA
You've been having more and more
of these episodes, ever since we
came to Janir. Are you sure you
don't want to see a doctor?

RAIQ
I said leave me be.​

Rallying her strength, Raiq pushes away from the wall and strides on down the passage. Kira follows. But Raiq is clearly in a bad mood, impatient and short-tempered.

KIRA
Raiq, if you're not well, I want
to help.

RAIQ
Touch me and you will burn.

KIRA
That threat's getting kinda old,
Raiq. Now tell me what's wrong.​

Kira reaches out to grab Raiq and stop her. Raiq spins on her, suddenly furious. The armour around her arms generates the FORCE FIELD that we saw in 11x03, pushing Kira back and knocking her to the floor.

When Kira tries to get up, Raiq PUSHES the force field, holding her down on the ground from a distance.

KIRA
Raiq... what are you doing?​

Raiq is now looking more and more agitated, less able to breathe properly or stand straight without wobbling. Her silver skin looks pale and sallow. She's scared, but covering it with anger and bravado. The force field is flickering.

KIRA
Alright, whatever this is, it's
obvious you came to me for help.
So let me help.

RAIQ
No. It is weakness...

KIRA
Yes, and I can help you with it.
But you have to let me up.​

The force field flickers again – Raiq is not strong enough to hold it. She feels a sudden TWINGE in her stomach, and her concentration is gone. The force field dissolves.

Kira scrambles to her feet, just as Raiq's knees crumble and she collapses to the ground. Kira rushes to her.

Raiq is on the stone ground, writhing in pain, her face full of confusion and fear. As she SCREAMS, Kira tries to comfort her, having no idea what's happening.

KIRA
Help! Somebody get help!​

On Raiq's pain and Kira's worry…



FADE OUT:



END OF TEASER​
 
ACT ONE​



FADE IN:



3 EXT. DEEP SPACE NINE - ESTABLISHING



The station, with the Defiant clearly on the docking ring.



4 INT. DS9 – MAIN OPS CENTRE


An ALERT beeps insistently on the central Ops table. RO touches the control, reads the results, frowns in worry. She slaps the comm panel.

RO
Captain, you'd better see this.​

A moment later, the office doors open and VAUGHN steps out, mug of tea in hand. Meanwhile, Major CENN has also stepped closer, alerted by Ro's urgent demeanour.

VAUGHN
What's going on, Commander?

RO
Just got an advance alert from a
Militia ship on its way from Bajor.
They say they have Kira on board
– and Raiq – and that they have
a medical emergency.

VAUGHN
What kind of emergency?

RO
Unspecified.

VAUGHN
Vaughn to Bashir.

BASHIR (comm)
Go ahead, Captain.

VAUGHN
Get yourself down to -​

He looks to Cenn for the answer; Cenn checks the panels.

CENN
Docking port nine.

VAUGHN
- to docking port nine, Doctor.
You've got a medical emergency
coming in -​

He now turns to Ro; she reads her own panels.

RO
E.T.A. seventeen minutes.

VAUGHN
- in seventeen minutes.

BASHIR (comm)
Who's the patient?

VAUGHN
Unknown at present. So pack
everything.

BASHIR (comm)
Understood. I'll see you there.​

Bashir signs off. Vaughn beckons Ro towards the turbolift, throwing over his shoulder as he goes:

VAUGHN
Major Cenn, you have Ops.

CENN
Yes, sir.

VAUGHN
Docking port nine.​

And the turbolift takes them away, Vaughn sharing a worried look with Ro.



5 INT. DS9 – DOCKING RING CORRIDOR


Quite a crowd has gathered at the docking port. Vaughn and Ro, BASHIR and nurse RICHTER, plus Lt Cmdr EVIK and a phalanx of security, whom he directs to take up positions.

The port door rolls open, and Kira emerges into the airlock from the docked ship. She's urgent, worried.

KIRA
Julian! Come on!​

At a nod from Vaughn, Bashir and Richter step into the airlock and follow Kira back into the ship. The others stay in the corridor.



6 INT. BAJORAN SHIP


Kira leads Bashir and Richter to a bench, where Raiq rests. She is clearly distressed - sweating, pale, weak. Bashir looks daunted as he sees who his patient is, but gets to work scanning with a tricorder. Raiq looks up in disdain.

RAIQ
Who are these?

KIRA
This is Doctor Bashir. He's going
to help you.

RAIQ
I told you I need no help.

KIRA
Yes you do. So stop fighting me
and let us help you.

BASHIR
I'm not even sure what I'm
looking at here.
(taps combadge)
Bashir to Ops, three to transport
directly to the Infirmary, please.

CENN (comm)
Stand by, Doctor.​

He reaches out to touch Raiq's shoulder, and then the three of them disappear in a transporter beam.

Kira takes a deep breath and steps out into the airlock.



7 INT. DS9 – DOCKING RING CORRIDOR


Vaughn and Ro look up as Kira returns, looking shaken.

VAUGHN
Well, what happened?

KIRA
Julian took her to the Infirmary.

VAUGHN
Raiq is the patient?

KIRA
Of course.​

Vaughn looks meaningfully to Evik – he nods understanding.

EVIK
Evik to security – set up a
perimeter at the Infirmary.
No civilians to enter for any
reason until further notice.

SECURITY (comm)
Understood, Commander.

KIRA
Who are you?

EVIK
(smile; shakes hands)
Sorry, Captain. I'm Lieutenant
Commander Evik Nath, new chief
of station security. It's a pleasure
to meet you.

KIRA
You too. But I'm not a captain
anymore.

EVIK
Nevertheless, it's an honour.

VAUGHN
If Raiq is sick, why bring her
here? Bajor has doctors.

KIRA
But none who have experience
with other life forms. Especially
not at the monastery. I could
think of one person who even
had a shot.

VAUGHN
I'm sure Doctor Bashir is very
gratified by your faith in him. I'd
still rather have had some notice.
You recall what happened the
last time she was here.

KIRA
That was Axno, not Raiq.​

Vaughn grunts his lack of reassurance, and turns to stomp unhappily down the corridor. Kira and Ro follow.

EVIK
Ensign – stay and guard the ship.​

The ensign nods and takes up position. Then Evik follows.

Kira throws Ro a look - "What the hell's up his ass?"

Ro looks back – "I know... sorry."

Ahead of them, Vaughn grits his teeth, tense and angry.



8 INT. DS9 – INFIRMARY


Raiq lies on a bio-bed, flinching at every move Bashir makes. He reaches to a sensor on the bed – she throws him a wary look. Her eyes dart at every beep and burble.

BASHIR
Kristen, get a full body scan
going, I need to know what
we're dealing with.

RICHTER
Aye, Doctor.​

Bashir grabs a tricorder, holds it out towards Raiq. Quick as a whip she GRABS his wrist, stops him.

RAIQ
What are you doing to me?

BASHIR
I'm trying to help you. These
devices will take scans of your
body, so that I can figure out
what's wrong with you.

RAIQ
No. Stay away.​

Worried, Bashir struggles with his wrist in her grip. But she won't let go.


RAIQ's ARM


The armour around her arm begins to GLOW as it heats up.



BASHIR


grimaces as Raiq's hand begins to BURN his skin. He tries again to yank away – she won't let go.

BASHIR
Raiq, you're hurting me.

RAIQ
And I will continue, unless you
leave me be.​

The burn is really starting to hurt now. Bashir grits his teeth against it. Richter stands by, not sure what to do.

Finally, Raiq opens her hand and pushes Bashir away with a force field, THROWing him back until he CRASHes into some medical machinery with a clatter.

RICHTER
Doctor!​

Richter rushes to check on him. Bashir stares at Raiq in confusion and determination. Raiq is surrounded by a force field, flickering and wavering but enough to keep him and anyone else away. She breathes hard, sweating with effort.

Bashir rights himself, but makes sure to stay back.

BASHIR
Raiq, please... we won't hurt you.
But it's obvious you're not well.
That's why Kira brought you to
us – so that we could help you.

RAIQ
I need no help!

BASHIR
I'm sorry, but yes, you do. I may
not be familiar with your species,
but nobody sweats like this and
has this much trouble breathing
when they're perfectly healthy.
Please, let us help you.​

Raiq doesn't answer. It's obvious she's scared, covering it with anger. Bashir steps closer, his hands up in peace.

BASHIR
Do you trust Kira?
(no answer)
I trust her. I worked with her for
years. We trust each other. If you
trust her, and she trusts me, then
you can trust me too. I promise I
won't hurt you. But I need you to
let me in.​

Raiq still isn't sure what to do. But then the TWINGE comes again, and she crumples in pain. The force field dissolves.

Bashir and Richter rush back to her side, tricorders out, buttons pressed. Raiq is too weak to protest anymore.

RICHTER
Can't we at least give her an
analgesic?

BASHIR
Not until I understand her body
chemistry better.​

Richter reaches out to try to touch Raiq, move some of her clothing aside, but she pulls back in worry.

RICHTER
She's on fire.

BASHIR
Yeah, I got that, thanks.

RICHTER
I mean it, Doctor. She's burning
up. Can't you feel it? It's radiating
off of her.

BASHIR
Of course I feel it. I'm just
not sure what to do about it.
Where's that full body scan?​

Richter trots over to a larger display, which shows full body scan readings. She looks it over.

RICHTER
Doctor... I don't even understand
what I'm looking at here.​

Bashir goes to join her, gazes over the readings too.

RICHTER
What's this, all over her skin? Is
that supposed to be there?

BASHIR
I have no idea. To either.​

Bashir makes a decision, and goes over to the far wall where he works a panel.

RICHTER
What are you doing?

BASHIR
Lowering the room temperature. We
need to cool her down, and this is
all I dare do until I know more.​

The doors open, and we can see security in position out on the Promenade. Kira, Ro, Vaughn and Evik enter.

Ro hugs herself against the sudden cold. Evik takes up a position where he can clearly see Raiq, his hand ready to reach for a hip-mounted phaser at any moment. Kira rushes to Raiq's side. Vaughn goes straight to Bashir.

VAUGHN
Report, Doctor.

BASHIR
I've only had a moment to examine
her, sir. But I can tell you this
much - she's burning up from
the inside out.

VAUGHN
What are you doing about it?

BASHIR
I don't know what to do. I'm not
familiar with this species' biology.
I've never even seen an Ascendant
in the flesh before. But if I don't
figure it out soon... she's going
to die.​

Vaughn remains stern, giving nothing away. But from her position at Raiq's side, Kira looks back in worry…



FADE OUT:



END OF ACT ONE​
 
ACT TWO​



FADE IN:



9 INT. DS9 – INFIRMARY



Where we left it – Bashir has given Vaughn the bad news.

VAUGHN
"Burning up?" Is that literal,
Doctor? Because I assure you
I'm in no mood for poetry.

BASHIR
Her body temperature is out of
control. Or at least I assume it
is. I have no baseline readings
for this species, but whatever's
happening to her can't possibly
be healthy.

VAUGHN
Is she going to explode in a
ball of flames, like Axno?

BASHIR
I honestly can't say, sir.​

Vaughn is not happy with that answer. But what can he do?

VAUGHN
Make every effort to ensure she
doesn’t, Doctor. Evik?

EVIK
Aye, sir.

VAUGHN
Evacuate the Promenade. I want
all civilians in the habitat ring
within fifteen minutes.​

Evik goes without another word. On his way out, he gestures for SEVAK to take his place inside the Infirmary. The Vulcan security non-com does so.

As Bashir goes back to Raiq, Ro takes Vaughn aside.

RO
(sotto)
Sir, are you sure you're not
over-reacting?

VAUGHN
To what? To the presence on this
station of one of the people who
swore an oath on their gods to
kill every Bajoran in existence?
No, I don't think I am.​

With a last stern look at Bashir, Kira and Raiq, Vaughn turns and leaves the Infirmary.

With a sigh of uncertainty, Ro follows him out.



10 INT. DS9 – PROMENADE (CONTINUOUS)


Ro emerges to find the Promenade in chaos. ANNOUNCEMENTS sound over the comm system, asking everyone to return to their homes. Security officers are gathering people up, shooing them along, explaining the situation.

As soon as he spots Ro, QUARK makes his way through the confusion directly for her.

QUARK
Laren! What's going on?

RO
We're evacuating the Promenade,
Quark. Just as a precaution.

QUARK
(peeks over
her shoulder)
Is it the Infirmary? Who've you
got in there?

RO
None of your business.
(before he
can protest)
Everyone, Quark. That includes
you, your staff and customers.

QUARK
But –

RO
Please don't make an issue of it,
Quark. Just do what you're told
for once. It's for your own good.​

She moves off before he can argue any further. He watches her go, more worried than angry. A last glance towards the Infirmary, and he turns back to his bar.



11 INT. DS9 – INFIRMARY


Raiq reclines on the bio-bed, comforted by the fact that Kira is beside her. Bashir approaches quietly...

BASHIR
Nerys... Can you tell me what
happened? What do you know?​

Kira slowly gets up from beside the bed and goes to Bashir across the room.

KIRA
She started feeling ill a few
weeks ago, just after we moved
to the monastery in Janir.

RAIQ
No.​

They turn and see Raiq struggling to sit upright.

RAIQ
I will speak for myself, woman.

BASHIR
Then please do. Because I want to
help you, but right now I have no
idea how.

RAIQ
It began almost as soon as I was
taken to Bajor. It has only grown
worse over time.

KIRA
Why didn't you tell me?

RAIQ
Tell you? The woman who killed all
my brothers and sisters and left
me alone in the galaxy?

KIRA
I'm trying to help you.

RAIQ
I think you did this to me. It has
only happened while I have been
in your care. I think this is your
way of finishing the task you
began, and destroying the
last of the Ascendants.

KIRA
You think I've been poisoning you?
I saved you.

RAIQ
And you have regretted it ever since.
Now you take your final revenge.

BASHIR
Raiq, I assure you, that's not how
we work. Please, just tell me
everything. How did you burn my
wrist like that, for starters? And
that force field you made. How
did you do that?

RAIQ
The armour, of course.

BASHIR
Armour? Is that what's all over
your skin?

RAIQ
(to Kira)
I thought you said he was wise.

KIRA
(to Bashir)
From what I can tell, the armour
is a kind of organic technology.
It grows on their bodies almost
from birth, bonds with them.

BASHIR
And that's what generates the
force fields and the flames?

KIRA
Yes. But it's been getting weaker.
She tried pushing me down earlier,
but she couldn't hold it.

BASHIR
So if it's always been there, it's
probably not what's causing this.
Raiq, have you ever heard of any
other Ascendant becoming ill like this?

RAIQ

Ascendants are the chosen ones of
the True. We do not suffer sickness
like the heathen.

KIRA
Weren't you sick when you met
Opaka? When you crash-landed
on the Ennis moon? She said you
were feverish and delusional.

RAIQ
That was injury, idiot woman. I
had been attacked. If my vessel
had not also been wounded, I
would have healed in hours.

BASHIR
And nobody's attacked you now.
So it's not that either.

RAIQ
Then poison – as I said.

KIRA
Raiq, if I wanted to kill you,
you'd be dead already. So quit
blaming me. I'm tired of it.

BASHIR
Nerys...​

He guides her away, out of Raiq's earshot.

BASHIR
I need more information. Otherwise
the best I'm going to be able to do
here is palliative. Is there anything
else you can think of that might help?

KIRA
(breathe, think)
She talks about her vessel a lot.
The ship she used to live in.

BASHIR
What about it?

KIRA
She said they bond with it from
birth, like the armour. It takes care
of them. She called it her cradle.

BASHIR
But her ship was destroyed, right?

KIRA
(nods)
Iliana took it into the wormhole.

BASHIR
(frustrated)
So that's no help either.​

Bashir ponders to himself for a moment, then calls out.

BASHIR
Kristen?​

Richter appears.

RICHTER
Yes, Doctor?

BASHIR
Call Aylam down here. And Etana
too. I advise you to keep the room
temperature as low as you can. If
she keeps getting worse, we might
have to go as far as an ice bath.

RICHTER
Understood.

BASHIR
Nerys, you stay with her. And
please... try not to fight with
her. Try to be comforting.​

They both smirk, knowing that's not Kira's strong suit.

KIRA
Where are you going?

BASHIR
I have to speak to the captain.​

And Bashir turns and leaves the Infirmary.



12 INT. DS9 – CAPTAIN'S OFFICE


On Vaughn, sat at his desk, distinctly displeased...

VAUGHN
I beg your pardon?​

Bashir stands before the desk, formal.

BASHIR
I said, I need Axno.

VAUGHN
Axno is dead, Doctor.

BASHIR
Her remains, then.

VAUGHN
What makes you think I have any
to give you?

BASHIR
I'm not a fool, captain. Axno may
have immolated herself, but there
would still be remains. Ashes,
something. And given the tension
you've displayed any time anyone
even mentions the Ascendants, I
don't think you would have just
thrown those away. I'm willing to
bet you have them stored some
where, possibly on board the
Defiant where you can be surer
of their security.

VAUGHN
Even if that were true, Doctor, why
do you imagine I would hand them
over to you just because you asked?

BASHIR
Because I need them to save Raiq.

VAUGHN
Now you really are talking nonsense.
What use would ashes be?

BASHIR
I don't know anything about the
Ascendants, not from a medical
view. I can't figure out what's
wrong with Raiq if I don't know
what right is supposed to look like.
Even burned ashes would contain
DNA traces. Assuming Axno was a
normal, healthy Ascendant woman
before her death, those traces
would help me establish a base
line to work from.

VAUGHN
No.

BASHIR
I beg your pardon, sir?

VAUGHN
The answer is no, Doctor.

BASHIR
So you admit the remains exist.

VAUGHN
Alright, yes. Congratulations,
Doctor, you've solved my little
mystery. But I'm still not going
to let those ashes out of their
containment. Find another way.

BASHIR
If I could think of another way,
Captain, I'd be doing it right now.
I need those ashes to save a
woman's life.

VAUGHN
An enemy woman.

BASHIR
Does that matter? Since when do
we distinguish between friends
and foes when it comes to saving
lives? Have you forgotten what
this blue collar means?

VAUGHN
(sharp, deadly)
You watch your tone with me,
Doctor.

BASHIR
I have authority in all medical
matters, Captain, even over you.
So unless you want me to record
in my log that you blocked my
attempts to help my patient – a
patient I could have saved if not
for your interference – then I want
those remains, and I want them now.

VAUGHN
Damn it, Doctor, this is not one of
your moral crusades! This is a
security issue. What do you think
would happen if Raiq found out
we kept the burned ashes of her
"sister in the True?"

BASHIR
Raiq never has to know. I can do
my work in private.

VAUGHN
Doctor –

BASHIR
Do you want me to beg? I've tried
logic, I've tried anger. Is that what
you want? Fine. Please, Captain...
let me help her.​

Ending on Vaughn's tense face as he considers what to do…



FADE OUT:



END OF ACT TWO​
 
ACT THREE​



FADE IN:



13 EXT. DEFIANT



Still docked at the station, but we focus on the ship...



14 INT. DEFIANT – VAULT ROOM


A room we have never seen before, but which we have no reason to believe hasn't always been there. It is deep inside the guts of the ship, no windows, lined with lockers.

Vaughn stands watching as BOWERS unlocks one sub-vault with a complex electronic doohickey. Meanwhile, CANDLEWOOD looks around the room in confusion.

CANDLEWOOD
I've worked on this ship for three
years, give or take. I even lived
on it for three months. How did
I never know this room existed?

VAUGHN
It didn't exist until last year. I
repurposed it from a munitions
storage locker. Mister Bowers,
do you have it?

BOWERS
Getting it now, sir.​

Bowers' device beeps, and the vault unlocks. He opens it, reaches in, brings out an innocuous-looking box. He passes it to Candlewood. John takes the box over to a console, places it down gently, and then works the panels.

CANDLEWOOD
Candlewood to Bashir. Ready.

BASHIR (comm)
At your discretion, John.​

Candlewood hits a control, and the box disappears in a small TRANSPORTER beam.



15 INT. DS9 – INFIRMARY LAB


A private lab away from the main infirmary. Bashir and Richter watch as the TRANSPORTER deposits the box onto his examination area. Gingerly he opens the box, revealing the even smaller box inside that contains Axno's ashes.

BASHIR
Alright. Let's get this figured out fast.
Raiq can't have much time left.​

With a nod of determination to Richter, they begin to work.



16 INT. DEFIANT – VAULT ROOM


Bowers closes the locker again, and the three turn to leave the room. But before they go...

CANDLEWOOD
Sir, permission to assist Doctor
Bashir.

VAUGHN
Why?

CANDLEWOOD
I studied Axno's vessel. Bashir
might need that data.

VAUGHN
That was a ship, not a body.

CANDLEWOOD
An organic technology ship, sir.
Which we know responds directly
to the pilot. They're connected.

VAUGHN
But Raiq doesn't know we have
the ship. She can't know.

CANDLEWOOD
Hence why I said Bashir, sir.

VAUGHN
Bashir doesn't know either.

CANDLEWOOD
Then with respect, sir, in the
current circumstances... don't
you think he should?​

This is quite bold coming from the juniorest of officers. Vaughn turns to Bowers, whose blank look gives him nothing. Damn it, he knows they're right, as much as he hates it.

VAUGHN
Report to the Infirmary, Mister.
But you will restrict yourself to
sharing information with purely
medical applications, understood?

CANDLEWOOD
Aye, sir. Thank you.​

Candlewood eagerly strides ahead of them out of the room.



17 INT. DS9 – INFIRMARY LAB


On Bashir, very much unhappy, as Candlewood has just told him the secret...

BASHIR
He what?! Damn that man. Who the
hell does he think he is, keeping
these secrets from me?

CANDLEWOOD
The captain considered it a
military matter. Need to know.
And you didn't need to know.

RICHTER
Well, we know now. That's what's
important. Right, Doctor?

BASHIR
Yes, yes, of course. Thank you,
Lieutenant. Let's just get on
with it.​

Bashir tamps down any further ire - he has a job to do. Candlewood and Richter assist.



18 INT. DS9 – INFIRMARY


Raiq is on the bio-bed, wracked with spasms and sweats. Kira sits by her side while ETANA passes a tricorder over Raiq's body. AYLAM works across the room at a panel, and Sevak stands within visual range, armed at the ready.

Everyone but Raiq is wearing heavier coats against the cold air in the room. Etana works her tricorder with gloved fingers. Breath condenses in the frigid air as they talk.

ETANA
The cold air is cooling her down
a little. But not enough.​

Etana returns to Aylam. As a particularly strong wince of pain hits Raiq, Kira tries her best to comfort her.

KIRA
Bashir'll figure something out.

RAIQ
You watch and smile at my pain.
You bring more Bajorans to taunt
me. If I were strong, I would
burn you here and now.

KIRA
I know that's fear talking. I
don't blame you. But I won't
let anything happen to you.​

The biggest twinge yet hits – Raiq SCREAMS in pain, her skin SMOKING, the clothes singeing at the edges. FLAMES gutter at her wrists, lick out from her very eyes. Kira jumps to her feet in horror. Sevak pulls his phaser.

KIRA
Etana! Do something!​

Etana runs back over, tricorder out again. She's just as worried as Kira. Raiq continues to SHRIEK in pain.

ETANA
I don't know what to do!​

Aylam rushes over with a hypospray in hand.

AYLAM
Hold her down.​

Kira and Etana both work to try to hold Raiq's flailing body as still as they can. Then Aylam presses the hypospray to a bare section of Raiq's arm, and activates it. But the liquid just SQUIRTS out sideways over Raiq's silver skin.

AYLAM
It's not going in!

KIRA
It must be the armour.​

RAIQ is insensate with pain. Kira grabs her face with her hands, winces against the heat, tries to get her attention, speaks clearly and slowly over the SCREAMS and WAILS.

KIRA
Raiq! We can give you something
for the pain. But we need to know
- where is your armour thinnest?

RAIQ
Aaaaaaahhh! F... F... Face!​

Kira moves to hold Raiq's head still, and Aylam presses the hypo into her cheek. Nothing seems to happen for a moment, and Kira worries it won't work.

But then finally Raiq begins to calm down. More, then more... until her body relaxes and the guttering fires at her extremities die out. She's still in pain, but dulled, no longer so piercing.

KIRA
Bashir said he didn't know what
to give her.

AYLAM
Bashir's not the only smart one.

KIRA
(w/ feeling)
Thank you.​

Kira and Etana let go of Raiq, and Aylam steps away. With a look of sympathy, Etana also leaves Kira alone with Raiq. The Ascendant woman, exhausted and afraid, looks at Kira.

RAIQ
I am being judged.

KIRA
By the True?

RAIQ
By their silence. I do not hear
their call.

KIRA
That just means you're not going
to die.

RAIQ
No. I was denied the Ascension.
I was branded a heretic. Now the
True themselves reject my spirit.
(beat)
Will you pray with me?

KIRA
We're already doing it.​

Raiq smiles through the tears, grateful for Kira's support.

KIRA
Sleep now. I'm here. I won't
leave you.​

Raiq nods, and relaxes back. Kira keeps watch.



19 INT. DS9 – PROMENADE


Deserted and quiet. Ro strolls along, peering through the windows of the bar as if expecting Quark to still be there. She smiles, slightly surprised, to see that he's not.

Outside the security office, she meets Evik strolling the other way. He's armed, but greets her with a gentle smirk.

EVIK
I was told this posting would be
a hive of endless activity. You're
the first face I've seen in hours.

RO
I know. It's almost creepy. But I
would have killed for a few days
like this back when I was security
chief.

EVIK
Be careful what you wish for, I
suppose. Any news?

RO
Not yet. Bashir's got what he needs.

EVIK
You mean the ship and the ashes?
(off Ro's reaction)
As security chief, the captain felt
I needed to know.

RO
Did he also tell you not to tell
Major Cenn?

EVIK
Those are my orders, yes. I can't
say I'm especially happy about it.
I certainly understand the need
for military secrets, I'm not an
idiot. But I don't much like keeping
things from colleagues.

RO
I know how you feel.​

The Infirmary doors open. Bashir stands in the doorway, with Richter and Candlewood hovering behind him.

BASHIR
Commander Ro... Can I speak
with you, please?

EVIK
Go ahead, I'll continue patrols.

RO
Thanks, Nath.​

Evik strolls on along the Promenade. Ro goes to Bashir.

RO
What have you got, Doctor?

BASHIR
We need to speak to the captain.

RO
We?​

Bashir looks back through the doorway, to where Kira sits beside Raiq. Kira senses the eyes on her, and looks up.



20 INT. DS9 – CAPTAIN'S OFFICE


Vaughn stands behind the desk, with Bashir, Ro, Candlewood and Kira also present. Bashir is making his report.

VAUGHN
Please enlighten us, Doctor.

BASHIR
She's dying, no doubt about that.

KIRA
What's killing her?

BASHIR
She is. She's killing herself.​



FADE OUT:



END OF ACT THREE​
 
Last edited:
ACT FOUR​



FADE IN:



21 INT. DS9 – CAPTAIN'S OFFICE



As everyone reacts to Bashir's pronouncement...

VAUGHN
Doctor, are you saying this is
some kind of long-form suicide?

KIRA
No. I don't believe that. She's
terrified of this.

CANDLEWOOD
Sorry, he's being dramatic. It's
not suicide. It’s more like her
own body is attacking itself.

RO
Like an immune system thing?

BASHIR
Not quite. Nerys, what has she
been eating while you've been
with her on Bajor?

KIRA
The same things I eat. Why?

BASHIR
What does she normally eat?

KIRA
She said she doesn't eat at all.
Her ship takes care of everything.

BASHIR
And I think that's the problem.
She's not used to eating real
food. Breathing real air.

RO
Come on. She must have eaten food
before, walked on planets before.

KIRA
But never for any length of time.
She'd never even seen a sunset
because she never stayed in one
place long enough.

BASHIR
And now she is doing. And it's
killing her.

RO
Well, she can hardly just stop
eating and breathing.

BASHIR
No. And ordinarily it wouldn't be
that much of a problem. They do
have a system for regulating and
repairing their bodies when they
have to eat foreign food.

VAUGHN
What is it?

BASHIR
Their ships.

RO
But she doesn't have her ship
anymore. Her ship was destroyed.

BASHIR
Exactly.

CANDLEWOOD
They way it works is, they have
this armour on their bodies.

KIRA
Yes, it grows on them from birth.

CANDLEWOOD
We know the ship and pilot share
a kind of language of electrical
signals – now I see it's actually
the armour that does that.

KIRA
What, you got all this just from
studying the Wa?

CANDLEWOOD
No, from –

VAUGHN
(sharp)
Lieutenant.​

Candlewood realises that in his enthusiasm, he was about to let out the secret. He clams up.

VAUGHN (cont)
What does all this have to do with
Raiq being ill?

BASHIR
This bond between the armour and
the ship is also what cleans out
their bloodstreams.

CANDLEWOOD
It's an ingenious system, really.
Like how people take in oxygen and
produce carbon dioxide, and plants
do the same in reverse, so that we
balance each other. It's the same
for Ascendants.

BASHIR
The ship leaches the toxins out of
their bodies, probably while they
sleep. It feeds off them. And in
return, the ship feeds its own
by-products back to the pilot.
She feeds off it. Hence the no
need for food.

CANDLEWOOD
Plus, the armour uses the same
system. A power source for the
flames and the shields – they
help to burn off the excess.
Very self-sufficient.

BASHIR
Sadly, without her ship, Raiq hasn't
had this process for months. The
toxins have been building up in
her system, with nowhere to go.
This was inevitable.

KIRA
Why didn't she say anything?

CANDLEWOOD
She probably didn't even realise.
It's a natural process for them.

BASHIR
It's also why her temperature is
so elevated. Her system is trying
anything it can think of to burn
off the toxins.

VAUGHN
So what are you doing about it?

BASHIR
Her body's own method isn't going
to be enough. I can help, but her
blood is too poisoned at this point
for me to be able to do much.
And it's not like we have another
Ascendant around to give her a
transfusion. The only thing that
would really work is to get her
back into her ship and let nature
take its course.​

Vaughn sends Bashir another deadly glare – not another word. Bashir looks back, undaunted.

KIRA
That's obviously not an option.
Julian, there must be something -​

Then she sees the looks on everyone else's faces.

KIRA
What? What's going on?

VAUGHN
Nothing. As you say, that's not an
option. Thank you, Doctor. I think it's
time you returned to your patient.​

Bashir is defiant. Vaughn is pissed. Candlewood and Ro are awkward. Kira sees all of this.

KIRA
No. He's not going anywhere till
you tell me what's going on.

BASHIR
Captain Vaughn has been keeping –

VAUGHN
That's enough. You are under
orders, Doctor.

RO
Sir... she needs to know.

VAUGHN
Damn it, have you all forgotten
who the captain is here? No!

BASHIR
Are you really willing to let the
only living example of this species
die when you have the means to
save her? That would basically
be genocide.

VAUGHN
Don't get carried away, Doctor.

KIRA
Tell me. What have you got that
could save her?

BASHIR
Another ship.​

Vaughn can only turn away rather than punch something. As he's pacing and trying to keep his temper, Kira reacts.

KIRA
What? How?

RO
It's Axno's.

KIRA
I thought that was destroyed.

CANDLEWOOD
No, it's safe.

KIRA
And you all knew about this.​

From the looks on their faces, clearly they did.

KIRA
And you didn't think this was
something I needed to know?

CANDLEWOOD
The captain ordered us not to
tell you.

VAUGHN
And you're all in direct breach of
those orders right now. I could
have your commissions.

KIRA
They were the wrong orders, Elias.

VAUGHN
You don't get to say that. It's not
your job anymore.

KIRA
I don't care about who's captain.
I care about saving Raiq's life.
We have to use that ship.

VAUGHN
How can you all be so blind? Ro –
you ask me why I'm in a bad mood.
Bashir – you say I'm tense about
the Ascendants. Yes. I am. You
know what Iliana said to me, as I
left the wormhole? She told me to
watch out for Raiq. Watch out for
her.
She's dangerous, Kira. You
know it only takes one ship and
one pilot to destroy an entire star
system, and you want me to just
hand it over?

KIRA
You don't know her. She's changed.

VAUGHN
She was anointed by the avatar of
her gods to lead the crusade to
kill all Bajorans everywhere. You
think she's going to give that up
just because one Bajoran was
nice to her one time?

KIRA
So you're going to let her die.

VAUGHN
Or let an entire star system's
worth of Bajorans die, along with
anybody else she felt like? I'm
okay with that decision, yes.

KIRA
I'm not. Doctor Bashir, take me
to that ship.

BASHIR
I... don't actually know where it is.

RO
(speaks up)
I do.

VAUGHN
Commander.

RO
I'm sorry, sir. But she's right.
I'm not okay with letting Raiq
die just so that we can keep our
military secrets. It's the wrong
decision and I don't support it.

BASHIR
You're outnumbered, Captain.

VAUGHN
You think this is some kind of
democracy? You follow my
orders. That's how this works.

RO
Not if the orders are wrong, sir.
We can face the consequences if
and when they come up. But we
can't just let her die.​

As Vaughn seethes at them all...



22 INT. DS9 – MAIN OPS CENTRE


The door from the office opens, and all five walk out into Ops. Cenn is at the central Ops table, Bowers at tactical.

VAUGHN
Bowers, head to the Defiant and
get her prepped to ship out in
thirty. Doctor Bashir and Novice
Kira will meet you there. Mister
Candlewood, with me. Commander
Ro, you have the station.

BOWERS
Aye sir.​

Bowers heads to the turbolift. Ro steps up to Vaughn...

RO
Sir, regulations require the
captain to stay safe, and the
XO to take any potentially
dangerous away missions.​

Now she shows respect to his rank? He glares at her hard enough to blister, holds her gaze, then turns away without another word. That's what he thinks of her suggestion. He heads to the turbolift.

VAUGHN
Defiant.​

The lift takes Vaughn, Bowers, Bashir and Candlewood away. Cenn steps up to Ro, having watched the tense exchange.

CENN
Where are they going?

RO
They're taking Raiq back to Bajor.

CENN
In the Defiant?

RO
Take your position, Major.​

Clearly he's getting no more than that. As Cenn moves away, Ro looks back with worry to the empty turbolift shaft…



FADE OUT:



END OF ACT FOUR​
 
ACT FIVE​



FADE IN:



23 EXT. DEEP SPACE NINE – DEFIANT



The Defiant pulls back from its port on the docking ring, slowly turns and surges away into open space.



24 INT. DEFIANT - MAIN BRIDGE


Vaughn sits in the centre chair, with PRYNN at helm, Bowers and Candlewood at their stations, and extras as needed.

PRYNN
We've cleared the station, sir.

VAUGHN
Set course for Bajor, Lieutenant.
When we’re clear of DS-Nine’s
immediate sensor range, raise
cloak and alter course to head
for Cajara. Full impulse.

PRYNN
Umm... aye, sir. May I ask -

VAUGHN
No. Candlewood, Bowers...​

He beckons them both sharply over to his chair. They leave their stations and approach. He speaks sotto.

VAUGHN
Is Axno’s ship still receiving the
signal from the other Ascendant?

CANDLEWOOD
As far as I know, sir.

VAUGHN
You have the time it takes us to
reach Empok Nor to figure out a
way to block that signal. Bad
enough she find out about the
ship; I can’t have her knowing
she might have an ally as well.

CANDLEWOOD
Sir, I'm not s-

VAUGHN
Get to work, Lieutenant.

CANDLEWOOD
Aye sir.​

Candlewood returns to his station; Vaughn turns to Bowers.

VAUGHN
I’ll be going over there with Kira
and Bashir. Don’t bother arguing,
I’m not in the mood. I want you
to keep the ship combat ready.
If there’s any sign of this going
wrong, I want you to destroy
that entire section of the station.

BOWERS
But sir -

VAUGHN
You have your orders. Be nice if
somebody could follow them today.​

Vaughn gets up from his chair and leaves the bridge.

BOWERS
Aye, captain.​



25 INT. DEFIANT - SICKBAY


Raiq lies on a bio-bed, unconscious. Kira watches over her, Bashir and Richter nearby. The door opens, Vaughn enters.

VAUGHN
Status, Doctor.

BASHIR
She’s unconscious right now.

VAUGHN
Can you make sure she'll stay
that way?

BASHIR
I’m more familiar with her blood
chemistry now. I suppose I’d be
comfortable inducing a coma.
She’d remain unaware of the
entire procedure.

VAUGHN
Very well. I want her ready for
transport asap. If we’re doing
this, let’s get it done.​

Vaughn turns to leave the room. Kira follows him out.



26 INT. DEFIANT - CORRIDOR


Vaughn sees that Kira has followed him into the corridor.

VAUGHN
Did you want something?

KIRA
Just some answers. I get why you
didn’t tell Raiq about the ship.
But why couldn’t you tell me?

VAUGHN
Why would I? You're not Starfleet
anymore. You're not even Militia.
You resigned. To put it bluntly,
Nerys, you're no longer one of us.​

Kira stops and stares open-mouthed at Vaughn.

KIRA
That might be the ugliest thing
you've ever said to me, Elias.

VAUGHN
From your perspective it must
certainly seem so. But look at it
from mine. When you were captain,
or Sisko, would either of you have
entrusted military secrets to a
low-ranking church acolyte?

KIRA
It's not the same. You know me.

VAUGHN
I like to think so. But your loyalties
are no longer to me or to the
organisation I represent.

KIRA
(stunned)
You don't trust me?

VAUGHN
Personally, I trust no-one more.
I can't think of anyone better to
keep Raiq from being a danger to
us. I watched you do exactly that
with Taran'atar for three years,
so I know you're capable. But
sensitive information? I have no
reason to trust you with that,
because you have no reason to
keep it in confidence. You'd feel
obligated to tell Raiq, and that's
a risk I can't take.

KIRA
She's a frightened, lonely woman,
Elias. If we want her to trust us,
we have to trust her.

VAUGHN
You have the luxury of trust.
I don't. I have to plan for the
possibility that it won't be like
Taran'atar all over again. That
this time, you'll fail.
(beat)
I'm sorry, Nerys. I hope I can
still call you a friend. But this
decision is out of your hands.​

Vaughn turns and walks away again, leaving Kira alone.



27 EXT. EMPOK NOR


Approaching the empty station, cold and lifeless in space.

The Defiant shimmies into view as its cloak drops.



28 INT. EMPOK NOR – RUNABOUT BAY


The dim and shadowy room where Axno's ship rests. The ship hides in the darkness, the gentle orange glow from inside the cockpit lightly ebbing and flowing.

Transporters deposit Vaughn, Bashir, Candlewood, Kira and Sevak into the room. With them is Raiq, unconscious on a portable bio-bed that is riding on an anti-grav sled. Sevak and Vaughn are armed. They look around the dark room.

VAUGHN
Candlewood, you're up.​

With a nod, Candlewood hefts the replicator machine over to the base of the ship, REPLICATES the ladder, and begins to climb. At the top, he sends a signal from his tricorder to OPEN the canopy, and then climbs inside.

KIRA
What's he doing?

VAUGHN
Getting it ready. Are we even sure
this will work? It's not her ship.
It might reject her.

KIRA
Raiq told me that the ships are
used to adapting to new owners
whenever the old one dies.

VAUGHN
And if it does, won't it just put
her back to factory settings? And
we go through it all again in a
few months' time?

BASHIR
I'm hoping that with some of my
own tweaks to her biochemistry,
we'll get a happy medium.

VAUGHN
And she definitely won't know or
remember what happened?

BASHIR
If she didn't know what caused it
in the first place, she won't know
what fixed it either.

CANDLEWOOD (o.s.)
Ready!​

They look to see Candlewood poking his head out of the ship's canopy, waving for their attention.

CANDLEWOOD
You can come on up. One at a time
though. And don't touch anything.​

Sevak goes up the ladder first, pausing at the top to help Bashir guide the anti-grav up. Once there, Sevak clambers into the ship, Bashir follows him, and they work together to lift Raiq's unconscious form off the anti-grav.



29 INT. ASCENDANT SHIP (CONTINUOUS)


CANDLEWOOD
On there.​

Candlewood points to the pilot's seat - they heft the body onto it. Vaughn helps Kira clamber over the threshold. They settle into the ship – with six people, it's a tight space.

VAUGHN
Now what?

CANDLEWOOD
Well... I don't actually know. It
reacted to Prynn instantly.

KIRA
So we just wait?​

Apparently so. Bashir and Candlewood both have tricorders out, taking readings. Sevak waits with hand on phaser.

The silver metal of the chair softens, Raiq's unconscious form sinking into it like a cushion. The shape SHIFTS, fluidly flattening and lengthening until it's more of a bed than a seat, Raiq's form carried with it the whole way.

The silver metal begins to BLEED around her, sluggishly at first, getting smoother and faster as it builds energy. It flows around her, covering her arms, creeping across her body. The others watch, equally fascinated and horrified.

The ship is stuttering to life all around them. Lights THROB from the silver surfaces. Electricity SKITTERS across bulkheads and panels. This is exactly what the ship needed.

The flowing metal has almost covered Raiq's body, leaving only her face clear. The ship seems to pause, figuring something out. The others wait for it all to go wrong.

Which it does.

The silver metal SNAPS tight around Raiq, like cling film. Electricity SPARKS all across her body, arcs jumping from arm to chest, from leg to head. Raiq JERKS inside the fluid cocoon, spasming violently in her unconsciousness.

VAUGHN
Back!​

Vaughn and Candlewood back away to the ship's rear. Sevak pulls his phaser. Bashir and Kira refuse to leave her side.

VAUGHN
Doctor!

CANDLEWOOD
What's happening?

BASHIR
I don't know what's happening!​

The sparks grow, jumping between Raiq and the ship itself. Raiq's shudders grow more violent. The ship begins to HUM, power building, panels brightening, bulkheads fortifying.



30 INT. EMPOK NOR – RUNABOUT BAY


As the sparks of electricity shine from inside the canopy, the damaged and warped external surfaces of the ship punch themselves back into smooth and seamless place. The liquid surface ripples. The front point sharpens and glows.



31 INT. DEFIANT - MAIN BRIDGE


Prynn reads her panels. Bowers hovers anxiously behind her.

PRYNN
I'm reading huge energy spikes
from the runabout bay. Ascendant
power signatures.

BOWERS
Ready photon torpedoes.

PRYNN
But Sam –

BOWERS
I know, Prynn. But we have our orders.​


PRYNN'S PANELS


A GRAPHIC displays rising energy levels, creeping into the red zone...



32 INT. ASCENDANT SHIP


The energy keeps growing and growing, great ARCs of power jumping across the ship.

VAUGHN
That's it - everybody out!

BASHIR
Captain –

VAUGHN
NOW!

They all rush to the exit, dodging power spikes as they go. They clamber over the edge to the ladder, leaving Raiq in the grip of the vessel. Even now, Bashir is the last to go.

VAUGHN
If we survive this, Doctor...
you and I are going to have
one hell of a conversation.​

Then they're all gone, leaving Raiq alone, still tortured in the grip of the flowing silver metal.

Slowly CLOSE IN on Raiq's shuddering but still unconscious face, the only part not smothered in liquid. Tiny sparks of electricity skitter across the skin. Her eyes SNAP open, literal flames licking out of them. Around her, we hear the vessel continue to ramp up, sounds growing louder, lights growing brighter, reaching ECU on Raiq's face...



WHITE OUT



We hold on WHITE OUT for a few moments, as the sights and sounds drift away into distant echoes, until finally...


FADE IN


33 RAIQ'S POV


Sights and sounds slowly begin to penetrate the fog. Far away voices, happy and relaxed. Twittering birds. Then white stone walls, basic furniture, a Bajoran prayer symbol etched directly into the stone. All peace and tranquillity.



34 INT. JANIR MONASTERY – RAIQ'S CHAMBERS


Slowly struggling her way back to consciousness, Raiq finds herself on her thin, basic cot in one of the small personal chambers at Janir monastery. The room around her is clean, tidy, undamaged.

Clearing the cobwebs from her head, she looks around. Kira is sat by the bedside, gazing out of the open window at the warm and gentle countryside. Raiq croaks out...

RAIQ
Kira...?

KIRA
You're awake! That's wonderful.

RAIQ
Where are we?

KIRA
Back at Janir. On Bajor. You're
safe here.

RAIQ
What happened to me?

KIRA
You were very ill. But just like
I told you, Doctor Bashir is a
genius. He fixed you. You'll
be good as new.​

Kira gives her a warm, confident and reassuring smile.

RAIQ
What was wrong with me?

KIRA
Oh, I don't know. I'm no doctor.
(beat)
How do you feel?​

Raiq takes a moment to process the question.

RAIQ
Strange. Something is different...
not quite as it was before. I
cannot say clearer than that.

KIRA
After what you've been through,
I’m not surprised. I'm just glad
you're better now.

RAIQ
I think... I heard them.

KIRA
The True?

RAIQ
No. My brothers and sisters.​

Kira covers the 'oh crap' moment. She stutters to recover. Thankfully Raiq is too groggy to notice.

RAIQ (cont)
In my fever, I heard their voices
calling to me. I felt... at home.

KIRA
I'm sorry. You must miss them
a great deal.

RAIQ
They are with the True. It seems
I, still, am not. But I am now once
again sure they await me.
(smile)
I felt their power, even if it was
not my time to join them.

KIRA
(awkward, evasive)
I'm happy for you, Raiq. I'll let
you rest now.​

As Raiq drifts off again, Kira stands. She quietly moves to the heavy wooden door of the chamber, opens it, and exits.



35 INT. JANIR MONASTERY – CORRIDOR


Gently closing the door behind her, Kira hovers in the corridor. The confident smile drops away. She's worried.

Taking a deep breath, she moves off into the monastery.



FADE OUT:



END OF SHOW​
 
If you are not already a member then please register an account and join in the discussion!

Sign up / Register


Back
Top