Re: 11x04 - "Separation Manoeuvres Complete"
ACT THREE
FADE IN:
28 WHITE SPACE
The fog fades until we see Vaughn and Rebecca sitting cross-legged on the ‘ground’ of the white space, playing with Rebecca’s marbles, quite happy and content.
Iliana hunkers down beside them, frustrated and confused. Vaughn and Rebecca continue to play while they talk.
ILIANA
What the hell are you doing?
VAUGHN
You’re the one who believes in the
Prophets. You honestly don’t think
she’s here for a reason?
ILIANA
If this were the Obsidian Order,
I’d say she was here to threaten
Sisko into doing what he’s told.
VAUGHN
Too late for that. I'm already
here, aren’t I?
ILIANA
But you weren’t supposed to be!
This is all wrong. I accepted this
fate over a year ago. This is what
all the horrors of my life were
building to – giving myself to save
the galaxy from the Ascendants.
But you – it was never supposed
to be you.
VAUGHN
Well, you said yourself we have
all the time in the world. I refuse
to believe the Prophets would
condemn an innocent girl to an
eternity of nothing. So until
their reason for bringing her here
becomes clear, we may as well...
play their game.
And he gives his full attention back to Rebecca and the game of marbles. Iliana harrumphs.
ILIANA
Great plan. Except the Prophets
don’t seem to be talking.
The white fog obscures them again...
29 INT. ASHALLA MONASTERY – PRAYER ROOM
Sisko stands in front of the open Orb box, the Orb turning away calmly inside. Sisko pleads with an empty room.
SISKO
That’s the truth, isn’t it? You’re
punishing me because I let Elias
go. Now you’ve taken my daughter,
and you won’t even talk to me!
Please... you have to give her
back, I'm begging you. Take me,
do whatever you want with me
but please don’t take my baby...
He breaks down into tears, all alone in front of the Orb.
30 EXT. EAV’OQ CITY – DAY
First, establishing the Eav’oq citadel.
The runabout has landed on the grass, and the hatch opens. Prynn steps out, gazing in awe at the gorgeous landscape. More hesitantly, Raiq steps out behind her, wary of what’s about to happen. Prynn is sympathetic and encouraging.
PRYNN
Come on, Raiq. It’s okay.
RAIQ
I ought not to be here. This is
the world of the hated Eav’oq.
PRYNN
They won’t hurt you.
RAIQ
I am supposed to hurt them. To
kill them for shaming the True.
PRYNN
According to Axno, you shame the
True too. That puts you on even
ground, right? Look.
She points forward, and they see OPAKA approaching, side-by-side with the Eav’oq ITU. Raiq takes a nervous breath.
RAIQ
Opaka... my nurse.
OPAKA
Hello, Raiq. And Prynn. It is good
to see you both again. I wish it
were under better circumstances.
PRYNN
Thank you for seeing us, Ranjen.
And thank you, Itu. I know this
can’t have been easy for you. May
I introduce Raiq, the last Knight
of the Ascendants.
ITU
I need no introduction, my child.
In my memory, it is barely two
years since her kind tried to send
us all back to the Siblings.
RAIQ
Strange. I have never seen an
Eav’oq in the flesh. No Knight in
living memory has. You are legends
almost, the greatest heretics we
ever faced.
ITU
We are no heretics, my sister. I
feel the sight of the Siblings
upon you, just as upon Sulan. We
are alike in their eyes. Would you
enter the Citadel with us?
Raiq is shocked, almost as if this could be a threat.
RAIQ
Why would you... want me to?
ITU
(why not?)
So that we may learn about our
sister in the Siblings.
Raiq looks to Prynn for what to do. Prynn nods positively. Nervous, Raiq steps forward. Itu unfurls his long pink ribbon-like limbs, lays one gently on Raiq’s shoulder, and leads the Ascendant woman gently back towards the Citadel.
Opaka stays back with Prynn. As more Eav’oq greet Raiq peacefully on the path, they watch.
PRYNN
If my dad had to go... then I
suppose this was a good reason
for him to do it.
Sensing Prynn’s emotions, Opaka gathers the younger woman into her arms and lets them remember Vaughn together.
31 EXT. SPACE
Re-establishing the
Defiant, the
Even Odds, the smaller Jem’Hadar ship and the larger Jem’Hadar ship.
32 INT. JEM’HADAR CRUISER – COMMAND CENTRE
The heated discussion is ongoing. We have Kira, Odo, Meera, Vannis, Laas, Taran’atar and Ilat’ekal in the middle of the bridge, while the ship’s regular Jem’Hadar complement work the stations around the bridge and mind their own business.
KIRA
Look, I'm sorry the Jem’Hadar took
the brunt of the Ascendant attack.
But we needed you. There was no
way we could stand up to them
without you.
LAAS
It was not our concern. You used
the Dominion as cannon fodder.
ODO
The Ascendants were our enemies
too, Laas. It was them who caused
the Link to break up, not Kira.
LAAS
So we take revenge? How can you
still be so blind after so long, Odo?
She used you, that is all.
KIRA
I used the resources I had, to
save as many lives as possible.
ILAT’EKAL
Not Jem’Hadar lives.
MEERA
What do you care about Jem’Hadar
lives? You’re all mass-produced in
a laboratory. They’ll just pump
out another batch in days.
ILAT’EKAL
We give our lives willingly for
the Founders, of course. But not
for the Federation.
TARAN’ATAR
(threatening)
You will do whatever Odo wants
you to do.
ILAT’EKAL
Odo is not the only Founder.
LAAS
Do you hear what your “alliance”
has created, Odo? The Jem’Hadar
fight over which one of us they
will obey, and meanwhile the
Dominion falls apart around us.
ODO
I don’t see how breaking up the
alliance with Bajor helps that,
Laas. Nothing is gained by it.
LAAS
Nothing is gained?! This woman
alone has caused more Dominion
deaths than entire planets of
monoforms have. What we gain
is to rid ourselves of her before
she makes it any worse.
VANNIS
I agree with Laas. This so-called
alliance was a mistake from the
beginning. The Dominion should
be conquering Bajor, not fighting
their battles for them.
TARAN’ATAR
You have been clear about that
from the start. Now you finally
have a Founder willing to agree
with you. I killed you once –
I can do it again.
ILAT’EKAL
And you wonder why we call
you a traitor.
ODO
Stop it, all of you! Laas, this
alliance is the right thing for
the Dominion, you must see that.
LAAS
No, it is the right thing for you,
Odo. Not for us. You are so
desperate to keep both Kira and
the Great Link in your life, that
you refuse to see what is obvious
to the rest of us.
Laas gestures around himself – Ilat’ekal on one side, and Vannis on the other. One Founder, one Vorta, one Jem’Hadar. Opposite them are Meera, Kira and Taran’atar. One Founder, one “Vorta”, one Jem’Hadar. And Odo is caught between.
LAAS
This is over. It should never have
begun in the first place. But I
see now that you will never be
convinced. You cannot break your
addiction to this woman. So there
is only one solution left.
(shouts out)
Jem’Hadar! Draw your weapons
and take aim.
(pointing at Kira)
I want her dead.
At the order from a Founder, the other Jem’Hadar instantly draw their weapons and point them at Kira. As Kira reacts to being at the centre of a circle of Jem’Hadar rifles...
ODO
Laas, no!
LAAS
Stay out of it, Odo. I'm doing
this for your own good.
ON TARAN’ATAR, as he makes a fateful decision. He sends a meaningful look towards...
KIRA, who sees the look in his eyes, and her own eyes flare as she understands what he’s about to do...
In a blur of movement, Taran’atar is on the attack. He whips sideways, snatching the
kar’takin off Ilat’ekal and butting him in the head. Ilat’ekal goes down. Taran’atar SHROUDS just in time to avoid numerous rifle SHOTS from the other Jem’Hadar.
Odo urgently pushes Kira out of the way towards the outer rim of the bridge.
VANNIS
Kill him!
Another soldier ERUPTS in amber blood and guts. The other Jem’Hadar turn and FIRE in that direction... But too late. They just hit the already dead soldier.
A half-visible shrouded shape LANDS on a soldier’s back, knocking him forwards. The shape UNSHROUDS as it carries on through, revealing Taran’atar bringing down the heavy knife into another soldier’s head and dispatching him.
In a second, Taran’atar is on the move again. This is truly an Honoured Elder of the Jem’Hadar in action.
VANNIS
What is the matter with you?
Kill him, now!
The remaining Jem’Hadar turn and renew their attack.
ODO
Stop this, all of you!
But the Jem’Hadar are in too much bloodlust to stop now, plus they can barely hear Odo over the shouts and bellows and screams. Meera SNEERS...
MEERA
A firmer hand, indeed.
...and MORPHS. She whips out arms of changeling matter, punching Jem’Hadar soldiers in the head, knocking rifles from their hands. She’s a whirling mass of tendrils flailing with deadly purpose.
Meanwhile Taran’atar slashes his knife, taking out another soldier who was coming for him. He grins with satisfaction and the adrenaline of the fight.
A Jem’Hadar sees Kira, and tries to attack. When Odo steps into his way with a glare, he instinctively halts himself.
Kira takes the moment and attacks the soldier herself, PUNCHING him in the stomach, snatching his rifle, and butting him in the head with it until he falls to the deck. Kira hefts the weapon, about to wade into the fight, but Odo holds her back.
ODO
Nerys, don’t... stay back...
Laas has been watching all this with disgust. He finally has had enough, so he MORPHS his arm into a sword (like in 7x14 “Chimera”) and steps forwards.
Laas’s arm MORPHS out, extending the sword, aiming for Taran’atar’s heart...
Taran’atar is busy attacking another soldier. But he intuitively senses the attack coming. He expertly dodges the blade, spins and SLASHES with his own knife...
...and the blade passes right THROUGH Laas’s body, the changeling matter unaffected.
Everyone stops and GASPS. Laas and Taran’atar are facing each other, armed. The remaining Jem’Hadar gape, amazed. Kira, Odo, Meera, Vannis. None of them can quite believe what just happened. What do they do now?
KIRA
Taran’atar... you just attacked
a Founder.
Taran’atar straightens, stands firm. But underneath it, he’s scared. What the hell has he done?
FADE OUT:
END OF ACT THREE