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Does ST09 make 'Nemesis' less consequential, or more tragic?

^I doubt they'd be ashamed to admit it. If you read the Mike Piller's draft book, he ends it describing precisely the kind of writing that was used in ST11, you think up several memorable action set pieces, and string them together with a plot.

I don't think there's anything particularly wrong about writing something that way, so long as you put actual effort into the plot, and if a set-piece conflicts with the plot, you modify or eliminate it. Story must trump all, but it doesn't matter where you start writing it.

The problem is when you don't want to let go of "cool" set pieces that just don't fit together. And then you let your characters make stupid decisions and let other ridiculous stuff happen, just so that you can have all your stuff happen in one story.
 
It's 8 years after Nemesis, which was set in 2379. "Unification" was set in 2368 - 19 years before Spock goes back in time.

(yay Star Trek timeline at the back of "Voyages of Imagination"!)

which, by the way, is the same number of real-world years that passed between the airing of Unification and the release of Star Trek... but Spock shouldn't have visibly aged 19 human years.

Interesting, but there's nothing to say that Vulcan's don't rapidly increase aging near the end of their lives, or that Spock didn't go through some rough times on Romulus in those 19 years, or that he spent some unspecified amount of time in the black hole time vortex thingy.

We've seen Sarek right before he died, and he was older than Spock is. Sarek at death didn't look that different than Sarek in ST:IV, yet Spock Prime looked significantly older than Sarek ever did. There's no on-screen evidence that Vulcans age more rapidly near death.
 
^I doubt they'd be ashamed to admit it. If you read the Mike Piller's draft book, he ends it describing precisely the kind of writing that was used in ST11, you think up several memorable action set pieces, and string them together with a plot.

I don't think there's anything particularly wrong about writing something that way, so long as you put actual effort into the plot, and if a set-piece conflicts with the plot, you modify or eliminate it. Story must trump all, but it doesn't matter where you start writing it.

The problem is when you don't want to let go of "cool" set pieces that just don't fit together. And then you let your characters make stupid decisions and let other ridiculous stuff happen, just so that you can have all your stuff happen in one story.
Pretty much, but that has to do with half-assed writing or screwed up priorities than the method used by the writer.
 
which, by the way, is the same number of real-world years that passed between the airing of Unification and the release of Star Trek... but Spock shouldn't have visibly aged 19 human years.

Interesting, but there's nothing to say that Vulcan's don't rapidly increase aging near the end of their lives, or that Spock didn't go through some rough times on Romulus in those 19 years, or that he spent some unspecified amount of time in the black hole time vortex thingy.

We've seen Sarek right before he died, and he was older than Spock is. Sarek at death didn't look that different than Sarek in ST:IV, yet Spock Prime looked significantly older than Sarek ever did. There's no on-screen evidence that Vulcans age more rapidly near death.

I really think this should get the "It's just a TV show" treatment. Actor's age and movies are made when movies are made, it's just the way it goes.
 
Gaith said:
Re: Does ST09 make 'Nemesis' less consequential, or more tragic?

Well, it certainly makes it easy to believe that Nemesis never happened... :p
No offense, but if you're implying that ST09 erased Nemesis...I hate it when people say that. How many times does someone have to say alternate timeline?

How about... ST09 prevents Nemesis from happening AGAIN? :)

I like Nemesis. It's not great, but I like it fair enough. Then again, I like Generations too. Insurrection is the only TNG movie that was a major disappointment for me. Although to some degree, Generations and Nemesis could've been much more, so maybe they're minor disappointments.
 
Nemesis and the new movie were both disappointing in that neither dealt with the Unification story, which I think would have been much more interesting that what they ended up doing.
 
^Yeah, you don't need to be a hard-core fan to understand the duality of the two races. Only problem is turning that into something entertaining. Nemesis had lots of dualities in it, but not all of it was well thought out.

Alas, I don't think JJ & Co are much into wrapping a movie around a philosophical point. They're more of a "memorable action set pieces" strung together with plot, on top of which you can throw a pseudo-morality tale which is overlooked because it really was superficial to the story.
 
nuSpock didn't come to terms with anything. Had nuKirk provoked him again in the final scene, he would have again kicked the shit out of him in anger. nuSpock didn't change at all.
 
There's a scene in the novelization that was taken from an earlier version of the script that had Spock pounding on a Romulan while Kirk encourahes him. The on;y thing Spock seems to have come to terms with is he really likes beating people up.
 
I'd say that Spock coming to terms with his half-human nature was more than a superficial plot point.

Like hell it wasn't superficial. That's, in fact, a great example of what I'm talking about. That's just the justification for the stupid scene where Spock shot Kirk out an airlock, which was a poor attempt to force Nimoy into the plot. The "coming to terms," the escape pod, and even Nimoy were smashed together as afterthoughts.

Again, there's nothing wrong with centering a movie around action sets. However, it doesn't give you an excuse to half ass everything else.
 
It makes Nemesis tragic since Nemesis has become the final look into the Prime Universe. Nobody is ever going to return to it thanks to the new movie.
Well, technically, the final movie was the final look into the Prime universe.
Technically wouldn't Voyager's episode "Living Witness" be the final look at the prime universe? The Doctor in the 31st century.

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It would be the furthest look into it, but not our final look.
 
nuSpock didn't come to terms with anything. Had nuKirk provoked him again in the final scene, he would have again kicked the shit out of him in anger. nuSpock didn't change at all.

So your evidence for this is a based on a hypothetical scene that you made up entirely. Interesting.

Like hell it wasn't superficial. That's, in fact, a great example of what I'm talking about. That's just the justification for the stupid scene where Spock shot Kirk out an airlock, which was a poor attempt to force Nimoy into the plot.

Poor according to? You?

Again, there's nothing wrong with centering a movie around action sets. However, it doesn't give you an excuse to half ass everything else.

They didn't need any either.
 
nuSpock didn't come to terms with anything. Had nuKirk provoked him again in the final scene, he would have again kicked the shit out of him in anger. nuSpock didn't change at all.

So your evidence for this is a based on a hypothetical scene that you made up entirely. Interesting.

Like hell it wasn't superficial. That's, in fact, a great example of what I'm talking about. That's just the justification for the stupid scene where Spock shot Kirk out an airlock, which was a poor attempt to force Nimoy into the plot.

Poor according to? You?

Again, there's nothing wrong with centering a movie around action sets. However, it doesn't give you an excuse to half ass everything else.

They didn't need any either.

Captain Obvious has returned to tell everyone that their opinions are... opinions!
 
nuSpock didn't come to terms with anything. Had nuKirk provoked him again in the final scene, he would have again kicked the shit out of him in anger. nuSpock didn't change at all.

So your evidence for this is a based on a hypothetical scene that you made up entirely. Interesting.



Poor according to? You?

Again, there's nothing wrong with centering a movie around action sets. However, it doesn't give you an excuse to half ass everything else.
They didn't need any either.

Captain Obvious has returned to tell everyone that their opinions are... opinions!

Based on completely made up scenarios then.
 
So your evidence for this is a based on a hypothetical scene that you made up entirely. Interesting.



Poor according to? You?

They didn't need any either.

Captain Obvious has returned to tell everyone that their opinions are... opinions!

Based on completely made up scenarios then.

The novelization has also a scene in which Spock beats up a Romulan in anger on the Narada. AFTER he talked to his dad. So yeah.

And then there is this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bI3SGSxpHTk#t=3m37s
 
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