Finally had a chance to sit down and read this all the way through. I'm liking it so far, the character moments are what's making it work. Keep that up!
Well mthompson, if it's character moments you want. It's character moments you'll get. Also, thanks for your comments DF. It does seem like Starfleet's a small club even in our United Trek universe.
Here's the lastest installments for "Maelstrom". I hope you enjoy.
****************************************************************
USS Cuffe
Main Engineering
Lt. Verda stood on the upper level catwalk, gazing into the tenebrous darkness of the inactivated warp core. She stared at the cracked casing running the length of the cylinder that can fractured due to the volatile brew Pedro had cooked up to reignite the engines. He had spent so much of his life in this room, watching over the warp core as if it were a child, devoting so much time to it and it repaid him by breaking when he needed it most. It had betrayed him. The Troyian felt a visceral hatred for the inanimate cylinder. At times like these she wished she were a more primitive Elasian, so she could spew her hatred and bile at the cylinder, so that she could rail against it and continue smashing it to pieces, like it had done to her.
She pulled the ring out of her pocket and held it in her palm. The Denevan crystal glinted in the dim light from the ceiling. “Why hadn’t I told you yes?” She muttered to herself, punishing herself as she had for days. “Why had I kept you waiting?”
Verda bent over, cramping as the tears started to stream down her face again. “Why did I let you go without telling you how I felt about you? How I loved you.”
“Verda? Lt. Verda, are you alright?” It was Lt. Uhnari. Verda enclosed the ring in a fist and placed her hand at her side. She turned around slowly, wiping her cheeks with her other hand.
“I’m, I’m…” she sobbed. “Fine.”Similar to her, Uhnari was dressed in mourning garb, though Halliians preferred a deep crimson color, whereas Troyians grieved for their death in brown, to symbolize the earth to which their loved ones were returning.
Uhnari reached out to her, but Verda recoiled. “I’m sorry,” Aquiel said, her voice tinny. “I didn’t mean to offend.”
Verda had learned to shelve many of her cultural customs once she had joined Starfleet, but physical contact by one not at her status level had been one of the hardest to overcome. Born into the Troyian nobility, Pedro had often made fun of her aristocratic idiosyncrasies, showing her how pompous and silly she could be at times. Making friends had been hard for her, but with Pedro’s and Aquiel’s help, she had begun to break out of her shell. But at the moment she felt vulnerable and the old ways returned with a vengeance.
“Forgive me Lady Verda,” Aquiel said with pronounced, mock offense. “Shall I offer my commoner’s hand for you to lop off now?”
“No, it is I who should apologize,” Verda said, remembering that Aquiel had pulled her hands from the burning door in the Engineering antechamber seconds after the explosion that had killed Pedro. At the time she had been too distraught to notice or care about the cultural breach. “Old habits…”
“I see,” Uhnari said. “I…uh…came to tell you that the shuttle is ready.”
“Okay,” Verda nodded. “Could you give me a moment?”
“Sure,” Aquiel said though she hesitated to leave her alone. “What were you doing in here?”
“Just checking the progress of the repairs,” Verda lied. Aquiel nodded, but the look on her face told Verda that the Haliian didn’t believe her.
“I’m just going to be right outside the door if you need me,” Uhnari said.
“It won’t take long…I just want to say goodbye,” Verda mixed a bit more truth into the lie, “By the time we return this old warp core will be gone.”
“Yeah,” Aquiel nodded, buying it. “We spent a lot of time on her, didn’t we? She got us through quite a few scrapes.”
But not quite enough, Verda thought, though she didn’t voice it.
“A few minutes,” Aquiel said, “and then I’m coming back.”
“A few,” Verda nodded, already turning back to the warp core. Once the Haliian had left, Verda took the ring and flung it into one of the warp core’s fissures. She imagined she could hear it hitting the bottom, and shattering like her heart had. It was the final sacrifice she would ever make to the beast. She had already submitted her resignation, and would fight like hell to make sure she never returned to his accursed place.
Squaring her shoulders, and putting on a plastic smile she stepped out into the corridor, surprising Lt. Uhnari. “See, it only took one minute. I’m ready to move on now.”
*******************************************************************
Starbase 21
Commanding Officer’s Office
October 22, 2375
“Thuosana, it’s good to see you again,” Admiral Samson Glover said and he meant it. He had been friends with the Starfleet’s head since the Academy. And even though they didn’t always see eye-to-eye, he respected her greatly. It had been too long since had seen her, and he noticed a few more gray hairs and a lot more stress marks running down her dour brown face. It made him a little thankful that he had never been bitten by the ambition bug to the extent that Thuosana or his own wife and son had. Shanthi regarded him a few seconds from the viewer, her stern gaze softening slightly.
“Likewise Sam,” Fleet Admiral Shanthi replied, favoring him with a small uptick at the edges of her mouth, “Which is why I regret to tell you that I’ve vetoed your plan.”
“Why?” Samson asked, crestfallen. “It was a good, solid plan that would’ve hit the Dominion where it hurt, and showed them we were still united.”
“Oh, I don’t mean the plan entire,” Shanthi clarified. “Just your desire to have Captain Glover lead the Starfleet contingent. He’s not ready Sam, and you know that. I’ve known Terrence since he was a child, and I know both of you consider action as a form of therapy, but the stakes are too high this time. The mission will go on, but Glover will not be participating. Sub-Admiral Hesporian will be supreme commander of the taskforce and Captain Rahul will serve as her second, and commander of Starfleet forces.”
“But,” Samson began, stopping after Shanthi held up a hand. “And we’re moving up the timeframe for the mission. We’ll strike within a fortnight. The Cuffe might not even be space worthy by then.”
“Admiral I must protest,” Glover said.
“Protest all you like,” Shanthi said, though without hostility or arrogance. “I’ve already discussed this with the T’Las, the Security Advisor, and Defense Minister, and they all approve.”
“I see,” Samson shifted his gaze away to take control of the anger twisting his features. He felt stabbed in the back. Unable to hold back, he glared at his superior. “So, everyone thinks my son is crazy is that it?”
“No Sam, that’s not it at all,” Shanthi remarked, with more gentleness than Samson expected and knew he deserved. “Terrence’s emotional state wasn’t even discussed. Rahul’s knowledge of the plan was deemed more critical to its success.”
“I see,” Glover replied, but he wasn’t totally convinced. “Rahul is capable, but you know that plans never go the way we intend.”
“I’m a little surprised at your lack of regard for Captain Rahul,” Shanthi reproached him, her voice rising. “He performed in exemplary fashion for you at Deep Space 5.”
“I know that,” Samson groused. “But that has nothing to do with this.”
“And that’s the problem,” Shanthi riposted. “You’re so concerned about Terrence that you’ve lost perspective, even to the extent that you’re denigrating one of your own former officers.”
“Hold on a moment!” Glover snapped. “I’m not doing that,” he paused as his past statements and actions flashed through his mind, “Am I?”
“You tell me,” Shanthi said, her voice more even keel this time.
“It wasn’t what I meant,” Samson shook his head. “Rahul is a good captain, I just…” He paused, struggling for words, “I just don’t know what to do.”
“None of us do,” the Fleet Admiral admitted. “All we can do is the best we can with what’s available to us. But in order to do that, you’ve got to have a chance. Terrence is a hero to the Federation a dozen times over. Let Rahul get his chance.”
Samson pondered his old friend’s words. “Okay, he’ll get his chance. Now, if you’ll excuse me Thuosana, I’ve got some apologizing to do.”
********************************************************************