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PITCH] Star Trek: Asclepius - A Starfleet Medical Drama (Feedback Wanted!)

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Sector General

Could this work in the Star Trek Universe – possibly a new series with a different title and characters?


Synopsis for Sector General (the sci‑fi hospital station series by James White).

"Sector General is a long-running, feel-good sci-fi series by James White set on a massive interstellar hospital station designed to treat a vast array of alien species. The stories follow medical staff, particularly Dr Conway, as they address complex alien illnesses and injuries, utilise "educator tapes" for knowledge, and emphasise peaceful coexistence through innovative medical solutions rather than war."

Key Details
  • Setting: Sector Twelve General Hospital, a massive station located on the galactic rim, built to care for beings with diverse, often lethal atmospheric and gravity needs.
  • Themes: Pacifist, proactive medicine, inter-species cooperation, and empathy.
  • Themed Elements: Patients are classified by a four-letter system (e.g., FOKT, DBDG), and staff use "educator tapes" (shared memories) to gain immediate expertise on new species.
  • Plot Structure: The series is generally episodic, chronicling Dr Conway’s journey
Source: Wikipedia — Sector General: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sector_General
 
Could a Star Trek medical-frontier series work? Concept: Star Trek: Mercy Station

Hello everyone,

I have been thinking about whether the broad idea of a multi-species science-fiction hospital could be reimagined in the Star Trek universe as a new series with original characters and a different title. The working version I have drafted is called Star Trek: Mercy Station.

The basic premise is a Federation-led frontier medical and humanitarian station near the edge of explored space. Instead of centring the drama on a starship or a war, the series would focus on Starfleet and civilian doctors, alien specialists, rescue crews and diplomats treating species whose biology, culture and politics are often barely understood.

I am not proposing a direct adaptation of Sector General from James White's novels, but rather a Trek-style concept inspired by the general appeal of interspecies medicine, peaceful problem-solving, and ethical science fiction. The main storytelling engine would be medical first contact: every patient is also a mystery, every treatment may become a form of diplomacy, and every crisis tests Federation values in a practical way.

I would be interested to know whether TrekBBS members think this could work as a Star Trek series, what era might suit it best, and whether a stationary medical setting would need regular rescue missions or starship elements to keep the format varied.

Comments, criticisms and alternative title ideas would be very welcome.
 
Could a Star Trek medical-frontier series work? Concept: Star Trek: Mercy Station

Hello everyone,

I have been thinking about whether the broad idea of a multi-species science-fiction hospital could be reimagined in the Star Trek universe as a new series with original characters and a different title. The working version I have drafted is called Star Trek: Mercy Station.

The basic premise is a Federation-led frontier medical and humanitarian station near the edge of explored space. Instead of centring the drama on a starship or a war, the series would focus on Starfleet and civilian doctors, alien specialists, rescue crews and diplomats treating species whose biology, culture and politics are often barely understood.

I am not proposing a direct adaptation of Sector General from James White's novels, but rather a Trek-style concept inspired by the general appeal of interspecies medicine, peaceful problem-solving, and ethical science fiction. The main storytelling engine would be medical first contact: every patient is also a mystery, every treatment may become a form of diplomacy, and every crisis tests Federation values in a practical way.

I would be interested to know whether TrekBBS members think this could work as a Star Trek series, what era might suit it best, and whether a stationary medical setting would need regular rescue missions or starship elements to keep the format varied.

Comments, criticisms and alternative title ideas would be very welcome.
I have a 3-page Concept Proposal: Star Trek: Mercy Station, if anyone is interested.
 
Transporter accident survivors...concepts of Venter's "minimal humans," bio-warfare...the aftermath of the kids in TNG's "Unnatural Selection," and other concepts.... HOSPITAL STATION from the Sector General novels is proof of life :)

LIFETIME was originally medical programming...I remember "What Every Baby Knows," nephronauts in a pseudo documentary...live surgery broadcasts...back not long after MTV left music and ESPN had Aussie Football.
 
sector general, there's a series by s.l. viehl, there's that "second best hospital in the galaxy" animated series i havent gotten around to watching...

"starfleet medical" as an idea has legs
 
i read at least one trek novel where bones had to learn some alien biology or something via some sort of quick-learning, like educator tapes, but it think it involved RNA
 
Hey everyone, I've been thinking about how we've never really had a deep dive into the Starfleet Medical Corps. DS9 gave us great frontier-station drama, and Voyager had the EMH, but what if we combined the high-stakes xenobiology of Trek with the fast-paced workplace soap opera of an ER or Mercy Point?

Here is my pitch for a Starfleet Medical series. Let me know if you would watch this or what you would change!

Title: Star Trek: Asclepius

The Logline:
Set on a sprawling, underfunded Starfleet hospital station on the edge of the Alpha Quadrant, a diverse team of Federation and non-Federation doctors navigate bizarre xenobiological crises, interspecies political tensions, and their own messy personal lives.

The Setting: Starbase 84 (aka "Asclepius")

Set in 2392 (just before the Picard era), Asclepius is a massive, multi-environment medical space station located near a major subspace shipping lane. It acts as the primary trauma centre for Starfleet border patrols, independent asteroid miners, Romulan refugees, and neutral freighters. Because it's a medical sanctuary, weapons are strictly banned, meaning bitter enemies frequently end up recovering in beds next to each other.

The Tone & Vibe

Think DS9 meets Grey's Anatomy, Holby City or Casualty. It's grounded, fast-paced, and treats sci-fi elements as operational medical hazards.

  • Zero-G Surgery: How do you stop an arterial bleed when the gravity plating fails and blood forms floating spheres in the OR?
  • Alien Anatomy: Doctors constantly have to figure out how to treat species with copper-based blood, redundant nervous systems, or patients who exist partially out of phase.
  • The Soap Opera: Endless on-call shifts lead to burnout, secret romances in the biolabs, and clashes over the Prime Directive versus the Hippocratic Oath.
The Core Trauma Team

  • Dr T'Kaan (Chief of Surgery - Vulcan): A brilliant Vulcan surgeon who struggles with Kolinahr (the purging of emotions) because the sheer trauma of the ER keeps triggering her latent empathy.
  • Dr Garek Entek (Xenobiologist - Cardassian): A former Cardassian military bio-researcher seeking asylum. He is a genius at alien anatomy, but Starfleet brass constantly questions his medical ethics.
  • Commander Julianne Vance (Chief of Station - Human): An exhausted Dominion War veteran whose job is to keep the station running while dealing with massive Starfleet budget cuts and supply shortages.
  • Nurse Phlox Jr. (Charge Nurse - Denobulan): Descended from the NX-01's CMO. He has a ridiculously cheerful bedside manner, manages the chaotic triage floor, and requires almost no sleep.
Sample Episode / Pilot Arc: "Triage"

A massive subspace collision occurs between a Tellerite civilian transport and a Breen warship. Asclepius is flooded with hundreds of casualties. Dr Entek has to perform unapproved, experimental surgery using a transporter buffer to save a Breen soldier without removing his refrigeration suit. At the same time, Dr T'Kaan is forced to make brutal triage choices as the station's bio-gel packs begin failing under the strain—meanwhile, a romance blooms between a junior Starfleet medic and an Orion bio-engineer in the quarantine ward.

What do you guys think?

Does a pure medical-procedural set in the Trek universe appeal to you, or does a Trek show need a starship exploring the unknown to feel like Trek? What kind of weird alien medical emergencies would you want to see them tackle?

Reference
See my other posts with a similar thread.

Mercy Point - Wikipedia

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The Second Best Hospital in the Galaxy - Official Trailer | Prime Video
 
I am not a professional writer, but someone with a deep and abiding love for the subject. I have carried many of these ideas for a long time, and I offer them freely, with no expectation of payment or authorship.
My only wish is to see them take form in the hands of a proper storyteller. You are welcome to alter anything you feel the story needs.

If it ever goes any further, an acknowledgement as "Original Concept by Clive G Molyneux" would mean the world. And if not, a few lines of guidance for an autistic dreamer with more ideas than know-how would be just as valued.

If you do run with this, please can you send me a copy to show my family? It would be greatly appreciated.
I am deaf and autistic.

I use AI to translate my own ideas into readable English. The ideas are mine; the formatting is assisted, using Grammarly and Copilot.
 
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