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CorporalCaptain --- "Poor Relations"

CorporalCaptain

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Hello.

This is my first fan fiction.

It is based on a pitch I wrote in a pitch game on the board [https://www.trekbbs.com/threads/tng-episode-pitch-game.315487/page-9#post-14804892]. There are significant changes from the pitch, but the overall thrust is the same.

The title and its meaning are due to @Laura Cynthia Chambers. All other work is my own.

The story follows, in two parts.

It seems appropriate to make this my submission for the "Archaeological Anarchy" contest.

(Note that I am presently using the American spelling for archeology in the story!)

I will link in a formal submission when the drafts have stabilized into a final version for the contest.

I hope everybody enjoys reading it as much as I've enjoyed writing it!

John
 
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"Poor Relations"
version 0.3.6
Part 1 of 2
Star Trek fan fiction
by CorporalCaptain, TrekBBS
June 7, 2024 (some punctuation corrected June 12, 2024)



Captain's log, stardate 48137.5. The Enterprise is on final approach to the planet Oceania, where two members of the crew will leave Starfleet to study the ruins of an extinct civilization. I regret their loss, but I also feel envy, because I am unable to join them.



Picard was brooding in his command chair. He knew that Troi could empathically sense his emotions, so he turned to her in surrender, ready to accept whatever counsel she had to offer.

Troi was already smiling at him from the second officer's chair. "You know," she said pleasantly, "it occurs to me that we've never taken shore leave on an ocean planet."

Troi makes it hard to stay upset, thought Picard. He smiled slightly and turned to his first officer. "Your opinion, Will?" he asked.

"I think the crew is due for a little downtime," Riker responded. He gestured to his monitor. "The weather is clear on New Maui. Because the Yand have made peace with each other without our involvement, we're two days ahead of schedule for our rendezvous with the Charleston. This is as slow as it's likely to get for some time!"

Picard nodded. "I agree, this exotic planet does look inviting, and we do have the time. Very well, see to it. In three shifts over the next 24 hours. Families and all passengers may go ashore at their leisure."

"Yes, sir." It took Riker a moment to manipulate his controls to convert the transcript of their conversation into a formal request to the planetary cyberocracy. It was processed in only a few moments more. "Shore leave approved!" he reported, smiling at an attractive ensign who was walking past to an aft station.

Mister Data called Picard's attention back to the mission. "Captain, we have entered our assigned orbit. The current window for transport to the Theseus will last fifteen minutes."

"Thank you, Mister Data," said Picard. "Mister Worf, hail Captain Harris."

"On main viewer, sir," said Worf at tactical.

A balding, gray-haired man appeared on the holographic display, seated in shade. He wore the Federation General Service uniform. It was similar to the Starfleet uniform, but where the Starfleet uniform was black, the General Service uniform was white. Like Picard's uniform, Harris's displayed command division red and the rank of captain. Behind him was bright azure sky and the planetary rings dividing it. What little hair Harris had left was fluttering in wind. By his dossier, which Picard had reviewed while considering the requests for transfer, Harris had been in service some three years longer than Picard. Picard may command the informal 'flagship' of the Federation, as the Enterprise-D was often called, but officially Harris was the senior captain.

"Captain Picard," he said, "welcome to Oceania! We are ready to receive Lieutenants Desoto and Lambda/Six/Red. I've just read that your crew will be taking an impromptu shore leave. Would you care to come aboard Theseus? It would be my pleasure to offer you a tour of the excavation during the day you're laying over."

Picard was delighted. "Captain Harris, greetings. Since I've known about our extra time, I've been hoping you'd make the offer! May I bring along two senior officers? I'm sure we'd all like to learn why we're losing two valued crew members."

"We look forward to your arrival." Harris briefly glanced down at his monitor. "Shall we say, in ten minutes?"

"Thank you, Captain. Picard out. Mister Data, you and Mister La Forge will accompany me and the two transfers. Make all preparations."

"Aye," replied Data, entering commands as he spoke, "we depart from transporter room two." He transferred the ops station to his relief and joined Picard at the forward turbolift.

"I'll see you in 24 hours, Number One," said Picard. "You have the conn."

"Bon voyage!" replied Riker.

Picard and Data left the bridge, and Riker assumed the captain's chair.

The captain seems genuinely excited and pleased now, thought Troi, but I wonder what was bothering him before?



The five officers and two personal bags materialized in the transport area on the main upper deck of the Theseus. Captain Harris and an ensign were standing by. The area and the rest of the deck were open to the sky. The day was as bright and sunny as it had appeared on the bridge main viewer. It was warm and humid, but there was a breeze. The air was salty.

"Permission to come aboard, Captain?" requested Picard, following the centuries-old protocol.

"Granted!" replied Harris. He shook Picard's hand.

Picard began the introductions. "These are your new officers, Lieutenant Antonio Desoto, engineer, and Lieutenant Lambda/Six/Red, exobiologist."

They exchanged greetings. Harris shook Desoto's hand and the three of Lambda/Six/Red's pincers that she offered.

"If the lieutenants would accompany Ensign Bennet," said Harris, "he'll see you aboard. Please join us in the forward hangar after you've stowed your belongings."

After they left, he continued, "They'll have a good going-over by the doctor. This way." Picard introduced his senior officers to Harris, as Harris led the three to the rail at the forward end of the deck.

The bow of the ship was ten decks below and almost half a kilometer forward. Ocean waves crested and engulfed it completely. Compared to the few clouds in the sky and the planetary rings, the ship appeared to be standing still while the ocean moved around her. Picard had once skimmed schematics of Theseus. He recalled that the vessel was about one kilometer in length and had more laboratories than a Galaxy-class starship. He turned to look astern. The wide, flat conning tower obscured the aft section. Various antennae went up to about 100 meters above the tower.

"Captain Harris," said Data, "we appear to be completely stationary. My gyroscopic sensors can detect no pitch, yaw, or roll motion of any kind. Can I assume then that the third-generation inertial foils are now fully functional?"

"Yes, Mister Data. The latest inertial foils are now indeed 'fully functional.' You can see a submersible, pod number three, being tractored in now and drawn into the force field."

The captain pointed forward over the rail and down to port. The gray ellipsoidal pod was itself about 50 meters in diameter, and it was approaching slowly enough that it almost seemed stationary. When the waves crested, the pod was completely submerged; at the troughs, the submersible was completely airborne. Picard could hear distant, high gusts of wind whenever the troughs came. He surmised that it was because the whole bow of Theseus was completely out of the water at those times.

Harris gestured to a console at the rail. "Mister Data, I think you'll find that we are following the mean tide level and are presently descending at about three millimeters per minute. Our torque is indeed negligible, and the inertial field is presently set to anchor us, fixing our longitude and latitude." Harris allowed La Forge and Data to study the console.

After a few moments, Harris led the three into a nearby turbolift that took them belowdecks, to a corridor that ran along the port side. Through the transparent hull alternated a view of the turbulent waves from above the waterline and a view of the ever darkening depths below it. Since they were now enclosed instead of on the open deck, Picard felt more at ease, more like being on a starship.

At its end, the corridor gave way to the forward hangar. They continued along the transparent walkway that went around its periphery. Picard counted nine bays around the hangar and below them, for the submersible pods. At the opening of the first bay they passed over, Picard noted both force field generators and tracks for physical doors. All nine bays appeared similar, and he expected that there would be redundant systems for the outer doors also. One propeller! The thought teased him, but he did not clearly apprehend its relevance at the moment.

An Andorian ensign called Harris aside to a workstation. While the two spoke quietly, Picard studied the tunnel running aft.

"Gentlemen," said Harris, rejoining them, "I've been informed that there has been a seismic event in the seafloor. At the depths we go, there's always a risk, but now the risk level is elevated. You are all still welcome to join us and see the ruins, but per regulations I am required to disclose to you that it could be unsafe."

La Forge and Data indicated that they would agree with Picard's decision.

"Thank you, Captain," said Picard, "we are undeterred. Please note for the record that we understand your warning, and we are willing to proceed."

Data and La Forge said, "Aye."

The Theseus computer would transcribe their statements of consent into the official mission record.

Harris nodded. "We will descend in pod number one, the Argo. Ensign Thorvin will escort you. We launch in thirty minutes."



When they boarded Argo, Ensign Thorvin assigned them a triple bunk and showed them the head and mess. "Captain Harris requests that Lieutenant Commander La Forge report to engineering and that Captain Picard and Lieutenant Commander Data report to the bridge," she said, her blue antennae parting to indicate deference. "The bridge is forward, sirs. Lieutenant Commander La Forge, if you could follow me to engineering?" The Andorian smiled and led La Forge aft.

Picard understood the situation. Where they were to go was not exactly a suggestion; they were not simply sightseers. In an emergency, they might be expected to lend a hand.

The bridge had the standard configuration of an escort starship. The captain's chair was in the center, helm was to forward, and the other stations were around the perimeters, fore and aft. A Bolian rose from one of the forward stations to greet them.

"I am Commander Miji, executive officer of Argo," she said. "Please take the aft stations. You have standard privileges and full read-only access."

"Thank you, Commander," said Picard. Data and Picard seated themselves randomly, and the stations logged them in from their biometric signatures. Both immediately began familiarizing themselves and monitoring operations.

"La Forge to Captain Picard," said Geordi over comm, "I think you'd better come aft to engineering."



"Captain, they are using banned weapons," said Geordi to Picard. The two were in the phaser control room with Data, Harris, and the chief engineer of Argo. Desoto and several other officers were gathered outside the open compartment to listen.

Geordi continued, "This type of phaser bank was the norm for starships of the mid-23rd century. They generate toxic waste that is impractical to destroy. They're considerably less efficient than what we use, and they require greater shielding to protect the crew."

Picard was disturbed. He addressed Captain Harris. "Why would you install weapons that waste energy and endanger your crew? This is difficult to understand."

More crew members were outside to listen, now. Harris answered clearly so that everyone could hear.

"There's one other reason why these phasers were banned, that your chief engineer did not yet mention," said Harris. "These phasers have a maximum setting that will completely dematerialize any target and convert it entirely into energy. Standard phasers can destroy any target as well, but they will leave material residue with identifiable trace elements."

"Quite so," replied Picard. "The phasers you seem to prefer were banned after they became the favorite weapons of criminals and despots. Untold millions vanished without a trace, and their murderers left no evidence of any crime—"

Harris raised a hand and cut Picard off.

"Mind your place, Captain," said Harris. "You will respect your superior officer."

Picard was momentarily shocked, but he stood silent.

Harris continued, "These phasers are authorized for us to use by the Federation Council. To us, they are not weapons. They are tools. This is not an offensive armament. Ours are not military vessels. We have standing orders not to use either lethal or phase-changing settings against any lifeform, no matter how hostile. These tools are for navigation and drilling emergencies only. When we need to evacuate matter, we cannot afford the presence of any residue, especially plasma, which could negatively impact navigation or structural integrity. There is no margin for error at the depths we are going. Our experience is that the total dematerialization of any matter that we must evacuate is the most survivable option. Is that understood?"

"Yes. I see," responded Picard.

Harris relaxed some and continued. "I understand your disgust with the thought of what these devices are capable of." He spoke louder still, so that everyone now present could hear. "And what they've done. You were right to question their presence. In fact, making certain that these phasers are not being used illegally is one of your duties, is it not?"

"Indeed it is," Picard agreed.

"Captain," said Data to Picard. "I have examined the security certificates, and they are authentic. The use of these phasers on Theseus and on all craft deploying from her is fully authorized. I have further determined that the security protocols protecting them against unauthorized use exceed mandated Federation standards."

"Captain Harris," said Picard, and now he spoke so all present could hear, "it appears we no longer have concerns about your... tools." Picard smiled, but he did not seem happy.

"Thank you, Captain," replied Harris, "Time is running out. Let us proceed with our mission."



There was no sensation of launch or of impact with the ocean, but entry was made audible over comm.

"All hands, this is the captain," said Harris on ship-wide address. "We are descending over 24 kilometers to the seafloor. The situation there is unstable. Collapse of the seabed is possible, and leviathans are expected. Our mission is mapping and sample collection from the ancient ruins at site Thonis. We are on yellow alert. Our fleet is six pods descending, to join with the three pods already on station."

Picard had a few minutes to spend until they reached the seafloor. He decided to use his access to better understand the need for the extreme... tools. He began with the structural integrity system. One of its primary functions was to keep interior pressure constant. The computer indicated that, at the seafloor, the pressure from the outside would be almost three tons of force per square centimeter. That's more than most types of starships can withstand, thought Picard. He wondered whether the crew would be killed, if the force fields were to fail. It appeared that the answer was, 'Not necessarily.' The projected field was supersaturated, and the hull would hold a field charge until it randomly decayed. At maximum depth that would take—it took a moment for Picard to configure the query—only 13 seconds, give or take. So, what could the crew do, not to perish after that time? Picard continued to search. There it is, the emergency ascension procedure. The procedure was to continually dematerialize as much of the water column over the vessel as possible, using full phasers. The unbalanced pressure from below would force the pod upwards. Let's hope we don't have to try this, thought Picard, even if the structural integrity field hasn't failed!

Data was rapidly reading, and Picard let him work. Satisfied with his questions about the phasers, Picard rose and went forward to Lambda/Six/Red's station.

"What do you think, Lieutenant?" he asked her. Picard had intended his question to mean how she regarded her new assignment or perhaps whether she was taking to her new shipmates.

"Captain Picard," she said, in a formal tone. "I am studying leviathan behavioral patterns. As you know, they represent one of the dangers we will face. No attempts at communication have been successful, and they appear to be non-sapient animals. They interfere with submersible activity, even when we are many kilometers from their nesting grounds, which are near the hydrothermal vents."

'We,' Picard noted. She already felt she was a part of the Theseus crew, and no longer part of his.

"We do not interfere with their food, which is also associated with the hydrothermal vents, and yet they still attack."

"What is being done?" Picard asked.

"The only practical and known way of controlling them is using phasers on modified stun settings. It does the creatures no harm, as far as we can tell, but we intend it to inflict pain by neurological stimulation, and we believe it does. They can endure pain, but increasing stimulation to simulate lethal damage drives them off. This is our theory."

"Like cattle prods," summarized Picard.

"Yes, sir. But medically harmless, we think. Bioscience is concerned that behavioral adaptations could render this crude method ineffective. The method forms the basis for no common goal. A more sustainable solution than one using 'cattle prods' must be found. I am evaluating options, sir, and I am attempting to devise methods that could gather needed data."

"Thank you, Lieutenant," said Picard. How I wish she hadn't decided to leave Enterprise! thought Picard.

"We have arrived at Thonis," said the helmsman.

"Activate main viewer," said Harris.

In the artificially enhanced light, the sunken city was unexpectedly evident. There were no standing buildings, but the arrangement of rubble in the sediment over a wide, flat area clearly suggested the maps of cities that Picard had seen on hundreds of planets, including Earth. In the negative spaces between what resembled city blocks, there were indications of roads and parks. Many areas appeared to have caved in. It was remarkably still. The three pods already present near the remains of a building were highlighted in the viewer by indicator boxes.

Picard asked, "Captain, could you give us an overlay showing scale downrange?"

Harris touched a few controls, and a square was drawn on the seafloor, more precisely establishing perspective. "This is one kilometer squared," he said. The square covered what appeared to have been only the central metropolitan area. The ruins stretched back for several kilometers more up to what Picard believed to be the bases of seamounts.

"Narwhal, what is your situation?" inquired Harris.

"Commander Wu here," replied the Narwhal's captain over comm. "Status yellow. Beta and Gamma-class samples located. Excavation in progress. We estimate nominal recovery of all samples in less than five hours. Next station plotted within 200 meters."

"Argo to fleet," said Harris. "Argo will open the next station with Tigerfish and Jennie. Dragonfish will command reserve guard."

"Fleet has acknowledged," reported the computer.

Picard returned to his station aft and checked the tactical display. The three pods in reserve were forming a triangle encircling the two excavation stations at a distance of roughly one kilometer out and one kilometer up.

Data informed Picard of some of what he had learned from the Argo computer. "Attrition of scout drones has been a problem worldwide for the expedition, Captain. The leviathans tend to destroy them, if they attempt to remain at any one position."

"Do they indeed?" asked Picard.

"Energy limitations are also a problem." Data continued. "For environmental reasons, antimatter reactors are not allowed on any submersible. I believe it is in case the vessels implode, Captain." Data paused.

Data may be an android without feelings, thought Picard, but I am certain the thought of crews in danger bothers him nonetheless.

Data had more to report. "Interference in key frequencies limits the use of conventional sensors, and seismic surveys are ineffective at providing high-resolution real-time data. At present, there is no standing perimeter to detect approaching leviathans."

These are all serious issues that compromise the archeologists' safety, thought Picard.

Unexpectedly, Commander Riker called on Picard's communicator. "Riker to Captain Picard."

"Picard here, Number One."

"Captain," continued Riker, "we've received a distress signal from a supply convoy under attack near Yand space."

"Merde," replied Picard. "The truce has fallen through?"

"We're uncertain. We only know that there are civilians under attack. With your permission, emergency saucer separation is underway. The stardrive can warp to render aid in about 15 seconds. We could not recall all ashore parties for a quicker departure, and we're not allowed to leave them unattended."

Captain Harris was now astern at Picard's station.

"Captain Picard," he said. "Beaming through the structural integrity field is not recommended. I'm sorry, but, if they wish to launch as soon as possible, we cannot surface in time for you to command the stardrive."

"Did you hear that, Number One?"

"Yes, sir."

"Proceed to render assistance," ordered Picard. He heard the audio artifacts indicating that the other end of the communication channel was transitioning into subspace.

"We are at warp," said Riker, communications now noticeably distorted.

"Godspeed. Picard out. Picard to saucer section."

"Commander Troi in command, Captain."

"What's your status, Commander?"

At first, Troi sounded slightly perturbed. "Uh, well, one minute we were almost on vacation, and the next we were at red alert. Will handled the situation expertly. We're still a bit shaken up by the rapid shuffling of some personnel, but saucer status is back to green. The families of those on the stardrive are worried, of course."

Picard understood that she meant that, with her empathic abilities, she could physically sense their distress. And no doubt she's worried about Will.

"Is everything alright down there?" she inquired.

"Yes, it is." Picard realized that he had not yet acknowledged her status report.

"The archeologist's dream? I can only imagine! Stardrive crew excepted, shore leave is still on. Starfleet has redirected additional support to this sector. We are standing by in orbit, should you need anything."

Yes, I have been feeling somewhat in need during this mission, thought Picard. Something has been eating at me. But I've no time for self-indulgence. At least both parts of the Enterprise are in good hands. "Good work, Commander! Picard out."

"Captain," said Data. "I am certain Commander Riker will do everything possible to render assistance."

Even with no feelings of his own, Data repeatedly demonstrates concern for mine. "Thank you, Data. I'm sure he will." Picard turned to Harris. "I trust my crew. My focus is here."

"Very good," replied the senior captain. "Let's head back to the moon pool."



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"Poor Relations"
version 0.3.6
Part 2 of 2
Star Trek fan fiction
by CorporalCaptain, TrekBBS
June 7, 2024 (some punctuation corrected June 12, 2024)



When Picard, Data, and Harris arrived in main debarkation at the center of the vessel, the exploration was underway. The hatchway of the central circular moon pool was open to the sea, but the opening was sealed by force fields. A DOT-9 robot was descending through the force fields, into the hatchway. An officer worked at a console beside the moon pool, while two more prepared the next DOT-9. The bay was ringed by compartmentalized work areas and simulator holopods.

"Virtual reality?" asked Picard.

"Yes," replied Harris. "We will deploy nine drones, controlled by six operators in holopods." Picard could see on a monitor of excavation status that the drones already in the water were dispersing to scan the remains of a structure. "You can enter any holopod not in use," said Harris. "The simulation may be more effective if you remove your boots."

Picard did not see why he should remove them, but he complied and entered a holopod. The simulation activated, and he was standing on a soft walkway with Data and Harris, overlooking bent metal and broken crystal protruding through the sand and finer sediment of the seabed. It was the ancient structure that Picard had seen on the monitor. Drones were hovering about, taking readings. Directly above them was the Argo. The elevated walkway was of course not at the actual ruins, and nor were they; the simulation was sophisticated enough to let them experience the ruins essentially firsthand, but without the need for protective suits to supply air and to prevent them from being crushed.

Twenty meters away, La Forge was at the seabed swimming next to one of the drones, with Desoto and another Argo officer. 'Remove your boots,' indeed! thought Picard.

"Captain Picard," said La Forge. The computer routed their conversation through their communicators. "It looks like the Argo team has found something." Two more drones approached La Forge's position.

Picard looked around, and realized that he could not account for everyone. "Where are the drone operators?" asked Picard.

"Their representations are the drones themselves," replied Harris.

Of course, thought Picard.

"Let's take a look," said Harris. He manipulated a PADD to reconfigure the walkway. To the sounds of simulated machinery that operated telescoping parts in the simulated structure, the section that Picard, Data, and Harris were standing on presently moved to a position above the discovery. When it came to rest, Harris stepped off the platform and swam down towards the artifact.

"The DOTs are providing the data for the simulation?" asked Picard.

"Much of it. Yes, sir," answered Data. "This is essentially how it would appear, were there this much ambient light."

Picard decided to try to swim as well. He stepped off the platform and found that he could easily move as if he were swimming underwater. His uniform even seemed to flap and bellows as it would naturally. He maneuvered down to where the drones were operating. He knew there was no way he could interfere with the actual excavation. One drone was slowly and gently removing sediment. Already something metallic was being exposed. There were rainbow diffraction patterns.

"Captain," he asked Harris, "was this some type of computer or other information system?"

"We have found six such devices so far," Harris replied. "This will make seven. We believe they were computers. The structures of the devices already recovered are similar to our isolinear chips, and they are half a million years old. This is an Alpha Sample." At his words, an attention-alarm began making several chimes over comm. "Captain, until this sample is secure aboard Argo, all of our efforts shall be devoted to its recovery."

Why the urgency? wondered Picard. Is it the leviathans?

As if in answer, there was a tremor. The sediment shifted noticeably on the seafloor.

"Seismic activity," said Harris as red alert sounded. "Computer, end supervisor simulations."

Picard was returned to his holopod. He exited and put on his boots. Desoto and La Forge were already heading back to engineering. Picard and Data followed Harris to the bridge and assumed their stations as the klaxon was silenced.

"Status?" inquired Harris.

"There is one leviathan approaching from beyond the seamount range," reported Miji, "But the epicenter of seismic activity is below us."

Picard opened his interface to tactical. The nearest hydrothermal vents were not far beyond the seamounts. It's interesting that there is activity occurring simultaneously at two separate locations, he thought. The view of a tentacle moving behind a seamount automatically opened on one of his monitors. "Good lord," he uttered, almost involuntarily.

"Including its tentacles, we can expect the creature to be several kilometers wide," said Data.

"Alpha team here," said an officer over comm.

"Go head, Alpha team," replied Harris.

"Retrieval of the artifact has begun. Estimated nominal completion time is three minutes."

Picard was alarmed. That means it could be five minutes or more before the artifact is aboard! He checked fleet status on tactical. The Beta and Gamma-class samples located at the first station and not already retrieved were being abandoned. All drones would be aboard their pods within the minute, except for the drones extracting the Alpha relic. All other pods were moving between Argo and the creature.

There was another seaquake, much more powerful. Because of inertial dampeners, they felt nothing, but sounds of the vibrations were automatically rendered over comm. A warning alarm activated.

"Captain," said Lambda/Six/Red, "seaquake magnitude levels indicate that collapse of the seafloor is probably imminent."

Miji went to the science station and looked over the Nasat's upmost exoskeletal appendage segment to confirm and clarify. "Within minutes!" she said.

"Leviathan range: 5,000 meters!" reported the tactical officer.

Picard rechecked tactical. The creature had already cleared the seamount range. Its nearest point was now about three kilometers above the seafloor and four kilometers downrange. The enormous creature was spinning. Picard counted at least 12 tentacles.

"Alpha team, expedite retrieval!" ordered Harris.

The sound of even more intense vibrations became continuous. The red alert klaxon activated again.

"Emergency. Seafloor collapse in progress," stated the computer matter-of-factly.

"We are descending," reported Helm. "Our inertial field cannot stop us!"

"Leviathan overhead," reported Tactical. "We have no firing solution!"

Being forbidden from dematerializing any part of the creature means that we cannot use phasers to emergency ascend! Picard realized. They were going down into the chasm that was opening below them.

"We're not going to make it," Picard whispered.

"We are being tractored," reported Helm. "Tigerfish is repulsing us into the chasm wall!"

"Emergency. Collision with chasm wall," calmly reported the computer.

"Tactical on viewer," ordered Harris.

"Sensors offline," reported the tactical officer. "Tactical is down!"

"We've come to rest," reported Helm. "Our descent into the abyss has been averted."

"Captain," said Miji at her station, "the force field log indicates that we penetrated the chasm wall. We are buried under seafloor material and cannot move. The sensor grid is offline and is possibly destroyed. Structural integrity and life support are sound. We have an accurate reading of our position, but, aside from our charts from before the collapse, we have no further data regarding our surroundings. We are approximately one kilometer below the previous level of the seafloor."

"Communications?" asked Harris.

"Lost with the sensor grid," replied Miji.

"Captain to crew," said Harris on ship-wide address. "We will not stay trapped here. We have the best equipment in the Federation, and our crew is better than any in Starfleet. We may be reduced to our most basic capabilities, but we will devise a way to ascend back to the surface."

'Our most basic capabilities,' thought Picard. One propeller! The thought that had teased him before was clear to him now. Years ago, Picard had needed to steer the Enterprise out of a booby trap using only two basic thrusters. The thought of flying by using just one propeller was the framework that he and Riker had developed in their preparations to attempt this, from their retrospection of the time centuries before when daring pilots had flown primitive aircraft that had only a single engine. Back in the hangar aboard Theseus, seeing primitive backup systems alongside advanced primary systems had stimulated the memory of that escape in his subconscious. And now his consideration of the only capabilities they had left at their disposal was giving him an idea.

"Data?" he asked. "Is there any energetic output from engineering that could be used as a carrier wave?"

"Yes," replied Data. "The force field grid has a few unused degrees of freedom. We could theoretically modulate the fusion reactor's output to communicate using the free parameters, while holding all critical fields effectively constant."

Harris came aft. "Do you have an idea?" he asked.

Data had a schematic of their proposal already being rendered on one of his monitors. "The bandwidth will be severely limited to less than one kilobit per second," he noted. "But the signal will propagate through subspace and penetrate the seafloor."

"What about a receiver?" asked Picard.

Harris already had the answer for that. "Theseus's communications grid is powerful enough to penetrate our integrity field, with similar bandwidth limitations. Once they have us precisely located, internal communications will suffice to receive messages from the outside. Send your specs to engineering, Mister Data. Comm, include the transceiving protocols in our attention-getting hello."

Data and the communications officer acknowledged and complied.

"Captain Harris," interposed Lambda/Six/Red, "the historical behavior of the leviathans and the drone attrition events, I have analyzed them and found a correlation."

"Yes, we know," said Harris, as patiently as he could. "Bioscience theorizes that the creatures somehow sense our power emissions and are agitated by them. But we've no understanding of the physiological mechanisms involved, and we've been unable to devise any sort of countermeasure."

"But we could test the hypothesis behaviorally," countered Lambda/Six/Red, "by baiting the creatures, to see if they will chase our power fields. It could help us escape."

"That is an excellent idea," Harris realized.

"We have established communication with Theseus," said the communications officer.

The bridge crew applauded.

"Transmit our new up-and-coming science officer's idea for distracting the leviathans," said Harris.

The Nasat turned a somewhat brighter shade of red in appreciation.

"Message sent," said Comm.

Everyone awaited the next signals from Theseus in silence. Data continued to rapidly scan the computer banks.



"We are receiving data bursts," said Comm, after the restorative pause. "Enterprise saucer is covering Theseus. All 18 pods have sortied, but Tigerfish is down. A second leviathan has emerged. We are receiving a tactical plan. The summary is: leviathans to be distracted while drilling Argo free."

There was more applause.

Picard studied the plan. Eight pods would offer themselves as bait to attract and distract the leviathans and, if necessary, use phasers to bully them. They would be supported by four pods in reserve. When there was no longer any chance of the creatures intervening, the four remaining pods would use phasers to break apart the seafloor enveloping Argo. The seafloor could open up again, drawing the drilling pods down into the abyss with Argo. Once Argo was sufficiently clear of debris, all pods in the chasm would use full phasers on their individual water columns and on any other debris to emergency ascend.

If even Data has no better idea, this must truly be our best chance, thought Picard.

"We are receiving a computer control handshake," said Comm.

"Engage computer control," said Harris. "Phaser safeties off, set phasers to maximum."

Helm and Tactical acknowledged.

"The leviathans have been distracted," said Tactical. "The rescue plan is underway."

"Computer," ordered Harris, "transfer phaser control to my station and enable manual override."

Good, thought Picard. Harris will not trust the computer entirely. One propeller! He and the crew were fighting to survive, not the machine.

While the sounds of deep tremors grew louder over comm, they could only wait.

"We've been freed!" said the tactical officer. "Phasers discharging in continuous fire, maximum setting. Reactor at maximum output."

Picard monitored tactical and saw that Harris was manually spiraling the phaser beams around their ascent axis. Low-resolution plots of the debris overhead that they were ascending towards were transmitted to their tactical display from Theseus.

"Crumbling chasm wall above!" reported the tactical officer.

"Most of the approaching debris is at least boulder-sized and intact," reported Data. "Expedition computers are overloaded and cannot accurately predict all relevant fragment trajectories."

"Thank you, Mister Data," replied Harris.

A large mass of rock was plotted near their predicted path. As the Argo phasers continued to fire on maximum, Harris quickly but thoroughly swept the beams throughout the extent of the mass three times before resuming his original spiral pattern. The Argo deflectors handled the remaining debris in her path. Over comm, it sounded like a hailstorm.

Stingray had gone deeper to help free Argo from below. When her captain saw too late that there was too much rock in their path, he widened their phaser beams at maximum. The phaser banks overheated. Stingray exploded and then imploded.

"We've reached the top of the seafloor," said Argo's tactical officer. "Phasers approaching the red line, but maximum fire still recommended!"

Harris knew this meant that they were still caught in the sink vortex of the open abyss. They were ascending, but if they lost phasers they would be drawn back down. At least they were now free of overhead debris. Harris turned phaser target control over to the computer. He manually lowered the phaser setting, just a little. They were still ascending. He reduced the phaser setting again, this time by more.

"Phasers holding below the red line," said Tactical.

"Helm, status?" asked Harris.

"We are decelerating but presently still ascending. We are free of the vortex!"

"Phasers, cease fire," ordered the captain. "Continue ascent by inertial field."

The bridge crew briefly cheered and then resumed their emergency duties.

The reserve had been needed, and all twelve pods handling the leviathans had to use phasers against them. But the pods had altitude, and they safely disengaged. The creatures withdrew to the depths.

Sixteen pods rose back to Theseus. Two had been taken by the darkness below.



Commander Miji took the conn while the Argo was tractored aboard Theseus. Harris, Picard, and Data went to the moon pool to see the retrieved artifact, encased in a force field container.

"Was it worth the cost?" asked Picard.

"Nothing gained can be worth this kind of loss," said Harris. "Not to me. They were my colleagues, my friends."

By unspoken agreement, they observed a period of silence before Harris continued.

"Let me tell you what we know. Half a million years ago something happened on this planet that caused the catastrophic submersion of an entire civilization across all continents. It is inconceivable that the planet was so unstable the whole while surface life was evolving. Ergo, something happened half a million years ago that changed a stable planet into an unstable one.

"We also know that the core of this planet is cooler than the majority of planets of similar type."

Picard gasped and thought he understood where Harris was heading. "Are you saying," he asked, "that the Oceanians may have done something, either accidentally or deliberately, to the core of their own planet, causing the planet to implode?"

"This is the leading theory," said Harris.

"Evidence indicates," interjected Data, "that the planetary ring system is also point five million years old, plus or minus 50,000 years."

"Yes, Mister Data," acknowledged Harris, "This is another piece of the puzzle.

"Given the widespread use of advanced geothermal technology throughout the Federation and the billions of lives that are at stake, failing to investigate would be irresponsible. I know that those who gave their lives today agreed. It is not a question of whether it is worth the cost. We are called to be responsible. The necessity of their loss follows simply from the nature of our universe."



Captain's log, stardate 48139.2. The Enterprise is on her way to her rendezvous with the Charleston. In my report of the events on Oceania, I have included a recommendation that Captain Harris's expedition receive additional support from Starfleet Science, under his command.



Riker announced himself at the captain's ready room, and Picard called him to enter.

"You asked to see me, sir?"

"Yes," replied Picard at his desk. "Thank you for putting the Enterprise back together, the way she was when I left her."

"Yes, sir," replied the commander.

"I will take the report regarding your excursion with the stardrive in a moment," a report that Picard already knew the essentials of, "but first I wanted to share what I learned in the depths of the ocean. Please, be seated." Picard indicated the couch.

Riker sat, intrigued, and Picard came around to sit with him.

"You know, I initially opposed the transfers of Lieutenants Desoto and Lambda/Six/Red. 'It will harm your careers,' I said, 'to trade the experiences of myriad worlds for what only one has to offer.' I tried to make them reconsider, by making them feel guilty. I accused them of depriving others of opportunities and of relegating them to lesser stations, while taking their own privilege so much for granted that they did not care whether they kept it or not.

"I, such a bully! You know, we look down our noses at General Service."

"Our 'poor relations,'" Riker agreed. "Our 'second fiddles.'"

"Quite." Picard paused. "Not to mention, I envied the lieutenants, because they had the bravery to dedicate their lives to a dream I share, that I've relegated to a mere hobby in order to maintain my position."

He was referring to his hobby in archeology, Riker knew.

Picard continued. "These people we look down our noses at, they are talented, dedicated, principled, resourceful. They make do with less than what we take for granted. Lambda/Six/Red was essential to this mission; she distinguished herself admirably. Our former crewmates will both learn unique skills and have unique experiences that will make them highly sought after.

"Countless lives could depend upon the work of the expedition. They're putting their lives on the line for the Federation. Some have made the ultimate sacrifice.

"Today, they made me wonder who's the poorer!"

"Captain, if I may," said Riker.

"Yes?" Picard seemed slightly disoriented by the interruption.

But Riker felt that Picard might go on for a while longer, if he did not interject and speed things up. "About my report," he said.

"Yes?"

"When we arrived to assist the Yand merchants," continued Riker, "we had shields raised. I came in hot, ready for battle, ready... to rescue them."

"Yes, of course."

Riker smiled ironically. "But they had already rescued themselves."

Picard was silent.

Riker continued, "Against a superior force, they did not need the 'flagship' of the Federation to come to their aid!"

"Perhaps, they did not know whether you would get there in time!" dryly teased Picard, and they both immediately burst out laughing.

It feels so good to loosen up a bit, thought Picard.

"I guess that makes two of us," Picard continued, once he'd composed himself, "who've been put in our place and shown a thing or two."

"Yes, sir," agreed Riker.

"But you were right to go to assist, just as you did."

"Thank you."

"Thank you, Number One! Now, I'd like to hear your full report. Please, tell me how the Yand merchants acquitted themselves."



Out on the bridge, at the conn, Troi could sense that, whatever had been bothering Picard when they'd arrived at Oceania, it didn't bother him anymore.



The End.
 
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I love the idea that Picard is required to defer to a senior captain of what he considers to be a lesser service. Really nice inventions from general service to the ship, the world-building, banned weapon, critter design and, particularly, the stakes as explained by Captain Harris. Kudos! rbs
 
I love the idea that Picard is required to defer to a senior captain of what he considers to be a lesser service. Really nice inventions from general service to the ship, the world-building, banned weapon, critter design and, particularly, the stakes as explained by Captain Harris. Kudos! rbs
Thank you, very much.
 
"Poor Relations" — Afterword
by CorporalCaptain, TrekBBS



In the pitch game, the idea of 'poor relations' in the context of Star Trek immediately suggested to me Gillian Taylor's assignment at the end of Star Trek IV. That connection was the genesis of my pitch and this story. In the film, we see Gillian in a uniform, but it is not Starfleet. Although it is not stated, the possibility that she will be on a seagoing vessel to support the whales is understood. The idea of there being at least one other uniformed service in the Federation besides Starfleet follows from this scene. It may also have been implied by the scientists at Regula I in The Wrath of Khan, and the mentioned ongoing tension between scientists and soldiers. It also more or less follows from the recurring debates on TrekBBS about whether Starfleet is a military. In multiple discussions, I've proposed the idea that Starfleet could be regarded as a uniformed service first and foremost, that performs military functions when necessary, in addition to other functions, as appropriate. (In the phaser control room, Harris stops just short of implying that there exist uniformed services in the Federation that use military vessels with offensive armaments. Is he referring to Starfleet, some other branch of uniformed service, or both? That's intentionally left ambiguous, as a direct reference to the never-ending debate regarding whether Starfleet is a military.) When you talk about uniformed service in the real world of the United States, you've got the military services, and then you have the United States Public Health Service Commissioned Corps, and you have the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration Commissioned Officer Corps. That brings us back to seagoing vessels, again. Plus, what else would a poor relation of a starship be, but a planet-bound seagoing vessel?

With the idea of some sort of nautical adventure determined, without hesitation I took Jacques Cousteau as the prototype for the captain and his vessel Calypso and its submarines as the prototypes for what became Theseus and her pods. The Undersea World of Jacques Cousteau was a regular viewing staple in my parents' house when I was growing up. Considering that Jean-Luc Picard is (supposedly) French, as Jacques Cousteau actually was, and considering that the captain's yacht of NCC-1701-D is named Calypso and NCC-1701-E's is named Cousteau, it's not hard to think of Picard as being cut from the same cloth as Cousteau, if Cousteau were written as a mythical explorer. I leaned into this in the story, by making Harris and Picard physically similar, at least in terms of their hair and general age. Since Cousteau is the rough prototype for both captains in the story and Harris is the closer reflection of him, Harris was made senior.

Two fictional undersea adventures bear mention, as superficial influences. From Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Seas by Jules Verne come the ideas of encountering sea monsters and of visiting Atlantis. From Sealab 2020, a moon pool is mandatory.

This is Star Trek, the Sea Trek version. Using phasers underwater for the sake of excitement and adventure was also pretty much mandatory, and so deciding what would happen if you used phasers underwater was a significant concern. Being in contact with the seafloor for the Atlantis part of the adventure meant that drilling was one option. Stunning the sea monsters was another. But these are monsters, and in contrast to the situation in "The Ambergris Element," I thought it would be more dramatic if regular stun, even at levels from starship phaser banks, doesn't work on them at all.

The emergency ascension procedure was developed by considering what would happen when using the maximum setting. But first and foremost, I had to answer, which maximum setting? Would it be what was referred to as "dematerialization" in licensed tie-in material for the original television series? Or would it be "vaporization" as described for The Next Generation? When it comes to people getting disintegrated by phaser, are we talking about people glowing and then simply winking out of existence, like the milk thief in "The City on the Edge of Forever," or are we talking about people shrieking as their bodies are turned into flaming vapor, like Captain Terrell in The Wrath of Khan? Well, of course, for the sake of drama, not to mention my bias for the original series, it would have to be the maximum maximum setting, and so the former (with some measure of paradox understood, since the more maximal setting is arguably less dramatic). Reconciling the discrepancy in the descriptions of the maximum settings created the need for the "banned weapon subplot." With the phaser setting settled, pressure imbalance follows from the continuous conversion directly into energy, of matter in the water column over a submarine.

Once its need was established, the banned weapon subplot was influenced by current events as they relate to gun control and from our broadly-agreed upon decisions to no longer use chemical and nuclear weapons. Not only was it necessary to explain why less destructive weapons were preferred in the 24th century than were available and used in the 23rd, but also it had to be kept plausible that Starfleet was not handicapping itself when facing boss-level enemies, such as the Borg. (That last part is addressed when Harris says, "Standard phasers can destroy any target as well....") The massacre on Tarsus IV by Kodos the Executioner was one of the primary inspirations for the mass murder angle. It doesn't say in "The Conscience of the King" exactly how the colonists were killed, but it does say it was quick and painless (so, like the milk thief, not like Terrell); according to Memory Alpha, "the final revised draft of the script" said they were killed in an antimatter chamber, but that's non-canon. I felt that that episode is compatible enough with winking-out disintegration to work for inspiration, at least loosely.

To drill the heroes free, you need a cave-in, and that drove the original structure of the plot. It seemed like a good enough adventure: go down, encounter sea monsters, get stuck, break free, return home.

The possible connection with geothermal energy and mucking with the planet's core came from asking, besides cave-ins and sea monsters, what else is scary about the deep? Well, it's the deep itself. It's an enormous bottomless chasm opening up and taking you down into the dark. The sea floor opening up and swallowing you, what are its physics? They're about pressure. In the context of the whole globe, with the crust innermore than the oceans, it's about implosion. It's about the inside not standing up to the outside. It's about what's closer to the core being weak. Or weakened. And it fits with the sunken city, to say, to ask, what if they literally did it to themselves?

That said, I intentionally left a lot of mystery in terms of what happened and continues to happen on Oceania. More than that, I went out of my way to create and inject mystery. (As a setting, Pacifica as what was originally pitched was too well-trodden; for several reasons, I had to make the setting more mysterious and more my own, hence Oceania, named for the real-world geographical region of Pacific islands.) I wanted the planet to be a place worthy of the need for ongoing research. Harris was on an expedition to study ruins, about which there should accordingly be more questions than answers. Never mind that I couldn't possibly and convincingly answer all of the questions.

The behavior of the sea monsters and seaquakes is governed foremost by drama, drama that more or less must unfold on an accelerated schedule because of the short story format. This opened up the question of whether certain events are causally related in-universe or whether instead they exist simply in correlation. In other words, it invited synchronicity. "As if in answer..." was originally intended to acknowledge to the reader that the narrative was following an accelerated schedule. But serendipitously it makes the direct suggestion that perhaps there is some form of awareness or intelligence at work, without any sort of knowledge for certain that there is or requirement that there actually be. Is there awareness or intelligence at work? Are the leviathans attacking to guard the secrets of the sunken cities? Nobody knows; I don't know. It could be the case, but it is definitely not necessarily the case. Instead of clarifying, I allowed ambiguity to flourish. For example, I all but personify "the darkness below." For another, Picard's curiosity being piqued because activity is happening simultaneously at two separate locations is a direct assertion of the existence of synchronicity and bewilderment. The creature is emerging from one direction, but they are about to get sucked down from another. Did the leviathans react against the advanced technology of the Oceanians, could the leviathans have been partly responsible for the cataclysm, are they descended from bioweapons? I don't know about any of that, it's unknown. Perhaps the leviathans are a result of the cataclysm, perhaps they are something else.

I put the planetary rings there (and the rings are one reason why Oceania and not Pacifica), simply because a partially or totally destroyed lunar system meshed well with the idea of cataclysm. I also liked the idea of something in plain sight possibly having deeper significance. Whether a connection exists between the sunken cities and the ring system, that's a mystery.

Why are there still remains after half a million years that are still in the process of collapsing? Are the ruins still there simply the final remnants of stochastic decay? What is the source of sensor interference? Is there some ancient technology that has been holding the seabed together for hundreds of thousands of years, or even trying to repair it, but that is now finally starting to break down? Are the sea monsters part of attempts to repair the planet? Is their agitation by the power fields of advanced technology an antitechnological reaction to defend the planet against further harm? Is that behavior a result of natural selection, because it was the only way life could endure after the cataclysm? Is the sensor interference coming from whatever remains of the technology that caused the cataclysm? Is the interference nothing more than something that renders an early-warning detection system for approaching leviathans impossible? I don't know. But I can say that Lambda/Six/Red will be asking herself all of the questions above that have an in-universe meaning. So will the rest of the researchers.



June 7, 2024
 
Intriguing. If the story anthologies come back, this would probably merit inclusion.
Thank you for your kind words.

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To all who have read the earlier drafts posted of the story, I believe that the final revision has a level of polish that all previous drafts lacked. I don't have any doubt that it's the best draft posted to date.

Once again, it was my pleasure to write it. I hope everyone enjoys it.

John
 
This was fantastic. Loved the leviathans, deep sea details and the pods. Picard's lesson in elitism too. Nice work!
 
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