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Contest Entry: July: Captain of the Io

Amusing but the complete lack of discipline amongst senior officers tended to take me out of the story. I know what you were trying to establish-but still....


Interesting storyline, though. Although, again, the use of the name "Drow" took me out of the story-I played too much D&D as a kid.
 
Hi Vice Admiral, thank you for the review. I need those.

I just started writing star trek (and in general) so I need all the help that I can get.

Hopefully my grammar, punctuation and stories will get better as I get more practice.
 
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