Very good list, and a very balanced viewpoint on Trek's morals and messages without overstating. I'd make two small tweaks if I may - I think point 11 is stronger than you worded it - with the exception of DS9 the show has broadly been actively anti religious, since way back in the original.
You're right about the sentiment, and fine by me, although I'm not exactly sure how to word it more strongly.
I also think point 5 is aspirational rather than demonstrated. I actually think the Federation act in quite an imperialist/colonial manner at times, and that is somewhat tied to my other tweak - Kirk in particular loved 'rescuing' savages from their entire way of life then telling them to do things their way and warping off into the sunset.
I don't buy this quite so much. I think Kirk did a very good job of justifying his actions — whether in good episodes like "A Taste of Armageddon" or lesser ones like "The Apple," his priority was always to make sure that other cultures had the
chance to develop and make their own choices, not be in thrall to some arbitrary power. That was the whole point of the Prime Directive, which IMHO was a conceptually brilliant thing for
any expanding spacegoing civilization... or earthbound one, for that matter. (And it was a much more defensible take on the Prime Directive than what was foisted on us in TNG, where it had somehow become okay to let a culture die by natural disaster because of what seemed to boil down to a belief in fate.) And I never got any imperialistic "white man's burden" vibe from TOS; even much less advanced cultures (e.g., in "Friday's Child") were never stereotyped as mere "savages."
I'd also add one more positive point. It's a big message of Trek that we are who we say we are. The values we say we have, we actually have and act on.
Excellent point, and an important one. I should add that to the list.
...once ENT established the reality of the unit we have to contend with a dubious moral lesson hidden beneath the surface (essentially the Jack Nicholson speech from A Few Good Men) and ask ourselves whether Starfleet's utopia actually just rests on the shoulders of people willing to do horrible things.
And that's what I find a bit depressing. I wholeheartedly reject the idea that peace and diplomacy and so on can only exist if there's a silent partner in the background doing horrible things in secret. And in my mind, Star Trek rejects that idea too.
Well stated.
... I definitely don't see section 31 actually "protecting" Earth. More of them as assholes thinking they are protecting Earth.
Indeed. Never mind the CIA; I'd analogize S31 more to a white nationalist militia group.
... But I can absolutely see some people - even in the Utopia of Star Trek - believing we need such a clandestine organization. And then implementing it. But the writers have to walk an extremely tight rope: Showing the flawed morality of S31, without actually promoting it.
But herein lies the problem. Take Cultcross's example, the movie
A Few Good Men... It was extremely well-written (Aaron Sorkin, after all), and well-acted... and still, some people come away from it convinced that Jack Nicholson's character was
right. Nicholson's a talented actor, and he expressed himself with force and conviction, and that carries persuasive weight.
I don't trust the people making DSC to offer anything with that level of sophistication, but then we encounter the opposite problem: lots of obvious moral anvils being dropped, which does not make for good storytelling. A little on-the-nose righteous speechmaking goes a long way. William Shatner could pull it off with panache on occasion, as could Patrick Stewart, but Sonequa Martin-Green really doesn't have what it takes, nor does anybody else in the DSC cast, IMHO. (Except possibly Anthony Rapp, but he doesn't seem likely to get the opportunity.) When I say I want Trek stories to involve ethical dilemmas and moral allegories, that doesn't mean I want them to come across as After-School Specials.
(Can't speak to the effectiveness of the SG-1 example, as I've never watched the show.)