Arc of the Wolf: On the Nature of Wind

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  1. Nerys Ghemor

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    Re: Arc of the Wolf: On the Nature of Wind - Part III, Chapter 4

    Oh, wow...

    I didn't even realize you were a woman!!!

    In all seriousness, I think it's because you've captured the male perspective so well--even the things that aren't so comfortable to write, like their banter about women.
     
  2. SLWalker

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    Re: Arc of the Wolf: On the Nature of Wind - Part III, Chapter 4

    LMAO! Well, hopefully it won't change your perspective on this stuff too much. ;-) But yeah -- I'm Steff, married Mom of two, stringer for the local newspaper, all that exciting stuff.
     
  3. Nerys Ghemor

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    Nahh...it won't change my perspective. To me it just shows how well you write. :)
     
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    I'm up to chapter 3, and I have to say Scotty's finally coming into his own here. Finally, the man has developed a friend, and has a social life (sort of). I feared he was destined to become some kind of weird engineer/hermit/monk. ;) Here's hoping he keeps his hands off Corry's little sister, though. :lol:

    Terrific stuff! :techman:
     
  5. SLWalker

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    :lol: Yeah, he does keep his hands off of Cor's sister (despite wishing he wouldn't have to!) -- I more feel for Corry, who's not sure which one to be protective of. His somewhat free-wheeling little sister, or his admittedly naive roommate.
     
  6. SLWalker

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  7. SLWalker

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  10. Nerys Ghemor

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    Re: Arc of the Wolf: On the Nature of Wind - Part III, Chapter 6

    Wow. I hope we'll get to see the results of the race before you wrap this all up!

    Just one question. Wouldn't dropping a 24-pound cannonball on someone's foot break every bone in that foot?
     
  11. SLWalker

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    Re: Arc of the Wolf: On the Nature of Wind - Part III, Chapter 6

    Nah. Not with service boots on. Twenty four pounds is heavy, but not THAT heavy -- take it from someone who's dropped a sixty-pound chase on her foot in tennis-shoes. It sure hurts, but despite the bruising, nothing breaks. ;) Plus, it wasn't a drop from standing, it was more of a shove from the ground. And yes, you get to see the results, even if the results aren't what anyone would expect.
     
  12. Nerys Ghemor

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    Looking forward to it!
     
  13. SLWalker

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  15. Nerys Ghemor

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    Re: Arc of the Wolf: On the Nature of Wind - Part IV, Chapter 1

    Very nice!

    Nice to see you have competing news outlets--I'd figure TNN competes against the Federation News Service?

    And I just can't wait to see what happens--let's hope that BOTH ships aren't armed, or all hell could really break loose!
     
  16. SLWalker

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    Re: Arc of the Wolf: On the Nature of Wind - Part IV, Chapter 1

    ::laughs:: I guess, yeah. I came up with TNN (the Terran News Network) mostly just because it seemed like a cute name for a news channel in the future.

    Thanks for the comment!
     
  17. RobertScorpio

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    Re: Arc of the Wolf: On the Nature of Wind - Part IV, Chapter 1

    Nah..you just miss all those ROY CLARK and BARRY MANILOW concerts they use to have on TNN...wink wink..

    Rob
     
  18. SLWalker

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    Re: Arc of the Wolf: On the Nature of Wind - Part IV, Chapter 1

    And a good thing, too!
     
  19. Mistral

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    Re: Arc of the Wolf: On the Nature of Wind - Part IV, Chapter 1

    Arrrg! I thought the whole story was posted! You mean I caught up?

    This has been an excellent read-it feels like I've had my had stuck in a book for the last hour. Thank you!
     
  20. SLWalker

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    Re: Arc of the Wolf: On the Nature of Wind - Part IV, Chapter 1

    You're absolutely welcome! And no, there's a good ways to go yet before it's done; five more chapters in this part, four in the next and the epilogue. But worry not, it shall be soon, and thank you so much for the comment!