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And Star Trek V failed because...

How many of the things I mentioned above have "some basis in theory?"

Genesis = advanced terraforming
Magic blood = genetically engineered blood
Black hole time travel (and other forms of time travel) are based on theory.

As far as unlikely things like Thaleron radiation or red matter are concerned, we don't know with certainty that those things (or something similar to them) can't be discovered one day. We do know however that the center of the galaxy is far too dense and active to have a habitable planet in the middle of it.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Physics_of_Star_Trek

Advanced terraforming in the form of the Genesis device is a massive stretch. Genetically engineered blood bringing people back to life is a massive stretch. Time travel through a black hole and red matter is a massive stretch.

It's also a massive stretch to think that a bizarre phenomenon or extremely powerful alien could create a calm "eye of the storm" area where a planet could exist and support life near the galactic core.

Just as much a massive stretch as any other Star Trek semi-magic. Let's not get carried away here just trying to prove a point. Star Trek has boatloads of fantastic crap. TFF is absolutely no different. That's not a deal breaker for people. If it was, the show would have died a LONG time ago.

Besides, the point being made is that this "unrealistic premise" is why the movie failed, and that's not correct. I can think of about 15 reasons that would be more obvious, realistic, and probable than someone saying "I'm not buying a ticket for that movie, because the premise of a life-sustaining planet existing near the center of the Galaxy is improbable." Thats not what 99.99% of the movie going audience looks at.

If you say so. The movie completely lost me when I found out what they were trying to accomplish. Maybe that is just me.
 
I think it is mostly just you.
I think the explanation of the god planet must be in that mythical "missing act" that also explains how they got there.
 
Genesis = advanced terraforming
Magic blood = genetically engineered blood
Black hole time travel (and other forms of time travel) are based on theory.

As far as unlikely things like Thaleron radiation or red matter are concerned, we don't know with certainty that those things (or something similar to them) can't be discovered one day. We do know however that the center of the galaxy is far too dense and active to have a habitable planet in the middle of it.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Physics_of_Star_Trek

Advanced terraforming in the form of the Genesis device is a massive stretch. Genetically engineered blood bringing people back to life is a massive stretch. Time travel through a black hole and red matter is a massive stretch.

It's also a massive stretch to think that a bizarre phenomenon or extremely powerful alien could create a calm "eye of the storm" area where a planet could exist and support life near the galactic core.

Just as much a massive stretch as any other Star Trek semi-magic. Let's not get carried away here just trying to prove a point. Star Trek has boatloads of fantastic crap. TFF is absolutely no different. That's not a deal breaker for people. If it was, the show would have died a LONG time ago.

Besides, the point being made is that this "unrealistic premise" is why the movie failed, and that's not correct. I can think of about 15 reasons that would be more obvious, realistic, and probable than someone saying "I'm not buying a ticket for that movie, because the premise of a life-sustaining planet existing near the center of the Galaxy is improbable." Thats not what 99.99% of the movie going audience looks at.

If you say so. The movie completely lost me when I found out what they were trying to accomplish. Maybe that is just me.

There you go!

:techman:
 
I think, to go to the original purpose of the thread, that TFF faced a perfect storm that led to it not being successful. It wasn't. Just one thing, to be sure.

1. Studio interference, trying to pressure the filmmakers into re-establishing the success of TVH with a light comedy tone.
2. The 1988 writers strike
3. David Loughery was the wrong script writer to bring the story to the screen
4. Shatner, as director, mismanaged certain elements of the film (certainly not all, though)
5. The special effects company, Ferren and Associates did not come through
6. TNG was beaming Trek into households every week, which may have made the film less special.
7. The competition that summer was brutal...really the second true blockbuster summer after summer of 84 set the tone. The movie may have done $15-20m more as a holiday release.
8. The story wasn't a mass-appeal story, and came off as sloppy and unfinished.
 
Besides, the point being made is that this "unrealistic premise" is why the movie failed, and that's not correct. I can think of about 15 reasons that would be more obvious, realistic, and probable than someone saying "I'm not buying a ticket for that movie, because the premise of a life-sustaining planet existing near the center of the Galaxy is improbable." Thats not what 99.99% of the movie going audience looks at.

A bizarre thing for me is Eden being supposed to be on a planet near the center of the galaxy. Isn't the Garden of Eden supposed to be on Earth? It would work better for me if they said they were trying to get to Heaven by flying the ship into the Great Barrier.

Besides, they already did search for planet Eden in the TV series, and it was a crappy episode.
 
I always viewed the concept of Sha Ka Ree to be like a "trial" that pilgrims would have to overcome. If you are worthy enough to find the location of the planet and cross the barrier, the "almighty" would appear to you.

It wasn't necessarily that the planet was the actual "home" of the supreme being.
 
But if you just take the story as a kind of romp, like The Three Musketeers, then it's not so bad.

I never quite agreed with the sentiment "If you look at this badly made piece of fiction from this specific angle, it's not as bad"

A good work of fiction would be enjoyable no matter in what frame of mind you watch it (within reasonable limitations).

Why not?

I probably wouldn't recommend TFF to someone who's not a fan of TOS or the first four films. I know that I enjoy the film because of my preexisting affection for these characters and my personal inclination to see the good in Trek. You can call it "bad fiction," but that doesn't keep people like me from enjoying the many positive qualities we see in the film despite the flaws.

Why wouldn't you? As Woulfe and I can attest, taking a neophyte with little to no experience with Star Trek to TFF can instill in them an admirable appreciation for it. Woulfe and I, and another friend of ours, were chewing on our cheeks and tongues to keep from saying something that would turn off my co-worker and his friend to ST, when they gave us the out of "That was great!", giving us the opportunity to tell them "You like that? Well, the rest are even better!" As far as I know, my co-worker and his friend are lifelong fans 25 years later.

I don't know, a lot of the things you mentioned have some basis in theory where a habitable planet existing at the center of the universe is basically an impossibility. It was probably the worst plot of any Trek movie (next to the Voyager in a Black Hole thing).

How many of the things I mentioned above have "some basis in theory?"

Genesis = advanced terraforming
Magic blood = genetically engineered blood
Black hole time travel (and other forms of time travel) are based on theory.

As far as unlikely things like Thaleron radiation or red matter are concerned, we don't know with certainty that those things (or something similar to them) can't be discovered one day. We do know however that the center of the galaxy is far too dense and active to have a habitable planet in the middle of it.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Physics_of_Star_Trek

I always viewed the concept of Sha Ka Ree to be like a "trial" that pilgrims would have to overcome. If you are worthy enough to find the location of the planet and cross the barrier, the "almighty" would appear to you.

It wasn't necessarily that the planet was the actual "home" of the supreme being.

I like the trial element. That makes sense.

I have never seen the Great Barrier and the planet behind/within it to be at the center of the galaxy. More likely between the galactic arms, using the gravitation of the arms to hold the barrier in place. But once the Enterprise enters, Sybok is so overcome with whatever that he rationalizes "We're there! We've made it!" And Act Three comes to fruition from there.
 
I never quite agreed with the sentiment "If you look at this badly made piece of fiction from this specific angle, it's not as bad"

A good work of fiction would be enjoyable no matter in what frame of mind you watch it (within reasonable limitations).

Why not?

I probably wouldn't recommend TFF to someone who's not a fan of TOS or the first four films. I know that I enjoy the film because of my preexisting affection for these characters and my personal inclination to see the good in Trek. You can call it "bad fiction," but that doesn't keep people like me from enjoying the many positive qualities we see in the film despite the flaws.

Why wouldn't you? As Woulfe and I can attest, taking a neophyte with little to no experience with Star Trek to TFF can instill in them an admirable appreciation for it. Woulfe and I, and another friend of ours, were chewing on our cheeks and tongues to keep from saying something that would turn off my co-worker and his friend to ST, when they gave us the out of "That was great!", giving us the opportunity to tell them "You like that? Well, the rest are even better!" As far as I know, my co-worker and his friend are lifelong fans 25 years later.

Genesis = advanced terraforming
Magic blood = genetically engineered blood
Black hole time travel (and other forms of time travel) are based on theory.

As far as unlikely things like Thaleron radiation or red matter are concerned, we don't know with certainty that those things (or something similar to them) can't be discovered one day. We do know however that the center of the galaxy is far too dense and active to have a habitable planet in the middle of it.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Physics_of_Star_Trek

I always viewed the concept of Sha Ka Ree to be like a "trial" that pilgrims would have to overcome. If you are worthy enough to find the location of the planet and cross the barrier, the "almighty" would appear to you.

It wasn't necessarily that the planet was the actual "home" of the supreme being.

I like the trial element. That makes sense.

I have never seen the Great Barrier and the planet behind/within it to be at the center of the galaxy. More likely between the galactic arms, using the gravitation of the arms to hold the barrier in place. But once the Enterprise enters, Sybok is so overcome with whatever that he rationalizes "We're there! We've made it!" And Act Three comes to fruition from there.

Right. You need to assume that the phrase "the center of the galaxy" is referring very generally to a vast region not in one of the spiral arms...not in the pinpoint center of the Milky Way.
 
I guess a good thing about calling it Eden is that the Great Barrier matches certain Biblical imagery:
So he drove out the man; and he placed at the east of the garden of Eden Cherubims, and a flaming sword which turned every way, to keep the way of the tree of life.

— Genesis 3:24​
 
Imagine Gene Roddenberry's Time Travel story to $ave JFK getting produced, instead of this one. Aiy-yi-yi ... There were plenty of shit stories always threatening to get the Green Light in this franchise. On paper, at least, I would've preferred The Shat's original story ... until I started seeing the shots come in. Like Sybok's taking over Paradise City without ANY show of resistance from the townspeople there, when the movie, in fact, openned with a loser ready to bust a pebble in Sybok's belly just to protect his Field of Holes. I mean ... how stupid is that? But if Sybok had met resistance, then Kirk's strong-arming nameless stuntmen would seem less "impressive," so we have to save that for when the Enterprise gets here. Yet another example of Shatner's Ego used to ill-effect. But ... I'm still glad the Enterprise didn't fly through The Guardian of Forever to $ave JFK, instead.
 
Imagine Gene Roddenberry's Time Travel story to $ave JFK getting produced, instead of this one. Aiy-yi-yi ... There were plenty of shit stories always threatening to get the Green Light in this franchise. On paper, at least, I would've preferred The Shat's original story ... until I started seeing the shots come in. Like Sybok's taking over Paradise City without ANY show of resistance from the townspeople there, when the movie, in fact, openned with a loser ready to bust a pebble in Sybok's belly just to protect his Field of Holes. I mean ... how stupid is that? But if Sybok had met resistance, then Kirk's strong-arming nameless stuntmen would seem less "impressive," so we have to save that for when the Enterprise gets here. Yet another example of Shatner's Ego used to ill-effect. But ... I'm still glad the Enterprise didn't fly through The Guardian of Forever to $ave JFK, instead.

I agree that there were some far-greater bullets dodged with regard to potential turd story ideas.

I think, with regard to the takeover of Paradise City, it is implied that the citizens there are weaponless. The settlers outside the city can't be policed and were therefore better armed, but people living within the city walls probably don't have weapons immediately available (although Korrd apparently had a disruptor, as he draws it on Kirk during the rescue).
 
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