Ahoyager Episodes 1 and 2

[ctroft]

Hi Guys,

I am currently developing a new animated series entitled "Ahoyager". It's a parody of Star Trek of sorts and stars Captain Pakaday and her misfit crew as they hurl through space, destroying any hope humanity has for a better future. The series grabs elements from a few different sources, but Trek is obviously the biggest inspiration.

I currently have two episodes out. My current goal is to release an episode a month and see how things go. Here they are:

Episode 1: The Saggy Truth

When Pakaday, a chain-smoking spaceship captain, is faced with her fear of aging, she will do whatever it takes to gain the favor of her male subordinates.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hIl2X17Dmkk

Episode 2: The Black Hole

After encountering a deadly spatial anomaly, Captain Pakaday turns to an unlikely crew member to save the Ahoyager.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c2yD6N8C31A

Enjoy!

 

[Maurice]

So...a woman who cares only about men finding her attractive and then a bunch of unfunny dialog about racial stereotypes.

I appreciate the effort anyone makes in making a film, but the scripts here are rubbish.

 

[Johnny]

Maybe a quicker cut would keep the dialogue moving along a bit more and keep the pace going.
J.