The Excelsior line is really clunky. The travel pod scene isn't really Sulu's "moment," which it would have to be to justify the line's inclusion, it's just some more business about how life is leaving Kirk behind. The most obvious edit is an improvement, too, having Sulu just leave it at "Any chance to go about the Enterprise," is much, much better without continuing to "...however briefly, is always an excuse for nostalgia."
Though, discussing the line also brings to mind Takai's weird insistence about wanting to be made a captain in the movies, even though it would mean he'd be less involved in the stories overall and easier to cut out entirely if it happened any earlier than it did. If Sulu actually had been made captain of the Excelsior in TSFS, there's a good chance that would've been the last we saw of him if the movies developed anything like how they did in the real world.
The thing I wonder is what the behind-the-scenes intent was with giving the new ship in TSFS the same name Sulu's prospective command in TWOK. The novelizations assumed they were one-and-the-same, but I wonder if it was just that someone behind the scenes liked the name and wanted to get it on-screen somehow, somewhere.
Though, discussing the line also brings to mind Takai's weird insistence about wanting to be made a captain in the movies, even though it would mean he'd be less involved in the stories overall and easier to cut out entirely if it happened any earlier than it did. If Sulu actually had been made captain of the Excelsior in TSFS, there's a good chance that would've been the last we saw of him if the movies developed anything like how they did in the real world.
The thing I wonder is what the behind-the-scenes intent was with giving the new ship in TSFS the same name Sulu's prospective command in TWOK. The novelizations assumed they were one-and-the-same, but I wonder if it was just that someone behind the scenes liked the name and wanted to get it on-screen somehow, somewhere.