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Vivid characters, straightforward events. Good! I'm a little startled that Supplies Officer isn't in the brig. They would be if caught in a modern navy.

USS Hippogriff is a Nez Perce class (variant on Acula class). Currently one of three ships operating about of Starbase 25 which comprise Task Force Enoch in 2320 CE near Kzinti space. Captain Vor Arthoon is a Gaabrox, first of her felinoid species to reach such a rank in Starfleet. She (all...

I find it so interesting how similar in some ways the Cardassians are to the Romulans. Both will simply try and take as much as they think they can get away with, but Romulans are so much more secretive, and even more devious. I suspect this comes in part from a different origin. In effect...

I always applaud a glimpse of the Federation outside of Starfleet, so you have me there from the start. The setup also just has me rivetted--who is the person and what is her history? That I actually felt a level of exhaustion reading this says something very positive about your writing.

This is a good story, reminding me a bit of some works by Larry Niven and Jack McDevitt. Good characters, a mystery set up compelling to both reader and character, a logical conclusion that moves a narrative involving the characters along. Way above average for the vast majority of fan...

OKay, cool. We a technologically primitive race on the planet, but a hidden/covert location of seemingly automated advanced technology seemingly responsible for what happened to USS Esau. But a totally different species seems associated with that tech, one as yet unidentified but not really...

Thank you for the kind words. They mean a lot. These logs combined together make up this specific story, which I've re-named "Maiden Voyage" but cannot change the thread title. Oh well. This story has a lot of twists and turns yet to come, some of it involving Captain Arthoon's species. ;)

First Officer's Log, Stardate 37399.2 Lieutenant Commander Alexandra Styles U.S.S. Hippogriff We are now in orbit around Brieno IV. The local Orion government are vetting us for having protected the freighters bringing them all sorts of supplies, while at the same time tying us up with...

VEry nice!

I don't usually care for fan fics that delve into so many characters in such a short amount of time (well, I actually that is a complaint I have with some professionally published novels to be honest--looking at you David Weber) but this one succeeds. The balance feels right and enough of the...

Okay, looking forward to how this progresses!

A compelling mystery entwined with a good character study. Count me hooked!

First, I want to say the challenge of this situation, i.e. the two potential Captains in this situation, methinks you are handling extremely well. Am so looking forward to the rest. :) And on an aesthetic level, I do love the name of the ship! Since I have a major character in my audio...

We are focusing on TUC to TNG in general. We're also trying to keep track of each other so we don't contradict each other and can even do a bit of cross-over. Generally we follow Memory Beta for background information, and we did decide to work in an alien race called the Gaabrox. No...

Chief of Engineering Log, Stardate 37709.4 Lieutenant (SG) Fleur Jarabi Just had my first taste of real combat. Some older veterans hinted this wasn't so very much, all things considered. Going to have to keep that in mind! We were organized into a convoy, with all the freighters in easy...

Bravo!

Well, it isn't the Federation's job to stop people smuggling things to an Orion planet. Starfleet is there to counter pirates and raiders. :angel:

Thank you.

Captain's Log, Stardate 37699 Commander (brevet Captain) Vor Arthoon Commanding Officer U.S.S. Hippogriff We have made rendez-vous with the freighter Red Andorian, en route to Brieno IV. The Skipper, named Ovir Rodeen, seemed startled but pleased for the the escort, which makes sense. Just as it...

Thanks for telling me.