For your consideration... before I "finish" the first hour of the series finale... I thought I should show you what happens in the first 3 chapters.
TEASER
Scene One
Corridor on Voyager. Day 1.
(Captain Kathryn Janeway & Commander Chakotay are walking.)
Chakotay: (laughing) So there I was, pinned down by the blistering attack of the Orion's Flagship... Phasers gone, warp drive gone, nowhere to run... and all I can think of is Damn it! I could take this guy out with one damn torpedo! What I would give for just one!
Janeway: A horse, a horse, my kingdom for a horse?
Chakotay: (smiles) Something like that.
Janeway: Unfortunately, Photon torpedos won't be invented for several more decades... sooo? How did you get out of it?
Chakotay: (dramatically) Phaser Banks empty. Torpedos nonexistant, the intrepid Captain Chakotay did the only thing he could... he set his ship to ramming speed and aimed for the Orion's bridge.
Janeway: (chuckling) A well known "intrepid Chakotay" tactic. So? When is your memorial service, since transporters were also non-existant at the time your "Birth of the Federation" holoprogram is set?
Chakotay: (laughing) Hah! Oh yee of little faith! My star cruiser may not have transporters, but it IS equipped with a state of the art/early 23rd century tractor beam. I used it to snag a burntout ore carrier from the convoy I was guarding, and held it in front of me like a battering ram!
Janeway: (scoffing) What about his shields?
Chakotay: (triumphant) Why do you think my phaser banks were empty? The shields he had left weren't even as strong as tissue paper! I jumped to full impulse and just before impact I disengaged the tractor beam and veered over his ship. The Ram, on the other hand, went through him like a straw through a tree in a tornado!
Janeway: I CAN'T believe that actually worked! I trust you don't plan on any such heroics on our bridge.
Chakotay: (grins) That's what's so fun about this holoprogram, Kathryn. It's like being on the frontier of space travel... anythings possible. You should try it.
Janeway: Hmmmm. No thanks. Guiding Voyager through the Delta Quadrant is "frontier" enough for me. I want a challenge on the holodeck, I'll try sailing one of Tom's 1927 racing sloops.
Chakotay: (smiling) You're on! I happen to have time booked on holodeck #2 tonight - at 7 pm.... Care to join me?
Janeway: (turning a corner, begins to nod) I think I can find my deck shoes by then.
(as KJ & Chak round the corner, they see Naomi at the end of the glass walled corridor. She is leaning into the window, and appears to be crying.)
Chakotay: (murmers) Red Alert.
Janeway: (whispers) I may be a little late getting to the dock, Chakotay.
Chakotay: (turns to KJ) Don't worry. I won't sail off without you.
Janeway: (does a doubletake) Sounds like a promise...
(Chak smiles and exits.)
Scene Two
Windowed corridor on Voyager.
(KJ walks up to stand next to Naomi Wildman. She looks intently out the window at the star trails caused by Voyager's passing by at warp speed. Naomi happens to look up, and then jumps.)
Naomi: (brushing at her tears) CAPTAIN! I'm, I'm so sorry... I, I, I didn't mean to... didn't realize it was... Oh geeeezzzz. I've got to go home now.
Janeway: (still looking out the window) At ease, crewman. I just thought I'd join you in admiring this wonderful view.
(pause)
Janeway: Naomi? (KJ's hand drops to rest on Naomi's shoulder)
Naomi: Yessss, Captain?
Janeway: Why is the Captain's assistant crying in front of such a beautiful sight?
Naomi: (sighs) It's not a big deal, Captain. Nothing YOU need to bother with.
Janeway: Hmmmmm... Have you talked with your Mom or Neelix about this?
Naomi: (shakes head) No. Neelix would just tell me to "be nice" and Mom would just shrug and say, "These things happen - don't let it worry you."
Janeway: Well, what about Seven - or the Doctor? You get along well with them.
Naomi: (jerks to attention) Oh No! Seven would just look at me like I was a baby and say "Pride is irrelevent", and the Doctor would try to distract me with the next slideshow he's going to give the senior staff.
Janeway: The NEXT slide show... he's got another one planned?
Naomi: Uh huh.
Janeway: Well, I guess that just leaves me.
Naomi: (croaks) Oh Captain. I get so tired of Mezoti & the boys knowing everything. (she sniffs) I love them, I really do! But, its just... they remember EVERYTHING they ever learned as a Borg, and they show off all the time. (she peers out the window) You don't know what its like to always have someone correct you, or beat you to an answer whenever the Doc or Neelix or someone gives a pop quiz at school.
Janeway: (smiles as she strokes Naomi's hair) Oh.... I think I could guess.
Naomi: If there was something I knew that they didn't, then it wouldn't be so bad... but they've assimilated EVERYONE, they KNOW everything!
Janeway: (kneels down next to Naomi to look her in the eye.) Believe me, Naomi. The Borg don't "know everything." In fact, I know of at least one DQ race they haven't assimilated... what do you know about a planet called "Ocampa", and a wonderous race of people who live there?
Naomi: (hopeful) Nothing... except Neelix's friend Kes was Ocampan.
Janeway: (stands up) Well... I think that little deficiency in your education can be easily corrected. Walk with me crewman.
ACT ONE
Scene One
Day 3. Astrometrics.
(B'Elanna & Seven are working.)
B'Elanna: Damn! It's still not working. Try aligning the main deflector again.
Seven: Agreed...................... No Effect.
B'Elanna: I'm beginning to think Icheb's wormhole emmission detector is more trouble than its worth. It's been installed 4 weeks now... and it's been OFFline more than it's been on!
Seven: I concurr. Perhaps we should ask Icheb to assist us.
B'Elanna: (head jerks up/pride challenged) He's assisted us so many times in the last month, that I doubt there's something he knows about this sensor that he hasn't already divulged. Look - he's still in class... lets let him be. Anyway... for ONCE I'd like to figure this out without the help of a teenager... Okay?
Seven: (smiles slightly) Agreed. Realigning the deflector again...
B'Elanna: Good... look, lets reverse the polarity this time...
Seven: (surprised) It worked.
B'Elanna: Q'Plah! (she smacks Seven on the shoulder as Icheb walks in)
Icheb: Am I interrupting?
B'Elanna: No, Icheb. Just doing a little tweaking on your sensor array.
Icheb: (frowning at console) It was malfunctioning again? I do not understand why it does that. Perhaps I should just dismantle it and redesign its matrix. (moves towards the console)
B'Elanna: (frantic) NO! Don't you dare touch it!
(Icheb stops, and looks to Seven, puzzled)
Seven: What the Lt. means, is that we have spent 2 hours repairing it. We should wait for it to go offline again, before you dismantle it.
B'Elanna: If! IF it goes off line again, Seven. Think Positive!
Seven: Thinking "positive" is irrelevent, Lt.
Icheb: 2 hours? You should have called me to help.
Seven: You were otherwise engaged.
B'Elanna: (packing up her tools) So, how was school today?
Icheb: (frown) Confusing.
Seven: How so?
Icheb: Naomi presented a report on a species called "Ocampa". It didn't make sense.
Seven: (defensive?) Recall, Icheb. Naomi is quite a bit younger than you, and she hasn't been enhanced by Borg technology. You shouldn't expect her projects to be as advanced as yours.
Icheb: (shakes head) It's not that, Seven. I am used to her level of education, and I always take that into account. It's just "what" she said was highly unlikely.
B'Elanna: Explain.
Icheb: A race that lives only 9 years? It grows to full adulthood in 1, reproduces by 4 & descends into senility and death by 9?
B'Elanna: Whats your point?
Icheb: Impossible.
B'Elanna: Improbable, maybe, but not impossible. We made 1st contact with this race in our 1st days in the DQ... and one member even traveled with us for 3 years... before you came to Voyager.
Icheb: Kes.... yes, I recall the effects of her return visit last year. (turns to Seven) Neelix liked the report & gave her an "excellent" grade. But neither he nor Naomi could answer Azan's question.
Seven: Which was?
Icheb: How does a race survive, producing 1 child per couple?
B'Elanna: (stopping at the entrance to astrometrics) Excuse me?
Icheb: Naomi said the Ocampa go through a fertile time at age 3-4. It is the only time they can procreate, and that they produce only one child. Azan pointed out that each succeeding generation would be half the size as the last... until it was extinct.
B'Elanna: (puzzled) Perhaps...
(a Com badge beeps)
Janeway's voice: Janeway to Lt Torres and Seven of Nine... respond.
B'Elanna: Yes, Captain?
Janeway's voice: Report to the bridge at once.
B'Elanna: Aye, Captain. (turns back to Icheb) Good question, Icheb. But I'm sure there's some logical explanation. Why don't you ask the Doctor?
Scene Two
Voyager's Bridge, day 3.
(Harry Kim & Tom Paris are at their posts. Chakotay is at the console behind Janeway's chair. Janeway and Tuvok are at tactical.)
Janeway: Has the probe sent back anything yet?
Chakotay: No. Harry? Can we remodulate the sensors to detect gravimetric distortions in the theta range? I'd like a better idea of what's out there before we get too close.
(turbolift doors open - out walks B'Elanna & Seven)
Kim: If we disengage the main deflector from all secondary activity, and realign it, we should be able to reach into the theta range.
B'Elanna: What's up? We just spent 2 hours realigning the deflector for the wormhole detector. Why must we disconnect it now?
Janeway: (points to display) We've detected mild gravimetric distortion waves, reminiscent of the ones associated with that alien communication array we found 3 years ago. I want to know exactly "how" similar they are. Tom. Continue our present course, warp factor One. Harry. Realign the deflector. Seven. I need you and Tuvok to find out if a microsingulairity is at the epicenter of these distortion waves, like last time.
Seven: For what purpose, Captain. We do not need a comm system to reach Earth, now that we use the monthly pulsar driven midas array
Janeway: A microsingularity has easily 1,000,000 times the power of a tetrion generator. If it exists, I'd like to see if B'Elanna can adapt the Catapault technology to use that power... and catapault us all the way home.
B'Elanna: (clearly intrigued) The gravimetric distortions we encountered near the last array would tear any catapault apart.
Paris: Not only that, but how would we even get Voyager to the array without making those distortions worse? Remember, our warp core accentuated them, that's why Tuvok had to take a lower powered shuttle to even approach it.
Kim: The Hirogen certainly approached it. They had 3 warp capable ships closer to the array than we ever came.
Janeway: Harry, study the data from our encounters with the Hirogen at the Array and elsewhere. See if their ships or tactics were different enough from ours to allow them to approach it. B'Elanna? Start designing a "what if" catapault - using the last microsingularity as a template while Tuvok & Seven try to tell us if our ticket home is sitting out there in the middle of these distortions.
Scene Three
Doctor's office. Day 5. Afternoon.
(the Doctor, Naomi, Mezoti, Icheb, Rebi & Azan are there.)
EMH: I'm sorry children, but your tutorial with Lt Torres in Engineering has been canceled. The Captain has had the whole dept working on a special project for the last 2 days and she can't break away.
Icheb: We are aware. Have they confirmed whether another comm array, powered by a microsingularity is at the center of the distortions?
EMH: No - we're still not close enough for that. So... it looks like we have a free afternoon. What would you like to do?
Azan: Doctor? Is the Captain going to destroy this array like the last 2?
EMH: Excuse me?
Rebi: The last 2. She destroyed the microsingularity driven comm array 3 years ago.
Mezoti: And the Caretaker's Array 7 years ago.
Icheb: Does the Captain really want to go home?
Naomi: (flustered) Why of course she does!
Mezoti: Then why does she keep blowing everything up?
(Seven walks into Sickbay)
Seven: She does not "blow everything up", Mezoti. Excuse me, Doctor...
EMH: (relieved at the interruption) Yes?
Seven: I need to ask you to excuse Icheb from class today. He's needed in Astrometrics.
EMH: (waves his hand) Certainly, take him... I don't suppose you need anyone else?
Seven: Icheb will be sufficient. (she turns to the children) Do not let your imagination jump to unfounded conclusions. The Captain destroyed the Caretaker's Array to protect a race from genocide. She did not think "her" convenience was worth their extinction. She destabilized the microsingularity... which destroyed the last comm array, in order to save myself and Commander Tuvok from death at the hands of the Hirogen.
(Seven turns to leave with Icheb, but stops at the door)
Seven: Rest assured... she doesn't do it "because she wants to stay" in the DQ.
(Seven & Echeb exit sickbay)
Naomi: See! I told you so!
Mezoti: Doctor, there is something I don't understand about the Caretaker in Naomi's report. Why did he bother to pull all these ships from across the galaxy to try to procreate? Why not just clone himself?
EMH: Well, I never actually met him... when he was alive... so I can't be certain. Perhaps cloning his species was beyond his medical technology?
Azan: Why not just creat a holographic Caretaker? Someone like you, to watch over the array & the Ocampa? From Naomi's report, it's obvious he had the advanced holographic skills necessary to such a project.
Rebi: No - what if the holoemmitters went offline, or they lost power, or became overloaded with years of operations... No. The Caretaker SHOULD have constructed an Android, one like that Commander Data that Lt Torres told us about last month. He could have run the array for centuries on a separate power source.
Mezoti: It seems the Caretaker had better choices for a replacement than beings on ships 70,000 light years away in the Alpha Quadrant
EMH: Uhm, hmmm, well now, maybe he was more "lonely" than we realized. Maybe he was also searching for a companion.
Naomi: Doctor? There was 1 part of the Captain's story that I didn't understand when she told me.
EMH: What was that, Naomi?
Naomi: How come the Caretaker could find Voyager 70,000 light years away, but he couldn't find Suspira, his former mate, less than 2000 lightyears away?
EMH: Suspira spent most of her life in subspace, and he couldn't search there.
Mezoti: Perhaps, but it seems strange that he didn't notice the several thousand Ocampa living on HER Array.
EMH: Who knows, Mezoti, maybe he did find her... and she refused to "come home".
Naomi: Seven just told us NOT to jump to conclusions!
Rebi: Why didn't he just transport everyone to a new world with water?
Azan: Yes. And another thing... why did he wait until 6 months before dying to even start searching for "replacements"?
EMH: Hmmmm... I see several good ideas here to turn into your next school projects! I think we'll declare this afternoon "Independant Study" and let you start working on them!
(the kids get up and run out of the office, arguing about who got to do which idea.)
EMH: (wipes forehead with back of his hand) Thank God I've already lost my hair.
forehead with back of his hand) Thank God I've already lost my hair.