Re: Star Trek: DTI: Watching The Clock Review Thread
My Review:
I really enjoyed the overall concept and most of the character development in Watching The Clock. Dulmur and Luclsy were the highlight of the novel, in my opinion, and Luclsy's 'time-savant' nature was a very interesting way to make him a unique character. Now, Dulmur and Luclsy may deal with causality loops and paradoxes instead of murders and assaults, but they really are a police duo at heart, and the dynamic between them was natural, realistic, and entertaining.
I also loved the concept of the 'time-tunnel'...it could easily have become a deus ex machina by its very nature, but the way it was limited meant that the problems involved with it could not be hand-waved away, and the way the characters had to learn to deal with that was entertaining and interesting. I also enjoyed seeing the rivalry between the uptime and downtime factions, with Jena Noi and Juel Ducane and everyone else - and the mysterious Aegis really got my imagination flowing.
One part that was slightly annoying was that at times it seemed the story was bending over backwards to name drop notable Trek episodes involving time travel and to have every single time travel paradox/circumstance in the book take place at one point or another.
Also, the sexuality in the story was unnecessary and was actually jarring at times - the story was developing and timey-wimey things were happening and then out of nowhere, 'Time to be reminded that Ranjea's Deltan!' Five pages later 'Look, Ranjea's still Deltan! He's irresistible and sensual.' Five more pages and...well, you get the idea. Sure, he's Deltan...but that didn't need to be blatantly stated every five pages.
All in all, I give Watching The Clock 3 out of 5. Enjoyable story, cool concepts, decent execution. You are an excellent writer, Christopher, and I really enjoy reading your work.