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Tales of the Border Service: Birth and Rebirth

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Chapter Seven

Stardate 54640.90 (29 August 2377)
Aboard a Cosmo-Works Planet Hopper N10778

Glenda Hurst closed her eyes and forced herself to breathe steadily through the contraction. As the tightness in her abdomen subsided, she opened her eyes to see the worried face of her husband gazing down at her.

Scott took her hand and kissed it. “I’m so sorry I got you into this,” he said.

“What, getting me knocked-up?”

That evoked a smile. “Ha! No, I should have insisted we take a transport instead of this piece of junk. Now we’re stranded in the middle of nowhere with a baby on the way.”

“With air, heat and help on the way,” she reminded him. “You did a great job of taking care of the ship, babe. We’ll be okay.”

“Sure we will,” he said with more confidence than he felt. “So – how much longer?”

“Until our little Sara arrives?” Glenda’s face grew pensive as she checked her bio-scanner. “I’m almost completely effaced and 60% dilated. 7 hours, maybe less.”

Her eyes met Scott’s. “You may have to deliver the baby, Scott.”

His eyes widened. “What? Dammit, Glenda – I’m an engineer, not a doctor!”

She smiled and caressed his face. “That’s okay. I can talk you through it.”

He snorted. “You know the saying about Doctors who treat themselves.”

“Yes – those doctors have a fool for a patient. But I’ll just have an advisory role – you’ll be the attending obstetrician.”

“That makes me feel so much better.” He forced a grin and kissed her gently. “Hopefully this conversation will be moot and our rescuers will arrive soon.”

“I’m sure they wi . . . ,” she replied, just as another contraction kicked in, making her catch her breath.

* * *
Stardate 54640.90 (29 August 2377)
USS Pamlico
Polar Orbit, Jinar II

Lt. Bane and Chief Anderson gazed down at Lt. Commander Nor Huren as the corpsmen laid her gently on the gurney. The left side of her face was badly swollen and purple-red blood oozed from a cut near her temple. Her skin had taken on a pale orange cast that looked decidedly unhealthy. Her eyes were open but she appeared to have difficulty focusing. She licked her lips.

“Wha happened?” Nor Huren’s voice was slurred.

Bane glanced at Corpsman Mike Burdeshaw, who was running a bio-scanner over the Rigellian.

“She has a concussion, but no inter-cranial bleeding. She should be okay in a day or so, but she really ought to be checked out by an M.D. just to be safe. I can give her an anti-shock compound to stabilize her until we can get to a starbase or rendezvous with a ship that has a medical officer.”

Nor Huren reached out unsteadily and grasped Bane’s sleeve. “Issa ship okay?”

He smiled. “You managed to put a dent in the bulkhead, but the ship is fine. We’re going to get you to a medical facility and get you checked out further.”

She tried to nod and winced. Closing her eyes, she said sleepily, “Thas good. You’ve got th' ship, Jack.”

Her hand fell limply from Bane’s sleeve. Jack glanced anxiously at Burdeshaw who glanced at his bio-scanner.

“She’s okay,” replied the Corpsman. “Out cold, but her vital signs are good.”

Bane frowned. “I thought it was dangerous to let someone with a concussion go to sleep.”

A tolerant smile formed on Burdeshaw’s lips. “Perhaps for a Human, but not a Rigellian. She’s lapsed into a healing sleep. Her race has remarkable recuperative powers, but I’d still feel better if we let a physician check her out.”

“You’ll get no argument from me,” agreed Bane.

“Bridge to Lt. Bane.” Pudge Patterson’s voice came over Bane’s combadge. It was obvious that the young ensign was in distress.

“Bane, go ahead Ensign.”

“Sir – we just received a priority message from Starbase 500 to assist a ship in distress.”

Bane glanced at Chief Anderson, whose eyes widened in surprise.

“Did you apprise them of our situation?” asked Bane.

“Ah, no sir. Not as such. Uh, just a sec. . . they’ve reopened the channel. I’m piping it down to you now.”

Bane stepped over to a wall-mounted com-screen. He found himself face to face with Rear-Admiral (upper half) Edward Jellico.

Jellico was not smiling.

“Who are you?” the Admiral asked, brusquely.

“Lt. Ian Bane, Executive Officer of Pamlico, sir.”

“Where’s your commanding officer?” Bane sensed a rapidly approaching tsunami about to crash down from the sector commander. He stepped aside and gestured toward the cluster of corpsmen surrounding Nor Huren’s gurney.

“She’s injured sir – hurt in a work pod accident just now.”

The tide of wrath flowing from Jellico abruptly abated. “How badly? Do you need assistance?”

“No sir. Our chief corpsman says it’s a concussion but she should be alright. We were planning to cut short our run and head in to Starbase 500 so she can receive further attention.”

“Is she stable enough for you to carry out a rescue mission?”

Bane blinked, momentarily at a loss for words. “What kind of rescue, sir? We're not exactly fitted out for SAR operations.”

Jellico apprised Bane of the situation. “For what it’s worth, Bane, I realize I’m asking a lot, but your ship is ten hours closer than the Grenada. I know you’re concerned for your C.O., but those civilians take priority. Get your ship on-scene ASAP and do what you can to help those folks.”

Bane nodded. “Aye Admiral, we’ll get underway immediately. But you do understand, sir – we’re not equipped to deliver babies.”

“Duly noted, Lieutenant. Do the best you can – at least the lady involved is a sawbones – maybe she can give guidance to your medics. By the way, you might want to discuss communications protocol with your O.D. Remind him that it’s a bad idea to cut off a superior officer who’s in the middle of giving an order.”

Bane smiled wanly. “I’ll be sure to convey the message, Admiral.”

Jellico nodded, a ghost of a smile on his deeply lined face. “Considering the circumstances, I’ll cut the young man some slack. I’ll leave it to you to further his education – make sure he learns. Keep us posted on your progress. Good luck to you, Bane. Starbase 500, out.”

As Jellico’s image was replaced by the Border Service logo, Bane let out a long breath and shook his head. He tapped his com-badge.

“Bane to Bridge.”

“Bridge – Patterson here.”

“Ensign, break orbit and get us on course to the location of that stranded civilian vessel. Did you get the coordinates from Starbase 500?”

“Yes sir, we have them - they're about six hours away at maximum warp.”

“Good. Once we’re clear of the system, take us to maximum warp.” Bane paused, “By the way, the Skipper should be okay. She has a concussion, but Corpsman Burdeshaw believes she’ll recover fully.”

“That’s great to hear, sir!” The relief in Patterson’s voice was evident.

“Is Chief McManus still on the bridge?”

“Yes sir – shall I transfer you to his station?”

“No. Give me fifteen minutes then turn the conn over to the Chief. I want you to come down to the ward-room. We need to talk.”

There was a slight hesitation on the other end of the channel. “Yes sir. I’ll be there.” Bane picked up the slight note of dejection in Patterson’s voice.

"Very well. Bane out."

And who am I to provide guidance for our young Mr. Patterson? He thought morosely. If he follows my example he’ll end up doing life in a supermax penal colony.

Get over it, Bane! The other voice in his head suddenly roared. Quit your mewling and do your job! You’re in command now, like it or not. Do your bloody job!

“Mr. Bane?”

Jack broke out of his private reverie. “Yes Corpsman?”

“We’re moving the Skipper to Sick Bay. Her vitals are steady and she seems to be sleeping comfortably.”

Bane nodded. “Good. Say, Mike – I have a question for you."

"Sir?"

"Ever delivered a baby?"

Burdeshaw blinked. "A baby what, sir?"

* * *
 
"A baby what, sir?"
:lol:


Nice to see Jellico knows when to ease up when the situation calls for it.

You seem to be treading closer and closer to a long-lingering fanfic I tried to write (dealing with a fast-response medical ship).


Also, was wondering what you're experience with childbirth is? The only reason I ask is so many people get their knowledge from TV and movies, but then you used the term "effaced" which generally doesn't get thrown around much.

Just hoping this doesn't turn into a cliched, screaming women in labor in an emergency type story.


And I hope this isn't too harsh. I always enjoy all the border patrol stories I've read so far and this is another good one.
 
Nice to see Jellico knows when to ease up when the situation calls for it.
Jellico may be hard-nosed but he's also wise enough to size up a situation quickly and address it appropriately.

You seem to be treading closer and closer to a long-lingering fanfic I tried to write (dealing with a fast-response medical ship).
No danger of that, though it sounds like an interesting premise. You should pursue it.

Also, was wondering what you're experience with childbirth is? The only reason I ask is so many people get their knowledge from TV and movies, but then you used the term "effaced" which generally doesn't get thrown around much.
My wife is an obstetrics nurse and worked in labor & delivery at a hospital for years.

Just hoping this doesn't turn into a cliched, screaming women in labor in an emergency type story.
No worries. That won't happen.

And I hope this isn't too harsh. I always enjoy all the border patrol stories I've read so far and this is another good one.
Thank you!
 
Well so far Bane seems to have a handle on things, internal dialogue aside. The question is how will he act under pressure?

Talking about pressure, I wonder if this is the right time to pull poor Patterson aside for a little chat on Starfleet regs. On the other hand, he does suddenly find himself acting first officer and could use a prep talk. But is Bane the right man to deliver it?

Things will be getting very interesting here very quickly.
 
If Patterson was a little more 'gutsy' (no pun intended) then I'd imagine him questioning who Bane is to give him lectures on protocols and proceedure.

Loving this tale TLR. The Pamlico is proving to be very entertaining and an excellent playground for her ecclectic crew.

-Bry
 
If Patterson was a little more 'gutsy' (no pun intended) then I'd imagine him questioning who Bane is to give him lectures on protocols and proceedure.

To which Bane ought to respond by asking Patterson who the fuck he thought he was to question anybody on any procedure given that he can't even handle a simple emergency response without panicking. And then he should throw Pudge's ass in the brig.

Patterson needs a transfer to the Sundown.

Bane hasn't done anything wrong so far. He just needs to take things one day at a time.

Still good, T.
 
That Bane/Patterson conversation should be fun. Even if you don't write the scene, it's still fun in my mind. :censored:
 
Thanks for reading and your comments! Bane is being forced to set aside his personal demons and act like a commander. Once, he was a competent and effective Starfleet officer before his long slide into Corellan Acid addiction. He's going to have to reach deep within - not only to redeem himself, but a young, scared ensign who is on the verge of blowing his own career in the Border Service.

There are no guarantees of a happy ending. We'll have to wait and see. In the meantime, they have a rescue operation to carry out without the proper personnel.

I think I've figured out the Pamlico's motto. "We're in over our heads - keep swimming!" :lol:
 
Good motto!
Story is developing nicely, as are your characters. Better get to it-I found this on the bottom of page one...
 
Chapter Eight

Stardate 54641.13 (30 August 2377)
USS Pamlico
Running at Warp 8.4

Petty Officer Tarl stood by the main engineering status board and tapped the display with a stubby finger. The Tellarite engineer considered any number of curses, insults and slurs from his vast vocabulary of scathing remarks, but none could urge one iota more out of the warp engines. Instead, he settled for a very human-sounding sigh.

“Eight point four – I believe that’s a new record,” came a familiar voice from behind.

Tarl turned to face Chief Anderson. “If we could get a decent layover and recalibrate the coils, we might get eight point five,” he opined in his typical gruff manner.

Sage nodded as she checked an instrument reading and made a notation on her PADD. “These days, there’s a shortage of ships, a shortage of personnel and a shortage of time for proper repairs. Unfortunately there’s never a shortage of jobs that need doing, so ‘decent layovers’ fall to the bottom of the priority list - at least for us.”

Tarl snorted. “It’s going to bite us in the ass eventually, Chief. We’re already getting harmonic feedback from the warp coils – if we stay at this speed many more hours, we’ll fracture a Dilithium crystal.”

“Give the chamber a five second gamma burst. That should stabilize the crystals.”

“I already did. Great mother, what a gods-awful noise that made!” He jammed a finger into a fur-tufted ear for emphasis. “At this rate, I’ll be deaf before I make first class.”

Anderson smiled. Tellarites had much more sensitive hearing than Humans, though she could never be sure when her crusty assistant's griping was legitimate or feigned.

“We've got hearing protectors in the locker,” Sage pointed out.

“Designed by a Ferengi and manufactured by Pakleds no doubt. Thanks, but I’d rather chew off my toes and stuff ‘em in my ears – it would be less painful.”

Chief Anderson’s smile faded as she checked the readouts for the impulse engines. Though currently off-line, number two impulse manifold still showed a high temperature reading.

Tarl followed her gaze and chuffed. “Yeah, there’s that too. But we would need a decent layover . . .”

“Yeah, yeah, I know. The Skipper said we may be able to set aside a couple of days for repairs when this run is over. Try back-flushing the number two manifold with coolant.”

“You’re the boss,” replied Tarl. They both knew it was a stop-gap measure. Hopefully, they would not need full impulse when they dropped out of warp.

That could be a problem.

* * *

Ensign Patterson was already in the ward room when Lt. Bane arrived. Pudge stood when the XO entered, a sheen of nervous perspiration glistening on his forehead.

“Have a seat Mr. Patterson,” instructed Bane as he stepped to the replicator and ordered coffee. “Do you want anything?”

Pudge shook his head and clasped his meaty hands together on the ward room table. “No sir. I’m good.”

Bane settled into a chair across from the young officer and regarded Patterson from behind his coffee mug. Aside from the sweat on his brow, Patterson was gamely holding up under the XO’s gaze.

Jack took his time sipping at the hot coffee, considering the best way to address Patterson. The room was quiet, save for the subtle hum of the ventilation system.

“You are probably the least qualified person on this boat to give a pep-talk to this kid,” said the voice of the addict. “Drink your coffee, send him along and go back to your quarters. You have what you need there.”

“You're the XO and in temporary command,” rebuffed the voice of the officer. “It’s your responsibility. Don’t you dare quit on this kid.”

Bane’s expression remained impassive as the internal argument raged in his mind. Patterson swallowed, wishing the XO would say something. Even screaming would be better than this cloying silence.

“Why are you here, Mr. Patterson?” Bane finally spoke. His voice was soft and conversational.

Patterson blinked, surprised by the question. “Uh, because you ordered me to meet you here?”

Jack allowed himself a small smile. “Sorry - I phrased that poorly. I want to know why you are on the Pamlico, Ensign.”

Patterson frowned as he considered the question. “Well . . . I graduated near the bottom of my class at the Academy. I barely passed the physical qualifications. I guess because buoy tenders are pretty much the only place for losers like me.” His eyes suddenly widened as he realized how that sounded.

“Oh, sir, I didn’t mean . . .”

Bane waved off the apology. “Forget it. I’m sure you’ve heard all about me. Probably 90% of it is true. I'm sure you don't think Captain Nor Huren is a loser. My understanding is she gave up a promising career path with the Corps of Engineers to command this tub - which, by the way, carries out important if unglamorous assignments. But we’re talking about you right now, Ensign.” Jack settled back in his chair and cocked his head slightly before continuing.

“The stop-loss order was rescinded months ago. You could have left the service but you chose to stay. Why?”

Patterson considered the question for a few moments. “Well, I guess because I like serving here. It's been interesting - like you said, we do some important things - you know, keeping subspace relays working, clearing navigational hazards, and stuff like that. Captain Nor Huren has been really nice and encouraged me a lot. So has Chief McManus.” He shrugged. “The whole military protocol thing is new to me – no one in my family ever served in Starfleet or the Border Service. Heck, not too many ever went off-planet except maybe to visit Disney Moon or the Solar Fair on Mars.”

“You went through the two-year program, didn’t you?” asked Bane.

Pudge nodded. “Yes sir - everyone did when I entered the Academy..”

During the war, the Academy instituted an abbreviated program designed to turn out officers in increased quantity if not quality. Unfortunately, the urgent need for replacements brought about a loosening of standards and curtailment of course work. Many of these graduating cadets (a.k.a. “cannon fodder”) received no specialized training. Most had never stepped foot on a starship (other than a holo-simulation) before being assigned to a front-line ship.

Several of these raw ensigns had landed on the Greeley when Bane was still the transport’s first officer. None had survived the war.

Bane placed his mug on the table and rubbed his forehead. “Look . . . Patterson . . . you were badly short-changed in your training – I get that. But you’ve been on the ship for over a year now. You’ve got to step up and at least act like an officer, because you are technically second in command. That means, Ensign, that you must make decisions. You can’t wait around for Chief McManus or someone else, especially when you have the conn. Dithering about can get people killed. Are we clear on that?”

Patterson nodded, his face downcast. “Yes sir.”

Jack stifled a sigh. “Today for example – you received a directive from Starbase 500 to undertake a rescue operation. The proper response would have been to say, “Aye, aye,” get us underway, then you explain our situation. A distress call trumps anything else we are doing – always.

“But sir – the Skipper was . . .”

“No buts, Ensign. That’s why we have a chain of command. If the C.O. falls, the next in line takes over. Fortunately, Captain Nor Huren will recover, but even if not – we still have to respond. Hell, I know we’re not normally tasked for search and rescue . . . that doesn’t matter. When we receive an order like that, we do our best to carry it out until the assignment is completed or we’re relieved. Understood?”

“Yes sir. I apologize for screwing up on that.”

“Ensign, I don’t want an apology. I want you to learn from this and to do it right next time.” Bane suddenly felt tired. The old phaser wound in his side throbbed, the regenerated nerve endings firing off the occasional flare of pain to let him know that they were working just fine, yes-siree. He just wanted to end this conversation.

“Patterson, guys like Chief McManus and me – this is the end of the road for us. One more screw-up for either of us and we'll get our walking papers. You on the other hand, still have a shot at career advancement. The way I see it, you have two choices. You can stay scared and do just enough to get by. If you go that route, I would estimate you have two to four years before you either quit or are mustered out as our ranks build back. Your second choice – the one I recommend – is to learn this ship inside and out. Make it your business to know how everything works. Arrive early for your shift and stay late if necessary. Do your absolute best, pay attention, and for God’s sake, at least act like an officer instead of a bloody ship’s mascot! I’ll wager if you do that, in two to four years you might make jay-gee and earn a billet on a cutter or even a fleet ship. Can you do that?”

Patterson was nodding along as Bane spoke, hanging on his every word. “Yes sir! I will.”

Bane nodded in return. He managed not to wince as the pain in his side flared. “Good answer. Now, get on back to the bridge – you still have about an hour left as O.D. I’ll be along to relieve you in a while.”

Pudge stood, a grateful smile on his round face. “Thank you, Mr. Bane – I appreciate your counsel and I won’t let you down.” He left the ward room in a much better mood than when he entered. Jack thought he heard him whistling down the corridor.

Bane let out a long, weary sigh and rubbed his eyes. His temples throbbed as the familiar siren song of Corellan Acid beckoned.

He closed his eyes, willing himself to ignore the temptation. After a few minutes the sharp sense of need and anxiety slowly faded, leaving Bane feeling empty and depressed. At least his side was no longer throbbing so badly.

Bane lifted his coffee mug in a mock toast for an imaginary gathering and declared, “Let’s hoist one for Lt. Jack Bane - royal hypocrite of the highest order.”

The empty ward room failed to return his toast. The silence mocked him.

"Frak me, Matilda" he muttered as he took a swig of the now-tepid coffee.

* * *

Stardate 54641.27 (30 August 2377)
Aboard a Cosmo-Works Planet Hopper N10778

The hopper drifted languidly along at point zero two cee. Scott Hurst could thank the laws of physics for that small blessing. Of course, at that speed, they would make it to Starbase 500 roughly on their baby’s 1200th birthday. At least when discovered, their bodies should be nicely preserved by vacuum.

Quit being so maudlin, Scott! he chided himself. Scott tended to be pessimistic (he preferred “pragmatic”) whereas his wife, Glenda, was the eternal optimist. But as the labor pains increased in both frequency and intensity, it was Scott who was putting on the brave face.

“It won’t be too much longer, sweetheart,” he said while stroking her thick hair. In fact, it would be two more hours before help arrived – a ship called Pamlico that belonged to the Border Service. The OB-GYN at Starbase 500 had informed Scott that the ship lacked an M.D. but that “an experience corpsman” was on-board.

As an engineer during his days in Starfleet, Scott had not rubbed shoulders with many corpsmen, but in his recollection they were basically crewmen trained in first-aid and able to read a bio-scanner. Hardly reassuring.

Another ship, the USS Grenada, was also in route but would not arrive until several hours after the Pamlico. At least they would have a proper CMO and well staffed sickbay.

Glenda had appeared to take the news in stride, but as her labor continued, the stress and fatigue began to erode her confidence. Though she still managed to hide it, Scott could tell.

She was afraid.

A gasp of pain from Glenda caused him to turn away from the hopper's status panel. She panted to help offset the pain of the contraction – a strong one by its duration – until it finally subsided. She glanced up at her husband, an expression of anxiety on her face.

“Hand me the scanner,” she directed.

Scott complied and watched as she expertly ran the device over her abdomen. By her expression, she did not like what was displayed.

“What’s wrong?” he asked.

Her eyes darted toward him then back at the scanner. “The baby is breech.”

“Okay – what does that mean?”

She licked dry lips. “It means she wants to come out butt first. It's gonna make the delivery much more difficult, but it can be done. I’m more concerned that her umbilical cord might prolapse and cut off her blood-oxygen supply. If that happens, I’ll need a c-section to remove the baby.”

For a moment, Scott merely stared at her blankly. “You mean – remove the baby surgically?”

She nodded, a mask of concern on her face.

“Uh, well, when the Pamlico arrives . . . couldn’t they just beam the baby out?”

That elicited a slight smile. “No. Stop thinking like an engineer, dear. That would rupture the placenta – I would probably bleed to death and the baby might die of shock.”

“Oh. That's no good, then. What are the other options?”

She closed her eyes as another contraction took hold. Scott watched the timer. This one lasted ten seconds longer than the last one.

“Whew!” she exclaimed, drawing in a deep breath. That was rather intense. Hand me the obstetrics kit . . . no, the blue one. That’s it.”

Scott complied and watched as she pulled out two hypo-sprays and a laser scalpel. He regarded the last device much the way he might watch a poisonous serpent.

She picked up one of the hyposprays, made an adjustment, and set it back on the tray. Glenda regarded her husband, her face pale and serious.

“What’s the ETA of that ship?” she asked.

“Less than two hours.”

She nodded and chewed her lower lip as she thought. “Scott, I’m going to administer 5 cc of Cyclopenadine. If I don’t, the baby will probably want to make her debut in about an hour. No offense, but I don’t think you’re ready to handle a breech delivery. Right now the fetal heart rate is good, so I think a delay won’t hurt.”

“But? . . .” Scott could read her like a book. There was doubt and a trace of fear on her face.

“But I’m well along into my labor. It’s possible that even with this small dosage, the Cyclopenadine might stop the contractions completely. If that happens, I’ll definitely need a Ceasarean. At least by then, help will have arrived.”

Right – a ship full of satellite mechanics with a corpsman probably accustomed to treating bruises and hangovers, Scott thought to himself. He forced a smile of encouragement on his face.

“Sounds like a plan, Babe. What’s the other hypo for?”

“That’s to counter-act the Cyclopene when we’re ready for labor to procede. It works about 80% of the time.”

“I see.” He really didn’t though and didn't ask about the other 20%. His mind was busy spinning through various scenarios – none of them good. The life of his wife and daughter were hanging in the balance. He hoped to God that someone on the buoy tender could help.

* * *
 
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More dammit! More! :bolian:

Loving the building tension in the shuttle, and considering doctors make the worst patients, Glenda's holding together well I would say (all things considered).

-B
 
So Bane gives his prep speech. I love his self-depreciating humor. And yeah he makes a good point. But it doesn't really matter if he feels hypocritical, it doesn't even matter if he believes his own words or not. What matters is what Pudge believes. And it looks as if he has taken the speech to heart. Good for him.

Also continue to enjoy the medical dilemma. We're so used to those being about people close to death because of sickness or disease, a premature pregnancy is quite refreshing and any bit as serious.

As usual, terrific stuff
 
Bry - Yes, Dr. Hurst is holding up well so far - but labor has a way of peeling back the layers of calm and civility. We'll see how well she manages as things become more . . . laborious. (Sorry! :lol:)

So Bane gives his prep speech. I love his self-depreciating humor. And yeah he makes a good point. But it doesn't really matter if he feels hypocritical, it doesn't even matter if he believes his own words or not. What matters is what Pudge believes. And it looks as if he has taken the speech to heart. Good for him.
What makes Bane a better XO than Kep Tien ever was is that he realizes that people work better when inspired and motivated rather than terrorized. Tien may have been efficient but she was cold and callous (surprise!) and saw Pudge as a mere cog in a machine. A cog that did not fit very well.

Also continue to enjoy the medical dilemma. We're so used to those being about people close to death because of sickness or disease, a premature pregnancy is quite refreshing and any bit as serious.

As usual, terrific stuff
CeJay -Yeah, I thought dealing with the Antarean Plague or Bolian Dysentery would be a bit much. :eek: And a new born baby will add a much-needed "Awwww" factor to the story. ;)

Thank you for reading and commenting!
 
What makes Bane a better XO than Kep Tien ever was is that he realizes that people work better when inspired and motivated rather than terrorized.

The best XOs inspire when possible and terrorize when necessary. Neither is the total package.

Tien may have been efficient but she was cold and callous (surprise!) and saw Pudge as a mere cog in a machine. A cog that did not fit very well.

She was right. Someone who's been through basic training, been through two years of officer's school and is currently serving on a ship with a military hierarchy and still hasn't figured out the "military protocol thing" needs to be made a civilian immediately. Make all the excuses you like for him, looked at objectively Patterson has no business being in any crew that requires any level of military order and discipline.
 
Okay, so it's taken me awhile to catch up, but I'm finally there. First of all, as usual good sir, you have pulled together an interesting group of people to help you tell a compelling story. I really enjoy this tale, and am looking forward to seeing where it's going. In addition, I have to give you kudos for addressing the addiction issue and especially for doing it in an interesting, realistic and believable way. I have been fortunate (shall we say) in my life to have known people who have struggled with and mostly overcome various addictions; helping them at times (to the extent I was able) through some of the rough spots ... and being supportive on a few occasions when it was time to pick up the pieces and start over again. And, I have to say - to the extent that I may have gained any small insights from those experiences - I'm seeing a lot of reality in what you've written. Very nicely done. :bolian:
 
You write a doctor very well (though, I'm not one -- hey, it impressed me ;) ).

Despite my earlier comment, I think Bane handled that well. The trick is to get the best out of what you have. Bane seems to realize that.
 
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