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Geometries of Chance - ST: Gibraltar

Chapter 18

Nice quote from the Floyd! Like it! :techman:

Odd cargo crates? Huh? :wtf:

Nice one Rixx. It always bugged me throughout all incarnations of Trek (and even in some real life military moments) when somebody declared an order was either viable or desirable because they were not on scene to see that exactly the opposite was the case. I'm just hoping that Ixis has been truly put in her place. :angryrazz:

Ah, now I understand the cargo crates! That one really slipped past me though to be honest I don't feel too bad considering it was only discovered by accident by Shanthi. :lol:

Crafty Orion bas... ahem. Nice work from the Chameloid there! :censored:

The pace increases as the Sentinel battles the beast. Hooked? Me? Yeah. :techman:
 
Chapter 19

And Lightner gets to perform his favourite task again! He must really be revelling in the opportunities this mission has given him despite the dire circumstances. :lol:

A time traveller who rejuvenates?? I, erm, well... :whistle:

And with Parlan's badass cousin doing a number on the bridge, this is not looking too bright. :evil:

With reference to the past few chapters, Ramirez's potential really seems to be coming to the fore and that third pip is well deserved. The timing of its arrival is classic writing.:techman:

The style and pace of the narrative continues to impress and despite my current lack of ready access to the story I'm eager to dive back in whenever chance permits!!:sigh:

Nice work as always Sam. :techman:
 
Woohoo! Dunleavy's back! Nice moment with the hand raising. :lol:
Thanks much - writing that scene gave me a smile myself. :)

OK so I was wrong about Plazzi. Was that an intentional misdirection or are you just lulling me into a false sense of security? Hmmm, his comment of "I'm about a month away from a well deserved second retirement, Commander. Rest assured I'm not going to start gambling with my life now," makes me wonder. :shifty:
Not. Saying. ;)

Sandhurst's torture and the Baron's seeming revelling in it is very dark and heart rending but extremely well portrayed. :ouch:
Much obliged. I wanted to put Donald through his paces, push him to the edge and beyond... I think I succeeded.

Serving aboard the Gibraltar wouldn't be my first choice of posting methinks. :evil:
You know, I hear that a lot! :lol:
 
And Lightner gets to perform his favourite task again! He must really be revelling in the opportunities this mission has given him despite the dire circumstances. :lol:
Any chance the kid gets to fly by the seat of his pants... he'll take it. :techman:

A time traveller who rejuvenates?? I, erm, well... :whistle:
Oh, yeah... I went there. Hey, alternate dimensions, right? And I'm sure The Doctor and The Master weren't the only two of their kind to ever wander off with some... uh... high-value property. :devil:

And with Parlan's badass cousin doing a number on the bridge, this is not looking too bright. :evil:
Remember, it's always darkest just before you realize you're completely @&*$<./'d! :lol:

With reference to the past few chapters, Ramirez's potential really seems to be coming to the fore and that third pip is well deserved. The timing of its arrival is classic writing.:techman:
My thanks. :cool: And yes, in many ways Ramirez may have been even more qualified than Sandhurst to take command at the beginning of the series, but each is learning from the other and growing as a result.

The style and pace of the narrative continues to impress and despite my current lack of ready access to the story I'm eager to dive back in whenever chance permits!!:sigh:

Nice work as always Sam. :techman:
A thousand thanks for the kind words and continued patronage.
 
Geometries of Chance - Chapter 21

Chapter 21

Lar’ragos counted himself as fortunate to have found the timeship’s medical ward so quickly. The room was filled with all manner of analytic and treatment equipment, some absurdly antiquated while other tools were advanced beyond the lieutenant’s comprehension.

It did however support an automated diagnostic and treatment chamber. Lar’ragos placed Sandhurst into this ‘autodoc’ and activated the machine. Tiny armatures scanned and prodded the captain’s mangled body. Intravenous feeds were inserted, and the device opened a small laparoscopic incision in Sandhurst’s abdomen and began a minimally invasive procedure to stem the man’s internal hemorrhaging. The devices’ output monitor indicated that the machine was only capable of stabilizing Sandhurst and would endeavour to keep him alive until more complex medical technology could be brought to bear on his severe injuries.

To Lar’ragos it simply meant that for the time being, his friend would live. His first priorities were clear: incarcerate the Baron and the Orion captain, and then learn how to operate this unlikely craft. He was so consumed with the tasks at hand that the irony of hoping for more time to complete his work while aboard the Baron’s temporal ship was completely lost on him.

*****

USS Gibraltar

The gravitational stresses from the planet had dwindled to nothing and Ramirez gratefully gulped air with lungs no longer compressed by multiple g’s. Plazzi called out from behind her, “One thousand kilometers altitude. We’ve achieved orbit.” On the other side of the bridge, Ashok throttled back the traumatized impulse engines and silenced the cacophony of alarms that issued from his work station.

The bridge was silent as a tomb. Ramirez had experienced her share of close calls during her career, and a bit of self-congratulatory celebration was not unheard of among personnel who had just survived a particularly harrowing incident. There was none to be had here. People sat quietly as they wrestled with their emotions or attempted to puzzle out why they were still alive. The exhaustion written on their faces was palpable.

Ashok lurched for the turbolift, anxious to determine the full measure of the damage done to the ship.

Ramirez let loose a long, slow breath. “Mister Lightner, issue a general mayday. Code one-alpha-zero… ship in distress.”

*****

USS Sovereign
Entering Pierosh star system, Full Impulse


Captain Rixx sat with his customary rigidity, his ever present aura of calm unperturbed by the mounting anxiety of the bridge crew. Localized subspace distortions in the Pierosh system had prevented long range scans of the second planet and its vicinity, as well as made communications with Gibraltar impossible. They had heard nothing in the past three days, and even Rixx had to admit the silence was ominous.

“Penetrating system boundary now, Captain.”

The ship jostled slightly as the heavy cruiser pierced the front of ionized gas that had apparently accreted at the farthest edge of the star’s gravitational influence. This unusual phenomenon was only one of countless mysteries surrounding the discovery of the illicit research station and the subsequent attacks on Starfleet personnel.

Seated next to Rixx, the increasingly frosty Special Agent Ixis sat perusing her padd for the umpteenth time in the last hour as she re-checked her team’s readiness to deploy at a moment’s notice. Ixis had still not forgiven him for cutting short her attempt to intimidate Gibraltar’s first officer. Rixx knew there would be hell to pay for crossing an operative of Temporal Investigations, but he was confident that he possessed enough seniority and political leverage in Starfleet to ride out any unpleasantness.

Rixx mused darkly that Commander Ramirez, providing she and her crew had managed to survive, would have no such protection.

“Sensors clearing, sir.”

Rixx raised his head slightly as he awaited a complete report. Ixis fidgeted beside him, conspicuously uncomfortable at having to await the captain’s clearance to deploy her team.

“Reading… Constitution-class starship in orbit of Pierosh II. She appears intact, but has suffered serious structural damage, Captain. Life signs are strong and clear. The ship is running on auxiliary power and is missing both warp nacelles.”

The captain nodded with evident relief. “Warm up the tractor beam, Lieutenant Evenson. It appears they’ll be needing a tow back to DS9.”

“Incoming signal, sir. They’re hailing us.”

The Bolian captain stood and ignored Ixis’ sullen look as she folded her arms across her chest.

The screen shifted from an image of the battered century-old starship to the tired but confident visage of Liana Ramirez.

Rixx offered the slightest of smiles. “Commander, once again, apologies on our tardiness. It appears congratulations are in order…”

*****

“I am not your foe, Starfleet.” Kutav had been grateful to find himself alive after his thrashing at the hands of the Baron. He had been less pleased, however, to find himself hanging once again in the temporal chamber’s suspensor field.

Lar’ragos gave a look of exaggerated skepticism. “You don’t say? Those bridge recorder images of you slitting my security man’s throat suggest otherwise, you cowering vuut.” The El Aurian took silent pleasure from watching the conflicting emotions clash on Kutav’s face at his use of an extremely profane Orion insult. To his credit, despite the fact that he’d have killed Lar’ragos for such a slur under other circumstances, the ahmet refused to be provoked.

“We can help each other here, Starfleet. Your captain swore he’d release me in return for my help in freeing him.”

Lar’ragos grimaced. “My captain is in an induced coma, clinging to life. Whatever deal you had with him can’t be confirmed, and is of no consequence to me.”

“Then where do we go from here? Do you kill me?”

Lar’ragos shook his head as he answered coldly, “No. We strike a new deal. You help me gain control of this vessel, and I’ll let you live.”

“You’ll release me?” Kutav pressed the issue.

“I said I’d let you live. That’s the best you’re going to get from me. You will pay a price for your actions, Orion. Count on that.”

“And what of the Baron? Is he dead? Why haven’t you negotiated an agreement with him instead?”

“Too dangerous,” Lar'ragos replied bluntly. “He lives, but he’s locked safely away in stasis. There he’ll stay until I turn him over to the proper authorities.”

Kutav assessed the man, and quickly decided that this peculiar Starfleeter was fully capable of killing him, injured prisoner or no. The ahmet had not achieved his present rank and station without the ability to read other humanoids with uncanny accuracy. It seemed that after a lifetime of preying upon others, it was now his fate to serve as a pawn in the schemes of lesser men. “So be it,” he sighed.

*****

Gibraltar was now safely cocooned within Sovereign’s tractor beam. The larger starship’s engineering personnel swarmed over their smaller cousin as they helped to stabilize her primary systems in preparation for departure.

Meanwhile, the Temporal Investigations teams were scrutinizing every meter of Gibraltar, the remains of the runabout Brahmaputra, and the meteorological research station. Special Agent Ixis had abandoned the Sovereign with enthusiasm, and now spent her time micromanaging all aspects of the TI containment team’s investigation.

There had still been no word as to the fate of Captain Sandhurst or Lieutenant Lar’ragos. The security chief had gone missing along with the android Parlan, vanishing from the pockmarked turboshaft. The TI investigators had found no traces of transporter energy in the vicinity but surmised that something must have spirited them away.

The Sentinel spheres had remained in sporadic contact with the ship as most of their of their time and effort had been directed towards stabilizing the system’s star and trying to undo some of the damage wrought upon the Pierosh system in their battle with the Baron’s creature. They stubbornly refused any contact with TI personnel directly and insisted on utilizing Gibraltar’s senior staff as intermediaries.

Ramirez smirked slightly as she relayed that detail in one of the dozens of after-action reports she was required to file as acting commanding officer. She had alternated between the stiflingly mundane reports and the achingly painful death notifications to the next-of-kin of those personnel killed during the mission. This was usually a burden assumed by starship captains, but for the second time in as many months Ramirez found herself forced to shoulder the responsibility. First to the loved ones of Phoenix’s fallen, and now to the families of her own shipmates.

She found herself struggling to relay some small bits of personalized information into each of the letters, to let the families back home know their loved one was valued and appreciated as an individual, not just some nameless cipher. The fact that this mission was being classified at the highest levels of Starfleet didn’t help matters any. Your daughter died sacrificing herself to protect the Federation. From whom, they’d ask. Under what circumstances? No answers would be forthcoming.

The entrance to the ready room chimed and prompted Ramirez to call, “Come in.” The doors parted to reveal Special Agent Ixis, still clad in the norexaprene bodysuit that served as a body temperature regulating garment worn beneath Starfleet environment suits. Ramirez glanced up at her from a stack of padds and a data terminal, unable to keep a scowl from taking over her features. “Is it casual Friday already?” she quipped. “Nobody told me.”

Ixis strode into the room, her bearing equally hostile. “Commander.”

Ramirez set down her padd and leaned back in the chair. “I’ll make an educated guess that this isn’t a social call?”

Ixis moved forward to brace her arms at the far edge of the desk and lean across it as she directed a baleful glare at the XO. “I came here to tell you that another starship will be arriving in orbit within the next few days. It’ll be a dedicated science vessel that my teams will be staging from. The Sovereign will tow your little ship back to DS9 where all the king’s horses and all the king’s men will endeavor to put it back together.”

In response, Ramirez offered her most insincere smile. “Goody.”

Ixis’ feral grin widened. “I also wanted to serve notice that my official report of this incident will contain some very unfavorable observations on your level of cooperation and professionalism.” She leaned back and released her grip on the edge of the desk, unconsciously putting some distance between herself and Ramirez. “I wouldn’t get too comfortable in Captain Sandhurst’s chair. When I’m done with you, First Officer on this scow will have been the highlight of your career.”

Ramirez sat forward slowly. “So, it’s come to making threats, has it? I’m really perplexed as to why that is, Special Agent. The situation here has been resolved favorably. The dimensional breach is closed, the Sentinels have reported that the creature is no longer a threat, and we’ve countered what could have been a disastrous cross-dimensional incursion. How is that not a ‘win’ for everybody concerned, aside from the traumatized crew of this ship and her missing captain?”

“The Baron’s timeship was the objective here, Commander. Even having that black-hearted bastard in our custody would have made a nice consolation prize, but you couldn’t provide that, either.”

Ramirez stood. “We got the job done, Ixis. That’s what counts here. You’ve never served in Starfleet; that much is obvious. If you had, you wouldn’t be holding loyalty to one’s captain against us, and against me in particular.”

Ixis rolled her eyes and chortled, “Oh, please! Don’t give me that ‘captain-my-captain’ crap. I’ve read your service jacket, Commander. After Sandhurst pulled you off Admiral Covey’s staff, you filed no less than half a dozen formal protests and requests for reassignment. You don’t even like the man!”

She folded her arms across her chest, and Ramirez gripped her elbows to keep her hands from trembling with anger. “Regardless of how I felt about my reassignment here, regardless of my personal relationship with Sandhurst, and regardless of whether he’s dead or alive at this very moment, the man is my captain!” She fixed her fiercest gaze on the Efrosian woman. “I owe him the same respect and loyalty that I will expect from my XO when I’ve earned the rank of captain.”

Ixis whirled around and looked back over her shoulder as she stalked out of the ready room. “Not if I have anything to say about it. And don’t think Covey can save you, Ramirez. My contacts in Starfleet Command go a lot higher than a lone rear admiral.”

*****

The door to Ensign Kuenre Shanthi’s guest quarters chimed. This roused him from a troubled sleep. In truth, the intrusion was less an interruption than a blessed reprieve from his tormented dreams. Image upon haunting image had overlapped in his mind until sleep had become a purgatory from which he struggled to escape.

Elisto Plazzi stepped through the door at Shanthi’s beckoning. He smiled at the tired young man and the senior Science officer apologized for waking him. Shanthi waved away the effort dismissively. “It’s okay, sir. I wasn’t getting much rest anyway.”

The ebony skinned young man padded to the replicator station in bare feet to order himself a cup of strong coffee. He joined Plazzi in the sitting chairs as he tightened his bathrobe around his waist as he sat. “What can I do for you, Commander?”

Looking uncommonly earnest, Plazzi countered, “Call me Elisto, please. I actually came here to see what I could do for you, Ensign.”

“How so, sir?”

Plazzi’s grin broadened as the younger man nibbled at the bait. “I want to offer you a job, Mister Shanthi. Mine.”

Shanthi sipped at his coffee while looking skeptical. “You going someplace?”

The older man bobbed his head, answering simply, “Back into retirement. I was reactivated for the war. The war’s over.”

He made a show of glancing around the guest cabin and then Shanthi finally let his gaze rest back on the senior officer. “Not exactly the most prestigious berth in the Fleet. What’s a tour on this ship going to get me, besides killed?”

Plazzi chuckled. “Not all our assignments are this dangerous. Here you’ll get to make a name and career for yourself. Nobody can ever accuse you of currying favoritism from Command on a small support ship. And,” he offered with a wink, “it’s a helluva lot roomier than a runabout.”

He found Plazzi’s grin infectious, and Shanthi answered with one of his own. “You’re saying I could find a home here?”

Plazzi’s demeanor shifted to become more somber. “Absolutely. This is a terrific crew, and I’ve served on some exceptional vessels in my time, so I know what I’m talking about.” He gestured to the ensign. “Your talents will be invaluable to these people, and you’ll be appreciated for who you are… not to whom you’re related. As for what they’re getting out of the deal, they’ll be getting a top-of-his-class academy graduate.”

Shanthi blew softly across the surface of the coffee to cool it, looking thoughtful. “Why me, Elisto? Seriously, my graduation standing aside?”

Inclining his head, Plazzi noted, “You’re bright, you’re likeable, you do your job without any expectation of fanfare or accolades.” He began to tick off these bullet points on his fingers. “You’re observant, we wouldn’t have located the Baron’s craft in the cargo bay without you. You’ve no problem picking up a phaser when it’s called for, and you can hold your own in a fight.”

As he cradled his mug, Shanthi closed his eyes and tried to imagine himself on the bridge of Gibraltar. He opened them to look at the older man, his expression serious. “We’ll see, Elisto. I liked Captain Sandhurst. Not many men in his position would take the time to sit and comfort some no-name junior officer whose not even assigned to his vessel. But Sandhurst's gone, and I don’t know if I want to sign onto a ship that’s just taken a pasting and lost its captain.”

Plazzi smiled knowingly and cautioned, “Don’t count Donald Sandhurst out just yet. The man has been proved to be one surprise after another since I’ve been aboard.”

*****

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Geometries of Chance - Chapter 21

Chapter 21 <cont'd>

Olivia Juneau turned off the padd and let it drop onto her chest as she lay atop a biobed in Sickbay. The away team members’ reports had referred to her leadership under fire with such phrases as ‘inspired’ and ‘outstanding.’ She had never before had words like that associated with her. The most damning thing of all is that she couldn’t remember any of it.

She’d supposedly experienced some grand epiphany, made some kind of fantastic breakthrough that had apparently allowed her to tap unknown resources of strength in order to lead men and women in battle. But whatever it was she had learned, whatever had motivated this amazing transformation, it was gone. Once again she was left the junior lieutenant whose latest claim to fame was losing a runabout under her command and getting someone killed. Tears welled in her eyes at the thought of all that she’d lost on the surface of Pierosh II.

Beside her lay a sleeping Master Chief Tark. He had similarly awakened after hours in an inexplicable near-comatose state, his mind also a blank when trying to reference the events of the past two days. Unlike her, however, he had absorbed the missing memories with nothing more than a characteristic bout of colorful swearing. Having vented, he’d done little more since than sleep and make irascible demands on medical staff.

Juneau was so wrapped up in her own pain and misery that she almost failed to hear the low humming sound that accompanied the transmat beam that deposited Captain Sandhurst on the ward’s main examination table. A nearby med-tech gasped, then tapped his combadge to alert Taiee of this miraculous event.

*****

The squalling winds here bit so fiercely they made the blustery gusts of Pierosh II seem warm by comparison. Snow and ice blew in all directions to score Ahmet Kutav’s skin the instant Lar’ragos pushed him through the timeship’s doorway. The Orion fell heavily into a snow drift and gasped with the sheer onslaught of sensation as cold permeated every cell of his body.

The El Aurian, his face partially obscured behind the high collar of an ancient woolen coat, sneered at the man. “Enjoy. Compliments of the starship Gibraltar.” He closed the door of the black pillar, ignoring the pirate’s pleas for mercy as the man struggled to his feet and pounded on the side of the timeship until it became insubstantial.

A sensor pod detected heat and movement where there should have been none, and telescoped up through the snow pack to observe.

Kutav gathered his meager clothing around him as best he could, though the thin fibers offered little resistance to the twin assaults of freezing temperatures and clawing wind. He knew that he had only moments to live, and could not begin to fathom where the Starfleet officer had deposited him. Kutav had done everything Lar’ragos had asked of him, from helping him to learn the fundamentals of piloting the bizarre craft to assistance in placing Sandhurst in medical stasis. Despite the sheer audacity of the emotion under the circumstances, Kutav still felt a keen sense of betrayal.

The hiss of hydraulics momentarily drowned out the howling wind, and Kutav turned to see a hatch opening, a dark maw that extended up through the icy crust. Bulky figures moved within the shadows there, and emerged to reveal bodies clad in animal fur, leather, and metal.

Klingons! Kutav marveled. What is this… Agony flared suddenly as one of the figures drove a pain stick into his side that knocked the Orion to his knees.

A squat Klingon draped in furs smiled cruelly down at him. “We do not receive many unannounced visitors here on Rura Penthe. You are most welcome!” Throaty laughter from the others confirmed Kutav’s darkest fears. “Bring him inside, men. Let’s show our new Orion friend here our idea of hospitality.”

And with that, Ahmet Kutav, merchant-prince, formerly of the Rigellian flagged high speed courier Sethret was dragged below the surface to meet his destiny.

*****
 
Geometries of Chance - Chapter 22

Chapter 22

Ramirez watched silently through the operating theater’s observation window as Taiee and her medical team labored. They had been attending to Captain Sandhurst’s injuries for well over two hours now, and if Ramirez had correctly gauged the urgency of the surgical team’s actions, they had much work yet to do.

She watched the careful precision of the EMH, the hologram disconcertingly uncovered in the presence of Taiee and the other nurses, clad in blood red surgical smocks and masks. Exhausted as she was, Ramirez found she had to remind herself repeatedly that the artificial doctor was only photons and forcefields; it exuded no bacteria, carried no viral agents with which to infect the patient. The EMH led the repair of Sandhurst’s major organ systems while Taiee and her assistants attended to bone fractures and worked to stabilize his cellular chemistry.

As she reflected on the events of the past few days, Ramirez found herself wondering what she would do should it fall to her to lead these people on a permanent basis. She had assumed the responsibility without thinking in the cascade of crises that had enveloped them. Now, however, faced with the possibility of Sandhurst’s death or permanent incapacitation, Ramirez discovered that she was beginning to doubt her desire to fully take command of this ship. She had wanted to earn a captaincy on her own merits, not inherit one by default.

She had been tested on this assignment as never before, and some small part of her grudgingly acknowledged that she had doubtless learned more about the realities of command aboard Gibraltar than she would have setting appointments and fetching coffee for a member of the admiralty. Ramirez had suffered the loss of a starship under her command, struggled with the morality of the Federation/Klingon occupation of Cardassia, and had withstood the abduction and torture of her commanding officer. These were the kinds of ‘adventures’ that many younger, more naive officers craved. Right up to the moment when they actually happened.

Her troubled reverie was ended when Ramirez felt a whisper of air ruffle her hair. She frowned and turned to determine the source just in time to see a dark doorway close into nothingness. Pava Lar’ragos now stood with her in the viewing gallery. Ramirez was surprised, but not shocked at the unorthodox officer’s unexpected entrance. She managed a wry smirk. “About time, Lieutenant.” She looked the man over and added, “You’re out of uniform, mister.”

Lar’ragos was clad in the fashions of some long bygone age, a worn leather jacket over a threadbare tunic and loose slacks. His hair had grown noticeably, and the presence of a well kept beard spoke of weeks, perhaps even months away from the ship. He inclined his head towards Ramirez by way of greeting. “Sorry, sir. It took me a while to learn how to pilot the Baron’s ship.” He returned her smirk and held up a yellow, tear-drop shaped crystal in his hand.

The exec cast a glance at Sickbay’s entrance. “Does Temporal Investigations know you’re back?”

“No,” he shook his head fractionally. “This was my first stop.” Lar’ragos stepped forward to join her at the window. “How’s he doing?”

She crossed her arms and rubbed her eyes tiredly with her thumb and index finger. “I’m not entirely sure. Taiee’s initial report was that he’d suffered a great deal of damage, some of which had been rather clumsily repaired. That, plus evidence of his having been placed in prolonged post-traumatic stasis has thrown off his cellular chemistry and exacerbated his injuries.”

Lar’ragos’ expression hardened. “I did what I could for him, Commander.”

She reached out a hand and placed it on Pava’s arm as she directed a concerned look his way. “I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to criticize your efforts. I’m sure you did everything possible.”

Lar’ragos was silent for a long moment, his eyes fixed on the efforts of the medical team. “I never wanted this for him. He shouldn’t have to know this kind of darkness.”

Ramirez gave him a curious glance that begged elaboration.

“When Donald and I first met, we were both in our plebe year at the academy. I was a hardened, cynical old wanderer. I’d swore to myself that I’d never put on another uniform, and yet when I got my Federation citizenship I signed up anyway.” He smiled at the memory. “I found myself surrounded by the pampered, idealistic children from dozens of planets who hadn’t tasted real war in generations.”

Ramirez blew out an amused breath. “Sounds like your version of Hell, but you managed to stick it out.”

The El Aurian nodded slowly. “I wouldn’t have if I hadn’t I stumbled upon this painfully shy, awkward young man who was more comfortable field stripping a warp coil than he was conversing with other flesh-and-blood people.”

The exec looked at him incredulously. “What could the two of you possibly have had in common?”

Without meaning to, Lar’ragos reached out and touched the transparent partition separating them from the operating theater. “He reminded me of myself as a young man. Before the Borg. Before the wars. Back when I still had faith.” He retracted his hand to stare down at the deceptively youthful looking appendage. “I took it upon myself to bring him out of his shell. In turn, he renewed my belief in the basic goodness of people, though he was unaware he’d done so.”

“And now?”

“Now?” Lar’ragos closed his eyes as if shielding them from a sight too terrible to behold. “Now I’m afraid he’ll have lost that innocence, that purity of spirit. The last thing I’d ever want is for him to end up like me.” He sighed and opened his eyes as if forcing himself back to the here and now. “What have I missed?”

Ramirez recounted everything that had transpired since the final battle with Parlan and the ship’s plunge into the planet’s atmosphere. Lar’ragos absorbed the information with detachment, remarking, “So, what this all boils down to is that TI is looking for a new toy. They could care less about thwarting the Baron’s plans or rescuing the captain.”

“That’s a fair assessment.”

Lar’ragos looked at Ramirez appraisingly. “And this Agent Ixis of theirs; she’s trying to torpedo your career?”

The exec’s jaw tightened at the mention of the other woman. “Not trying, Pava. After she files her report, I’m done for. At best I’ll end up riding a desk for the remainder of my career.”

As he pondered that Lar’ragos mused, “Perhaps not.”

Ramirez turned to face him. “You think you could stop her?” She frowned as she realized to whom she was speaking and her mind conjured dark thoughts. “Don’t you dare…”

He held up a hand. “Nothing like that, Commander, though it’d be no less than she deserves.” A smile spread across his features. “I was thinking more along the lines of leverage, sir.”

“Leverage?”

*****

Ixis ran her hand across the anachronistic looking control console and marveled at the mix of absurdly outdated switches and levers integrated into a mechanism so advanced that it would take the agency decades or longer to decipher its secrets.

From behind her, Field Agent Rupert Barnaby looked on with a mix of excitement and apprehension. He wasn’t sure which unnerved him more; their presence within an actual time machine, or the avaricious expression that radiated on Ixis’ face. That the young woman was driven and ambitious didn’t bother him per se, but the fact that she had no moral reservations with discrediting or destroying anyone or anything that stood in her path did. He had joined the TIA out of a sense of scientific wonder and service to the Federation. Barnaby thought Ixis saw her position within the agency as a means to an end.

She glanced back at him and deliberately ignored the silent form of Lar’ragos, who observed her exploration of the timeship from near the entrance. “What do you think, Barnaby?”

The older man quirked an eyebrow, reticent to share in Ixis’ gloating. “I feel like a cave man who’s been handed a tricorder.” He thrust his hands deeper into the pockets of his jacket as he warded off an ominous chill. “It’s going to take us a century to reverse engineer this thing.”

“Perhaps,” she said as she craned her neck to observe the spiraling pillars that arched up into the darkness overhead. “But imagine the benefits, Barnaby. We could field fleets of temporal starships, patrolling time as well as space.”

Barnaby cocked his head. “Swell. Yet another front for us to police.”

Ixis wheeled around to glower at the older man. “There’s a time war on, or hadn’t you heard?”

Barnaby met her venomous stare evenly. “We’ve no concrete proof of that. You and the others in your ‘time war’ camp point to ancient fables, temporal echoes, and a thin scattering of conflicting artifacts and call them evidence.”

She appeared about to launch into a diatribe, but he held her in check with mollifying raised hand. “And if… if there is a time war, who’s to say we didn’t start it,” Barnaby gestured to the surrounding craft, “with this?”

Lar’ragos interrupted their little quarrel with all the subtlety of a used spacecraft salesman. “So, I take it you’re interested?”

She shifted the focus of her ire and Ixis scowled at the El Aurian. “What do you mean, interested? We’ve just taken possession.”

He had deliberately refrained from putting his uniform back on in case of just such a confrontation. Lar’ragos frowned menacingly at Ixis from within his beard. “Says who?” He held up a glowing crystal control module in his hand. “This seems to indicate the vessel is mine.”

“I order you to release this vessel into our custody!” she seethed.

Lar’ragos gave that about two second’s worth of mock consideration. “Mmmmmmm… no.”

“I’ll have you thrown out of Starfleet and jailed!” Her face had contorted into a mask of rage, her usually attractive features colored by an unnamed darkness somewhere within.

He shrugged theatrically. “Don’t care. I’ve got a timeship. What the hell do I need Starfleet for?”

She withdrew a small disruptor from within her coat and aimed it at Lar’ragos, which prompted Barnaby to throw his hands in the air in a gesture of utter frustration. “Oh, for Pete’s sake, Ixis!”

The crystal glowed briefly in Lar’ragos’ hand, and his eyes took on a steely glint. “Be my guest.”

The weapon clicked uselessly in her hand as she depressed the trigger repeatedly. In response, she screamed in frustration and threw the disruptor at Lar’ragos. It missed his head by just a few centimeters, but he refused to give her the satisfaction of flinching.

“My terms are fair,” Lar’ragos began. “You write a nice, flowery report that praises the crew of Gibraltar, and Ramirez specifically, for single-handedly preventing what could have been a catastrophic breach of Federation security. In return, once I’m certain you’ve fulfilled your end of the bargain, I’ll release the timeship to you.”

Ixis calmed and appeared to mull this over. “And the Baron?”

“The Baron will be rendered into the custody of the Sentinels.”

“Then no deal,” she sneered.

“Okay,” he raised the crystal as his thumb traced a specific pattern across its facets. “The vessel’s transporter works on somewhat different principles than our own, but it’s just as effective…”

“No, wait!” she cried out, unprepared for her bluff to be called. “Why the Sentinels?”

“Because I don’t trust you, Ixis. You don’t have the patience to wait twenty or thirty years for TI’s engineering branch to figure out exactly how this ship works. In frustration, you’d cut some kind of idiot deal with the Baron in order for him to help you. Odds are he’d find a way to double-cross you and make off with this ship. And then he’d come looking for me and mine.”

She held up her hands in an uncharacteristic gesture of surrender. “Okay. All right. We’ll play this your way, Lar’ragos.”

“Good.” Lar’ragos stepped forward and smiled disarmingly. He walked to within a few paces of Ixis as he lowered his voice so that only she could hear him. There was no trace of menace in his voice as he spoke, as if it were simply a recitation of facts rather than a mortal threat upon her person. “I promise you that if you break this arrangement or seek any kind of retribution upon Liana Ramirez or any other of my crewmates, there is no place in time or space that I cannot find you.”

She swallowed and tried valiantly to maintain her proud demeanor. “Is that so?”

He nodded definitively. “It is.” His eyes bore into hers to convey a sincerity that she felt all the way down in her marrow. “I know you, Maya Ixis. I know that as much as you may pretend otherwise this iron maiden persona that you’ve created for yourself is nothing more than a fiction. I know what it was you saw your father burying behind the shed at your family’s homestead, Maya. I know that it’s why you’ve never felt like a complete person since that day. It’s why you cloak yourself in anger and aggression, and it’s exactly why you’ve spent your life looking for some way to turn back the clock.”

The color drained from her face as the darkest recesses of her soul were laid bare by a man who shouldn’t… who couldn’t know such things. Her mouth opened but no words would form on her lips.

He continued in the same calm, implacable fashion. “I vow that if you cross me I will hunt you down and end you, and I will do it with no more hesitation than a man would crush an irritating insect.” His disarming smile morphed into a blood chilling sneer. “Because while you play at being a stone cold killer, my dear, I am the genuine article.”

Like a prey animal caught in the trance of a predator, she looked deep into his eyes. And she believed.

*****

Warp 5 was the best speed the starship Sovereign could make while towing the smaller ship back to Deep Space Nine. Ramirez mused that it was at exactly this velocity that barely two and a half weeks earlier she’d wished for something to break the monotony of convoy duty. ‘Be careful what you wish for’ just doesn’t seem adequate in this circumstance, she thought as she arrived at the door to the captain’s cabin.

Sandhurst called her in at the prompting of the door chime, and Ramirez found him bent over his bed as he packed a hard-shell carryall case with civilian clothes. The transformation was startling. The captain had been carrying at least twenty unnecessary pounds when they’d arrived in the Pierosh system, but now his frame was rail thin. His once heavyset, jovial face was now drawn and gaunt, and his sallow skin now seemed to hang off of him. It was his eyes that were the most difficult for Ramirez. They bore a haunted look as if he were plagued by scores of demons only he could perceive. Sandhurst’s hair, which had been graying at the temples, was now shot through with random streaks of white.

It was still difficult to believe that in the dozen hours that he’d been held captive by the Baron, over three weeks had passed for the captain and his tormentor. The physical changes to his person were proof enough that the Baron’s assertions had been true.

Sandhurst glanced back as Ramirez entered the cabin’s sleeping cove. “Good evening, Commander. I’m guessing we’re getting close?”

“Yes, sir. We’re about thirty minutes out from DS9.”

He nodded amiably then closed the case and turned to face her. “You have my travel itinerary?”

“I do, sir.” She handed him a padd as she summarized its contents. “Enterprise will pick you up at DS9 and ferry you to the rendezvous with Ijav’Re. They’ll take you the rest of the way to Betazed. You’re scheduled for six weeks of treatment at the Nimrian-Sodl Clinic in Tinasse. Rumor has it that’s it’s a lovely hamlet that escaped any appreciable war damage.”

He smiled humorlessly. “Well, that’s a relief. We wouldn’t want the traumatized human causing the traumatized Betazoid war survivors any additional angst.”

Ramirez didn’t know how to respond to that, and so remained silent.

Sandhurst grimaced. “I’m sorry, that came out… ah…” he sighed. “I’m sorry.”

“No need to apologize, sir.”

He picked up the carryall and walked into the main cabin with Ramirez following. “Why Enterprise? I thought they were going to be hosting the Federation delegation to the treaty negotiations with Cardassia’s new government?”

“They still are, Captain.” Ramirez remained standing as Sandhurst set down the case and sank tiredly onto the couch. She noticed a set of rumpled sheets and a blanket adorned the couch while the bed had been untouched. “The first phase of your treatment will be with Commander Deanna Troi. She’s an acknowledged leader in the field of post-traumatic recovery, and she’s helped numerous people who’ve been through similar ordeals, including Captain Picard himself.”

“And when I get to Betazed?”

Ramirez assumed a somber tone. “The experts at the clinic will help to try and recover and reconstruct your altered memories, sir.”

Conflicting emotions warred on Sandhurst’s face, which eventually settled on a bland expression designed to mask the raging turmoil just beneath the surface. “That’s all well and good, but how the hell are they going to be able to tell which memories have been altered when I don’t even know!” He winced, having startled and embarrassed himself by shouting the last words. “God, I did it again, I’m sorry.”

His exec offered a supportive smile. She tried to steer the conversation toward less troubled waters. “Ashok estimates that repairs to the ship will take the better part of five weeks. By the time you return we should be finishing the trial runs with our new nacelles.”

Sandhurst sat forward and gripped the hair on the sides of his head. “This is just… insanity, Liana. I don’t know who or what I am anymore. If a person is the sum of their experiences, how can I ever be whole again if can’t differentiate between which of my memories are real and which ones that son-of-a-bitch planted in my head?” A shuddering sigh escaped from him. “My emotional reactions to things are all over the grid. I can’t find equilibrium; I can’t function.”

“That’s why we’re getting you help, sir,” Ramirez said quietly.

He looked up at her with those tortured eyes. They seemed to beseech her understanding. “Promise me, Liana. If they can’t fix what’s in here,” he rapped his knuckles against his temple. “If they can’t fix me, you’ll take command of Gibraltar.”

She felt a part of her heart wither at the idea of stepping into the shoes of yet another fallen captain as she replied, “Of course, sir,” with all the conviction she could summon.

*****
 
And once again, you do not ever want to get on Pava's bad side. Not ever. Looks like even Agent Ixis got this memo here. She appears to be one of the losers of this tale but she shouldn't feel like one after all she is getting a nifty time ship out of all this. And something tells me that she'll be able to do a lof of damage with it even without the Baron. And who knows, her cautious colleague might be right and she may end up starting this whole Temporal Cold War mess. I wouldn't put it past her.

Talking about losers the Baron clearly fits this category but how about poor tortured Sandhurst? He ain't going to recover from this episode in a long time, if ever.

Top notch stuff.
 
I actually went over to AdAstra a while ago and read all of the story because I couldn't wait any longer. It's an epic, really well written story. Ok, that sounds a bit banal. It's certainly one of the best fan fics I've ever read.
I also appreciate that you acknowledge the changes to the characters, in this case Sandhurst. Often, such things are brushed over, not just in fan fiction.

I also wonder about the ramifications in your universe. Starfleet now has a TARDIS, which is probably one of the most powerful things in the universe to have, despite its innocuous look. Let's hope they don't do anything stupid with it.
 
Geometries of Chance - Epilogue

Epilogue

Maintenance drones, engineering rigs and work-bee’s swarmed around Gibraltar as she rested at her mooring at the end of one of DS9’s lower pylons. Temporal Investigations had finally concluded their exhaustive debriefings of the crew. Having sworn them all to absolute secrecy regarding the details of their mission to the Pierosh system, TI had pulled a number of strings to have the starship’s repair and refurbishment made a Level-1 priority.

The other captains of larger and more noteworthy ships grumbled about having been bumped down the repair schedule by a ninety-year old escort while they simultaneously spun wild theories about why the ship’s mission and the nature of her damage had been so completely classified.

*****

“...and the timeship was taken aboard a specially outfitted Temporal Investigations transport vessel, escorted by two Defiant-class ships no less, and shipped presumably to the Terran moon.” Olivia Juneau’s alter ego completed her report as she observed the scarred face of her superior on the viewer.

Their communication was filtered through several layers of encryption, and Section 31 computer overrides would ensure that no trace of the conversation would remain.

“So, TI has custody of the craft. That’s good.” Her handler, Gennaro Laurent would have offered a relieved smile, if his wreck of a face could have mustered one.

“Good?” Juneau shifted uneasily in her chair, seated in her junior officer’s cabin aboard Gibraltar.

“Very much so. The Federation is now in possession of an incredibly powerful time travel mechanism. I much prefer the TIA having control of it than a foreign power, most especially a government hostile to Federation interests.”

Juneau directed a disapproving look at Laurent from across the lightyears. “I would have thought you’d want us to be in possession of such a device.”

Laurent smiled patiently, but Juneau saw the gesture as a ghoulish tightening of his lipless mouth. “We don’t have the resources to properly study such a complex temporal craft. We’ll let TI do the leg work for us. Eventually, they’ll puzzle it out, label the timeship ‘dangerous’ and seal it away in some deep bunker on Luna. If and when we should need use of the device in defense of the Federation, we’ll know right where to find it.”

Juneau chuckled lightly and remarked, “Of course. I should have known.”

Laurent cocked his head to the side and gazed at her approvingly. “You’ve done excellent work under difficult circumstances. And amazingly, you’ve also managed to maintain your cover. I hadn’t expected you’d last this long.”

She raised an eyebrow. “Well, that’s a backhanded compliment.”

“Not at all. It’s very hard to keep your shell in the dark when taking control of her body for as long a time as you did.” He inclined his head appreciatively. “Your last two missions have proven successful, and I’ve decided to extend your stay aboard Gibraltar.”

Juneau nodded. “Thank you. It’s nice to have even the illusion of stability for a while.” She deactivated her terminal and crawled back into her bed as she surrendered her consciousness once again. As the alter-ego submerged, she wondered how long Juneau’s fragile psyche could withstand the memory gaps. No matter how cleverly hidden, there were little untidy pieces after every episode that didn’t add up. And how would she resolve the dissonance between her uninspired everyday performance and her reported moments of brilliance that she could not recall?

*****

Laurent terminated the transmission. He leaned back in his office chair and stretched, then reached up to deactivate the holographic collar beneath his shirt. His face, or more accurately the image of his old, burned features, vanished to reveal a surgically flawless and youthful visage.

Thanks in part to S31 and Starfleet, a catastrophic threat to Federation security had been thwarted. Such things were Laurent’s stock in trade, of course, but he still marveled at how seemingly common such mortal dangers had become in recent decades. As the Federation grew and its influence spread, more and more species took notice, took measure, and took umbrage.

He buttoned the collar of his formal business tunic to conceal the holomatrix beneath, and deactivated the subspace scrambler hidden in his wrist chronometer. He instructed the opaque windows to clear and let in the brilliant mid-afternoon Parisian sunlight while he activated his comm. “Datrella, you can send in my next appointment.”

“Yes, sir. Your fifteen-hundred meeting is with the Talarian ambassador. We’ve had to push the Minister of the Exchequer back to oh-nine-thirty tomorrow.”

“Very well.” Laurent stood and prepared to offer the ambassador the customary Talarian greeting as the Section 31 senior operative returned to his day job as Chief of Staff to the President of the United Federation of Planets.

*****

The crewman took the carryall from Sandhurst’s hand and placed it atop the transporter pad before he stepped back to his station at the console. Ramirez and Lar’ragos stood with the haggard looking captain at the base of the steps as they said their goodbyes.

Sandhurst extended a hand to Lar’ragos, who held his grip firmly and spoke volumes of concern for his friend with his eyes. “You’re going to be fine, Donald. Your ship and crew are in good hands.”

The captain nodded distractedly in response and stepped up onto the dais. A sudden, intrusive thought occurred to Sandhurst, who looked to his security chief. “Pava, what happened to Kutav? I promised him that I wouldn’t have him locked up in a Federation penal settlement.”

Lar’ragos replied stoically, “I kept that promise for you, Captain.”

Sandhurst nodded and appeared vaguely relieved. He glanced at his exec and sent a meaningful look Ramirez’s way, a final reminder of the obligations she’d sworn to assume. She bobbed her head in acknowledgement, and gave the order to energize.

As the captain vanished in the transporter beam, Lar’ragos let out a long sigh as his shoulders slumped. “I hope they can help him.”

“Amen to that,” Ramirez said quietly. She turned to the transporter operator. “Chief Towsend, can we have a minute?” The man nodded and left the room as Ramirez turned to find Lar’ragos appraising her cautiously.

The El Aurian looked slightly perturbed. “I’m guessing this can’t be good.”

“You probably won’t think so, at least at first.” She offered him the padd that she had been holding discretely since they’d escorted the captain to the transporter room. Lar’ragos took it hesitantly and his eyes darted over the contents as his expression darkened.

Ramirez continued, “You’re a good man, Pava, and an asset to this ship. That being said, your behavior of late has been completely unacceptable and is adversely affecting the performance of your department.”

Lar’ragos looked up from the padd with hooded eyes. “I’m fine, Commander. I’ve buried my demons, and I’m ready to return to duty.”

The exec clasped her hands behind her back. “I disagree.”

He shook his head and Lar’ragos’ hands tightened on the padd as his knuckles whitened. “You want me to get my head shrunk, fine. But not by her.”

Ramirez quirked an eyebrow. “Lieutenant Dax is a capable, fully licensed counselor and therapist.”

Lar’ragos growled, “She’s also my friend. It’s inappropriate.”

“Uncomfortable for you, you mean?”

His lips drew into a tight grimace. “Sure. Fine. Uncomfortable works.”

The exec nodded understandingly. “Good, you need a little discomfort right now. You said you’d buried your demons. That’s not good enough. I want you to confront and banish them.”

Lar’ragos struggled to reign in his emotions. “And if I refuse?”

Ramirez gestured to the padd. “I’ve taken the liberty of drafting transfer orders on the chance that you’d fight this. Captain Amasov has an opening for a tactical officer aboard Endeavour.” Her expression was coldly neutral. “They’re slated for a deep space exploration assignment coreward of the Tevrian Gap. It should prove quite challenging.”

He focused his senses on her and probed for chinks in her armor, vulnerabilities he could exploit as he’d done with Ixis. “I’m not the only one around here with issues, Commander. Not by a long shot.”

Her face reddened and Ramirez stepped into him. She looked up into his face with focused anger. “You can knock that off right damn now, mister. You try playing head games with me and I’ll throw your ass in the brig for the duration.” Ramirez’s face clouded with a derisive scowl. “The very fact that you’d pull something like that with me only demonstrates how far out of balance your priorities are.”

Lar’ragos blanched, caught flat-footed by the truth of her words. “I… I’m sorry, sir.”

“Dax may be your friend, but she’ll have no problems calling you on your self-deluding bullshit, Lieutenant. She’s also the only therapist I can think of that can possibly have a real understanding of what centuries of psychiatric scars can do to as long-lived a species as yours.”

He nodded numbly and his eyes took on a far away cast. What had he been thinking? He’d been stuck in a fight-or-flight mode for months now.

Ramirez extended a hand and placed it on the El Aurian’s shoulder. Her demeanor downshifted to one of concern as she spoke softly. “I want the old Pava back. The one I could go to with my concerns and doubts. The one the whole crew could always count on in a pinch. I’m sure you remember him.”

He stood rooted in place. His mind tracked back over his behavior for the past weeks as he called up example after example of anger, hostility, and downright abusiveness. “Maybe you’re right…”

“Maybe so,” Ramirez echoed and moved to the doorway. She turned back. “You’ve got your first appointment with Ezri in one hour aboard the station. Your orders, Lieutenant, are to locate and recover one Pava Lar’ragos and bring him home.”

He took a deep breath. “Aye, sir.”

*****

END​
 
I actually went over to AdAstra a while ago and read all of the story because I couldn't wait any longer. It's an epic, really well written story. Ok, that sounds a bit banal. It's certainly one of the best fan fics I've ever read.
I also appreciate that you acknowledge the changes to the characters, in this case Sandhurst. Often, such things are brushed over, not just in fan fiction.

I also wonder about the ramifications in your universe. Starfleet now has a TARDIS, which is probably one of the most powerful things in the universe to have, despite its innocuous look. Let's hope they don't do anything stupid with it.
Thanks! This story evolved from my curiosity as to what led to the ‘future’ time-travel technology evidenced in the various Star Trek series, from the faux Professor Berlinghoff Rasmussen’s hijacked 26th century time-pod in TNG’s ‘A Matter of Time’, to the 29th century Federation Timefleet ships shown in Voyager’s ‘Future’s End’ and ‘Relativity.’

Add to that Enterprise’s inexplicably tangled Temporal Cold War arc, which when added to these other examples led me to ask, “Where did the Federation get their hands on such technology?”

Throw in a rogue Gallifreyan Timelord, a zombie-Q super-weapon, the meddling of Temporal Investigations, some nasty Orion pirates… and you’ve got yourself one complex and diverting story.

I’m very glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you’ll continue on with the series to see how the events here continue to impact the characters and the ship. :)
 
And once again, you do not ever want to get on Pava's bad side. Not ever. Looks like even Agent Ixis got this memo here. She appears to be one of the losers of this tale but she shouldn't feel like one after all she is getting a nifty time ship out of all this. And something tells me that she'll be able to do a lof of damage with it even without the Baron. And who knows, her cautious colleague might be right and she may end up starting this whole Temporal Cold War mess. I wouldn't put it past her.

Talking about losers the Baron clearly fits this category but how about poor tortured Sandhurst? He ain't going to recover from this episode in a long time, if ever.

Top notch stuff.
Pava can be ferocious when he’s protecting his friends and fellow crew, especially from someone he knows to be a self-serving fraud.

Ixis and her fellow TIA personnel will doubtless have their hands full in trying to decipher the secrets of the Baron’s timeship. As I posited above, it is perhaps this very device that ultimately leads to the Federation’s mastery of time-travel, as well as the formation of some of the various factions in the possible Temporal Cold War. However, as the many iterations of Trek have decreed, for those in the present, the future has yet to be written… and those future events may not unfold in the same way that we might expect.

The Baron is safely in the custody of the Sentinels for now, but someone as dangerous, capable, and cunning as he is probably can’t be contained indefinitely.

Glad you’re enjoying the story for a second time, CeJay.
 
I’m very glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you’ll continue on with the series to see how the events here continue to impact the characters and the ship. :)

Definetely. By the way, it's great how you manage to sprinkle outrageous revelations almost casually throughout the epilogue. I mean Juneau's handler.
Well, at least, Pava got a bitter-sweet ending. Let's hope he gets his problems under control and achieves some sort of peace of mind.
 
Great wrap-up to a monumental story. I especially appreciated the way Ramirez handled Pava. The man has clearly lost his way recently and it's good to see that Gibraltar's XO refuses to be intimidated by the El Aurian. A lesser woman may have been. But Ramirez don't take no crap from no-one ...

You know what, reading this again has really made me hungry for some new Gibraltar. Any chances we're going to see more of Gravity, Treacherous Waters or Chains of Errors, soon? All high caliber stuff and I wanna get me a piece of that.
 
Great wrap-up to a monumental story. I especially appreciated the way Ramirez handled Pava. The man has clearly lost his way recently and it's good to see that Gibraltar's XO refuses to be intimidated by the El Aurian. A lesser woman may have been. But Ramirez don't take no crap from no-one ...

You know what, reading this again has really made me hungry for some new Gibraltar. Any chances we're going to see more of Gravity, Treacherous Waters or Chains of Errors, soon? All high caliber stuff and I wanna get me a piece of that.
Thanks, CeJay... and I am working on it. As soon as I discover where I left my muse, I'll buckle down and finish those stories! :cool:
 
OMG! :alienblush: What with health issues, work, my own writing and then more health issues I really got out of the loop on this, and it was my loss.

Having read it again from the beginning, I can only say Sam (as I've said countless times mate) you should be in print!

I'm not going to spoil the ending of the story by recapping what I loved about it (read it yourself, you deserve it! :p) but I'm more than happy to *BUMP* it back to the top of the pile.

All I will say is this; As an amateur writer, I've learned some things here!

Thanks Sam!:bolian:
 
OMG! :alienblush: What with health issues, work, my own writing and then more health issues I really got out of the loop on this, and it was my loss.

Having read it again from the beginning, I can only say Sam (as I've said countless times mate) you should be in print!

I'm not going to spoil the ending of the story by recapping what I loved about it (read it yourself, you deserve it! :p) but I'm more than happy to *BUMP* it back to the top of the pile.

All I will say is this; As an amateur writer, I've learned some things here!

Thanks Sam!:bolian:
Much obliged for the kind words, sir. :) I'm very pleased you enjoyed the story so much, and I hope you'll take the opportunity to read the further adventures of my crew.

Having read it again from the beginning, I can only say Sam (as I've said countless times mate) you should be in print!

THANK YOU!!! I've been telling him that for YEARS! But, will he listen to me? No!

We need to preach it to the world! You tell 'em, brother! :bolian:
:alienblush: You make me blush, TrekkieMonster. Thank you!
 
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