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Should novels set in the JJVerse rectify the film's plot holes?

when you're putting together a project where you know there's gonna be a sizable contingent of die-hard fans standing by to nitpick everything you do.

To quote Gene Roddenberry, "If I listened to the fans, Star Trek would be shit."

When he elaborated on that stance, it was more along the lines of if he did what the fans always said should happen, Star Trek would be shit, and in the same breath say that he'd always listen to what the fans have to say, but never let them be the deciding factor.

You don't create a work of artistic merit to please 1-2% of the audience, who have such varying opinions anyway, none of them can even agree with each other.

It's also never a good idea to go out of your way cheese off that 1-2%, just on the principle of it never being a good idea to antagonize your audience, unless you're Don Rickles.

In fact, over the last few months you've resisted every urge to listen to fans nitpick your ideas for the next edition of the "ST Concordance".

On the contrary, I've listened very intently to all of the input on the new Concordance, and it did have some influence on the inclusion of new episodes and ones that were missed the first time. The difference there being that it's not my book and for the vast majority of that project, it's not my call to make, it's Bjo's (and frankly, even that tiny bit that I'm playing with, mainly layout and fact-checking, I can still be completely overridden). If it were my baby all the way, things might be different.
 
when you're putting together a project where you know there's gonna be a sizable contingent of die-hard fans standing by to nitpick everything you do.

To quote Gene Roddenberry, "If I listened to the fans, Star Trek would be shit."

When he elaborated on that stance, it was more along the lines of if he did what the fans always said should happen, Star Trek would be shit, and in the same breath say that he'd always listen to what the fans have to say, but never let them be the deciding factor.

Sounds like a pretty typical PR ass-covering to me. He probably meant just what he said and then had to "nice it up" for the sensitive fans.

It's also never a good idea to go out of your way cheese off that 1-2%, just on the principle of it never being a good idea to antagonize your audience, unless you're Don Rickles.

I'm pretty sure that was never their intent and seeing as it only really pissed off about 5% of that 1-2%, I'd say they really weren't trying TOO hard to piss off that hardcore base, were they?
 
Star Trek's first spinoff/sequel was an animated series. Then it went on to have four live-action sequel series. CBS knows that live-action is a proven model for Star Trek on television. There's no reason to believe that uniquely extensive precedent would be forgotten.

And if they did do a new animated ST instead, I wouldn't see that as anything to be disappointed about.

Well, it certainly would be interesting, but I'd still prefer live action.

If I were telling a standalone, cinematic story about a character who's defined by a dual nature, if establishing that dual nature were an important part of defining who that character is to my audience, why wouldn't I have that character's arc come to some resolution of that duality? It seems a natural way to tell a story, and I'm bewildered by the idea that it would need to be specially justified.

Why wouldn't they have that character's arc come to a resolution? So they can show it in greater depth, of course. I don't understand why the idea seems so bewildering to you. They wouldn't even have to leave the character arc unresolved, they could have simply showed more of a "stiff" Spock in this film (though he could still be a bit looser than Prime, according to taste). Then, if they started (and ended) this character arc in the second movie, there would actually be a status quo to diverge from, instead of (to my perception) basically starting out in a divergent state.
As you said, this is only a couple hours worth of movie. He's connected with Kirk, reconciled with his father, and in a relationship (all of which one could still do without outward emotionalism, as Sarek demonstrates). Wouldn't that be enough character growth for one movie? I think that if they had established a Spock who was undergoing a greater struggle to exert control over his emotions, then it would've had more meaning when he found that balance in the next film.

Not at all. Just because they have better things to do than waste their lives on the Internet following detailed advance information on movies, that doesn't mean they lack intelligence. Perhaps just the opposite. I mean, are those of us frittering away hours on this frivolous debate really smarter than people who are actually spending their time going out into the world and interacting with real live human beings?

There is one flaw in your logic. Just because they're not wasting their time here on this thread, doesn't mean they aren't wasting their time on equally (or more) banal pursuits. And yes, interacting with real human beings can be just as pointless as this.
But I wasn't thinking about following the movie on the internet, moreso the traditional marketing stuff (entertainment show coverage, interviews with the actors, Burger King merch), which would make it clear at a passing glance that this is (at the very least) a new cast of hot, young actors, and not the bald Captain and his waistline-expanding first officer.
(No offense to TNG, I'm just attempting to represent what the mass audience might think.)

But Uhura hooking up with Spock? That defies expectations in a far more substantial way.

Of course, one might argue that the reason it defies expectations is that it defies the character of Spock, but I guess that would probably just take the argument in a circle.

It's that general audience that would've expected a new Trek movie to be more of the same. It's that general audience that needed to be shown emphatically that this was a fresh and different take, that all bets were off.

Pardon the redundancy, as this has been a long thread. I think you may have addressed this issue, but I still don't understand; if it's the general audience that isn't familiar with Star Trek, doesn't use the internet, doesn't follow movie news, etc., then how would they know that Vulcan being destroyed or Spock hooking up with Uhura is significant? I could see them saying, "I wonder if Spock ever got with Uhura in the show," but if they're that uninformed, then I wouldn't think they'd know it never happened, or that they should be really surprised by it.
 
I can imagine pro reviewers saying, in print: "What was with all the bizarre finger stroking during the emergency beam-down scene?"

See, now I'm confused again. I thought you all were talking about the turbolift scene.

Joe Moviegoer doesn't give a rat's ass if Vulcans are supposed to be intimate by finger touching...

But you could take that to the point of justifying not having him act Vulcan at all. And that's a bit hyperbolic, but the point I'm trying to make is that if he's an alien, but doesn't do alien things, then he's just "Joe Spacegoer" with pointy ears. I guess that might be what Joe Moviegoer wants, but I don't have to like it.
 
If I were telling a standalone, cinematic story about a character who's defined by a dual nature, if establishing that dual nature were an important part of defining who that character is to my audience, why wouldn't I have that character's arc come to some resolution of that duality? It seems a natural way to tell a story, and I'm bewildered by the idea that it would need to be specially justified.

Why wouldn't they have that character's arc come to a resolution? So they can show it in greater depth, of course. I don't understand why the idea seems so bewildering to you.

I don't find it bewildering, I'm simply explaining why there was nothing wrong with the choice they made instead. Sure, they could have chosen to do a three-movie series that was all about Spock's journey toward reconciling his human and Vulcan sides, but that wouldn't have been a Star Trek trilogy, that would've been a Spock trilogy. It wasn't the filmmakers' mission to do a trilogy that centered primarily on Spock's journey. As I said, in an 80-hour television series, there's room to explore a variety of character arcs, but in a 6- or 7-hour film series, you have to pick and choose your focus. And it was not their choice to make Spock's duality the overarching focus of the entire 3-film series. He's one of the lead characters, sure, but he's just one character in an ensemble of seven.

And as I said, they made the decision to make each film stand on its own and come to a conclusion, rather than just being a fragment of a single stretched-out story chopped into three pieces. I consider that an entirely valid creative choice.


They wouldn't even have to leave the character arc unresolved, they could have simply showed more of a "stiff" Spock in this film (though he could still be a bit looser than Prime, according to taste). Then, if they started (and ended) this character arc in the second movie, there would actually be a status quo to diverge from, instead of (to my perception) basically starting out in a divergent state.

The whole point of this movie was to diverge from the status quo ante, to show that this isn't the same old ST anymore but something that can go in a fresh direction. So there's no reason to leave the change in the status quo until the next film.


As you said, this is only a couple hours worth of movie. He's connected with Kirk, reconciled with his father, and in a relationship (all of which one could still do without outward emotionalism, as Sarek demonstrates). Wouldn't that be enough character growth for one movie? I think that if they had established a Spock who was undergoing a greater struggle to exert control over his emotions, then it would've had more meaning when he found that balance in the next film.

Maybe that would've worked too. But that doesn't mean the way they did it instead was wrong. Different creators make different choices, and if every creator had to justify "why" they made every choice they made, it would be paralyzing to the whole creative process.


There is one flaw in your logic. Just because they're not wasting their time here on this thread, doesn't mean they aren't wasting their time on equally (or more) banal pursuits. And yes, interacting with real human beings can be just as pointless as this.

I wasn't attempting logic. I was attempting wry sarcasm.


But I wasn't thinking about following the movie on the internet, moreso the traditional marketing stuff (entertainment show coverage, interviews with the actors, Burger King merch), which would make it clear at a passing glance that this is (at the very least) a new cast of hot, young actors, and not the bald Captain and his waistline-expanding first officer.

Which doesn't translate to realizing that the storytelling approach will be radically different. I mean, Joel Schumacher recast Batman twice, but that didn't make for the same kind of radical change that Batman Begins made.


Pardon the redundancy, as this has been a long thread. I think you may have addressed this issue, but I still don't understand; if it's the general audience that isn't familiar with Star Trek, doesn't use the internet, doesn't follow movie news, etc., then how would they know that Vulcan being destroyed or Spock hooking up with Uhura is significant?

Because it's not the all-or-nothing, binary issue you claim it is. Most people aren't intimately familiar with Star Trek, most people don't keep track of Star Trek movie news years in advance, but just about everyone knows the basics: there's the womanizing captain named Kirk, the cool, logical spaceman named "Dr." Spock, the guy who says "He's dead, Jim," the people in red shirts who always get killed, and they say stuff like "stardate" and "warp factor" and "phasers on stun" a lot. So it's absurdly naive to claim that the general public would never even have heard of Vulcan or of Spock's unemotional nature. That's like assuming most people seeing the recent Sherlock Holmes movie would've been unaware that Holmes had a sidekick named Watson or lived on Baker Street. There is such a thing as cultural osmosis. We all know general information about a lot of pop-culture phenomena that we've never directly experienced. (Or that we've only intermittently experienced. Plenty of people have been casual viewers of the Trek movies without being Trek fans or following the news about new movies in advance.)



Joe Moviegoer doesn't give a rat's ass if Vulcans are supposed to be intimate by finger touching...

But you could take that to the point of justifying not having him act Vulcan at all. And that's a bit hyperbolic, but the point I'm trying to make is that if he's an alien, but doesn't do alien things, then he's just "Joe Spacegoer" with pointy ears. I guess that might be what Joe Moviegoer wants, but I don't have to like it.

I feel it necessary to reiterate a point that I don't think is being given the consideration it deserves. If they'd gone the Vulcan way in those scenes, that would've made those scenes about Spock. But they weren't, at least not exclusively. They were about Uhura. Let's not be '60s cavemen here and focus exclusively on the male character with the female being just an appendage. Uhura was the initiator of that entire interaction. The purpose of that plotline wasn't just to give Spock some action, it was to empower Uhura and make her an important, active character in the film rather than just a glorified switchboard operator. She was the one with the agency in the turbolift scene and the transporter scene, the one taking the initiative to push her way through Spock's reserve and connect to his emotional side. So naturally she did it her way, by kissing, rather than subordinating herself to the man's way of doing things.

So focusing solely on Spock's outlook or cultural preferences in those scenes is overlooking the dominant half of the equation. If there's one thing J. J. Abrams doesn't do as a rule, it's reducing female characters to the subordinate partners in relationships.
 
I don't find it bewildering, I'm simply explaining why there was nothing wrong with the choice they made instead. Sure, they could have chosen to do a three-movie series that was all about Spock's journey toward reconciling his human and Vulcan sides, but that wouldn't have been a Star Trek trilogy, that would've been a Spock trilogy. It wasn't the filmmakers' mission to do a trilogy that centered primarily on Spock's journey. As I said, in an 80-hour television series, there's room to explore a variety of character arcs, but in a 6- or 7-hour film series, you have to pick and choose your focus. And it was not their choice to make Spock's duality the overarching focus of the entire 3-film series. He's one of the lead characters, sure, but he's just one character in an ensemble of seven.

And as I said, they made the decision to make each film stand on its own and come to a conclusion, rather than just being a fragment of a single stretched-out story chopped into three pieces. I consider that an entirely valid creative choice.

No offense, but I find little here that takes into account what I actually wrote. I wasn't suggesting that it be a "Spock trilogy," his journey being spread over all three movies. I already described how they could show the initial status quo in the first movie (thus allowing that film to stand alone), and then, once the status quo is here established, show the whole journey in the second film (also standing alone). I was never suggesting the whole of the three films be focused on Spock's emotional journey.

The whole point of this movie was to diverge from the status quo ante, to show that this isn't the same old ST anymore but something that can go in a fresh direction. So there's no reason to leave the change in the status quo until the next film.

But they changed a lot of status quos already (as is being discussed here already). If blowing up Vulcan and Uhura kissing Spock were such "Whoa!" moments, wouldn't those (and all the other things not discussed) have already accomplished that objective, leaving them free to develop the Spock character at a more deliberate pace?

Maybe that would've worked too. But that doesn't mean the way they did it instead was wrong. Different creators make different choices, and if every creator had to justify "why" they made every choice they made, it would be paralyzing to the whole creative process.

Well, I certainly can't argue that it was wrong, objectively. But the other way certainly would've worked better for me.

I wasn't attempting logic. I was attempting wry sarcasm.

:vulcan: Humor. It is a difficult concept (especially in prose). My apologies.

Which doesn't translate to realizing that the storytelling approach will be radically different. I mean, Joel Schumacher recast Batman twice, but that didn't make for the same kind of radical change that Batman Begins made.

Actually, I do think that the storytelling in Batman & Robin was radically different from Batman Forever. Maybe not quite as radical as Begins, but Forever was a lot less campy than B&R, and part of the reason that Val Kilmer was dropped is that he was resistant to the extent of campiness to which Schumacher was trying to take it.

Because it's not the all-or-nothing, binary issue you claim it is. Most people aren't intimately familiar with Star Trek, most people don't keep track of Star Trek movie news years in advance, but just about everyone knows the basics: there's the womanizing captain named Kirk, the cool, logical spaceman named "Dr." Spock, the guy who says "He's dead, Jim," the people in red shirts who always get killed, and they say stuff like "stardate" and "warp factor" and "phasers on stun" a lot. So it's absurdly naive to claim that the general public would never even have heard of Vulcan or of Spock's unemotional nature. That's like assuming most people seeing the recent Sherlock Holmes movie would've been unaware that Holmes had a sidekick named Watson or lived on Baker Street. There is such a thing as cultural osmosis. We all know general information about a lot of pop-culture phenomena that we've never directly experienced. (Or that we've only intermittently experienced. Plenty of people have been casual viewers of the Trek movies without being Trek fans or following the news about new movies in advance.)

There you go again. I never claimed that "the general public would never even have heard of Vulcan." Of course that's ridiculous. I rather claimed that they wouldn't know whether it had ever blown up or not. Sure, they went there in Amok Time and at the end of TSfS, but it's not like it's home-base. The basics of the Star Trek format that the public has gotten by cultural osmosis have nothing to do with the planet Vulcan being intact, only that one guy from that planet is a key member of the crew.

I feel it necessary to reiterate a point that I don't think is being given the consideration it deserves. If they'd gone the Vulcan way in those scenes, that would've made those scenes about Spock. But they weren't, at least not exclusively. They were about Uhura. Let's not be '60s cavemen here and focus exclusively on the male character with the female being just an appendage. Uhura was the initiator of that entire interaction. The purpose of that plotline wasn't just to give Spock some action, it was to empower Uhura and make her an important, active character in the film rather than just a glorified switchboard operator. She was the one with the agency in the turbolift scene and the transporter scene, the one taking the initiative to push her way through Spock's reserve and connect to his emotional side. So naturally she did it her way, by kissing, rather than subordinating herself to the man's way of doing things.

So focusing solely on Spock's outlook or cultural preferences in those scenes is overlooking the dominant half of the equation. If there's one thing J. J. Abrams doesn't do as a rule, it's reducing female characters to the subordinate partners in relationships.

That is an interesting point, but in some ways, I find it ironic. We shouldn't be 60's cavemen by only considering the man, but apparently all the woman is good for is having someone to kiss the man. If Uhura had been more of a key player in the movie, maybe this point would be more significant to me.
 
But they changed a lot of status quos already (as is being discussed here already). If blowing up Vulcan and Uhura kissing Spock were such "Whoa!" moments, wouldn't those (and all the other things not discussed) have already accomplished that objective, leaving them free to develop the Spock character at a more deliberate pace?

That's not the choice they made. If you don't feel it worked, that's your perspective, but they chose what they chose, and their reasons were valid from their point of view. As has been pointed out, they didn't just slap this together over a weekend. They spent months hashing out this story, putting far more thought and care into its construction than you or I ever have, and with far more at stake for them career-wise if they screwed it up.

Personally, I'm puzzled that you're having such a hard time understanding these decisions. I think you just need to learn to open your mind and be a little more flexible.


Actually, I do think that the storytelling in Batman & Robin was radically different from Batman Forever. Maybe not quite as radical as Begins, but Forever was a lot less campy than B&R, and part of the reason that Val Kilmer was dropped is that he was resistant to the extent of campiness to which Schumacher was trying to take it.

Only a difference of degree, really.


I never claimed that "the general public would never even have heard of Vulcan." Of course that's ridiculous. I rather claimed that they wouldn't know whether it had ever blown up or not.

That's being way too literal-minded. They didn't have to know whether it had blown up or not. But they knew it was an important place in the Trek universe, and they knew it was important to one of the two main characters of the series, so blowing it up is something they'd recognize as a big fracking deal regardless of whether they're intimately acquainted with the historical minutiae of the original continuity. I think you're trying to evaluate everything here on far too reductionistic and literalistic a level, and are missing the forest for the trees. The way an audience responds to movies isn't about specific factual details and minutiae, it's about their overall impressions and visceral responses.


That is an interesting point, but in some ways, I find it ironic. We shouldn't be 60's cavemen by only considering the man, but apparently all the woman is good for is having someone to kiss the man. If Uhura had been more of a key player in the movie, maybe this point would be more significant to me.

And I think it's chauvinistic to assume that just because her role is romantic, that makes her unimportant as a character. The point is that she's the initiator of the relationship, that she's not an appendage but is a character with agency in her own right. Uhura's role in the film fundamentally alters the whole Kirk-Spock dynamic, by giving Kirk a rival and gadfly and Spock a humanizing influence and confidante. She is absolutely a key player in the movie, so much so that even McCoy is pushed to the sidelines. Like I said, this is fundamentally a character-driven movie, and even though her role in the physical action is secondary, her impact on the character dynamic is profound.

Anyway, that's beside the point I'm making, which is about those two specific scenes. Regardless of her role in the overall film, she's the aggressor in her romance with Spock, so it's missing the point to think the romantic scenes should've used Vulcan expressions of intimacy instead of human ones.
 
Ignoring the fact that Spock was her instructor at the academy and the relationship is not appropriate, at least according to current military regs. The General in charge of the Canadian Military in Afghanistan was just relieved of duty for having a relationship with someone under his command.

If things have changed in the future, would it be OK for Kirk to have a romantic relationship with Rand?
 
no matter how hard you try it just wouldn't have been anywhere near as emotional for the whole audience if they had done the finger touch. Sure we Trekkies would have gotten it

Even on this board, only populated by ST fans, there have been ST fans who've asked what the heck Saavik and Young Spock were doing with all the finger touching in ST III. I guess if you've never seen finger touching in "Journey to Babel", nor heard of pon farr from "Amok Time", and went into ST III knowing only that Spock had been Saavik's academic mentor is ST II, you wouldn't be anticipating anything like sexual foreplay between them in ST III.

Which is another thing. In JJ's movie, Uhura kisses Spock. Sometimes a kiss is sexual foreplay, but not always. What if Vulcan finger touching always meant sexual foreplay? (Makes "Journey to Babel" a bit cheekier!)

And I though I was the only one who considered that.

Ignoring the fact that Spock was her instructor at the academy and the relationship is not appropriate, at least according to current military regs. The General in charge of the Canadian Military in Afghanistan was just relieved of duty for having a relationship with someone under his command.

If things have changed in the future, would it be OK for Kirk to have a romantic relationship with Rand?

Well considering that Balance of Terror had a crewmember engaged and almost marrying (damned wedding crashing Romulans!) to one of his direct subordinates that yes things have changed.
 
There you go again. I never claimed that "the general public would never even have heard of Vulcan." Of course that's ridiculous. I rather claimed that they wouldn't know whether it had ever blown up or not. Sure, they went there in Amok Time and at the end of TSfS, but it's not like it's home-base. The basics of the Star Trek format that the public has gotten by cultural osmosis have nothing to do with the planet Vulcan being intact, only that one guy from that planet is a key member of the crew.
Indeed, my date for the movie--a regular viewer of TNG and Voyager who I think of as pretty familiar with that universe--turned to me when that happened (before it was clearly stated within the movie that this was an alternate timeline) and said, "I didn't realise Vulcan was gone at the time of the original series."

You'd be surprised what people who grew up in the TNG era don't know beyond "the basics" of TOS lore...
 
The Kirk thing has always seemed to be more of a personal restriction than an external one.

Different Kirk.

Imagine they put in at Starbase. Kirk & Scotty go ashore. Loud group in local watering hole. Kirk spots your, attractive blond by herself. Introduces himself. Turns on the charm. Cut to her quarters for love scene. Next morning she wakes up. He's gone. Buzz at door. She's handed a Padd informing her she's re-assigned to Enterprise as Kirk's yeoman.

Voila, we have NuRand onboard.
 
You've got it all wrong. If he bangs her in the first five minutes there's nowhere for their story to go, and nothing for Rand to do for the rest of the movie but bring the staff coffee.

They have to trade lusty glances for an hour, Kirk sneaks her on board, they bang, she gets kidnapped and the team have to save her.

See, I turned your five minute scene into a whole movie :)
 
The Kirk thing has always seemed to be more of a personal restriction than an external one.

The Kirk thing has always seemed to be more of a personal restriction than an external one.

Different Kirk.

Imagine they put in at Starbase. Kirk & Scotty go ashore. Loud group in local watering hole. Kirk spots your, attractive blond by herself. Introduces himself. Turns on the charm. Cut to her quarters for love scene. Next morning she wakes up. He's gone. Buzz at door. She's handed a Padd informing her she's re-assigned to Enterprise as Kirk's yeoman.

Voila, we have NuRand onboard.

I was talking of Kirk/Rand Prime, and using it as evidence about fraternizing with subordinates.
 
Nah, the third one has a scene more like that. Starbase. Kirk meets blond lab tech. Swoon, swoon. Love scene.

Rest of movie

Back at starbase 6 months later. McCoy spots blond across room. Points her out to Kirk. Kirk's trying to remember her. She turns, revealing baby bump. Kirk claims McCoy is wrong and leaves room before Carol Marcus sees him.
 
Yeah, we've seen Scotty go gaga over subordinates a couple of times. McCoy at least once. Kirk set a different standard for himself because he was CO. It remains to be seen if the new Kirk will have the same standards.
 
No reason NuKirk should. Different guy. Younger as well. I can't see him turning down the chance. And he's good at making his own chances.
 
No reason NuKirk should. Different guy. Younger as well. I can't see him turning down the chance. And he's good at making his own chances.
But being the CO for real might change things. He could start looking for women outside of his chain of command and outside of Starfleet. ( and leave trail of regret and broken hearts like the other Kirk did)
 
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