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Star Trek : Restoration

For "popped up" characters you did real good. Liked Colin and J-L, enjoyed the court-martial. Now, what's this about Eugenics? Doesn't that still carry dirty connotations?

Mistral

Thanks, glad you enjoyed them. We'll be seeing more of them over the next few chapters.

Ah, I was wondering when someone would pick up on the Eugenics comment! :devil: We'll be seeing a little more of this new faction in the next few chapters - it still has vaguely dirty connotations, but very different to what we're used to.
 
I like me a little bit of The West Wing inspired political story-telling but I have to admit that it threw me a little bit. It was almost like reading a totally different story all of a sudden with an entirely new setting and all new characters.

I'm not sure yet how I feel about this new perspective. Don't get me wrong, it was really nicely done but it seemed so far away from Redemption and Cpt Sarine and all the people we've started to care about.

I'm sure you'll tie all these things in eventually and that I will come to appreciate this added story-line over time.

Out of curiosity, was it always your intention to develop this story-line or is it something that came up while you were writing?
 
I like me a little bit of The West Wing inspired political story-telling but I have to admit that it threw me a little bit. It was almost like reading a totally different story all of a sudden with an entirely new setting and all new characters.

I'm not sure yet how I feel about this new perspective. Don't get me wrong, it was really nicely done but it seemed so far away from Redemption and Cpt Sarine and all the people we've started to care about.

I'm sure you'll tie all these things in eventually and that I will come to appreciate this added story-line over time.

Out of curiosity, was it always your intention to develop this story-line or is it something that came up while you were writing?

Hi Cejay,

Thanks for the comment. It's good to see another perspective on my writing choices, especially one from someone who felt jarred by it.

Yes, this had always been my intention - I wanted to gradually open this galaxy out as we went, to show how the theme of Restoration applies throughout the Federation and not just to this ship. I had originally intended Redemption herself to be mentioned more during the scenes with Colin, etc... but that kind of got lost during the numerous rewrites.

Another reason behind it is that I felt Sarine and Redemption were not able to deal with the aftermath enough for my taste, since they are focused entirely on the mission to Onyx Station. I wanted there to be a way of what was happening with the aftermath of the Klingons, since Redemption would not be involved.

However, I can reassure you that beyond all of that there are numerous links between the Redemption people, and the President and his staff. An old face from the beginnings of Volume I and II will be popping up now, and Colin's storyline is going to tie in with the bigger picture and a certain organisation mentioned right back at the beginning of the story.

Hope I haven't given too much away? Does that 'reassure' you somewhat? I'd be really interested in your input on this, Cejay! Thanks again for the comment.

Joel
 
Chapter 7

Secondary Armoury, Deck 13
USS Redemption
Construction Yards (in orbit of Romulus)

When Jasto Dax woke up, he was holding a thermal detonator in his left hand.

For a long moment, he just stood there and stared at it, his eyes fixed in horrified fascination on the blinking green lights of the activation matrix. Then he started to shake.

What am I doing here? He looked around wildly at the shelves of phase-rifles and hand-phasers, grenade launchers and torpedo casings. An armoury, he realised. His eyes caught on a plaque fixed to the far wall. Secondary Armoury, it said. Deck 13. How did I get here? He wracked his brain and tried to remember what he had been doing before this. He could vaguely remember stumbling back to his quarters at the end of the day, collapsing into bed, and then… Nothing. A blank until he had woken up here.

He returned his attention to the detonator, the green flashing L.E.Ds indicating that it had been activated. Trying to remember how to deactivate it, he found that all his Academy courses in hard weaponry seemed to have fled his memory. How long do I have? He couldn't remember that either. He was sweating, his palms becoming slippery. Sweat dripped down into his eyes, stinging. His sight became blurry, as if he was looking through a veil.

"Sir?"

He almost dropped the detonator at the sound of the voice behind him. He turned around slowly to find a young Romulan ensign - yellow bands on his shoulder and arms confirming he was part of Redemption’s security team - looking at him quizically.

"I know you told me to wait outside, but it has been over half an hour. Is everything alright?"

Half an hour?! How could he have been in here for half an hour and not remember? He shook his head, trying to clear his mind. The ensign looked him over, a worried frown on his face. Jasto opened his mouth, but when he spoke, he almost didn’t recognise his voice. It was as if someone else was speaking through him, putting words in his mouth.

"What kind of armoury are you running here, ensign?” he snapped, his voice hard and brittle. What am I doing? “I was double checking some of the weaponry in here, and I found this thermal detonator had been activated. The matrix seems to be faulty – it won’t deactivate.”

The ensign's eyes widened when he saw the detonator. "Sir, that's a..."

"I don't need you to tell me what it is, ensign. What I want to know is why we have faulty material in the armoury."

"Please, sir,” the ensign stammered, “I'm sure there's nothing wrong with it. May I have a look?"

"Carefully," Jasto said as he handed the detonator over. How can he not see how terrified I am?

All of the ensign’s attention was focused on the detonator, though. He took it with all the care Jasto would have given to a raging hakawolf back on New Trill. Jasto saw that the ensign’s fingers were trembling as he pressed three buttons on the top in a specific sequence. He only barely managed to hold back a sigh of relief as the activation matrix blinked off.

The ensign smiled and heaved a sigh of his own. "It worked."

"Well done, ensign." Jasto’s voice had grown friendly, praising.

"Sir?" The young officer looked at him, confused

"Lieutenant Vareen asked me to run a little check on your reactions,” Jasto explained. Where is this coming from? “You did well."

"Oh!” The ensign nodded his head as if it all made sense. That makes one of us, Jasto thought. “Thank you, sir."

Jasto felt himself nod. "Again, well done. Carry on."

Pushing past the young Romulan and out of the armoury, Jasto fled. He only allowed himself to relax once he was out in the corridor. Collapsing back against the wall, he tried desperately to understand what had just happened.

The last thing he could remember was lying down on his bed after a quick dinner at his desk, going over the last progress reports from engineering. He vaguely recalled a dream – in the dream he had been wandering the empty corridors of the ship, following someone. Someone wearing a Starfleet uniform just like his, and with his haircut and hair colour. He had followed the person down in a turbolift, all the way to… Deck 13. Yes, he could remember seeing the plaque on the wall. They had walked down the corridor to the armoury. And when they had reached the armoury, the person had turned round and… He had Haebron's face!

Haebron. In his uniform. Walking the corridors of Redemption, entering the armoury. And then he had woken up in that same armoury holding an activated detonator.

Jasto thought he was going to be sick. Dropping down until he was sat on the floor, he put his head between his legs and breathed in and out, trying to hold back the urge to vomit. By the Caves, it can't be. It can't be.

It took a few minutes for the waves of nausea to fade. He sat there for a moment more, then stumbled to his feet. Then, trembling, he walked down the corridor to the turbolift.

Captain’s Ready Room
USS Redemption

Ba'el was pouring over the latest progress reports from the engineering team when Lieutenant Barani informed him that Ambassador Benjamani and her team had arrived on the bridge.

Grimacing, he closed down the padd and stood up, smoothing his uniform. He had been expecting her arrival for the past few hours. If he was perfectly honest, reading the reports had been a way of ignoring the inevitable. He was not looking forward to this. At all.

At least the progress reports were good, he thought as he walked round his desk. Kane and what the crew had taken to calling his repair “collective” had upped the efficiency and speed of the repairs by almost 200%, organising the engineering team into miniature collectives of their own. Each group was made up of two specialists, three engineers and a handful of 'volunteers' from other departments. These mini collectives were then assigned to a specific deck and let loose on whatever problem they found there. Work rotations had been lengthened, so everyone was working a longer day, but so far it had worked.

Ba’el just hoped Kane would have as much success on the QSD. Heading for the door, he was about to head out onto the bridge to greet her when the doors slid open to reveal Ambassador Benjamani herself, flanked by two of her aides.

Taken unawares, Ba'el took a step back, then bowed his head to cover his surprise. "Ambassador." He looked up at her to see a small smile playing on her lips. “So good to see you again.”

"Captain."

"I was coming to meet you on the bridge.”

"I thought it would be best we have our first official onboard meeting here in your ready room."

Funny, I thought I decided what would be best, he thought, but he bowed his head again and stepped to the side, indicating for her to come in. She stepped past him, followed by her two aides and another person in a Starfleet uniform. When Ba'el recognised this third member of Benjamani’s entourage, he snarled. I don’t believe it.

"What the hell is she doing here?"

"Ah yes,” Benjamani said in an insufferably satisifed voice. “Captain, I believe you know my new military liaison officer, Lieutenant-Commander Kalara?"

Kalara didn't smile, her eyes locked with Ba'el's. Ba’el held her gaze, trying to resist the urge to pull his phaser. "We've met," she said simply.

Ba'el decided to ignore her and turned to the ambassador instead. "I asked you a question, Ambassador."

"And I answered it, Captain. Lieutenant-Commander Kalara has joined my staff as official liaison between the Redemption command structure and the diplomatic delegation. As such she will receive all proper courtesy from you. Her position affords her access to the whole ship, she will be present at every command briefing and may join any away team at her discretion."

"Over my dead body," Ba'el snapped.

"I'm sorry Captain, did you think this was a request? This has already been ratified by Starfleet Command."

"We'll see about that."

He went to step around her and head towards his desk, but the ambassador stepped sideways, putting herself in his way. "Let's not get into a pissing contest Captain. You'll find I have much longer reach than you."

"And don't push me too far, ambassador. You'll find I push right back."

The two stood toe to toe, glaring at one another. Ba’el was beginning to wonder whether he would have to physically lift her out of the way, when Benjamani spoke again.

“How about a compromise, Captain? You let me run my diplomatic team as I see fit, and I stay out of your hair when it comes to running this ship.”

“I’d love to see you try doing anything else.”

The ambassador sighed. “Has anyone ever told you you are the most insufferable bastard?”

To his own surprise – and her’s – Ba’el laughed. Prin Ly’et had said the exact same thing last time he had seen her. Thinking of her seemed to summon some ghost of her presence, and he heard her voice in his head. By the Prophets, Bay, this is no way to run a ship. Sighing, he shook his head. “Too many times.”

Turning, he looked at Kalara. “I have your word that you will not attempt to usurp my authority again? That you will keep out of the day to day running of this ship, and restrain yourself to making suggestions in your capacity as a liaison?”

Kalara gritted her teeth, but she nodded. “You have it.”

Ba’el stared at her for a moment longer, then turned back to Benjamani. “Do whatever the hell you want, ambassador. It is your team.”

“Good,” she nodded as if it had been a foregone conclusion. “Now that that is out of the way, perhaps you would like to arrange an escort to show us around your wonderful ship.”

Oh, this should be fun. He couldn’t hold back a grin as he bowed. “I’m not busy right now.”

For the first time since he had met her, the ambassador seemed taken aback. “You?”

“Well who better to show you around Redemption than her captain.”

“That is very… gracious of you, Captain.” The words seemed dragged from her throat. Good. I can still surprise you.

“You’d be surprised how gracious I can be, ambassador,” he said. Waving his hand towards the door, he asked, “Shall we?”

The ambassador seemed about to object again, then she shook her head and led the way out of the ready room. Her two aides – who had spent the whole confrontation staring at Ba’el like two rabbits in the middle of a fight between a wolf and a bear – scurried after her, leaving Ba’el and Kalara alone in the ready room.

“I meant what I said,” Ba’el warned her. “The first time you try and countermand one of my orders, I’ll sling you out of the nearest airlock.”

“I’m just here as an advisor, Captain. But the moment you put a foot wrong, I promise I’ll have your pips.”

Ba’el stared at her for a moment, then he laughed. “As long as we both know where we stand. Shall we?”

Giving him a feral smile, Kalara preceded him out onto the bridge. Ba’el hesitated for a moment. What the hell am I getting myself into? Then shaking his head, he followed them out.
 
Wow, look at Dax! He had better tell someone what's going on before someone gets hurt or worse!

I can just picture Kane and his little collectives scurrying all over the ship fixing things. I'm sure the rest of the crew is thrilled beyond belief. :borg::rolleyes::lol:

And I'm laughing out loud at the conversation between Sarine and Kalara, and her "feral smile." At least they know where they stand, indeed! Also liked the interaction between Sarine and the Ambassador, and her scared aides ... great stuff.

Another excellent chapter, Joel! More! More!
 
Dax is starting to remind me of a certain Asian Raptor pilot...

Loved Sarine's tete' a tete with the Ambassador and Kalara. You could feel the hatred oozing out. Good chapter!
 
Kes7 / Mistral - thanks for your comments, I'll respond in more detail tomorrow I promise! :)

For now...

Chapter 8

Ensign Prenim’s Quarters
Deck 45
USS Redemption

Zoraya could hardly lift her feet by the time she reached her quarters. She felt about ready to collapse. The moment she was through the door, she dropped her bag on the floor and stumbled over to the bed. She allowed herself to fall down onto the soft mattress and stared up at the ceiling.

Bajor’s light, she was exhausted. Three days of pulling double shifts, crawling through Jeffries’ tubes and maintenance crawl ways, scanning miles of piping and wiring, relays and electrical junctions with her tricorder, burning her hands and face on the plasma welder. All under the watchful eye of that damned cyborg. She shuddered. All she wanted was to sleep.

She knew that she couldn’t though. It had been three days since her last report. Any longer and Parmek would start to worry. With a groan, she forced herself up and stumbled over to her desk. Collapsing in the chair, she called up the comm system and input her code. Activating the encryption matrix, she waited for the transmission to go through. Moments later, Parmek appeared.

He looked as tired as she felt. Things obviously weren’t going well back on Earth. “Report.”

“Just checking in, sir. Nothing in particular to report,” she said through a stifled yawn. “They’ve got us all working double shifts in the engineering team, completing repairs to the ship, which hasn’t left me much time to look around. The Borg engineers Sarine has brought on board have managed to increase productivity and we should be ready to launch on time.”

“Good. Anything new on Sarine?”

“No sir. I haven’t had any further contact beyond a brief encounter a couple of days ago.”

“How did that happen?”

“He was on his way to one of the transporter rooms, I was on my way down to engineering. We passed in the turbolift.”

“About two days ago, you say?”

When she nodded, he smiled. “That was the day of the hearing. He must have been on his way planetside.”

“What hearing?”

Parmek waved a hand, dismissing her question. “A review committee of his actions during the Klingon attack. A formality. It was over almost before it had begun. Was he alone?”

“No,” she said through gritted teeth. She really hated it when he did that. “Commander Turner was with him.”

“The flight commander?”

“Yes sir.”

“That is interesting. What were they doing together?”

“I don’t know sir. It seemed professional.”

“Still, an interesting possibility.”

Zoraya nodded, though from what she had seen, she doubted there was anything to it. She opened her mouth to continue her report, but Parmek spoke over her. “I have new instructions for you.”

“Yes, sir?”

“The investigation into the Klingon attack has progressed. As you know, the stealthship Bashir was in orbit in the days leading up to the attack and intercepted most of the comm chatter in Romulus space. It has taken them a long time to trawl through all of the information, but they have recovered a heavily encrypted transmission made a few hours before the attack. Though they’ve been unable to crack the code so far, they have discovered that it came from Redemption. The transmission carried a Klingon Defence Fleet encryption matrix.”

Zoraya felt her stomach clench. “From Redemption! Are you saying…”

“That there is a Klingon spy aboard that ship. Yes, Agent Taspar. And I want you to find him or her.”

“Of course sir,” Zoraya said with much more confidence than she felt. “Do you have any leads?”

Parmek shook his head. “Not at this time. All we know is that it came from somewhere on that ship. Remember, Agent Taspar, it could be anyone. The Klingons were already adept at taking other races’ forms before the Occupation – years of Dominion training has only increased their skills.”

“Wouldn’t it be more efficient to subject everyone to genetic screening?”

“No. We can’t afford to tip off the spy – we have no idea what kind of traps he or she may already have placed aboard the ship. We need this to be done quietly, agent.”

“Understood.”

“Good. Keep up the good work, Agent Taspar, and keep in touch.”

“Yes, sir.”

The screen went blank. Zoraya disconnected the encryption matrix again, and placed it in one of the drawers under the desk, pressing her thumb to the side to seal it. Only a phaser blast could get at it now. Turning around, she looked desperately at the bed. All she wanted was to take a shower, then climb beneath the sheets for a few hours. Unfortunately, this new development took priority. It was time to get to work.

Dragging herself to her feet, she headed back to engineering.

Sickbay
USS Redemption

“Doctor Keene?”

Keene – or L’goth – sat at his desk, going over the latest reports from the Klingon embassy on Earth. Toggling the controls to clear the screen, he looked up to see the traitor Malok stood in the doorway. His initial urges to murder the man where he stood had faded somewhat since the encounter with Malok in his office had left him on his back with the Klingon doctor’s hand around his throat. Still, he could not bring himself to like the man. “Yes, Doctor?”

“Would you come out here please?”

Keene couldn’t help tensing up. There was something strange in the other Klingon’s voice. He felt a moment of unease, which he forced down, then he stood and followed Malok out into the sickbay proper.

A group of people stood milling around the open space. Keene first saw Captain Ba’el Sarine, the man who had foiled his plans. He gritted his teeth. If it hadn’t been for the damned Romulan, K’mpak would have succeeded in destroying Redemption. Turning away to keep from growling at the man, he took in the rest of the group. His heart almost stopped when he saw her. Commander Kalara.

What is she doing here? The last report he had received about her from their spies on Earth had seemed sure that Kalara was about to face a court martial for her role in the Redemption incident. Keene had been relieved to know that she was no longer on the ship – at least that way there had been little chance of her and Malok making sense of what had happened. Now, it seemed she was back.

Stood slightly apart from the others, she was looking around the bay with barely disguised boredom. Keene wondered for a moment whether she and Malok were setting him up, but when she turned to look at him, he saw no animosity, no recognition. He tamped down his feeling of relief and glanced at Malok questioningly.

The Klingon doctor stopped in front of Sarine. “Captain, this is Doctor Keene, our resident xeno-biologist.”

Sarine stepped forward, smiling. “I haven’t had a chance to meet you yet, doctor, but I’ve heard a lot of good things about your work with ketracel white.”

Keene was surprised. “Thank you sir.” He glanced past Sarine at the others, then back at the captain, waiting for him to introduce them.

Still smiling, Sarine motioned to the elder of the two human women. “Doctor, may I introduce Ambassador Benjamani and her entourage?”

The ambassador stepped forward, hand held out. Keene recovered quickly from his surprise, stepped forward smoothly and held out his hand. “How lovely to meet you,” he said, trying hard not to grit his teeth.

“Ambassador Benjamani will be in charge of the diplomatic delegation for our mission to Onyx Station,” Sarine was saying.

Keene nodded, though he knew all too well who Benjamani was. His briefing material had been thorough when it came to the Onyx Station meeting. He knew Benjamani was the woman responsible for this whole mission. He also knew all of the interesting little secrets she was hiding behind that diplomatic smile and manicured hand-shake.

“Doctor Keene,” she said, the smile never touching her eyes. I see why my people thought she was a spy, he thought. “May I introduce my staff?”

He barely listened as she introduced her Bolian and human aides. All his attention was fixed on Commander Kalara.

“…and my Starfleet liaison officer, Lieutenant-Commander Kalara.”

Lieutenant-Commander? So they knocked her down a peg. It didn’t seem a particularly harsh punishment for treason against her commanding officer. Then again, this was the Federation. Focusing, he took her hand. “Nice to meet you, Lieutenant-Commander.”

“And you,” she said, pulling her hand back as quickly as she could.

She was even more intoxicating up close than she had been on her Starfleet personnel file. A true Klingon female. He felt a sudden urge to invite her to the holodeck for a little calisthenic training. He realised he was staring and, going against every impulse in his body, he turned away.

He caught sight of Doctor Malok and saw that the Klingon was staring at Kalara too, though in his case it was with barely disguised hatred. Kalara seemed to have become aware of his gaze, but as a Klingon warrior she just stared right back. Keene saw Captain Sarine glance from one to the other, the tension between them obvious.

“Is there a problem here, doctor?” he asked.

“No sir,” Malok lied, his eyes still burning into Kalara’s.

“Are you sure?” He looked at the Lieutenant-Commander. “Do the two of you know one another?”

“We have met,” Kalara said. “Once.”

“Twice,” Malok growled.

Uh oh. Keene felt his plan unravelling around him.“Doctor, would you mind if I - -”

“Twice?” Kalara interrupted his attempt to extricate himself from the situation. “What do you mean?”

Malok opened his mouth to answer, but Ambassador Benjamani spoke over him. “As fascinating as this is, I would like to continue the tour, Captain. If you don’t mind.”

Keene picked up on the unmistakeable tension in the ambassador’s voice when she spoke to Sarine. It seems our diplomat and our warrior captain don’t get along. Now that is interesting.

“Of course,” Sarine said, the very picture of cloying gentility. It didn’t suit him, as far as Keene was concerned. “Shall we?”

He waved a hand towards the exit and for a moment, Keene thought everything was going to be alright. Then Kalara stepped over to the ambassador.

“Ambassador, if you don’t mind, I would like to remain behind.” She looked at Malok. “I think we have some things to discuss.”

The ambassador hesitated as she glanced at the Klingon doctor, then nodded. “Alright. Meet us in Main Engineering, Lieutenant.”

“Yes, ambassador.”

Sarine led the others out, leaving Keene stood between the two Klingons. They seemed to be tensing up to attack one another. Though his every instinct was telling him to try and stop them talking, he knew that would do more harm than good. He forced himself to nod to both of them and then walked away. He hesitated on the edge of his office and turned just in time to see Malok leading Kalara to his own office.

Dor-sho-gha! Keene hurried inside and locked the door. Glancing out the small window to make sure no one was watching, he almost ran to his desk. Pressing a button hidden under his computer, he engaged a stealth field around the room before accessing the ship’s internal security matrix.

The camera in Doctor Malok’s room had been set up to film the door, so he had no view of the two Klingons. He could hear their voices though, arguing in Klingonese.

“How dare you?” Kalara was saying. “I should kill you where you stand for presuming to impune my honor.”

“You dare accuse me of impuning your honor?” Malok sounded as though he was only barely holding back his desire to strike the woman. Part of Keene hoped that he would – at least if the doctor got thrown off the ship, neither of them would realise what had happened. Of course, who knew whether the next CMO would be as useful to Keene’s mission. “You who threatened to have me thrown off this ship because you did not feel comfortable serving with a shuvoth’shu.”

“I still have no idea what you’re talking about, doctor. The first time I met you was in the briefing room the day I arrived.”

“Do not lie to me,” Malok roared. “What were you doing here in this room? You said you had come to discuss my posting, because of my lack of honor. Now I wonder if you had some other reason.”

“What are you talking about? When was this supposed to have happened?”

“The day before the Klingon attack.”

He heard Kalara take a deep breath, reining in her temper. “Doctor Malok, you have to believe me. I first set foot on Redemption the day of the Klingon attack. I was met by Lieutenant Dax and…” There was a slight hitch in her voice, then she went on. “And the chief engineer. I was given a tour of the ship, and then I went to the briefing room. Where you met me for the first time.”

“No! I did not imagine this. I… I attacked you.” Keene reached up and rubbed at his throat where the huge Klingon doctor had grabbed him. He still bore the bruises, hidden behind makeup.

“You did what?”

Malok sounded ashamed. “I… I allowed my emotions to get the better of me. I attacked you out of pride.”

There was a moment of silence before Kalara went on. “Doctor Malok, I don’t know what is going on here, but I swear to you on the Lost Blade of Kahless, whoever you saw, whoever you attacked, it was not me.”

The vow seemed to have given the doctor pause. “You swear it?”

“I do.”

“Then… Then if it was not you, who was it?”

“I don’t know.” Keene felt a cold shiver run down his spine at the sound of her voice. Hard. Brittle. Determined. “But I promise you this, doctor. I’m going to find out.”
 
Two. Two. Put them together, and what do you get? I guess Kalara is going to find out ... though I guess it will probably take a while.

And the stealthship Bashirhas been busy in the background -- I'd almost forgotten about that. Interesting, and also interesting to see Zoraya having to help the Borg engineers with repairs ... a far cry from posing as a whore and engaging in wild spy stuff! No wonder she's cranky.

Great stuff.
 
Things just become more complex for Kalara by a factor of ten. The conversations between Ba'el and Benjamani and Ba'el and Kalara were like rolling in broken glass, dizzyingly painful. The tension between those three is going to simmer for quite some time.

And Dax... poor Dax. Now his insane, homicidal, possibly suicidal former host personality is taking over when he's not looking. I'm sure that won't end badly! :wtf:

Wonderful work, deeply engrossing and entertaining.
 
Methinks a spy is going to be found out. I wouldn't want Kalara's "determination" focused on me and my plans, no siree!
 
I might have been a bit jarred before but I really like these bits. Dax finding himself in the armory with a ticking bomb in his hand was an awesome opening. This is a seriously messed up man and I'm curious to see how much longer he can go before he becomes a real threat to himself and others. Considering latest events, not much longer.

Loved the tension here. Between Ba'el and Kalara of course but also between Kalara and Malok. It was great to see that unfold from the spies perspective. That really gave that explosive scene another layer of tension. Well done.

Back to my previous post and your terrific reply. I did ask if you had always intended for that story-line because I thought it didn't feel like you did. It seemed odd to me that you would introduce so many new characters so late into your story.

But I certainly like the idea that you're going to give us more perspectives in this fascinating universe and as I am a sucker for politcal thrillers anyway, I'm looking forward to see where you'll take this other story-line.
 
kes7

Two. Two. Put them together, and what do you get? I guess Kalara is going to find out ... though I guess it will probably take a while.

LOL. It took me a while to understand that first part of the paragraph. But... LOL! :lol:

Yeah, Kalara is going to have to put this together, but whether she'll be able to before Zoraya puts 2 and 2 together to make 3... We'll see.

And the stealthship Bashirhas been busy in the background -- I'd almost forgotten about that. Interesting, and also interesting to see Zoraya having to help the Borg engineers with repairs ... a far cry from posing as a whore and engaging in wild spy stuff! No wonder she's cranky.

Yeah, the stealthship Bashir is still out there, doing stealthy stuff. And Zoraya is not happy at being in engineering - she'd planned a cushy job in the sciences for her cover, so this isn't what she'd expected!

Great stuff.

Thanks!

Gibraltar

Things just become more complex for Kalara by a factor of ten. The conversations between Ba'el and Benjamani and Ba'el and Kalara were like rolling in broken glass, dizzyingly painful. The tension between those three is going to simmer for quite some time.

Oh yeah, this is far from an easy relationship. Kalara and Benjamani may have similar ideas about Ba'el, but that's probably the only thing they do agree on. And Ba'el and Benjamani don't agree on anything. And Ba'el and Kalara... Well, they probably have more in common than they think if they'd just climb down off their high horses for a few seconds.

And Dax... poor Dax. Now his insane, homicidal, possibly suicidal former host personality is taking over when he's not looking. I'm sure that won't end badly! :wtf:
LOL! No, not badly at all! Now that is the question, isn't it? Was Haebron going for the detonators because he is suicidal, or because he wanted to destroy/maim/kill someone else?

Wonderful work, deeply engrossing and entertaining.

Thanks! Glad it is still keeping your attention. And I promise, I'll get round to more ST:Gibraltar today!! :)

Mistral

Methinks a spy is going to be found out. I wouldn't want Kalara's "determination" focused on me and my plans, no siree!
Although he doesn't know it yet, Keene has two very determined women on his tracks! As to whether he will get found out... Well, he has a few more tricks up his sleeve, that's all I'll say!

CeJay

I might have been a bit jarred before but I really like these bits. Dax finding himself in the armory with a ticking bomb in his hand was an awesome opening. This is a seriously messed up man and I'm curious to see how much longer he can go before he becomes a real threat to himself and others. Considering latest events, not much longer.

Dax is certainly more messed up than we have ever seen him before. And unfortunately, despite his many lives, he is in uncharted territory here. How he will react to that... Anybody's guess!

Loved the tension here. Between Ba'el and Kalara of course but also between Kalara and Malok. It was great to see that unfold from the spies perspective. That really gave that explosive scene another layer of tension. Well done.

Thanks! I was worried it wouldn't be tense enough without being able to see them, but I followed the old writer's mantra: use the POV of the person who has the most to lose. And in that scene, Keene is certainly the one with the most to lose, even thought he is helpless to stop the outcome.

Back to my previous post and your terrific reply. I did ask if you had always intended for that story-line because I thought it didn't feel like you did. It seemed odd to me that you would introduce so many new characters so late into your story.

Glad you liked the reply to your previous post. One thing I will say is that for me this is Volume II of the story, so it doesn't seem late in the story, more mid-way through this one. Same as I'll be introducing some major new characters in Volume III when we reach Onyx Station.

But I certainly like the idea that you're going to give us more perspectives in this fascinating universe and as I am a sucker for politcal thrillers anyway, I'm looking forward to see where you'll take this other story-line

I'm glad you like the idea of seeing this other perspective. And we'll be seeing how exactly all of this ties in in the next chapter.

Thanks for all your comments!

Joel
 
Chapter 9

Deck Nine
USS Redemption
Construction Yards (in orbit of Romulus)

Kalara breathed a sigh of relief as the turbolift doors closed, cutting off her view of the ambassador and both her aides. It was about time. She’d thought they’d never leave her alone.

The day had been one long nightmare. Her arrival on Redemption had been bad enough. No matter how prepared she had thought she was, the sight of the same transporter room where she had arrived all those weeks before had been almost overwhelming. All of the feelings she thought she’d buried – her anger at losing her ship to a Romulan mad man, her frustration at how her life had swung so completely out of her control in the last few weeks – had come flooding back.

Before she’d even had time to recover, they had met with Sarine. Telling him that she would keep out of the day to day running of the ship and would never countermand his orders had been one of the hardest things she had ever had to do. Seeing him sat there behind that desk in her ready room...

She forced herself to take a deep breath before her anger overcame her again. Things had just got worse after her confrontation with Malok. Although she now knew why he had been acting so strangely around her, she had been left with more questions than answers. Who was this supposed imposter? What did she want? More importantly, how by Kahless was she going to find her? Not for the first time, she wondered whether Malok was making the whole thing up. What did he have to gain though?

With a chirp, the turbolift arrived at deck twenty seven, interrupting her thoughts. The doors opened and she stepped off, taking a moment to orient herself before heading down the nearest corridor. She had been appointed guest quarters aboard ship, another bone in her craw.

Following the signs absently, she thought back over the rest of the tour. Captain Sarine had been as gracious as promised and Kalara had to admit that he seemed to care for the ship almost as much as she did. Still, none of that could prepare her for the most heart wrenching part of the visit: Main Engineering.

The moment she had stepped through those doors, all the memories had come flooding back. Ianto stood in front of the slipstream drive, the smell of smoke so thick in the air, the sound of his voice as he told her that it was meant to be… By the time Sarine led them up onto the upper levels, her hands had been shaking violently.

Just in time to encounter Sarine’s pet Borg. She still couldn't believe Starfleet Command had authorised their inclusion on her ship. And when she had seen what they had done to Ianto's engine room...

Despite her best efforts, she felt as if she was about ready to scream by the time she arrived at the door to her quarters. Tapping in her code, she stepped inside, then froze. She could hear noises coming from the bedroom, someone moving around, opening drawers. Searching for something. For her? Her hand reached for the knife at her belt, when Damien appeared through the door.

"Hey you."

"What are you doing here?" she snapped, relief warring with barely repressed frustration.

"Sorry. I called in a favour, got myself transported up with all our stuff. Are you alright?"

"Who on this ship owes you a favour?"

He tapped his nose and winked. "I have my ways."

“You should have warned me.” She knew she was overreacting, but all of the tension and stress of the day was catching up with her.

“I’m sorry.” He walked over and took her in his arms. She resisted him at first, then allowed him to draw her close. “I thought I’d surprise you. How was your day?”

"Don't ask," she growled, looking at him pointedly.

"That bad?"

"I don't want to talk about it."

"Ok, ok.” He held up his hands and took a step back, smiling. “Who am I to question the mighty Kalara, daughter of..."

He was interrupted by the chirp of the intership comm system, followed moments later by a female voice.

"Ops to Lieutenant-Commander Kalara."

She frowned at Damien and tapped her badge. What could they want? "Kalara here."

"Lieutenant, we have a priority one transmission for your husband. From the President’s office."

XXX​

Kalara stared at him as if he had just grown a second head. Damien sighed. He had been half expecting this call eventually, though not quite so soon. The moment he saw the news this morning, he knew. Shaking his head, he nodded for Kalara to accept the transmission.

"Put it through down here," she said.

Holding up a hand to forestall her questions, he walked over to the comm system. Sitting down, he keyed in his access code and waited for the screen to clear. When it did, he wasn’t surprised to see his cousin, Jean-Luc Biseau, appear through the static.

"Damien? Is that you?"

"Hi J-L. Good to see you."

"How are you?" He could hear J-L forcing the breezy, friendly tone. Well, he wasn’t going to make this any easier for him.

“I’m fine. You?”

"Busy, as you can imagine. Have you been following what's been going on out here?"

"Not really," Damien lied as Kalara came up behind him. "J-L, this is Kalara."

"Your wife! Of course."

Kalara looked at Damien with such a look of repressed fury on her face that he couldn't help but laugh. "J-L is my cousin, Kali. My mother’s brother’s son. He is also President Baxter’s Communication’s Director.”

“Hello,” Kalara said, her voice tinged with suspicion. She hated politicians.

“Enchantee.”

“He also fancies himself quite the ladies man," Damien said, rolling his eyes.

"I always ended up with the girls you liked, didn't I?" his cousin teased.

"More often than I'd like but less often than you'd like to believe,” Damien shot back.

"You keep telling yourself that, Damien."

"So how are things in the President's office?" He wanted to get this back on track. He knew J-L wouldn’t be contacting him unless he wanted something, and he had a pretty good idea what that was.

"That's actually why I'm calling."

"What a surprise. What can I do for you, J-L?"

"Actually, I was hoping your dear wife could do me - us, rather - a favour."

"Me?"

Damien could hear the mistrust deepening in his wife's voice. He reached up to her hand where it lay on his shoulder and squeezed it.

"What's this about J-L?" He put a warning tone in his voice. He wouldn’t let him drag Kalara into this, not if he had anything to say about it.

His cousin sighed. "Damien, I'm going to put someone else on the line and he'll explain."

Jean-Luc disappeared and was replaced moments later by a brown-haired man with bags under his eyes and at least two day’s worth of stubble on his cheeks. "Mr Laurel, Lieutenant-Commander Kalara, my name is Colin Groves. I'm deputy chief of staff for the President."

"I know who you are Mr Groves,” Damien said firmly. “What can we do for you?"

"I heard you tell your cousin that you hadn't been following what's been happening here, so you probably don't know that early this morning Admiral L’mpec went on live television and told a room full of reporters that President Baxter is dragging his heels over retaliatory attacks against the Klingons."

I knew it. Damien pretended to process the information, then asked the obvious question. "And is he?"

He saw Groves stiffen. "The President is trying to keep all of his options open while cooler heads..."

"Please don't give me the party line, Mr Groves. I used to work the political beat, I know how it works."

For a moment, he thought Groves was going to push his line anyway, then he seemed to deflate. "We're doing our best, but the Klingons won't play ball. On one side they claim K’mpak was acting rogue, on the other they're rattling their sabers along the border. President Baxter does not want to be the president who drags this Federation back into war."

"And what exactly do you want Kalara to do about this?" He could feel Kalara glare at him, but he understood these people - he wasn't going to let them tie her up in knots so they could get what they wanted from her.

"I... I used to be Starfleet, but ever since this started none of my former colleagues will return my calls. I need to talk to someone in Starfleet, find out what is going on and get them to retract what K’mpak said."

"And you thought my wife could be your way in."

Groves ignored the hostile tone. "We need to get this resolved, Lieutenant-Commander,” he said, speaking direct to Kalara this time. “The sooner the better."

"I don't know what you've heard, Mr Groves,” Kalara put in before Damien could interrupt, “but I'm…” She looked at Damien. “What do you call it? Persona non grata?” He nodded and she turned back to the screen. “With Starfleet Command at the moment. I can try to get in touch with someone who may still talk to me, but I don't know what good it will do."

Groves nodded, looking crestfallen. "That's all I can ask."

"Actually,” Damien said, “I may be able to do something myself."

Groves seemed to perk up, while Kalara stared at him in surprise. "How?"

"An old friend of mine onboard Redemption." When he saw the look on Kalara's face, he shrugged. "I didn't have time to tell you. I just met him today"

"And who is this friend?" she asked, her tone dangerously calm.

"The Press Corps liaison officer."

"Lieutenant Benouakhir?"

"You've met him?"

"Briefly."

"Well, we used to work together in my days on the Chronicle. I met him in the transporter room when I beamed up." He turned back to Groves. "I think I can talk him into helping us out. He has lots of contacts and knows how the game is played. At worse, he'll be able to tell us what Starfleet is thinking."

"That would be fantastic," Groves said. "I can't thank you enough."

"Don't thank me yet. We'll do what we can, but I've got to say, you guys need to get your act together on this one. We were here during the Klingon attack. We almost died. Kalara lost good friends. I don't know what line the Klingons are spinning you, but you need to make sure your guy doesn't let worrying about his legacy blind him to what is going on."

"We know," J-L said, appearing in picture again. "We're doing what we can."

"Alright then. I'll be in touch."

They said their goodbyes, and then the screen went blank. Damien turned to find his wife looking at him strangely.

"What?"

"I didn't know you knew so much about... Politics."

She growled the word as if it were a curse. He shrugged.

"You knew I used to cover the political beat for the Chronicle. You pick up some things."

"You seem to enjoy it."

"It can be fun. Hey, come on, what's the matter?"

"You still… Surprise me."

He grinned. "Good."

From the look on her face, she wasn't so sure. "Do you really think you can help?"

"It will all depend on Hakim. What about you?"

"I will speak with Admiral Kovoth. He may speak to me."

She reached for the comm unit but he grabbed her arm. "What are you doing?"

She frowned. "Contacting Kovoth."

He tutted, standing up and putting his arms around her. He leant forward until their foreheads were touching. "There's a human tradition I haven't introduced you to yet."

"Oh really?" Understanding his intentions, she lowered her voice to a growl. "And what is that?"

"It's called christening the new home." He bit her lower lip. "I think you'll like it."

Recovery Room
Sickbay
USS Redemption

Lieutenant Astrid Williams looked up as Doctor Malok entered her room in sickbay. She set aside the padd in her hands – she had been reading a historical novel set during the Occupation. It was one of the only thing she could still do. Although most of her injuries had healed, Doctor Malok was still worried about the damage to her spine and had ordered her to remain in sickbay for a few more days. She had been forbidden from exerting herself, even to stand up and walk around; She felt like she was going to go crazy.

She was about to ask him how he was when she saw the look on his face, and suddenly she knew why he was here. Her heart fell and her throat seemed to constrict. Although she had been expecting this visit since she had woken up in the biobed after the Klingon attack, it still came as a surprise. As time had gone by, and Malok had carried out scan after scan, she had begun to hope against hope that he wouldn’t find it. Now it seemed he had.

He knows, she thought. He knows my little secret.

"Good evening, Lieutenant." His voice sounded like a distant thunderstorm, low and rumbling.

"H- Hello doctor."

He seemed uneasy, as if worried how she was going to react. She glanced behind him to see whether there was a security officer waiting outside. The door shut before she could get a good look. "I was wondering if we could talk."

She swallowed hard. "Of course. Sit down."

He did, looking awkward as he squished his massive frame down into the small chair. He refused to meet her eyes, staring at the padd instead, as if wondering how to say what he had to say. Finally, she spoke just to break the uncomfortable silence.

"What's wrong, doctor?"

As if you don't know, a little voice whispered in her mind.

"I ran some tests on your genetic structure, Lieutenant. I'm afraid I’ve found some anomalies."

Here it comes, she thought. The thing she had been dreading her entire life. She opened her mouth to tell him that he didn't need to go any further, when he handed her the padd. "I'm afraid you have precursor genes indicative of Inchin’s Syndrome."

She snapped her mouth shut with an audible click. Taking the padd from him, she stared at the results. It took her little more than an instant to recognise that these weren't her genetic scans. She looked up at him.

"I..."

"It isn't declared yet,” he said quickly, assaying a reassuring smile, “and it may never do so. It marks a predisposition, that is all."

Luckily for her, her unfeigned confusion could easily be passed off as shock at his diagnosis. How was this possible? Someone must have switched her scans with someone elses. But why? Her mind whirled with questions, the most important being what did she do now? Before she could react, though, Malok stood up.

"I know this is a lot to take in, Lieutenant. I wanted to tell you now, to give you some time to process it. I’ll leave you alone now, alright?"

She was still too shocked to respond. She nodded, afraid of what she might say if she opened her mouth. The big Klingon gave her a tentative smile and then left her alone.

As soon as he left, she fell back in bed. Someone had switched her test results. Why? Did she have someone aboard ship, an ally of some kind, protecting her secret? Of course that brought her back to the same question – why? What did anyone have to gain by helping her? None of it made any sense.

She still lay there when the door opened and Jasto Dax walked in.
 
[Continued]

Sickbay

Jasto stood outside Lieutenant Williams' room in sickbay and tried to summon up the courage to go inside.

Part of him wanted to turn and walk away, but a large part knew that he had to do this. Ever since waking up in the armoury, he had been trying to make sense of what was happening with Haebron. He had become a constant presence in his mind, his voice providing a commentary of everything Jasto did, or saw, or felt. The medication seemed to have no effect. And the fact that he had somehow been able to take control of Jasto's body terrified him.

None of the standard Trill literature seemed to be able to explain it. In fact, the vast majority denied it was even possible.

But it did happen, Jasto thought. It did!

Of course it did, Haebron replied. I did it.

Stop it. Get out of my head.

Get out of mine!

He was muttering to himself when the door to Lieutenant Williams room opened to reveal Doctor Malok. The huge Klingon looked up at Jasto in surprise.

"Can I help you, Lieutenant?"

"Uh... Actually I came to see Lieutenant Williams."

Malok’s face clouded over. "I'm afraid she's just received some bad news. I think it best she be left in peace."

The cowardly part of Jasto wanted to use the news as a perfect excuse to just turn around and walk away. But the rest of him knew that he couldn't. This might be his only chance to rid himself of Haebron.

"I'm sorry Doctor, but I need to see her on an urgent matter."

He went to push part the bulky Klingon, who stayed exactly where he was, cutting off his access.

"I'm afraid not, Lieutenant. Like I said, she needs some time."

"Do I have to make that an order, Doctor?”

Malok glowered at him. "Down here, Lieutenant, I give the orders. For the good of my patients, I could countermand the Captain."

I'd like to see you try, Jasto thought. Still, he kept his mouth shut and tried to appeal to the Klingon's better side.

"Please, Doctor. It is very important, for the security of this ship, that I speak to Lieutenant Williams. I promise that I will only take a few minutes." After what had happened in the armoury, it was only half a lie.

Malok stared at him for a few moments more, and then finally he sighed and stepped aside. "A few minutes, no more. And if she asks you to leave, you will."

By the Caves, I hope it won't come to that. Still, he nodded. Malok moved completely out of the way, and Jasto stepped inside.

Lieutenant Williams - Astrid - was staring off into space as he walked in. She didn't look up at him at first, lost in her own thoughts. The moment she did, though, her whole body tensed up and she scowled.

"Who let you in here?"

Jasto’s initial reaction was to remind her of their respective ranks and positions. He beat the urge down. Better to placate her instead.

"Doctor Malok."

"He shouldn't have done that. Please - -"

"No.” He knew he sounded panicked, but he didn’t care. “Don't ask me to leave. Please. Just... Just give me a few minutes."

"For what?” she snapped. Sitting up in bed, her eyes skewered him. “So you can say how sorry you are? How it wasn't you? Is that it? How you weren't the one who held that knife? Who tied me to that chair and forced me to watch while you slit my parents' throat? Who gave me this?"

She thrust her face forward and turned her cheek towards him. Her scar shone in the artificial lighting. The scar he had given her.

No! Not me. Haebron. Haebron did it. I could never do that.

Are you sure, little bit?

Stop it! Get out of my head. Get out, get out, get out!

When he saw the look on her face, he realised he'd spoken aloud. She stared at him, horror and terror mingling on her face. They stared at one another for a few moments, the silence drawing out between them like a living thing. Finally, she spoke, her voice so low he could barely hear her.

"He's still there, isn't he? Inside you?"

"I... No! No, of course not. I mean, yes, in a way but not in the way you mean."

This wasn't going at all as he had planned. The single text he had read on interhost possession seemed to suggest that the only reason the former host managed to get any kind of hold over the whole was due to some kind of unfinished business. Something they needed to forgive or be forgiven for. Jasto had hoped by confronting Astrid, he might be able to come to some kind of peace. Instead, he had made things worse.

"I shouldn't have come," he said. "I'll leave you."

"He is, isn't he?" Astrid badgered him. "They were wrong. When they said that his memories would simply be part of a whole, that he was as good as dead? He’s still in there and he talks to you.”

“No! You don’t know what you’re talking about.”

“I know. I’ve always known. He’s still alive. After all these years. He’s still alive.”

“No. I… I’m sorry. I’m so sorry.”

Turning, he fled the room as quickly as he could, her accusations still ringing in his ear
 
Yeah, as if Kalara isn’t in deep enough bantha-poodoo with Starfleet Command, now she’s interceding in political relationships way above her pay grade. I hope Damian has some kind of appreciation for the thin ice he’s helping to lead his wife across.

The kicker is, I really like Kalara. Yes, she’s headstrong and obstinate and very Klingon, but she’s trying to overcome her warrior nature and resurrect her now troubled Starfleet career. Unfortunately, her anger and thirst for vengeance against Sarine are making her the perfect weapon for a host of masters who either wish to derail Ba’el (hey, that rhymes!), the mission, or both.

And the Williams/Dax encounter… geez… where to begin? It’s obvious Williams is passing herself off as human when she’s likely something else entirely. And odd that someone aboard seems to be interested in protecting her secret.

And now Dax shows his hand, and reveals his troubled nature to the person aboard ship that would most wish the symbiote harm.

You’ve built a lot of tension here and laid the groundwork for a number of potentially ugly confrontations. Nicely done.
 
I was going to write some comments myself but turns out that Gibralter has pretty much summed up my thoughts much better than I could have. I know it's the lazy way out ... but oh well.

Continuously excellent!
 
I'm joining CeJay in the lazy approach -- Gibraltar just perfectly summed up what I was thinking.

I'm just loving this story.
 
Gibraltar

Wow, your comment was so good no one wanted to try and top it! :lol: LOL

Well, Damien is actually going to be sticking his neck out more than Kalara here - as she said, she probably isn't going to be able to do much, so he is going to get involved himself to protect her. Don't want y'all thinking he's throwing his wife to the wolves!

I'm glad you like Kalara - I love her, but I love putting her through the wringer even more... :devil: Actually glad I'll never have to actually face her, I think I might end up on the business end of a bat'leth!

Your theory for Williams is interesting... We'll see where her storyline is leading her.

As for poor Dax... Yeah, he hasn't made things any easier for himself by doing what he's done.

Cejay

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the chapter! And no, not the lazy way out - sometimes when someone puts something in a way we know we can't match, better just to hold our hands up and say 'oh well'! :)

kes7

Ditto as to Cejay. Just glad you're still reading and still enjoying where this story is going.

Thanks again for all your comments. If anyone gets a chance to have a look at my The Fall story I just started posting, I think you'll find some cool parallels/connections with this story! :devil:

Joel
 
Chapter 10

The Alpha Quadrant
USS Redemption
Construction Yards (in orbit of Romulus)

The four R&R centers aboard Redemption were each completely holographic and individually named after one of the four galactic quadrants. Every day, the holo transmitters recycled, projecting a bar configuration that matched a specific planet in that quadrant.

After the Klingon attack, only one of the centres had been reactivated - the others would be brought online gradually during the trip to Onyx Station. So when Damien invited his old friend out for a drink and a chat, he wasn’t left with much choice. The only place available since the attack was the Alpha Quadrant.

When the doors opened, he couldn’t help but stop and stare. In front of him lay a rundown old bar with sawdust covering the floor. The raw smell of hot sand and barren rocks filtered through the windows, which revealed an inhospitable desert outside. Heat washed over him in waves. Wiping his brow, Damien looked around, taking in the two or three Starfleet officers “enjoying” their downtime until he saw Benouakhir stood with one arm on the wooden bar, talking to the barman. He walked over, zig-zagging around tables, then clapped a hand on his friend’s shoulder.

"Only you could have programmed this dump," he said, smiling.

Benouakhir turned and when he saw Damien, he grabbed him in a bear hug. Both friends stepped back, looking one another over, taking in the things that had changed and the things that had stayed the same.

Hakim Benouakhir still had the dusky skin and dark hair of his father’s ancestors, complemented by his mother’s clear blue eyes. Born on Earth, he had grown up in what had formerly been the Maghrebine states, now the northern part of the United African Federation. After the end of the Occupation, those states had been some of the hardest hit by the famine and outbreaks of disease that had wracked liberated Earth. Hakim had escaped all of that, clawed his way through education and got a place in Oxford University. Damien was pleased to see that his former colleague still smiled just as easily, something he had always admired in the man.

"God man,” Hakim said now, his voice carrying more than a hint of his Oxford education, “it's good to see you."

"You too," Damien replied. "It's been a while."

Benouakhir smiled and nodded. He nodded to the barman. "So what you drinking?"

"What they serving?" Damien glanced at the shelves behind the bar, trying to read the labels on the many bottles.

"Whatever you want - it's all replicated anyway."

Damien finally settled on a Saurian brandy and Hakim a beer, then they walked over to one of the tables, as far away from the other customers as possible. Sitting down, Damien looked around, trying to catch a glimpse out of the dark tinted windows at the world outside.

"Where's this supposed to be anyway? Some colony planet?"

Hakim grinned. "Vulcan."

"What?"

Damien looked around and noticed that the holographic waiters all had the typical pointed ears. How did I miss that? Most of them were female, though, their outfits slightly more revealing than he had ever seen on any Vulcan in the history books. He looked at Hakim, an eyebrow raised.

"Well,” his friend explained, “there weren't many bars on Vulcan even before the Incident. They still wanted the planet to be represented in the bar’s database, so when they created the program, they apparently took their inspiration from some old adult holoprogram called Vulcan Love Slave. It was quite popular back before the Occupation."

"I can see why," Damien said appreciatively as one of the amply endowed Vulcan tavern maids bent down to serve them their drinks.

"Hey, I thought you were married."

"Exactly. Married, not dead." Or blind, he thought as he watched her walk away. "But don't tell the missus I said that," he said, turning back to his old colleague.

Hakim shook his head good naturedly. "And how is the lovely Commander Kalara?"

"Watch it with the lovely, bud. And it's Lieutenant-Commander now. I guess you heard."

Hakim nodded. "I only met her the once, but she seemed like good people."

"The best. I tell you, if I ever get my hands on that Captain Sarine..."

"I wouldn't say that too loudly, buddy. He is the captain and people in Starfleet can be pretty sensitive about that kind of thing."

"I thought you were Starfleet."

"I am. Kind of." He shrugged. "To tell you the truth, a lot of fleeters don't really think of me as one of them. I went through the Academy, but the press has always been more interesting to me than firing phasers and scanning nebulae and all that jazz."

Now there’s an idea! "That's what this place needs," he said with a grin. "A jazz bar! Remember Delphine's? That place in - -"

"Southampton? During the conference? Oh man, that was some bar."

The two friends got to reminiscing about their time on the Chronicle, one story leading to another, and to another, and before Damien had realised it, an hour had gone by. Wiping away a tear from laughing so hard and settling back in the chair, he sighed.

"Man, this has been fun. I have to admit I miss it sometimes."

"I never understood why you left."

"Come on, you always knew I wanted to write. Fiction I mean."

"Delusions of grandeur."

Damien snorted. "Hey, I'll have you know I have a very successful career."

"Well, you ever decide to do a real job, you give me a call."

That’s my opening, Damien thought. "Well actually, there is something you could do for me."

"I should have known," Benouakhir said with a smile. “You never contact me unless you need a favour.”

"Hey! At least I brought you a drink first."

"I think these are free,” Hakim said, indicating the empty glasses and bottles with a still half-full bottle of beer.

"What can I say? Damned moneyless economy."

"Come on, quit stalling. What do you need?"

"It's not for me, actually. Have I ever mentioned my cousin?"

"That depends. He or she?"

"A he. The Martian."

Hakim thought for a moment, then shook his head. "Don't think so."

"He's actually in our line of work and - - "

"And he needs a job."

"No. Dammit would you let me finish?"

Hakim sighed and waved for him to go on.

"My cousin doesn't need a job because he already has one. As Communication's Director to the President."

"Bugger off,” his friend said after a moment.

"I'm serious."

Hakim sat forward, his face suddenly intense. "Your cousin is J-L Biseau?"

Damien nodded.

"The J-L Biseau?"

"That's what I'm saying."

"And he wants a favour? From me?"

"Again true. You're not so eloquent when you're in shock."

"Okay, I’ll play along. And what exactly does your cousin Mr Most-Important-Journalist-in-the-Federation want from me?"

"He wants Starfleet to retract the comments made by Admiral L’mpec yesterday."

Hakim groaned and sat back. "Oh God. Bugger. How did I not see that one coming?"

"I guess I'm just that good,” Damien said with a grin.

"You're a bastard, that's what you are."

"Come on Hakim, what's the big deal? So you dig around a little. Play middleman. This could do wonders for your career."

"This could destroy my career. Do you have any idea how sensitive this subject is right now? God."

Damien didn't push him. He knew his friend and he knew that he wouldn't be able to pass up this opportunity. To be able to say he had brokered a conversation between Starfleet and the President’s office – never mind the fact that he would automatically have the exclusive on the retraction – would give him a major step up. The Federation Director of Communication’s would owe him one. No way Hakim can pass this up.

Still, he spent a few anxious moments before, finally, as he had known he would, Halim sighed and nodded.

"Alright. I'll see what I can do. But I'm not promising anything."

"I got you."

"Sometimes I really wonder..." He trailed off, eyes widening as he stared at something behind Damien’s shoulder. Frowning, Damien turned as well. Three people had just walked into the bar. At first he couldn't understand what it was about them that had effected his friend like that. Then they stepped further into the light and he saw them properly for the first time.

Borg.

There were three of them - two males of indeterminate race and a human female with long blond hair. All of them had some kind of cyborg enhancement – one of the men had what seemed to be a mechanical third eye in his forehead, the other had an interface rod jacked directly into his left arm. They were also all dressed in disparate human clothing – a plethora of yellows and greens, reds and purples. They looked unbelievably silly, and yet terrifying at the same time. All three looked around the bar as if wondering what they had stumbled into.

"Do you think we should invite them over?" Damien quipped and turned back to his friend.

His smile died swiftly when he saw the look on Hakim’s face. Damien had never seen so much hatred and loathing emanate from one person, especially not from Hakim. If his adolescence had taught Hakim Benouakhir anything, it had been live and let live.

"What's wrong?” Damien asked. “Are you alright?"

"I have to go," Hakim said suddenly, jumping to his feet. "I'll be in touch."

Before Damien could say anything else, his friend had began to walk swiftly across the Vulcan tavern. The Borg officers had made their way over to the bar, where the holographic Vulcan barman was looking bemusedly from one to the other as if wondering what to do with them. Without a glance back at any of them, Benouakhir was gone.

What the hell was that about? Damien wondered. He had never seen his friend so uncomposed. And considering some of the scrapes the two of them had been in, that was saying a lot.

Well, he certainly wasn't going to find out sitting here at this table. Waving at one of the Vulcan barmaids, he called her over and asked her to invite the three Borg to join him at the table. It was time he got to know the neighbours. And maybe he could find out what had bothered his friend so much.

Hell, he might even be able to make a book out of it…

Hakim Benouakhir’s Quarters
Deck 7
USS Redemption
Construction Yards (in orbit of Romulus)

Hakim ran into his quarters.

Once inside, he began to pace back and forth, back and forth, trying to work off some of his repressed anger. His emotions felt so raw that he could scream. His mind kept on returning to that face. It couldn’t be. That blond hair. It’s impossible. The implants in place of her arm.

With a roar of fury, he grabbed a vase off the table and threw it as hard as he could against the wall. It shattered, pieces of glass and broken flowers raining down to the floor.

As usual, his anger passed in an instant, leaving him feeling numb. The loud noise seemed to have calmed him down. In a daze, he walked over to the debris, dropping down on his haunches next to the wall. He slowly started to pick up the pieces.

It couldn’t be her, he told himself as he worked, piling one piece of glass on top of another. It couldn’t be her. It couldn’t be her. It…

He repeated the words like a mantra as he cleaned up the mess.

It didn’t help.
 
It couldn't be her, who????!!! Stop doing that!!!! :scream::devil:

Okay, don't stop doing that. It's why we all keep reading. (Well, that and the good writing!)

I liked the conversation between Damien and Benouakhir. Damien keeps getting more and more complex. I really liked the description of the R&R set up, the bar scene, and the Borg entering and seeming sort of lost ... and of course, Benouakhir's emotional reaction was intriguing. I can't wait to find out what the story is, there. I also can't wait to see Damien hanging out with the Borg at the bar. Assuming we get to see that conversation, anyway.
 
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