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What's your favourite scene from TrekLit?

I have a few that come to mind.

The final transformation and redemption of the Borg in "Lost Souls" comes to mind.

It's just a beautifully-written scene with such a sense of hope and potential, of liberation and resolution to meet a new and better future. Every time I read it, it reminds me of "The Song of Purple Summer" from the musical "Spring Awakening."

In looking at it, though, I notice that that sequence in Lost Souls is something of an outlier for me. A lot of my favorite scenes involve character being forced to confront some horrible, uncomfortable issue they've been avoiding or ignoring.

One scene that I've been thinking about a lot lately is the finale to Seeds of Dissent by James Swallow.
Princeps Julian Bashir has been forced to confront the fact that the history was raised with, his entire worldview, is a lie, and that his society is built on tyranny.
The last sentence, in particular, is beautifully haunting:

In the isolation of his private sanctum, he drowned himself in the black and terrible truth.

Several of my favorites can be found in Part III of Reap the Whirlwind by David Mack, "Instruments of Darkness."
Diego Reyes and several other characters are forced to confront the fact that they have been utterly complicit in the mass murder of thousands of people in their obsessive quest to wring the secrets of the Shedai from the Taurus Reach.

In particular, two sequences stand out (though the entire third part is excellent). The first is T'Prynn reacting to the death of her lover, Anna.

"T'Prynn watched her lies and evasions burn away in the crucible of fire outside the window, leaving only the awful truth.

"...For the sake of duty, T'Prynn had forfeited Anna's life. She had not done the deed, but she had forced the Klingons' hand. Anna's life had been imperiled for the sake of many. It was logical...

"There was no longer any reason for T'Prynn to lie--to Starfleet or to herself. Love--a taboo of unrivaled power in Vulcan culture, revered and reviled in equal measure--had been driving her mad, clouding her logic, feeding her passions, eroding her control. Anna had declared her own love openly several times, but only now could T'Prynn let herself realize that her lover had spoken the truth. A woman with two faces and two names, a Klingon in human guise, a spy turned traitor, had been the only honest thing in T'Prynn's life.

"She loved me.

"... The truth looked back at her through the flames, it morbid grin a momento mori, its brilliant silence a scathing reproach. Love was lost, betrayed in the name of of country. Hope was gone. All that remained was the fire.

"She burns for me."

The other sequence that stands out in particular is Reyes choosing to leak the info on the Shedai to Tim Pennington.

" 'More than thirteen thousand people died on Gamma Tauri IV,' he said. As he continued, his sorrow slowly transmuted to quiet anger. 'But that's nothing compared to how many would die if that enemy ever reaches a fully populated planet. We woke this nightmare, and now it's loose, God knows where, running amok. And nobody knows about it, Tim. Nobody knows because we keep hiding the truth, hoping we can steal another handful of ancient secrets from these creatures before all hell breaks loose.' His anger abated, leaving only his somber tone of grief. 'The crew of the Bombay died for this secret, along with a dozen men and women from the Endeavour and the Lovell. Now it's claimed thirteen thousand souls on Gamma Tauri IV, including a woman who used to be my wife.' He sighed heavily. 'How many have to die? How many lives are we supposed to sacrifice on the alter of security? When does this madness stop?' "

The line "How many lives are we supposed to sacrifice on the alter of security?" has stuck with me ever since I read that book in the Summer of 2007.

Other mentions...

The entire sequence with Surak encountering the Underliers in Spock's World and his subsequent founding of cthia.

Nanietta Bacco making a Federation Councillor who had imprisoned a man without due process of the law resign in Articles of the Federation.

The assassination of Min Zife and Koll Azernal. "He walked beside his president, prepared to meet his fate at the merciless hands of Section 31" was CHILLING.

The final chapters of Vendetta by Peter David. "Sweet Picard was gone..."
 
I also recall researching Ebbets Field itself, and the baseball players of the era--about which, as a serious baseball fan, I already knew a great deal. But I wanted to get the detail exactly right, and so I hit the books. One thing I remember doing is naming just two real-life players: the heroic Jackie Robinson, and another man who was ultimately revealed in Roger Kahn's wonderful The Boys of Summer to be a racist who worked to undermine Robinson's tenure in the big leagues.

Ah - I didn't have the book at hand; I knew it was a park of relevance to the race barrier, but googling Jackie Robinson turns up a number of places that want the claim to fame of being where the colour barrier was broken, depending on what criteria is applied (first training, first farm team game, first major league game, etc.).

I never realized how much research went into forming the backdrop of that scene; what you turned up is pretty seamlessly integrated in the text (which is to say, the historical accuracy isn't showy, which is a problem I've seen elsewhere, including in my own work). Like I said, an understated but in many ways seminal scene.

Fictitiously yours, Trent Roman
 
Lost Souls
Reap the Whirlwind
A Time to Heal

Isn't David Mack just bleeding brilliant?

Just reading your post gave me chills.

(And excellent other choices as well, I just happened to notice this particular pattern...)
 
^ Aw, shucks. You guys... :alienblush:

Thanks. :)

it's only the truth:bolian:

I've got one more from DS9R's Unity.

When Kira opens all the Orb's and sends the spawn mother of the parasites into the loving arms of the Jem'hadar trapped in the wormhole. "you picked the whole planet...". And the brilliant scene at the end when Bajor triumphantly joins the Federation. Moves me everytime I read it.
 
A quickie, but it jumped out at me.

Two (nameless, if I remember correctly) crewmen meet eyes for a moment in Wildfire...
... just before one of them locks the hatch between them, ensuring her own death and the survival of the other, and the rest of the crew. Tragic and real.
 
^ That was engineer Fabian Stevens who watched security guard Claire Eddy seal the hatch while looking up at him, "her expression calm."
 
From The Brave and the Bold, Book2, Worf and Spock's mindmeld.
I had more fun writing that scene than should be legal....


From Articles of the Federation, Bacco threatening to have Spock thrown out of her office.
Hee! Yeah, that was fun. I love Spock, but he could be an arrogant sumbitch, and sometimes arrogance requires a like response....


Just picking one semi-randomly. It's when Ro makes her appearance in Demons of Air and Darkness. I had taken a long break of TrekLit and only picked it up because I found out about DS9-R and had never heard of KRAD before. Ro's in the first 3 books of the relaunch but she's missing from the first part of Demons of Air and Darkness. I was thinking to my self "WTF, doesn't this guy read the other books?" When she does show up it was totally unexpected for me and it cracked me up. And since then I've come to realize how wrong I was with that "not reading other books" thought.
Thanks! That was a twist that could only work in prose, and I was particularly proud of it.


Nanietta Bacco making a Federation Councillor who had imprisoned a man without due process of the law resign in Articles of the Federation.
I wrote that scene in 2004, and such issues were heavy on my mind, and I thought it very important to remind people that that sort of thing is actually wrong.


A quickie, but it jumped out at me.

Two (nameless, if I remember correctly) crewmen meet eyes for a moment in Wildfire...
... just before one of them locks the hatch between them, ensuring her own death and the survival of the other, and the rest of the crew. Tragic and real.
Dave already identified the scene in question -- I only want to add that nobody who died in Wildfire was nameless. More generally, nobody who dies in a work of fiction I write or edit is nameless. I don't believe in the faceless soldier or the innocent bystander, and everyone who dies is someone's child or parent or best friend or sibling.
 
i'll say it again, the friendly fire scene in destiny. being responsible for the deaths of your crewmates, i've never seen it to quite this degree in trek fiction.
 
I really have horrible memory skills, but there is one that really sticks in my mind. Now I'm a very visual reader (so much so that sometimes I actually remember stuff I read as actual images) and there are two that come to my mind.
The scene is the transformation of the Borg in the end of Destiny. It was just breathtaking the way I pictured in my mind.
There have been a lot of other moments in the Trek books that I really liked as I was reading them,
but the transformation of the Borg is the one that I remember the best
.
 
Interesting that so many of the nominations here are for very recent novels.

I wonder if that's a sign of memory dulling the impact of some scenes from long-ago books, or if it is simply reflective of which novels the people here are most familiar with.
 
Interesting that so many of the nominations here are for very recent novels.

I wonder if that's a sign of memory dulling the impact of some scenes from long-ago books, or if it is simply reflective of which novels the people here are most familiar with.

Maybe it's just a sign that the novels are getting better. ;)
 
Interesting that so many of the nominations here are for very recent novels.

I wonder if that's a sign of memory dulling the impact of some scenes from long-ago books, or if it is simply reflective of which novels the people here are most familiar with.

Maybe it's just a sign that the novels are getting better. ;)
It's probably a combination of both, combined with how often you re-read novels. I've been reading Trek lit for about 10 years now, and some of the novels I've only read once and can barely recall what they were about. Most of my favs I try to revisit once a year though.

Also, there are novels which don't really have a stand-out scene for me even though I absolutely love them. Orion's Hounds, love example.
 
To be honest, large parts of Articles... and Wildfire are fantastic.

Particularly, Duffy's "Don't tell Sonnie" about his one-way trip and "Duffy...Sacrifice..." from the aliens at the end.

I also liked the Nasat's story for the technology secretary position and the reply..."Actually, only include that story"
 
I still really love the scene in John Vornholt's book Masks when Data is honored with the Teacher's Mask for protecting the children.
 
i love the bit in Wildfire when Emmett dies. you really see that Lense cares for him, even though he's a programme.

and i'm also picking the scene where Hawkins bamboozles the aliens when he's interrogated.

the bit where Duffy's dad's died too. gets me more tthan Duffy dying.
 
Interesting that so many of the nominations here are for very recent novels.

I wonder if that's a sign of memory dulling the impact of some scenes from long-ago books, or if it is simply reflective of which novels the people here are most familiar with.

Maybe it's just a sign that the novels are getting better. ;)

I didn't mention that possibility for a reason. :)
 
A couple of favorites off the top of my head are Scotty stealing the Yorktown in Crossover, and the scenes with Reyes toward the end of Reap the Whirlwind.
 
I really have horrible memory skills, but there is one that really sticks in my mind. Now I'm a very visual reader (so much so that sometimes I actually remember stuff I read as actual images) and there are two that come to my mind.
The scene is the transformation of the Borg in the end of Destiny. It was just breathtaking the way I pictured in my mind.
There have been a lot of other moments in the Trek books that I really liked as I was reading them,
but the transformation of the Borg is the one that I remember the best
.

I'd agree with you there, but specifically the bit where

picard is freed from the borg forever
because it was such a a powerful moment and just felt "right"
 
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