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Tales of the USS Bluefin - 9: "Ghost in the Machine"

Okay, just read Chapter Nine (where the trans-warp conduit opens and surrounds the Eku).

My response:

"Oh crap".


Am loving this story! But I have to clean the house, so I'm forcing myself to stop reading :)


EDIT: Okay, have read everything else. Ho-boy... see, it's easier when you're reading a book, you know how much of the story has left to go. I don't know if things are wrapping up to a conclusion, or if Rodenko going over to the Finback (and the fact that the Finback is still there) is going to open a whole new can of worms...

Can't wait to find out :techman:
 
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Well, from a reader's perspective, your worries about tying things up convincingly seem unwarranted. You've given the ending (at least I think the ending is fast approaching) a fascinating twist that only serves to underscore the surreal aspect of the whole encounter.

Very well done, and I can't wait to read the conclusion. :bolian:
 
Chapter Twenty-three

Stardate 54258.9 (14 April 2377)
USS Bluefin
Sector 04341 – Near the Lesser Riven nebula

Captain Akinola entered Sickbay to find Corpsman Sanders tending to Dr. Castille with a softly humming medical device.

"Be right with you, Skipper," announced Sanders as he continued moving the sub-dural regenerator slowly over Castille's forehead. The CMO had a chagrined expression on his face, but otherwise appeared alright to Akinola.

"Take your time, Sandy. I'm here to speak with the Doctor, anyway." Akinola squatted down so he could address Castille while Sanders continued his ministrations.

"What happened to you?" asked Akinola, in as non-chalant manner as he could muster.

"Damned if I know," muttered Castille, obviously impatient. "Sandy! Turn it up a level or we'll be here all day!"

Sanders chuckled. "Doc, you're the one who always said not to rush a re-gen job. Just sit still and we'll be done in about a minute." The corpsman whistled cheerfully while Castille glowered but held his tongue. True to his word, Sanders switched off the device in less than 60 seconds."

"There! That should do it," said the corpsman approvingly. "'Course, I can always call back 'Doc Photon' if you want a second opinion . . ."

Catille stood and looked in the mirror at the now smooth and unblemished skin on his forehead. "No way! I'd rather have the concussion than deal with that arrogant EMH." He turned his head side to side and nodded in approval. "Nice job, Sandy. Thanks!"

"Any time, Doc," replied the corpsman as he replaced the medical device back in its storage cabinet. "Just be sure to duck next time."

"Yeah, yeah, whatever," groused Castille. "Go find something useful to do."

"Aye, aye," said Sanders in a parody of military propriety. He nodded to Akinola as he left the office cubicle. "Skipper."

"Corpsman," replied Akinola, who slid the door shut after Sanders left. He sat on a stool, amused to see the CMO still checking himself in the mirror.

"Do you need something, or do you enjoy gloating over the misfortunes of others?" asked Castille, finally turning from the mirror and taking his seat.

"I was getting low on those patches for my headaches," lied Akinola, "but I'm far more interested in what happened to you." He kept his voice light and amused.

"It should be obvious even to you that I hit my head," said Castille. "I don't see what's so damn interesting about that."

"How did it happen?"

Castille frowned, annoyed, but his annoyance was no longer directed toward the Captain. He shook his head.

"To be honest, I'm not really sure. I guess the S-D regen needs a little more time."

"What do you remember? About the last day or so?" Akinola kept his tone light, but Castille glanced at him sharply.

"Why all the sudden interest, Dr. Akinola? Bucking for my job? I assure you, I'm fine and capable of carrying out my duties!"

Akinola held up his hand. "Easy, Doc. I'm not trying to relieve you - I'm just curious, that's all. Humor me."

Castille glowered a moment longer, then shrugged. "Okay, why not? It's been blessedly quiet in Sickbay the last couple of days. Crewman Yazuka came in with a stomach-ache yesterday. She has a penchant for Habanero peppers, it seems. We finished our monthly inventory of pharmaceutical stores this morning. Oh, and the CMO apparently tripped and got a boo-boo on his head so we let the EMH out to play for a few minutes. That's about it."

Akinola sighed inwardly. "So you have no idea how you hit your head?"

Castille cocked his head at the captain. "No, I don't. If I should remember, you'll be the second one to know."

"Who'll be the first?"

"Me. Now, unless you really need something, go bother Gralt or Strauss. I've got work to do."

* * *

Stardate 54259.0 (15 April 2377)
USS Finback
Sector 04341 – Near the Lesser Riven nebula

The tell-tale musical sound of transporter effect caused Boris Rodenko to turn in the command chair centered on the Finback's bridge. He smiled as the form coalesced into his old friend and colleague, Joseph Akinola.

"Permission to come aboard?" asked Akinola with a wry grin.

"Granted!" boomed the Russian skipper who strode to his friend, planting a kiss on his friend's cheeks. Akinola suffered the traditional greeting dutifully and gripped Rodenko's hand firmly.

"You do that just because it creeps me out, don't you?" accused Akinola.

Rodenko wore an innocent expression and shrugged in a "who can say?" manner. Then his face broke out in a broad grin.

"It's been too long, tovarisch! Take a look around - incredible, isn't it?"

Akinola did gaze around at the old Albacore-class ship. The obsolete control panels and out-of-date color scheme reminded him of the Bluefin when he first boarded her as a young CPO many years ago.

"She is in remarkable shape, isn't she?" said Akinola, appreciatively.

"Da! Yes, she is. Incredibly, the atmosphere is still good and the back-up systems were still functioning, though at a very low level. It's like she was only lost yesterday!"

Akinola struggled to keep his own bearings relative to the flow of time. This conversation, these circumstances were not as he remembered them before the Eku was whisked away.

He walked along the perimeter of the bridge, stepping past technicians and engineers from both the Scamp and Bluefin.

"Any, um, theories as to how she ended up here?" Akinola asked.

"Several theories, yes, but nothing conclusive. As you know, we found traces of chroniton particles which could indicate some sort of temporal anomaly, but at this point that's only a vague possibility."

Akinola nodded, pausing before he spoke again. "What of the triquantum waves that the navigational buoy picked up?"

Rodenko blinked. "Triquantum waves? Navigational buoy? What are you talking about?" The Russian sounded genuinely puzzled.

The Nigerian cutter commander glanced around at the other crew members. Thankfully, they were all engrossed in their tasks and paying little attention to the two captains. He let out a nervous breath and gazed at the shorter man.

"Boris, we need to talk. In private."

Bushy eyebrows rose on Rodenko's forehead, but he nodded. "The ready room should do." He led Akinola to the port, aft section of the bridge and the door to Captain Slintaas' office.

Inside, Rodenko took one guest chair and gestured for Akinola to take the other, which he did.

"Joseph, what is it? You seem distressed!" Genuine concern tinged the Russian's voice.

"Distressed is an understatement, Boris. What I am about to ask, and what I will likely say will seem strange to you. I'm asking you to humor me and hear me out."

Rodenko looked confused, but he nodded. "Of course."

Akinola nodded. "Thank you. First, tell me how we discovered the Finback."

Rodenko blinked in surprise at the question, but answered gamely. "Well, the Pamlico was servicing a Navigational buoy when she picked up a ship drifting in the Lesser Riven Nebula. They contacted us, that is, my ship, since we could get there quicker. We arrived to find Finback adrift but intact. I notified Admiral Bateson, who dispatched you here as well . . ."

His voice trailed off as he saw the distressed look on Akinola's face. "Joseph, you know all of this, of course . . ."

Akinola stood and walked to the viewport. He had a clear view of both the Scamp and Bluefin holding station a short distance away. He turned back to face Rodenko.

"But that's just it, Boris. I don't know that."

Rodenko stared at him blankly. Akinola sighed.

"Boris, what if I were to tell you that I have a completely different account of what has, and what will transpire over these few days?"

Rodenko was quiet for a moment. "I would say, I want to hear more."

So Akinola told him.

* * *

For nearly an hour, Captain Akinola shared his version of the events surrounding the appearance of the Finback, along with the appearance of the other three vessels and their own odyssey on the Eku. For his part, Rodenko asked an occasional question to clarify a point, but otherwise he remained silent and attentive.

Finally, Akinola came to the end of his narrative. He sat heavily back into the other guest chair, seemingly exhausted. Rodenko remained pensive, his brows drawn tight in thought.

"Well?" asked Akinola after a few minutes passed. "Are you ready to notify security and have me taken away in restraints?"

Rodenko snorted derisively. "Nyet!" he exclaimed forcefully. "You are as sane as I am, though that may not be saying so much."

Akinola chuckled, feeling a sense of relief. "Thanks. I guess."

Rodenko suddenly rose. "We have much to discuss, I think, but not here."

"Why not here?"

"Because I need a drink. Slintaas was a teetotaler, so there's nothing in here but bottles of Andorian glacier water. Come - we'll go to my ready room on the Scamp where we can get a decent drink of Vodka!"

* * *

Stardate 54259.1 (15 April 2377)
USS Scamp
Sector 04341 – Near the Lesser Riven nebula


Five minutes later, the two captains were comfortably ensconced in Rodenko's ready room on the Scamp. Boris handed Akinola a glass of clear liquid before pouring himself a drink and taking his seat behind his desk. He raised his glass toward Akinola in a toast.

"Vashe Zdorovie! - Your health!" he exclaimed and tossed the contents back into his mouth.

"And to yours," replied Akinola as he followed suit. The peppery Vodka nearly caused a coughing spasm, but he managed to catch his breath and smile approvingly. "That was the real thing, wasn't it?"

Rodenko grinned. "Of course! A replicator can't do justice to peppered Vodka." He placed his glass down with an audible 'thunk' and gave Akinola an appraising look.

"Joseph, I believe what you've told me. Every word."

"But? . . ."

The Russian waved dismissively. "No buts! I know you, Yoseph Samuelovitch. You are not one given to fanciful imagination. And, I have very good reason to think your story is plausible."

Now it was Akinola's turn to look puzzled. "Oh? And why is that?"

Rodenko picked up the shot glass, as if to inspect it. "Just recently, I found myself over one hundred years in the past."

Akinola stood. "Damn it, Boris! If you can't take me seriously, at least . . ."

Rodenko brought the shot glass down on his desk with a sudden burst of anger, shattering it.

"Sit down, Joseph! I have listened to you. Now - you will listen to me!"

* * *
 
Yikes for all concerned. Boris and Akinola have had a bad time of it lately - pun intended sadly. It begs what is the outcome going to be. Puzzling and intriguing TLR as this whole story has been. Which makes it a great story to follow.
 
Whoa!

So...I have to wonder, will we get to hear Rodenko's adventure? Or are we going to get cut off after this tantalizing little teaser? ;)
 
Oh, TLR won't leave it right there-because a.-he's too good of an author to end it so abruptly and b.-Gibraltar would probably sick a certain El Aurian on him if he did.;)

Looking forward to Boris's story.....
 
Oh, I wouldn't have faulted him if he did--part of me could see where such an infuriating ending might be a nice little bit of "fun" with the readers. ;)
 
Author's Note: For further details behind the conversation between Captains Rodenko and Akinola, I refer you to DavidFalkayn's "Blood Cries."

Chapter Twenty-four

Stardate 54259.1 (15 April 2377)
USS Bluefin
Sector 04341 – Near the Lesser Riven nebula


Delta Simms reclined on her bunk, head propped on fist, watching the fluffy, gray cat scarf down some cat food. A slight smile graced Simms' face, but her eyes seemed distant.

She had checked the ship's database to discover the cat's owner, with no success. Only two other pet cats were registered - a Siamese female to Ensign Vashtee, and an orange Tabby male to Petty Officer Girard. This cat did not fit either description, but she had double-checked with both Vashtee and Girard to find their cats were safe and secure in their quarters.

"So, where did you come from, my fuzzy little stowaway?" Simms murmurred. Certainly, it was not unheard of for the occassional animal to sneak aboard ships at ports. Cats were particularly notorious for doing so. This feline probably belonged to someone on Echo station.

Yet, for some inexplicable reason, Delta did not think so. She felt an odd connection to the cat, as if they shared some deep, dark secret.

That's completely absurd! thought Delta. It's just someone's pet who decided to hitch a ride on a cutter. I bet his owner's worried sick over him.

An idea struck Delta. She could clear this up once and for all! Rising from her bed, she walked to her desk and seated herself before the terminal.

"Computer, do you, ah, register a cat in my quarters?"

"Affirmative. A 'Felis Catus' male, weighing 4.12 kilograms of the breed, Himalayan, approximately two years, eight months of age. . ."

"Yes, yes, that's enough computer," she said with a hint of asperity. She hesitated before asking her next question.

"Computer, how long has this cat been on board the Bluefin?"

"The indicated Felis Catus has been on board for three hours, twelve minutes, 38 seconds," replied the computer.

Delta blinked in surprise. "Computer, we're in deep space. How is that possible? Did it transport in from another vessel?"

"No such transport is recorded in the transporter logs."

"Then explain how a dad-burn cat appeared onboard out of nowhere!"

"Unable to comply. Insufficient data," replied the computer in a reasonable tone.

Delta turned back to stare at the cat who was busy grooming a paw. It stopped and stared back at Simms with inscrutable green eyes, it's fluffy gray tail swishing slowly.

"Meowr?" - What? it seemed to ask.

"Kitty, you got some 'splainin' to do!"

* * *

Stardate 54259.1 (15 April 2377)
USS Scamp
Sector 04341 – Near the Lesser Riven nebula


"Sit down, Joseph - please!" implored Captain Rodenko as he absently brushed fragments of broken glass into a pile on his desk.

Feeling somewhat abashed, Akinola lowered himself back into the leather guest chair.

"Boris, I'm sorry . . ."

Rodenko brushed aside the apology. "Pah! Think nothing of it. I should have been more circumspect in my approach. But I assure you, my friend - I am not mocking you in the least. I swear to you as an officer that I did indeed travel to the 23rd century little more than a month ago."

Akinola shook his head in bewilderment. "Damn, Boris . . . I believe you, but . . ." He snorted in bemusement. "It makes me realize how crazy my story must sound."

"Indeed," replied the Russian, dryly. "In fact, that is why I had not planned on sharing this mission with you. But, considering what you've experienced, I thought it might help you regain a sense of perspective."

"You have my complete attention," said Akinola, settling back in the chair.

Rodenko nodded. "Unfortunately, I cannot go into many details - much of what transpired is classified Ultraviolet under the Temporal Prime Directive. You are cleared high enough that I can fill you in on a few of the basic details, with the understanding that you cannot share this with anyone - are you agreeable to this?"

Akinola nodded. "Yes, of course."

"Very well. At some point, Admiral Bateson may fill you in on more details - that will be his call."

"Morgan was aware of this?"

Rodenko smiled. "More than aware - he was directly involved. Our 'ring leader' you might say." His smile faded as a memory, apparently not a good one, crossed his face. "It began when Captain Elizabeth Shelby's runabout, the Seine, was caught in a wave of Chroniton particles and she was thrown back to the 2260's, where she was picked up by the USS Lexington."

Akinola's eyes widened. "The Lexington? That was Robert Wesley's ship at the time. And wasn't he . . .?"

The Russian skipper nodded. "Elizaveta's grandfather."

Akinola shook his head in wonder, trying to process the ramifications of such a meeting. He suddenly looked up sharply. "And Morgan . . . he was serving on the Lex back then too, wasn't he?"

Again, Boris nodded.

"Lord, what a cluster-frak!" exclaimed the Nigerian captain.

Rodenko smiled wanly. "Joseph, you have no idea . . ."

* * *
Akinola listened with rapt attention as Captain Rodenko shared the basics of their rescue of Captain Shelby, though he left out the account of the Blood-wraith, the Orb of Renascence, and the Gem of K'Tesh.

"So you actually commanded the Sutherland while Shelby was in command of the Lexington?" Akinola chuckled. "I'm amazed the time-line survived intact!"

"Da," agreed Rodenko, affably, "and now you and Captain Shelby have some things in common."

Akinola looked doubtful. "Boris, I can't imagine Shelby and I having much of anything in common, except for the uniform and commanding a ship."

"Oh, but you do! Both of you have traveled through time to meet your relatives! Elizaveta met her grandparents and you met your parents."

Akinola had no reply to that.

* * *

Stardate 54259.2 (15 April 2377)
USS Bluefin
Sector 04341 – Near the Lesser Riven nebula


Senior Chief Solly Brin looked at the stack of PADDs waiting on his desk and sighed. Right now, he couldn't concentrate on requisitions and reports. The headache had passed but he still felt muzzy-headed, as if he were not yet completely awake.

Deciding a workout might clear his head, he changed into his work-out gear and headed toward the ship's gym for some reps on the magnetic-resistance machines.

Climbing the ladder up a level, he rounded the corridor . . .

. . . and came face-to-face with K'lira.

For a moment, neither said a word, caught in the awkwardness of the moment. Finally, Solly managed a weak smile.

"Sorry Lieutenant." He made to move past her, but she reached out and grabbed his arm, stopping him.

"Wait . . ."

Solly looked at the slender green hand that firmly clasped his upper arm, then into the eyes of his adoptive daughter. He swallowed, unsure of what to do or say.

"Look," she began, her voice tremulous and uncertain, "I'm still struggling to deal with what happened between you and me, but, well . . . I appreciate you opening up to me. I know that was hard for you . . ."

Solly nearly said, "What are you talking about?" when a shadow of a memory crossed his mind, causing him to hold his tongue. K'lira continued.

"I'm still pissed off at you - and I can't get my head around how your brain works - but . . ."

Impulsively, she gave him a brief, fierce hug. She quickly stepped back and stared at him, tears glistening in her eyes.

"I don't know where we stand, Solly," she continued, "and I don't know if we can ever go back to the way things were. But maybe, we can start from here?" The last, she said in an imploring manner that caused Solly's heart to ache.

His throat tight, the burly Red Orion looked down at his near-daughter and nodded with a crooked smile.

"Yeah. We can do that, I think."

She nodded quickly, grinning in an almost mirror fashion. "Okay. That's good then." She looked around, suddenly self-conscious. "Um, I better go - my duty shift starts in five minutes and I can't afford to be late." She began to move off quickly.

"K'lira!" Solly suddenly called after her. She stopped, her expression both hopeful and apprehensive.

"Yes?"

Solly nodded at her. "Have a good shift!"

Her face suddenly broke into a smile he had not seen in more than four years and she relaxed visibly as she walked backwards toward the turbo-lift.

"Yeah - okay. I will!" She turned quickly and moved to the lift, disappearing from Solly's view.

Solly stood in the corridor staring after her for a few moments. His brow knitted momentarily in confusion, then he shrugged.

"Frak it!" he said, grinning, then turned toward the gym.

* * *

Stardate 54259.4 (15 April 2377)
USS Bluefin
Sector 04341 – Near the Lesser Riven nebula


Captain Akinola sat in the near darkness of his ready room listening to the soothing refrains of 20th century Terran jazz. He closed his eyes as the Duke Ellington orchestra poured out "Take the A Train" like a smooth, sweet nectar. As the final notes faded, he opened his eyes and took a sip of coffee from the steaming mug on his desk. His eyes fell on the holo-cube of his family, taken oh, so many years ago on a rare vacation to Earth. He smiled at the sight of his mother and father and a small trickle of moisture traced a path along the crow's feet at the corner of his right eye.

He turned his attention toward his desk terminal and spoke.

"Computer, open personal log - new entry - scramble and encrypt. Akinola gamma oh seven three three."

The computer made a high pitched bleep, then said, "Acknowledged - you may record when ready."

Akinola nodded absently to himself. He picked up the small Borg artifact, twisting it between his fingers, and began . . .

END

* * *
 
Agreed, a terrific ending indeed.

Loved pretty much everything about it. Delta's feline mystery, Solly and his K'lira getting a fresh start and Akinola finding out that he's not the only one to have made bizarre journeys through space and time. Very neat cross-over reference too.

Whatever you might think of this story, know that I have very much enjoyed all of it.

Now I'm looking forward to next Bluefin story. Hopefully you won't keep us waiting for too long.
 
Great stuff.

I was wondering how you were going to end it and this was a wonderfully mysterious ending. We still have a few questions but as always, it makes us want to read more.
 
Love the new crew member, I hope we get to hear more of the adventures of Mr Fluff (because I still don't understand how come he isn't dead or Borg...)

Wonderfully well-written adventure.

Is this where you wanted it to end up or did you have a different conclusion in mind originally?
 
Thanks for all the kind comments! I'm honestly glad this one is over, but I'm gratified that you found the ending to be satisfactory.

Love the new crew member, I hope we get to hear more of the adventures of Mr Fluff (because I still don't understand how come he isn't dead or Borg...)

Mr. Fluff survived by a combination of fortuitous events. First, the Eku was caught in a temporal "bubble" so only 24 hours of time passed in the life of the cat. Second, the Borg were either not interested in assimilating a non-sentient lifeform or Mr. Fluff managed to hide very well. We may never know how many of his nine lives were used in this story.

Is this where you wanted it to end up or did you have a different conclusion in mind originally?

To be honest, I struggled a long time with the ending, leaving the story alone for about two months. Originally, I had planned for Akinola and Co. to return with the Eku intact, but as I wrote in that direction I became bored with the premise. Then I considered having Akinola dream the whole series of events. (Anyone remember the old Dallas series where they brought Patrick Duffy back after a season being dead? The whole previous season was supposedly his wife's bad dream.) I felt that was a really lame ending and would leave readers questioning Akinola's mental state (mine too! ;) ). In the end, I took a middle road - the events truly happened, but only Akinola remembers it happening. The others on the Eku may have their moments of wondering, though.

I'm not yet sure what direction I'll take next. I have an idea for the next Bluefin story, but I also have a couple of works in progress I'd like to revisit. Thank you again for reading and commenting!
 
Congratulations for finishing, and for an interesting story!

Seriously, this is a great personal accomplishment, not giving up even when the going got tough. So again...congratulations. :-)
 
For me it's really interesting to see the thought process that went into coming up with this ending. It's a great example how a story evolves in the writer's mind.

And we as the readers reap the benefits.
 
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Masterfully done, my friend. :bolian: I know finishing this piece was agony for you, but you’ve completed it in an unexpected and very satisfying way.

I’m very excited to see where you take the Bluefin and her crew from here.
 
We may never know how many of his nine lives were used in this story.
:rommie:

A real mystery of a story at times ominious, at times thriller, so I think overall this ending is probably the best ending because it leaves so many questions unanswered and the whole situation a little ambigious. Plus who is to say Akinola is not losing his marbles! Well done and thanks for perservering with the story.
 
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