That was a fight of near epic proportions. You did a great job at giving us a sense of the fighter's background to convince us that he indeed stood a good chance of defeating all these Jem'Hadar. Who are not exactly wimpy either.
The main plot is coming along nicely as well, with a lot of duplicity and evil doers behind the scenes.
That was a fight of near epic proportions. You did a great job at giving us a sense of the fighter's background to convince us that he indeed stood a good chance of defeating all these Jem'Hadar. Who are not exactly wimpy either.
The main plot is coming along nicely as well, with a lot of duplicity and evil doers behind the scenes.
I agree Cejay. By the way, if Cejay likes a story then its good. Cejay is VERY hard to impress...my favorite character so far is Captain Vaughan. I like these characters that are, well, not so stuffy like a certain bald captain we all know...Will be interesting to see how these strands stretch together...
Rob
That was a fight of near epic proportions. You did a great job at giving us a sense of the fighter's background to convince us that he indeed stood a good chance of defeating all these Jem'Hadar. Who are not exactly wimpy either.
The main plot is coming along nicely as well, with a lot of duplicity and evil doers behind the scenes.
I agree Cejay. By the way, if Cejay likes a story then its good. Cejay is VERY hard to impress...my favorite character so far is Captain Vaughan. I like these characters that are, well, not so stuffy like a certain bald captain we all know...Will be interesting to see how these strands stretch together...
Rob
Really? I had no idea that was my reputation around here.
Gedasada, The Undiscovered City in the R'Uye Caves
Vaughan dared not to believe the words he had heard or the proof of the data contained in Kh’ién’s tricorder. But there was no denying the evidence. A series of remote controlled bombs partially encircled the city. The work to eradicate all evidence of its existence incomplete.
“Care to explain.”
Vaughan levelled his gaze on the wearisome sycophant. Weran had visibly paled and fought the impulse to stammer a response. Believing, vainly in hope, they had discovered a way out rather than this secret he chose now to keep his mouth shut. Silence was not going to be permitted by Vaughan however.
“I’m waiting for an explanation.” His tone was cool but carried a quiet threat. Seeing the man squirm but remain tight-lipped, Vaughan marched away towards the Prime Governor, surrounded by a cohort of civil servants and ministers in hushed circle of worried panic.
“Perhaps you have an explanation for our finding.” He directed this directly at the Prime Governor.
Dr Wintrict ran up to Vaughan appalled at his lack of his diplomacy. “What is the meaning of your impertinence?”
Forcibly slapping the tricorder, held in his clenched fists, into Wintrict’s chest he caused the man to stagger backwards. Appalled he deigned not to look at the proffered evidence but started to rail against Vaughan.
Many, many years in command as a long living Lamachian gave Captain Eugene Loren Vaughan a deep penetrating stare of resounding authority. This stare compelled the diplomat to stop and look at the ptricorder information. He read it carefully, not as proficient reading a tricorder as a Starfleet officer would be. But as he read slowly and checked the details of what the device was telling him, Wintrict looked to Vaughan and then to the Prime Governor.
“But why ever would someone set explosives around this site?”
Eugene answered him but by now levelled his stare at the Prime Governor. “I don’t know. That’s why I want answers.”
Petok stood by his Prime Governor’s side snarled, “What does it matter? Answers won’t find us a way out of here!”
“We are going nowhere until I know the truth.”
Raising himself up to his full haughty height, Petok stepped in front of the Prime Governor. “We don’t need your help Captain. We can dig our own way out.” He turned as if he had won the argument but the resigned face of the Prime Governor halted his victory walk.
“I think that your boss believes otherwise. So Prime Governor Hespik, do you care to explain?”
The man flinched. As Prime Governor he was neither use to being talked to in such a manner, having information demanded of him, nor indeed since his ascension to the position of Prime Governor had he been named by his given name. Tradition required until he stepped down from the position, he was to be always called by his title, Prime Governor. It was a fact Vaughan was well aware of but he chose to ignore to great effect to further unnerve the man and convince him of his precarious standing with Vaughan at this current moment.
“It has not been fully decided. Or should I say it hadn’t. The world has been ravaged by the violence of ardent terrorists who call themselves the New Con, or The Cause. Conmenian troublemakers. They cause trouble for their own people not just the Gedan whom they hate and wish to see dead or brought to heel.”
Petok took up the Prime Governor’s defence. “They are bloodthirsty thugs, whose only purpose is to murder and violate and wreck havoc on our society. They use the simple minds of common conmenian folk by telling false lies and wicked propaganda! They deserve to die! This stone age city can be bombed back to the dust it belongs to.”
“What my dear colleague is trying to say Captain is that they are dangerous and corrupt. They have no true cause they simply enjoy death and destruction. We thought their activities had been more or less halted by our firm and resolute actions some years ago to rid ourselves of the terrorist elements. But alas we were mistaken in our belief. Graffiti and protest actions have become the least of our worries of their re-emergence. They have become much more active and terrifying. They massacred a school of children. They use such acts as a talisman for their organisation. When the remains of this city were found, we hoped to shroud its discovery in secrecy fearing that it would become a new rallying card for the terrorists. But as is the nature f these things, rumours have started to circulate. So we embarked on a course, that though it violates our consciences and our normal practices was our only choice, to destroy the city and its history so that they could not usurp the true significance of its discovery. Everything was to be examined, studied and archived for future generations that learned to be more tolerant of each other.”
Vaughan paused to take in all the man had said. He had said so little and now it spilled out of him. Yet it spilled too readily and the explanation was well crafted to try and absolve the Gedan authorities of the crime they planned to perpetuate in the name of their people. It was a politician’s answer. It was the answer of a liar. ‘A skilled and authoritative liar,’ mused Vaughan.
Declining to believe the answer given, Eugene knew at least part of the reason. He had his answers. The Gedan authorities wanted to wipe out any trace of this historical site because it was important to the Conmenian. The fact it could act as a rallying call implied much about the current affairs of this world.
‘Could this catastrophe be that that brings the two people together? Might they learn to cooperate and live in harmony in order to survive and rebuild?’
It was hopeful thinking on Vaughan’s part but there was every possibility if they managed it right. Therefore, Vaughan chose not to haul them up on the lies they told now or had already told the Federation to pave the way for the trade negotiations. It would need a deft hand and a careful game of diplomacy.
“Ok then. We’ll have to talk more about this later. First, our priority is to get out of here and help with the recovery above surface. We’ll break for camp. We’ve journeyed for a long time and need to rest and attend to the injured too. I’ll have Mr Law break out the rations and organise distribution.”
“Camp here?” Weran, relieved now Vaughan had his answers, quailed at the thought.
“It is not as if we have any choice. Though this city is made of rudimentary materials and seems somewhat backward,” he looked at Petok with hooded eyes as he spoke this, “whatever technology the people who built this city had it was advanced enough, to not only withstand millennia of age and abandonment but to continue to be heated by geothermic devises. And of course not forgetting the clever use of the natural lining of the cavern walls.” Vaughan pointed upwards to the pale milky white walls and roof of the massive cave that cradled the city within. Large stalactites loomed downwards, daggers threatening to envelop them.
The faces of the cabinet officials did not register what Vaughan was alluding to. Galek did however. “The walls have a natural luminescence. Of course, we have spent all this time travelling through this city as if in daylight and never thought how was it possible.”
“Exactly my little friend. It’s an unusual property and careful planning and construction by the creators of this city lined the walls with whatever substance that allowed for an almost perpetual source of light. Ingenious really. Now as for camping, we all need to rest and some of the surrounding buildings are of a sound nature and will do you Prime Governor and your cabinet for now. The rations will be with you shortly.” Vaughan bid them a polite farewell and moved off to Kh’ién stood a short distance away.
“You really want to feed these people?”
“Yes Mr Law I do.” Wintrict came up to Vaughan, eying him curiously. He was unsure as to the path they were taking with the Gedan. By Federation norms, their actions and behaviours made them unsuitable bedfellows but the Federation was facing dire days in the war against the Dominion. “Wintrict you may wonder too, but we can achieve little in our present situation. When we get out of here we need to be able to work the government to help fix the problems of this society. Shouting the odds won’t necessarily be the best means to achieving those ends.”
“I can understand that. But you acted so civilly to them after everything the Prime Governor told you.”
“I know Wintrict but I had bridges to mend and I need to keep them onside if we are to have any future good from this situation. Law, see to the rations and see that the bombs are unarmed. Wintrict I’d like you to return to the Prime Governor, help him get settled and reassure him as best you can.”
They both agreed with Vaughan and set off to fulfil their orders. Leaving Vaughan to contemplate his next actions.
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Petok whispered into Weran’s ear, away from the others from the cabinet. “What do you make of the Captain?”
“He’s been easily fooled. Let’s be thankful for that.”
“I do not believe for a second he has been so easily convinced of our course of action. He bears careful watching.” He looked back at Vaughan stood alone as his officers moved off to do his bidding. Petok then looked to Galek stood away from the cabinet party. His insights and insistence on this outing had been the source of all their troubles. “As does that one.”
“He doesn’t need your watching Petok.”
Petok’s eyes narrowed angrily at Weran. “Oh no, and why not?”
“I have my plans for him. You need not worry about his interference.”
“If you say so.” He looked at the weedy frame of the civil servant darkly. He wished many cruel deaths for the thorn in his side. Weran though smiled malevolently and this assured Petok of Galek’s numbered days. Weran went to move off but Petok hissed after him. Weran stopped short and turned on his heel, indignant but restraining his anger against his superior. “One more thing Weran. Where is the remote device for the bombs?”
Weran patted an inner pocket of his jacket robe. “I have it safe.”
“And near to hand should we need it.”
“Yes should we need it I will obliterate this place and Captain Vaughan with it.”
Petok smiled triumphantly. “Good, good.”
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I really liked the dialog in this part. Even though Vaughan read him as a politician? I fell for the Prime Governor's explanation quite easily. Then again, after reading it again, the answer was pretty rehearsed. Realistic dialog is proving to be one of this story's greatest assets.
I really liked the dialog in this part. Even though Vaughan read him as a politician? I fell for the Prime Governor's explanation quite easily. Then again, after reading it again, the answer was pretty rehearsed. Realistic dialog is proving to be one of this story's greatest assets.
Thanks Rob. I know earlier segments of this story rightly got feedback about being I suppose clunky or waffly but when it kicked up into more dialogue character interaction peices I felt more at ease writing and portraying them.
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