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Dauntless 1x04 - To Serve the Unwise

BrotherBenny

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1x04

“TO SERVE THE UNWISE”



Historian’s Note: This story takes place from late May to mid June 2380; approximately six months after the events of the feature film Star Trek: Nemesis™, and three days after Burning Ring of Fire.



This is servitude,
To serve the unwise, or him who hath rebelled
Against his worthier, as I now serve thee,
Thy self not free, but to thy self enthralled;
Yet lewdly dares our ministering upbraid.

Paradise Lost, Book VI; John Milton

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PROLOGUE

USS Dauntless
On approach to Eeroth Prime
Stardate 57387.1


The sunlight was reflected through the stained glass windows and made coloured patterns on the floor of the Hoobishan baths, providing a relaxing atmosphere. Soft music played through hidden speakers and Leza Astar felt calmer than she had in weeks. Ever since she had reluctantly accepted this assignment, she felt physically ill and there was nothing that her godson could do about it. A lot of Trill felt like that after the attack on the homeworld that killed thousands of symbionts, especially when they were serving Starfleet or the Federation far from the Trill homeworld with no other Trill on board ship or starbase. Leza felt the same way for a time but was beginning to feel safe, even though it was a dangerous mission, because Doctor Maxx knew more than almost every other doctor in Starfleet about the Trill. Only Doctor Bashir on Deep Space Nine knew more. She looked over at her godson, Lieutenant Arlon Maxx, as he sat with his eyes closed in the Jacuzzi.

‘Tell me you haven’t fallen asleep again, Arlon?’

The young Bolian opened one eye lazily. ‘Oh I’m still awake, but you looked like you wanted to think so I let the conversation drop off.’

She chuckled. ‘You fell asleep again.’

‘I can’t help it,’ he shrugged. ‘The waters of the Hoobishan baths always make me sleepy. And the holographic representation is almost as good.’

‘Well, you’d know having been to visit me several times on Trill. Which reminds me, you were asked by the Symbiosis Commission to help because of your familiarity with my people, weren’t you?’

Maxx nodded. ‘I was, I assisted in several surgeries to remove symbionts and helped the Guardians to calm the surviving symbionts. Why do you ask?’

‘Astar has been restless of late, and I think it might be to do with the distance we are from the homeworld.’

Maxx shook his head. ‘The symbionts, and yourselves, are highly curious, the likelihood of feeling homesick or worried about being too far from home in the event of an emergency is slim.’

‘What else could it be?’

Maxx sighed and she could tell that it wasn’t going to lead into something pleasant but she waited for him to speak. ‘Have you ever performed the Zhian’tara?’

‘The rite of closure? No, I haven’t.’

‘The Symbiosis Commission requires that it is performed by all new hosts. And since you’ve been joined for more than fifteen years, I’m surprised that they haven’t contacted you already, although the recent upheaval could account for that,’ Maxx replied. ‘It has to be performed by a Guardian so when we return to Federation space, I’ll contact the Symbiosis Commission.’

‘Isn’t that unusual?’

‘Highly, but as one of the few doctors in Starfleet to know about how important the rite is, and as your personal physician, and your friend, I’ll push for a Guardian to come here. My only other alternative is to get Starfleet Medical to divert us to Trill. You must let me know if you or your symbiont is feeling unduly distressed, above and beyond normal stressors.’

Astar nodded, unable to speak. If she was going to perform the rite of Zhian’tara she needed to have five close friends to ask to assist, and that was going to be a problem. Maxx and Talen would be only too glad to assist, Larson would as well if asked. But that still left two more. At least she had time to prepare.

Captain Astar to the bridge, we are approaching the Eeroth system,’ Wright called out over the comm.

‘I’ll be right there, Commander,’ she replied and climbed out of the Jacuzzi, thinking that his voice sounded a little tight.

She picked up her towel and dried herself off, put her uniform back on and then tidied up her hair, tucking it back into the ponytail that she was currently wearing.

‘You’ll be needed too, Arlon.’

‘I know,’ he replied as he followed suit. ‘Maxx to sickbay, are we ready for casualties.’

Yes, Doctor, and the EMH is standing by.’

‘I want to adjust certain parameters on that thing.’

Astar smiled. She thought it was too much as well. ‘Computer, end program.’

As the baths faded to the grey-and-yellow grid of the holodeck, Astar sighed and exited through the massive doors, making her way to the bridge as her chief medical officer returned to sickbay. She nodded to the crewmembers she saw and made a mental note to get to know them better, knowing that at any time they could be gone and she needed, wanted, to have something to tell their next of kin.

The turbolift doors opened and Astar took her chair. Wright never sat in it now when he was in command, he preferred to sit in his own chair, which suited her just fine. He was never going to have command potential, and the sooner she figured out why, the better.

‘What have we got?’

‘We’ve picked up masses of debris strewn across the system and no active subspace or tachyon communication. There’s nothing here.’

‘Get Rashal up here, and find out where Cadet Jenak is. I want her to see this.’

‘Aye sir.’

‘Gonzales, can you tell me something about the debris? Do you detect any Cha’lav energy traces?’

‘I’m running continuous scans, Captain. So far, I’ve picked up nothing but elevated levels of radiation to the background norm.’

‘Mister Mahtani?’

‘Nothing definitive, Captain.’

Astar scowled as the turbolift doors opened to reveal her passengers. ‘Rashal, welcome home.’

The Eerothian took in the debris field that the Dauntless was passing though and recognised the discoloured hulls of several vessels. ‘Captain, the sixth moon of Eeroth VI is a rebel base. I’d like to know if anyone is still alive.’

‘What about your homeworld?’

‘It was on the verge of a nuclear holocaust. I doubt that the Cha’lav would have needed to help it along.’

‘Captain, picking up an approaching vessel.’

‘On screen, do you recognise it.’

Rashal sighed, he did. ‘It is a government shuttle, Captain.’

‘We’re being hailed.’

‘On screen,’ Astar ordered.

The Eerothian looked to be the same race as Rashal but older. ‘Whoever you are, you’re holding an enemy of Eeroth. Return it or be destroyed.’

‘I am Captain Leza Astar of the Federation starship Dauntless. We are returning Rashal to his homeworld.’

No, Captain, you are returning an exile. Rashal is the leader of a deposed government, exiled for crimes against our people,’ the old man cried out. ‘He is the one who brought destruction upon us all by allying with the Agent Races of the Underworld.’

Astar turned to Rashal. ‘Is he telling the truth?’

‘I made a deal with the Cha’lav, they reneged. It was not my fault.’

She narrowed her eyes. ‘Take him to the brig,’ she said and turned to face the old man. ‘If you would care to come aboard, I would like to hear what has transpired. My people have defeated the Agent Races before, perhaps we can help you.’

I accept,’ he said and the screen blanked.

‘Captain, the Prime Directive?’ Wright whispered.

‘The Cha’lav represent a threat to all live. If Starfleet wants to court-martial me then fine, but I will do everything in my power to prevent the Cha’lav from destroying any more civilisations.’
 
The first entry in the new Dauntless series! Astar definitely has a mad-on where the Cha'lav are concerned. Looking forward to more!
 
Xeris you just jump right into the conflict! Fantastic as it shows that Astar has strong principles and folows them - the Prime Directive ought to do so to and when it doesn't a Captain has to have lee way as they see fit. Though obviously this is going to mean trouble.

But me wonders:

Astar nodded, unable to speak. If she was going to perform the rite of Zhian’tara she needed to have five close friends to ask to assist, and that was going to be a problem. Maxx and Talen would be only too glad to assist, Larson would as well if asked. But that still left two more. At least she had time to prepare.

Does Astar or the Comission have a reason behind her delay of the Zhian'tara rite? Is there something else afoot for Astar nevermind the present situation? Also like the complicated person of Astar in finding the difficulty to find people with whom to share the rite with.
 
Xeris you just jump right into the conflict! Fantastic as it shows that Astar has strong principles and folows them - the Prime Directive ought to do so to and when it doesn't a Captain has to have lee way as they see fit. Though obviously this is going to mean trouble.

But me wonders:

Astar nodded, unable to speak. If she was going to perform the rite of Zhian’tara she needed to have five close friends to ask to assist, and that was going to be a problem. Maxx and Talen would be only too glad to assist, Larson would as well if asked. But that still left two more. At least she had time to prepare.

Does Astar or the Comission have a reason behind her delay of the Zhian'tara rite? Is there something else afoot for Astar nevermind the present situation? Also like the complicated person of Astar in finding the difficulty to find people with whom to share the rite with.
A Guardian has to perform the rite, meaning that they need to get back to the core worlds for it to happen
 
I only wondered at the fifteen year delay and whether there was perhaps something else behind it - like the Dax symbiont memories/experiences with the Joran host or the like.

Also wondered about the title - maybe I'm thinking way too much much or way too little - but who is serving the unwise? is Astar taking a risk unwisely? Or does the Captain see the folly of serving the Prime Directive on this occasion?

I guess to find out I may read the rest.
 
Looks like Eeroth's situation has gone from bad to worse...and I doubt they've seen the bottom, yet. (considering it's just the beginning ;))
 
Don't get met wrong, I liked the little interlude you wrote about the Ocampa but I did miss Astar and company. That is an intriguing crew you've put together (and I like the Trill) and I'm still very excited about this massive Cha'lav story-line.

Off to a good start here!
 
CHAPTER ONE

USS Dauntless
Eeroth IV orbit
Stardate 57387.5


The senior staff stared in mute shock at the old man once he finished telling his tale. Much of it was superstition and spiritual but a few facts stood out in Astar’s mind. Rashal, when he was Vice President of the Eeroth Council, made a deal with the Cha’lav to end the bloodshed on the planet by committing genocide against the Dahreki Dominance. The vice presidential government was removed from office and both the Dahreki Dominance and the Fahira Alliance fought side by side against the Cha’lav. The old man, the former President—a Dahreki Eeroth called Janar—had told them of the Great Searing, and she wanted to hear it again.

‘Janar, you said the Great Searing occurred just a few weeks ago?’ Astar pressed.

‘Yes, we had all been fighting the Cha’lav for months on our outer territories but each world we lost was boiled to extinction or destroyed, it depended on which Cha’lav vessel destroyed the last ship defending that world. Four weeks ago, we made a final stand on the homeworld, which we now orbit. Almost every vessel was destroyed and the survivors fled. The Cha’lav vessels which remained rained destruction upon the homeworld and killed the millions that were unable to escape. Nothing lives down there and the radiation is deadly to us,’ he said, leaning back in the chair.

‘What happened to the Cha’lav when your world was destroyed?’ Gonzales asked.

‘They returned to wherever they came from,’ Janar replied. ‘We’ve been rebuilding ever since.’

‘Where?’

‘A rebel base,’ he answered, ‘you’ll forgive me if I don’t provide you with the location.’

‘Of course,’ Astar accepted, not revealing that she knew where. ‘We’ll hand Rashal over to you after a hearing to determine whether he is actually guilty of the crimes you say he has committed.’

‘We don’t want him back, Captain. He is persona non grata to our people.’

‘Commander Wright, what do you know about terraforming?’ Astar asked.

‘Not much, Captain,’ he replied. ‘Only the basics we all get taught at the Academy.’

She nodded, catching him in a blatant lie that anyone familiar with his file would see, but this wasn’t the time to make that public. ‘Have a look through the ship’s database and see if you can find a way to repair the damage which the Cha’lav have wrought.’

‘Aye sir,’ he replied but made no move to leave.

‘Now please.’

‘Yes sir,’ he said and got up, leaving the room quickly.

‘Janar, we’ll remain in orbit until we can find a way to help you.’

‘Thank you, Captain, but that is unnecessary.’

‘We’ve come a long way to do a kindness, Sir, and we would be remiss if we did not at least attempt to help. We can provide food and medical supplies, and we will assist you in removing some of the debris from orbit and around the system.’

Janar bowed his head. ‘Thank you, Captain. I am grateful for any help you can provide, but I must decline until Rashal is no longer in a position to cause any trouble. As long as remains alive, he is a danger to my people.’

‘I will not execute him. But if you want to have that extradition hearing, we’ll deal with him that way. If found guilty, he’ll be turned over to you and you can execute him yourself.’

‘Captain!’ Gonzales stood up. ‘That violates a number of Federation and Starfleet statutes. I cannot allow such an extradition to take place.’

Astar glared at her tactical officer. ‘Your objection is noted, and ignored.’

‘Captain, this isn’t right. Doctor?’

‘You’re relieved, Commander,’ Astar said. ‘Please leave. Remain in your quarters.’

‘Captain, I must protest,’ Doctor Maxx interjected. ‘She has done nothing that warrants her being relieved of duty. You, on the other hand, have. Captain Leza Astar, under Starfleet protocol 121, section A, I hereby relieve you of duty pending a full physical and psychological evaluation. Will you go to your quarters or should I have security escort you?’

‘Arlon, please.’

‘Captain, you’ve been relieved. Commander Wright will assume command in your absence.’

‘But he’s...’ she started and held her tongue.

‘He’s what, Captain?’ Maxx asked and tapped his combadge. ‘Commander Wright, please assume command.’

Doctor?’ Wright replied, surprise evident in his tone.

‘I have relieved Captain Astar of command. You’re in charge now.’

Acknowledged.’

‘Since you’re unwilling to return to your quarters, we’ll go to sickbay,’ Maxx said and turned to Janar. ‘Janar, I am sorry you’ve had to witness this, but it was necessary. This meeting is adjourned.’

Maxx took Astar by the arm and led her out of the conference lounge to the turbolift.

‘What the hell are you doing?’ she hissed.

‘Saving your career,’ he shot back. ‘What you were planning was murder by proxy, which as I’m sure you’re aware is against Starfleet regulations. I know that symbiont and none of your previous hosts have had such a streak, so I’m assuming that the problem lies with you. I will run the physical tests and have Counsellor Zayner conduct a thorough evaluation.’

‘That’s not necessary, Doctor. I’m fine.’

‘As your earlier outburst showed, you are not fine. Your hatred of the Cha’lav is clearly affecting your judgement,’ he replied as the turbolift arrived. ‘Sickbay.’

‘I don’t want Wright in command.’

‘Why not?’

‘I’m afraid that’s classified, Doctor.’

‘I see.’

‘He’s less fit for command than I am, how can I make you see that?’

‘Show me proof, and I’ll have Gonzales take command. Hearsay won’t be enough. I need something he’s done on this ship that makes him unfit.’

Astar sighed as the turbolift came to a halt. They approached sickbay. ‘I don’t have anything concrete.’

‘Then my order stands.’

‘Talk to Lieutenant Parker, she might be able to tell you something, orders are a little more flexible for her.’

‘At least she doesn’t break them.’

‘I haven’t broken any regulations, Doctor. But I refuse to let the Cha’lav win. They must be stopped, at all costs.’

‘You can discuss the situation with Commander Wright after I’ve completed my tests. Then you will be confined to quarters. You will see Lieutenant Zayner once a day until I’m satisfied that you are fit for command. Is that understood?’

‘Perfectly.’

‘Good, now take a seat and let’s get started.’
 
Good intentions on the part of the doctor might well lead to disaster later...

Nice segment introducing all sorts of layers of conflict here and as for the Eeroth--a harbinger of things to come?
 
I thought the relieving of duties of the various crewmembers was a bit rushed. Especially considering that they had a guest in the room. I would have thought that something like that is better done in private or behind closed doors.

Having said that, something is clearly the matter with Astar for her to react in such a manner. And now Wright has command. Now that strikes me as a very, very bad idea ...
 
Again straight in with the conflict this time between senior staff. I know feelings are heightened and incredicaibly tense but I do concur with Cejay that perhaps the doctor might have acted more privately. That said if you think your captain is going off the deep end you can't affors to have her go onto the bridge and let loose a barrage of quantam torpedoes! Not to mention it keeps the story going at break neck speeds.
And with Wright now in command me thinks the title 'To Serve the Unwise' might be explained in part. Though of course likely others serving others who are unwise. I sense a possible mutiny or great inner ship wide conflict nevermind the Cha'lav!
 
While Astar seems to have acted precipitously, Wright is an even greater wild-card. Certainly the Doctor's actions will create division within the crew.

A very good (and troubling!) segment.
 
Wasn't Wright the clown who advocated methods used by Col. Green? And now he has command? Oh, crud....
 
I have a feeling Maxx is going to get very well acquainted with one old saying and an old phrase: "The road to Hell..." and the phrase, "Unintended Consequences".
 
IRW Talon
Ynelav IV orbit
Stardate 57389.1


Subcommander Sokal watched the planet below from the discomfort of her throne-like chair on the bridge. The planet’s civil war had all but stopped when Romulan soldiers beamed down to the surface to scan every single person for Romulan DNA. She knew that one of her family’s ships was down on the surface, and had been for a long time, at least three generations, and it was high time that it was returned. According to her Starfleet spy, the ship had been taken apart and integrated into their technology about two centuries ago when it crash-landed. She intended to find every piece and vaporise it. Her top priority however, was to find her ancestor. He was not, as history would tell it, an advanced scout for an invasion force—this space was too far from Romulan territory for an invasion to be viable—but a scientist looking for the answers to a myth. The fact that he crashed bore out his theory that the Continuing Committee would do anything to prevent the truth behind the myth coming out. With the Empire now in shambles, and no Continuing Committee to speak of, she intended to complete her ancestor’s journey.

‘Subcommander, the centurions in the capital city have something.’

‘People or technology?’

‘Both,’ the Decurion answered.

Sokal smiled. ‘Excellent, have the people transported to the brig and the technology put in the secondary cargo section. I will inspect it myself.’

‘Right away,’ the Decurion replied and saluted, the old-fashioned way.

Sokal returned the salute and returned to her chair. At least she now had a specific alloy signature to search for and that would make the technological search that much easier. As for the DNA search, Romulan blood would have been diluted so much in three generations of Ynelavii that it might prove difficult, unless she could find a specific bloodline to follow.

‘The “guests” are aboard,’ the Decurion reported. ‘One of them is the soldier who greeted us.’

‘General Allak? Interesting, I did not notice his Romulan heritage.’

‘Doctor Gral may have an answer for you on that score, Subcommander.’

‘Then we shall go to the medical bay,’ Sokal replied, rubbing her hands together. She turned to one of the centurions. ‘Let me know if anyone else is found.’

‘Immediately, Subcommander.’

By the time Sokal and her first officer reached the medical bay, and torture chamber—depending on her mood, Doctor Gral was ready for them. Sokal listening to his prattling on about the latest crew physicals, which had been mandated by Praetor Tal’Aura and which Gral cared about much to her annoyance, before cutting him off mid-stream.

‘Doctor, the Ynelavii?’

‘Ah yes, our backward cousins,’ the doctor replied. ‘Ynelavii DNA is somewhat stronger than most of the humanoid DNA we have encountered in the past, except of course Vulcan, and maybe Klingon.’

‘Doctor?’ Sokal warned.

‘Yes of course, my apologies. As I was saying, the Ynelavii DNA is actually dominant enough to repress certain Romulan characteristics. The ears, and blood type, for example. The blood samples I have taken from General Allak indicate that he a ninth-generation hybrid.’

‘Meaning?’

‘The Romulan hybrids on this world have a Ynelavii life-span, not a Romulan one. How many people were aboard the vessel?’

Sokal hesitated before answering. ‘Just one.’

‘He led a very active life. I believe, based on the genetic drift, that there are approximately four hundred hybrids on this planet.’

Sokal frowned. Her House had been disgraced before the Empire’s fall and this would serve only to deepen it. ‘I want them all found and executed. Make sure you know who they all are first. Trace the bloodlines. My ancestor held a secret before he died and I want to know if he passed it to any of his descendents.’

‘I’ll get on it straight away, Subcommander,’ Gral replied.

‘Breathe a word of this to anyone and your honour blade will come in very useful.’

Gral nodded.

Sokal knew that every member of the crew was loyal to her and her House, but they didn’t need to know everything. ‘Decurion, join me in the cargo section. We will analyse the hull fragments. Once we have the alloy signature, I want you to scan the entire surface and beam every piece you find aboard. Once you have exhausted the surface scan, I want you to send soldiers to scan every inch of the planet and find the rest.’

‘If we don’t?’ he asked as they left the medical bay.

‘We find as much as we can. Whatever my ancestor knew, I want to know.’

The Decurion nodded. ‘We’ll find out what he was working on. Are you sure you want to execute all the hybrids?’

‘The hybrids are an affront to the purity of Romulus.’

‘Successive praetors have kept Sela alive.’

Sokal bristled at the mention of the reviled hybrid. ‘Perhaps Tal’Aura will do away with her once and for all.’

‘Perhaps.’

They entered the guarded cargo section and saw a familiar piece of Romulan technology.

‘Is that what I think it is?’ the first officer asked.

‘An ionic impulse drive,’ Sokal replied. ‘What was it used for?’

‘The pride of Ynelavii power generation. It was their oldest fusion generator.’

‘A nuclear power station?’

He nodded. ‘It went critical the second we beamed these components aboard.’

‘Damage?’

‘Three thousand square kilometres uninhabitable for centuries. Four hundred dead, and the extensive loss of the local ecosystem.’

‘That should show them that we mean business. Perhaps Regent Dolan will be more receptive.’

Her first officer smiled. ‘His warships have taken up attack positions around us and we have been ignoring his hails.’

‘Weapons capability?’

‘No match for us.’

‘You’re certain.’

‘You can engage them now if you wish?’

‘Starfleet might need their help later. I will destroy them if the people resist our scans. Have you scanned the ships?’

‘Their shielding prevents our scans from penetrating the hull.’

Sokal turned to him. ‘Ask the Regent to make his ships lower their shields or we’ll destroy them. Mention the nuclear disaster he’s dealing with. That should hold his attention.’

‘Right away.’
 
Wow! There was something very chilling in the conversation between Subcommander Sokal and the decurion. The commander's nonchalance about the nuclear disaster and its ramifications were a cold reminder of how dispassionate Romulans can be.

Great writing - looking forward to the next chapter!
 
Very Romulan-singleminded and vicious without being overly passionate. I suspect the natives will be more cooperative now....
 
Cue evil Romulan laughter at some heinous plot and typical Rommie efficiency in carrying out a dastardly action ... :rommie: :devil:

Really just don't know where you are going with this - terrific! No chance of Sela popping up in this story?!:scream:
 
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