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It bothers me of how much corruption there is within Starfleet.

Simple truth: drama necessitates conflict. “They were all perfect, they all loved each other and never had differing or incorrect ideas” provides no basis for any stories worth telling.
That's a recurring theme in a lot of the interviews with the writers on the TNG blu-rays. So many of them felt straight-jacketed by "Roddenberry's box" of the perfected human.
 
I think that straight-jacket is part of the reason TNG feels so distinctive and mature. It wasn't allowed to be like regular TV, the writers couldn't always take the easy route to drama, so they had to try different things. When you compare it to Picard, the newer series has a really nasty and cynical feel to it because it's less restrained.
 
I think that straight-jacket is part of the reason TNG feels so distinctive and mature. It wasn't allowed to be like regular TV, the writers couldn't always take the easy route to drama, so they had to try different things. When you compare it to Picard, the newer series has a really nasty and cynical feel to it because it's less restrained.
You must have watched a different version of TNG. It was quite comfortable using every trope in the writer's handbook to get to its drama.
 
I'm not saying it was a revolutionary new form of television, it just closed off some familiar doors and forced the writers to find other ones to open. They were frustrated by working within Roddenberry's box, yet they kept coming out with classic episodes every season. Deep Space Nine stuck with the idea that humans were generally pretty awesome, and as a TV show it was generally pretty awesome.

Roddenberry's box was always a problem for writers, not for viewers.
 
To me it's really simple. There is Star Trek as a setting to tell interesting stories. And there is Star Trek as an optimistic vision of what humanity could become. Often, these two align, but not always, and I can understand writers wishing to tell 'the other type of stories' too.

So what? It doesn't necessarily mean society has become more corrupt since the sixties or TNG (*). It's only entertainment at the end of the day.

(*) Perhaps society has become more corrupt, it very well may, but I wouldn't base that on what I see in Star Trek.

I'l leave an in-universe explanation to others, for now.
 
Deep Space Nine stuck with the idea that humans were generally pretty awesome, and as a TV show it was generally pretty awesome.
Oh, yeah? One of the most resonant lines from DS9 was, "... it's easy to be a saint in paradise" ["The Maquis, Part II"]. With episodes like that one, like "Paradise Lost", and like "In the Pale Moonlight", DS9 focused intently on refuting the idea that humans of the 24th century were somehow inherently superior to today's people. Getting back to the more realistic portrayal of humans that was found in TOS and away from the stuffiness of TNG was one of the refreshing things about DS9.

From TOS, "A Taste of Armageddon", another one of Kirk's greatest speeches [transcript]:

ANAN: You realise what you have done?​
KIRK: Yes, I do. I've given you back the horrors of war. The Vendikans now assume that you've broken your agreement and that you're preparing to wage real war with real weapons. They'll want do the same. Only the next attack they launch will do a lot more than count up numbers in a computer. They'll destroy cities, devastate your planet. You of course will want to retaliate. If I were you, I'd start making bombs. Yes, Councilman, you have a real war on your hands. You can either wage it with real weapons, or you might consider an alternative. Put an end to it. Make peace.​
ANAN: There can be no peace. Don't you see? We've admitted it to ourselves. We're a killer species. It's instinctive. It's the same with you. Your General Order Twenty Four.​
KIRK: All right. It's instinctive. But the instinct can be fought. We're human beings with the blood of a million savage years on our hands, but we can stop it. We can admit that we're killers, but we're not going to kill today. That's all it takes. Knowing that we won't kill today. Contact Vendikar. I think you'll find that they're just as terrified, appalled, horrified as you are, that they'll do anything to avoid the alternative I've given you. Peace or utter destruction. It's up to you.​
 
I never said that Star Trek implied that humans had become biologically superior, it's their society that's evolved. And Deep Space Nine backs me up on this, pointing out that 'it's easy to be a saint in paradise'.
 
I never said that Star Trek implied that humans had become biologically superior, it's their society that's evolved. And Deep Space Nine backs me up on this, pointing out that 'it's easy to be a saint in paradise'.

I always thought of that line as DS9's mission statement.

Personally, I've always thought Trek was at its best when its essential optimism was still grounded in a realistic portrayal of human nature, good and bad, as on TOS, DS9, DISCO, etc. You can't explore the human condition if you declare that we've somehow "evolved" beyond basic humanity.

Heck, the whole point of "The Enemy Within" back in the day was that our positive and negative aspects are inextricably entwined and we need both halves to be whole. They couldn't just beam the "Bad Kirk" into space and let the "Good Kirk" thrive, minus any primitive human traits. Kirk needed both haves to be whole and human.

Indeed, you can find the same message in Star Trek's grandfather, Forbidden Planet. The Krell perished because they thought they had evolved beyond "the monsters from the Id," so they were completely unprepared when all those long-repressed inner demons resurfaced with a vengeance:

"After a million years of shining sanity, they could hardly have understood what power was destroying them."
 
Heck, the whole point of "The Enemy Within" back in the day was that our positive and negative aspects are inextricably entwined and we need both halves to be whole. They couldn't just beam the "Bad Kirk" into space and let the "Good Kirk" thrive, minus any primitive human traits. Kirk needed both haves to be whole and human.

But presumably, as we are capable of both good and evil without being split in half, it's more complicated than that. A sin of omission (failure to act when one ought) can also be evil. An impulsive action may turn out to be absolutely the/a correct one.

Rather than being good and evil (as weak and strong people are both capable of both types of actions), I think it's more Kirk's unchecked impulses vs his ability to feign from acting that were split into two. It's sort of like, unleashed, Act Now Kirk trends towards all the things he's wanted to do but has stopped himself from doing, often doing it with no concern for others' feelings or well-being. What If Kirk, on the other hand, wants to do the right thing, but can't muster any force behind his desires.

Without impulsiveness, you can't defy others to do what is right but against the rules/considered wrong or impossible. Without self-control and command of the situation, you have all these good intentions, but can't act on them, always afraid of what the unintentional outcome could be. Act Now Kirk, normally restrained by What if Kirk, would tell Rand about his feelings, afraid to be vulnerable but daring to see if she feels the same. What If Kirk, normally moved by Act Now Kirk, ultimately makes decisions, that, while never easy, save lives and work for the best possible outcome.
 
From TOS, "A Taste of Armageddon", another one of Kirk's greatest speeches [transcript]:

ANAN: You realise what you have done?​
KIRK: Yes, I do. I've given you back the horrors of war. The Vendikans now assume that you've broken your agreement and that you're preparing to wage real war with real weapons. They'll want do the same. Only the next attack they launch will do a lot more than count up numbers in a computer. They'll destroy cities, devastate your planet. You of course will want to retaliate. If I were you, I'd start making bombs. Yes, Councilman, you have a real war on your hands. You can either wage it with real weapons, or you might consider an alternative. Put an end to it. Make peace.​
ANAN: There can be no peace. Don't you see? We've admitted it to ourselves. We're a killer species. It's instinctive. It's the same with you. Your General Order Twenty Four.​
KIRK: All right. It's instinctive. But the instinct can be fought. We're human beings with the blood of a million savage years on our hands, but we can stop it. We can admit that we're killers, but we're not going to kill today. That's all it takes. Knowing that we won't kill today. Contact Vendikar. I think you'll find that they're just as terrified, appalled, horrified as you are, that they'll do anything to avoid the alternative I've given you. Peace or utter destruction. It's up to you.​


Yeah I totally disagree with that.

You're free to do so, but I found a ship full of pretentious, looking-down-their-noses / "perfect" / "evolved" people to be lifeless and heartless. CorporalCaptain's TOS quote is just one of many that can be referred to proving how in touch with humanity--being people with some heart and soul--the TOS characters were, as opposed to the general behavior of TNG characters.
 
To be fair, even TNG toned down the "utopian" preaching after a while, allowing for a more nuanced view of humanity, warts and all. To quote Jean-Luc Picard himself:

"We think we've come so far. Torture of heretics, burning of witches, it's all ancient history. Then - before you can blink an eye - suddenly it threatens to start all over again."

And, yes, Q's lecture in "Q Who?" about how space is not for the timid is quite possibly my favorite quote from TNG. The final frontier is not supposed to be entirely safe and civilized and domesticated.

Which is why I love that DS9 brought back some of the "Wild West" feel of TOS, which TNG sometimes seemed to be trying to leave behind.

(Although we should also give credit to Ensign Ro for bringing some much-needed edge and friction to the bridge of the Enterprise-D.)
 
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There are at least a couple of lines in TNG that, if taken literally, would imply that humans literally have evolved beyond the more primitive traits associated with 20th-century humankind.

From "Code of Honor" [transcript]:

PICARD: That is, ironically, what this is about. By our standards, the customs here, their code of honour, is the same kind of pompous, strutting charades that endangered our own species a few centuries ago. We evolved out of it because no one else imposed their own. I'm sorry, this is becoming a speech.​

From "Violations" [transcript]:

PICARD: Earth was once a violent planet, too. At times, the chaos threatened the very fabric of life, but, like you, we evolved. We found to find better ways to handle our conflicts. But I think no one can deny that the seed of violence remains within each of us. We must recognise that, because that violence is capable of consuming each of us. As it consumed your son.​

Taken in the context with how fast and loose other episodes played with the science of evolution (I'm looking at you, "Genesis"), I think that those who interpreted TNG as implying, at least sometimes, because of dialog such as this, that there was a shift in genetic traits towards benevolence in humanity after the horrors of WWIII, however slight, can be forgiven. (Wisely, the second example includes the counterpoint, "But I think no one can deny that the seed of violence remains within each of us.")
 
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