• Welcome! The TrekBBS is the number one place to chat about Star Trek with like-minded fans.
    If you are not already a member then please register an account and join in the discussion!

Star Trek: Atlas - Footprints in the Sand

Bry_Sinclair

Vice Admiral
Admiral
Bridge, U.S.S. Atlas
Stardate: 38338.2


“Scans are detecting what looks like an assortment of buildings on an island off the southern continent,” Lieutenant Xan Na-Gharii reported.

Captain Bruce Keller rose from his seat and approached the main science console. “Any lifesigns?”

The Efrosian looked over the sensor results and looked back at him with a shake of his head. “I’m not detecting anything in or around the structures. It looks as though the city is abandoned.”

“Any way to determine when the inhabitants left? Or why?” asked Commander Celan, stepping closer to them. Though on the surface his first officer appeared to be just as she always was, Keller had known her for six years so he could see that she was more reserved after what was quickly being dubbed the ‘pollen incident’, where the alien substance had caused her pheromones to go into overdrive and affect many on the crew in a very…Deltan way.

“Not from here, Commander, we’d need to get some scans from the surface and run some tests.”

Keller paused for a moment. This was the first planet they’d discovered to have evidence of an ancient, possibly now extinct, civilisation which hinted at the pocket of space deep inside the Theta Maelstrom could have home to intelligent life for far longer than he’d imagined—given the fact that the Anaxi and Ohmaron, two species they’d encountered so far, were both in the early period of warp development.

“Wait, are we only picking up one settlement on the whole planet?”

“Yes Captain.”

“So, this isn’t likely to be an indigenous species then, but more likely a colony.”

Na-Gharii nodded. “That would be a fair assumption, sir.”

“We may be looking at a remnant of one of the first warp capable species within this region,” he mused to himself, seeing the obvious excitement on his science officer’s face. “Commander, assemble an archaeological away team and see what you can find.”

“Aye sir. Xan, get your team together. Ydaris, you’re with us. Celan to Htennak, report to transporter room one for an away mission.”

* * * * *

Transporter Room One, U.S.S. Atlas

Upon reaching the transporter room, Lieutenant (j.g.) Ydaris Maq’on headed straight for the equipment locker and removed a tricorder and type-two phaser for herself and then to Commander Celan—she’d quickly come to know the first officer’s preferences when beaming down to an unknown planet. The Deltan accepted them with a nod though didn’t say anything, which definitely wasn’t like her—but then again she would have a lot to deal with after what had happened after the last planet they’d beamed down to.

Making a mental note to speak with Celan once they got back to the ship, she focused back on her duties once more and took out four type-one phasers for the rest of the team, given the outpost appeared to be deserted they weren’t likely to need the more powerful sidearms. The rest of the team filtered in, Lieutenant Commander Htennak was next in, so she handed him his weapon and a tricorder. He accepted and got himself kitted out, though she noticed him looking at Celan as he did so, a frown forming on his horned brow—it was good to see she wasn’t the only one with concerns about the XO.

Na-Gharii, who had made a detour to the labs to pick up his gear, entered with Ensign Moll Idahn and Crewman Ishaan Randhawa the ships only two experts on archaeology. All of them already had a tricorder and a case or two of equipment for use in the field, so she handed them their phasers.

“Alright,” Celan began, “we have a cluster of old buildings, the exact condition of and purpose we’re still not sure about. So, this will be a standard survey to get a picture of just what it is we’re looking at down there, we won’t be hanging around for any longer than necessary. Once we’ve gone over our scans and samples then we can decide if it needs a more thorough investigation. Clear?”

The away team quickly confirmed. Celan led them up onto the transporter pad and looked at Chief Phillips.

“Energise.”

As they dematerialised, Maq’on gripped the handle of her weapon, ready to draw in seconds as they rematerialised on the surface. As soon as the transporter beam released them, a wave of crisp Spring air washed over her bringing with it the gentle hint of ozone. She looked around in the direction of the wind and spotted dark clouds on the horizon, rain was on its way.

“Commander,” she said, gesturing towards them.

“It looks like the weather is against as well, so let’s get this done quickly.”

“You got it, Commander,” Na-Gharii replied and led his crew towards the buildings.

They had beamed down just on the outskirts of the settlement, on a slight rise giving them a clear view of the open plains where only a few bushes broke up the sea of green grass. In the distance, she could just make out a small heard of deer-like animals, whilst overhead a flock of golden birds cried as they flew away from the incoming weather.

“It’s not a very large colony,” Htennak commented. “That could signify it was either not long established before the inhabitants abandoned it, or it was only ever meant to be a small outpost of some kind—perhaps for agricultural or scientific purposes.”

“I’m sure we’ll find out soon enough,” said Celan, her voice oddly monotone, before following the rest of the team into the village.

Maq’on cast a glance at Htennak before they both looked back at the Deltan. Something definitely wasn’t right there, but after the incident a lot of the crew had had to deal with the effects, with more than a few strained relationships—as well as a few that had become far more intimate. She had come through unscathed, though from what Doctor Yuen had said that wouldn’t have lasted much longer, given the different metabolisms and biochemistry of the seventeen different species on the Atlas they all would’ve been affected eventually—some were just more vulnerable to Deltan pheromones than others.

The counsellor went ahead of her, as she took her place at the rear of the group, watching their backs. Stepping amid the buildings she was surprised to see them all mostly intact, some had a few cracks in their structure that could either be from poor construction or seismic activity, whilst grass, shrubs and flowers had built up at the base of each structure, with a few even having ivy-like vines crawling up their walls.

She pulled out her tricorder and began to scan. Having only the basics of the social sciences, from her first year at the Academy, she wasn’t quite sure exactly what she was looking for but on a mission like this then more tricorder data was never a bad thing. A scan of the building materials showed it to be some sort of ceramic, not the first thing she thought of when it came to construction, but many different species used a variety of materials that others would find strange.

As the scientists worked and the others on the team began to check out the interior, Maq’on made her way around the perimeter of the small cluster of buildings, only one of which was three storeys high with the rest being either one or two, all of them having a domed roof, curved corners, oval windows and arched entryways, it would appear whoever the architect was they weren’t a fan of angles.

Once her sweep of the perimeter was completed, she made her way further into the village, though as she walked the streets she found them feeling more like corridors, none of them were wide enough to enable any means of transport other than walking, not that she had seen any vehicles not even an alien bicycle. Whatever this place was, it had the feeling of being somewhere the inhabitants had no desire to leave and venture out across the rest of the planet, though just what it was used for was far from apparent. After mapping out all of the grid-like streets, she picked the nearest building and headed inside.

* * * * *

Bridge, U.S.S. Atlas

From his place at ops, Ensign Tathar could monitor everything that was happening onboard the Atlas and with the away team, or at least he could up to a point. Despite the Rigel System having spawned eleven sentient species (though the exact level of sentience regarding the Rigellian-Kalar was still debated) none of them possessed any sort of telepathic or ESP abilities, his own race, the Dervan, were known for their size and strength more than anything else. He would’ve gladly traded them in to be able to understand just what others were thinking or feeling, if only to know what to say to make things better.

Even though Ruben de Boer, the man he sat beside for every shift had been a fellow classmate at the Academy up until just over a month ago, when they’d both been assigned to the Atlas, the human could barely seem to look at him anymore. Since the morning they had woken up in bed together, along with Ensign Idahn, the flight control officer had barely said two words to him as they worked, and he hadn’t seen him during their off-hours. He and Idahn had managed to speak about it, though they didn’t remember much about it neither of them felt any sort of shame or regret, it was just sex after all—he’d had more than a few drunken one-night stands when in San Francisco that were just as hazy in his recollections. De Boer on the other hand…well, he wasn’t really sure what was going on there. One thing he was sure about was that he had the humans’ scent, just like he did with Idahn.

The sensor panel chirped drawing his attention, the readings immediately making him frown. He turned back to the captain.

“Sir, I’m tracking an intensifying weather front moving towards the settlement.”

“How bad is it?”

“Wind speed and static charge are increasing, it looks like it could be quite the storm, sir.”

Keller tapped the companel on his chairs armrest. “Atlas to away team.”

“Celan here, go ahead.”

“Commander, it looks like you’re in for some rough weather soon, I want you back on the ship before it hits.”

“Acknowledged. Our estimates give us another hour until it’s on top of us, we’ll return to the ship in forty-five minutes.”

“Understood. We’ll keep you apprised of any changes. Atlas out.” The channel closed. “Mr Tathar, monitor that storm like a hawk, I want to know the moment anything changes.”

“Will do, sir,” he confirmed and turned back to his station. As he spun he caught de Boer looking at him, before swiftly focusing on his controls once again.

He just wished he knew what to say to help out his shipmate, but that would have to wait until later—that was if he’d be able to find him to try and talk things out.

* * * * *
 
Abandoned Settlement, Theta-Epsilon II

The outpost was vaguely circular in design, with all the buildings out the outer ring being the lowest and increasing in size to the triple storey ‘tower’ in the very centre, making it the focal point—which was where the research team had quickly decided to begin their survey from. Celan had left Htennak and Maq’on to continue looking through the other buildings, most of which seemed to be houses, as she’d headed for the tower.

The first two floors were empty, so she headed up to the top. The silence of the village was starting to get to her. It was in remarkably good condition feeling as though it should’ve still been a living place, but it was just empty, the buildings intact and standing proud, nothing really seeming out of place giving the feeling that the people had just blinked out of existence.

It wasn’t quite the distraction she had wanted. The unnerved feeling just making her own self-criticism more potent, just like the pollen had done to her pheromones. She was first officer of the Federation starship and had caused her crew to be overcome with a powerful aphrodisiac, what right did she have to maintain her position? She wouldn’t blame any of the crew if they chose to file an official grievance against her, after all there was a reason that all Deltans who left their home to join Starfleet took the pheromone inhibitors and swore an oath of celibacy—their biochemistry was dangerous to other species. Those who had been directly exposed to it had ended up with serious neurological trauma, that a couple had never fully recovered from.

If they hadn’t been in the middle of the Theta Maelstrom she would’ve put in for a transfer. She could barely look any of her shipmates in the eye anymore.

At the top of the stairs, she heard excited chatter and the workings of equipment. Following the sound she entered a circular room in the middle of the building, with a domed ceiling, and what looked like control consoles and worktables arranged in circles. Na-Gharii stood at the central table, whilst Idahn and Randhawa worked feverishly off to she side.

She approached the chief science officer. “How is it looking?”

“This is a research facility of some sort, exactly what they were studying I’m not quite sure yet—we’d need to restore power to these controls to know for sure—but,” he all but squealed turning to her, “it’s almost twenty-nine hundred years old!”

“Are you sure?”

“We’ve been quantum dating all that we can, and it’s all coming back with the same timeframe.”

“Commander,” Ensign Idahn began, moving towards them, “I have a theory about just who built this place.”

Celan looked at the archaeology and anthropology officer. “Who?”

“The Chen’i.”

She frowned the name having no impact on her. “And who are the Chen’i?”

“They were an advanced spacefaring civilisation who vanished from parts of the Alpha Quadrant approximately three thousand years ago. Federation archaeologists, my parents included, have never been able to figure out just what happened to them. They once controlled a region of space comparable to the current Cardassian Union, then one day they just seemed to disappear. Though we’ve never been able to locate exactly where their homeworld was, all their colonies that have been studied were of similar design to this outpost though in far worse condition.”

“But this outpost would seem to come from a century after they abandoned the rest of their other colonies,” Celan thought aloud.

“Exactly!” the Trill exclaimed, her voice echoing down the empty building. “What if they stumbled on this pocket of normal space, just like we did, and decided to use it as an emergency shelter?”

“It’s an interesting theory, Ensign, however you’ll have to work on it back on the ship. We’ve got fifteen minutes before that storm gets here, get packed up and head back to the beam in site.”

Idahn opened her mouth, but Na-Gharii stepped in. “Understood, sir.”

She gave him a nod and headed back down the stairs and out into the open air, the skies were noticeably darker and there was the faint rumble of thunder in the distance—had she possessed hair it would’ve been standing up on the back of her neck. Looking around she saw Htennak approach, his eyes cast skyward as he watched the black clouds loom.

“How’s everything looking with the science team?”

Smiling to herself she looked back to the building. “We’ve got a very excited archaeology officer in there, that’s for sure. She thinks we may be looking at a lost outpost of the Chen’i.”

“Fascinating.”

“I didn’t realise you specialised in archaeology, Counsellor.”

“It’s more of a hobby, really, I primarily focus on sociology, xenology and politics in order to better understand living cultures, but we can learn a great deal from ancient ones that can often dictate the actions of current societies.”

She nodded and looked around for signs of their security chief. Frowning, she tapped her combadge. “Celan to Maq’on.”

There was a brief pause in which she began to suspect something had happened to the Bolian. “Go ahead, Commander.” She breathed a sigh of relief.

“Finish up wherever you are, we’ll be leaving momentarily.”

There was a fizzle of static over the channel. “…der, I’ve found wha…to be…powe…erator…”

“Lieutenant, say again, you’re breaking up.”

“Co…nd…r?”

Lightning flashed on the periphery of her vision followed seconds later by a loud rumble. Celan grabbed her tricorder and flipped it open, the screen showed the storm approach, the intensity of which had increased by thirty percent. They had to get out of there, now.

She quickly found a Bolian lifesign just twenty meters away. “Counsellor, tell the research team to get a move on. We’re beaming out in three minutes.”

“Aye sir,” he replied and darted inside.

Celan headed for the two-storey building Maq’on was in. She was halfway there when the young lieutenant emerged from the door, phaser in hand.

“The storms getting worse, we’re leaving now,” she explained as Maq’on reached her and they headed for the tower.

“That building housed what looked to be a fusion generator, from what my scans showed it might still be in working order.”

Even given their worsening situation, she had to take a second to be impressed by the level of technical skill of the Chen’i, to have a power core that could still be functional after all this time. They reached the tower just as the other four members of the team stepped outside, clutching their equipment cases tightly.

Not stopping, Celan gestured for them to move and the six-person team quickly made their way out of the village and up onto the small mound they’d beamed in on. Once in position she tapped her combadge.

“Celan to Atlas. Ready for transport.”

Static filled the channel.

Atlas respond.”

Lightning struck the empty grassland starting a fire, the crack of thunder barely a second behind it, but the flames were quickly dowsed by the torrential rain that followed.

Na-Gharii aimed his tricorder towards the storm. “Sir, there’s too much static charge in the atmosphere, our communicators are useless. I’d suspect the transporters wouldn’t be much better.”

“So, we’re stuck here.”

“It looks that way,” he confirmed.

This was just what she’d wanted to avoid. She wanted to kick herself for not keeping a closer eye on the storm, but there would be time for self-recriminations later, she needed to look after her team first and foremost—they were going to be here for a couple of hours at least.

“Alright, everyone back to the tower, we’ll take shelter in there. Looks like you’ll get your chance for some more in-depth study of this place.”

* * * * *

Bridge, U.S.S. Atlas

Keller couldn’t sit still, so he’d taken to hovering over the shoulders of his bridge crew, looking at all the sensor data first hand. The storm had managed to grow stronger in only a few minutes, but as he’d tried to raise the away team all they’d been met with was static. He’d called down to the transporter room to lock in on them and beam them up from wherever they might have been, but Chief Phillips had reported that she couldn’t establish a safe lock on any of them.

The away team was on its own down there.

He stood beside Chief Aneth Tyne who was seated at tactical in place of Maq’on, the ship’s chief of the boat was a jack-of-all-trades and could turn her hand to any station when needed. In that moment he was glad to have someone with her years of experience there, not that he doubted the abilities of Ensigns Tathar and de Boer (he had handpicked them for their positions after all) but there were times when years in service made more of a difference than a grade point average.

“They’re moving back towards the central structure,” she pointed out, her voice as calm and level as that of the computers.

“At least they have plenty of options for shelter down there.”

De Boer turned towards him. “Sir, what if we take down a shuttle to extract them?”

“I’d advise against that, sir,” Tyne interjected. “Wind speeds aren’t high, but that static charge in the atmosphere is continuing to increase. A shuttlecraft might not make it through safely.”

Keller nodded. “I’d have to agree, Chief.” He looked at the crestfallen ensign. “The away team has shelter and the storm will only last a few hours, so they’re not going to need days’ worth of provisions, they’re as safe as they can be down there so I’m not going to risk a shuttle crew going down there—the safety of their people is always a CO’s first concern, Mr de Boer.”

“Yes sir,” the flight controller replied and returned to his controls.

At least I sounded convincing, he thought to himself, looking back at the sensor graphic as the storm swamped the outpost. Celan was one of his closest friends, Htennak was well, that was complicated, he still wasn’t sure what the counsellor was, and the others were his crew, helplessly sitting there in orbit was the last thing he wanted to do.

* * * * *
 
Last edited:
Central Tower, Abandoned Settlement, Theta-Epsilon II

They’d reached the tower well before the rain, but once they did Na-Gharii wanted to look at the power core Maq’on had found—since they were going to be here for a few hours then they could continue their work, or at least have some lights other than their palm beacons. Celan had agreed and he’d managed to get the small reactor online and producing some energy, which he’d directed to the central building.

By the time he was done the monsoon-like rain had started. He and Maq’on had sprinted back to the tower, as the heavens thundered and flashed above them. Though the distance hadn’t been far, they were still soaked through. The security chief stubbornly shivered in her sopping wet uniform, but he’d stripped down to his skivvies and hung his up to allow it to dry.

With what power he’d been able to restore they were able to have some illumination and boot up two consoles, the old energy conduits couldn’t handle much more. He wished Siraak was with them (not just so he could show off his sculpted bronze physique), as she would no doubt be able to master the alien technology and give them full power to the entire outpost. There was also that feeling.

Ever since the anniversary celebration for the ship, when members of the crew had enjoyed the pollen incident, every time he saw the chief engineer he had this feeling as though a puzzle was missing a piece. He couldn’t quite describe what it was, but something felt different, even though Siraak was just her normal beautiful, logical, brilliant self—though now whenever he saw her, he imagined he could taste her skin. His lips curled into a grin at the mere thought.

Randhawa was on one of the lower levels with Maq’on, continuing to gather as much information on the place. Idahn and Htennak were working the other console, the language on which had quickly proven the Trills theory about just who had built the village which had led them to try and access what historical records they could to try and piece together what had happened to the Chen’i. Na-Gharii on the other hand was focused on trying to work out just what sort of research they’d been conducting.

He'd quickly discounted any sort of study on the planet, its geology, flora or fauna, instead it seemed to be geared more towards astrophysics, which made the outposts location even more of a mystery. Though there were a number of constants in the universe, trying to decipher them in an alien language was taking time, with each new menu he opened needing to be deciphered.

The tricorder chirped as it had completed the latest translation. As he began to review it he quickly noticed a stream of data that looked very familiar.

He looked around but found no sign of Commander Celan. He stepped out of the central chamber and checked the surrounding rooms until he found her, standing beside a window watching the rain with only the lightning illuminating what was likely once an office.

“Commander,” he began, drawing her attention, “I’ve found something you’ll want to see.”

Hurrying back to the workstation, the first officer was a few steps away, so by the time she reached the console he’d had a chance to bring up a full display of the data. She quickly looked at it and after a moment she frowned.

“I’m not the expert here, but is this what I think it is?”

“Full spectrum scans, including a few sweeps I’ve never seen, of the Theta Maelstrom. They were conducting extensive research on everything that comprises the barrier between this pocket and the rest of the galaxy. Every hazard that the Maelstrom presents they were studying intently.”

“Why?”

He shook his head. “I’m not sure to be totally honest,” he admitted. “The Chen’i managed to cross through it at least once to get here, maybe it caused more extensive damage than they expected and they were looking for a way to ease further crossings. I’d like to upload their database to the Atlas for further analysis, it may help make things a little easier for us when our time here is up.”

Celan paused for a moment. “We don’t know what else might be in their system, so let’s go for something that we can keep separate from the computer cores, just in case they have some sort of defences in place to keep their data safe.”

“You got it. Once we’re back in contact with the ship I’ll have Ensign Tathar and Specialist Nalia beam down with a portable data core and transfer what they can onto that.”

* * * * *

Captain’s log, supplemental.

The storm front seems to bely convention. What initially looked to be something that might last a couple of hours has reached that point but looks as though that’s only been half of it to pass over the outpost. There has still been no contact with the away team, though what scans we are able to get does show they have managed to restore some power down there and that all six lifesigns are still present.

I just wish there was something more we could do from orbit.


* * * * *

Central Tower, Abandoned Settlement, Theta-Epsilon II

The science team were in their element, studying all they could from the outposts computers as Lieutenant Maq’on kept a watchful eye over them. Htennak had found the opportunity to study their historical records to be fascinating and had gotten swept away in the excitement of it all, but as they entered their third hour sheltering from the rumbling storm he’d looked around to see that Celan was absent again.

When he’d asked after her, Maq’on had said she’d gone to inspect the two lower levels for anything that might be useable for them. He announced he was going to lend her a hand.

A quick scan with his tricorder and he located her on the ground floor, so headed straight down. The entire central tower seemed to be reserved for labs and researchers offices, as well as a few supply rooms (none of which was much use for them), bathrooms and a meeting room. It was in the latter that he found her, sitting on the table with her legs crossed and eyes closed, her breathing deep and steady.

He watched her for a moment before deciding to give her the space she clearly was looking for, but as he turned to leave she stopped him.

“Can I help you, Commander?”

He looked back, her eyes were still closed and breathing unchanged. “I was going to ask you the same thing.”

“All good. Just needed a little moment of quiet meditation.”

He stepped into the room. “Do you meditate often?”

“Now and then, it helps keep me grounded and clears my mind.”

“I’m guessing you have a lot to try and clear from it.”

Her eyes opened and immediately locked onto him. “What makes you say that?”

“Seeing what happened last week, that would be a tough thing for anyone to come to terms with—the random convergence of biochemistry causing a shipwide incident.”

She gave him a forced smile. “That’s part of serving in Starfleet, encountering the unknown.”

“Indeed,” he affirmed with a thoughtful nod. “However, it would definitely be something that might weigh on someone’s mind, make them start to question lots of things about themselves. Especially if one of the people who it happened to was in a command position, they might feel responsible for something that was outside of their control.”

Celan’s fake smile vanished but she did afford him a soft chuckle. “And you picked up on all of that just by watching me meditate?”

“I’ve noticed a shift in your manner and behaviour these last few days, and I doubt I’m the only one. You have made the tough transition to command look easy, you’re liked and respected by all those onboard, as such there will be a lot of people who will be worried about you.”

Her straight posture slouched, as though all the air had been let out of her. “I do feel responsible, Counsellor, when I took this position I accepted the responsibility for everything that happens to the crew—even more so when I am the source.”

“No one could’ve seen this coming, Celan. As you said, we’re here to encounter the unknown with all that might entail. Has the incident caused some tension? Yes it has, no one can deny that, but in time those will be worked out. Does anyone blame you or Mr Rellon for what happened? No, they don’t.”

“What if, after a few more days or weeks to properly process what happened to them, someone on the crew decides to file an official complaint or seek to press charges against me for bodily harm?”

He shook his head. “That’ll be a matter for the JAG office to decide on. I’m no lawyer but it’s clear there was no malice behind what happened, it was an accident.”

“I appreciate what you’re trying to do, Htennak, but a few nice words won’t make me stop feeling guilty about it.”

Moving over to the table, he perched himself on the edge right in front of her, looking her squarely in the eyes. “Ever since it happened I’ve been meeting with all those who were affected, seeing who might be needing help in dealing with what happened. Though most still have little to no memory about what they got up to, with reactions ranging from a sense of freedom to being mortified at being so vulnerable, but one thing I have noticed from all those who’ve come forward and shared their experiences is that that desire was already there, this incident just allowed them to finally express it.”

She raised a bewildered eyebrow. “So, what? My pollen-laced pheromones were some sort of sexual truth serum?”

He chuckled and shrugged his shoulders. “Possibly. My work hasn’t been very scientific in gathering its data, but from what I’ve discerned so far that might be one way of looking at it.”

“That still doesn’t mean that people weren’t hurt because of it and who knows what it’s done for morale.”

“True, but do you know what the crew needs at a time like that?”

“What?”

“A first officer who is there to help them through it, to hear their grievances, and work their butt off to boost everyone’s spirits.”

Celan laughed. “I walked right into that one, didn’t I?”

He smiled and rested a supportive hand on her arm. “No one expects you to be perfect, but they’ve come to expect you to be you.”

She rested her hand on top of his. “Thank you, Htennak.”

* * * * *

Transporter Room One, U.S.S. Atlas

On the dais, six pillars of shimmering light appeared. In seconds they solidified into the members of the away team, none looking any the worse for wear except for a couple of damp uniforms. Bruce Keller breathed a sigh of relief seeing them all safely back on the ship.

“Welcome back. How was your prolonged stay down there?”

“Informative, Captain, very informative,” admitted Celan as she stepped down onto the deck, the others following close behind.

“Well, why don’t you all take a well-deserved break, get something to eat and maybe a change,” he said with a glance at Na-Gharii and Maq’on, “then we’ll have a debrief at eighteen hundred.”

“Sounds good, sir, though might I request that a computer science team be sent down with a PDC to transfer over what sections of the alien database we could access.”

Keller’s interest was immediately peaked, he couldn’t help but wonder what exactly they’d found down there. “Request approved, Commander. I’ll have Lieutenant Siraak take a team down and get started. Care to give me any hints as to just what you found down there?”

Celan opened her mouth to respond then stopped herself. A moment later a wide grin spread across her dark features. “Spoilers,” she said simply before stepping around him and out the transporter room.

He watched her go, smiling as a sense of relief filled him as the Celan he’d always known seemed to be back once again.

* * * * *

END
 
Really appreciating how you worked your challenge entry into the storyline, seriously enriching an already interesting tale. So there are two nascent FTL species here and evidence of an ancient visit by a mysteriously vanished one - that evidence now becoming the most recent record of their presence... Very much liking this series - classic island-effect biology/archeology.

Thanks!! rbs
 
@Bry_Sinclair , you are truly a wordsmith - no matter the crew or circumstances, your characters and stories reel me in and leave me hooked, wanting more!
Love the focus on the self-recrimination Celan goes through, and Htennak stepping up as counselor to help ease her guilt. Speaking of the Ktarian, I really hope for some more development in the 'relationship' as it were between him and Keller. As it was said, their passions didn't come out of nowhere...
 
Wonderful story of an away team misadventure that doubled as an opportunity for some counseling and for some genuine scientific/historical finds. A spooky abandoned colony, an EM-laden storm, and some crew with a lot on their minds.

Loved it! :bolian:
 
If you are not already a member then please register an account and join in the discussion!

Sign up / Register


Back
Top