Yeah. I love that we're hearing the unrefined version of this before he -- or anyone else -- gets a chance to embellish the process, smooth their account off, or just plain forget things.It's helpful for me to see this baldly articulated. They started from the premise that Picard having a biological son he didn't know about was the top priority and reverse engineered it.
As big of a TOS Movie fan as Terry is, I think he subliminally had Kirk and Carol Marcus in his head. There's no way that wasn't somehow in his subconscious, and he ends up having Kirk and Picard in a similar spot. Actually, a worse spot. Kirk knew about David and knew he was staying away. David actually "knew" Kirk at some point. "Remember that overgrown boy scout you used to hang around with?"
The thing I find a little excessive is that Picard and Crusher broke up five times. I think they could've made the same point with once or twice. I won't go into details because it's no one's business, but I've known some instances of constant on-again/off-again and it might very well have been five times or more... and that's not how I picture Picard and Crusher. Once, to finally try it, maybe after "All Good Things", then they break up. Then they try again later on down the line, sometime around Nemesis and then break up for good. Twice works without feeling like a retcon. But five? What the Hell is that?