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Let me redeem the Synth storyline!

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Here's how I would fix Kurtzman's terrible ideas concerning synths in Picard. (If any of this is similar to something already addressed in the show, forgive me. I have only watched a little of Season One).

After Data is destroyed in Nemesis, Bruce Maddox is left without a blueprint of how to pursue creating sentient androids. His attempt to solve this problem is the synth program.

Maddox speculates that dozens of proto-Soong androids--"synths"--could be networked to operate as many-and-one, which might (for some reason) inspire at least one unit to become sentient.

Unfortunately, this works too well. The synths (in order to make them productive) are all assigned to work on Mars. But when one of the human workers jokes about destroying a synth, it awakens the unit in much the same way that Lal became fully sentient: by inspiring fear.

Fear, it turns out, is a primordial and necessary component to self-awareness, since it inspires self-preservation. Unfortunately, the awakened synth acts instinctively to protect itself by immediately attacking the source of its fear, which at that moment are all humans in its vicinity. The impulse moves through all the networked synths as well, causing the rebellion.

Meanwhile, the Zhat Vash is a cult that believes all sentient AI is by nature hostile dues to their misinterpretation of the message left behind on the Grief Planet. The synth rebellion is their first experience of AI's actually trying to kill organic life en masse, so this naturally confirms their dogma. But this sort of reaction is what has inspired previous generations of AI to believe that humanoids are the ones who cannot abide AI, creating a vicious cycle of fear inspired by a misunderstanding of fear.

Resolving this dilemma and breaking the cycle, then, is what "ambassador" Picard would have been tasked to do. If Kurtzman didn't suck.
 
I mean the whole point is that Synths aren't actually dangerous and Starfleet wasn't enslaving sentient androids. It was the Zhat Vash trying to stoke xenophobia and hatred.

Sadly, that kind of feeds into the "false flag" narrative about 9/11 that ruined INTO DARKNESS.
 
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Hmmm! A few boos from the audience! I'm not saying this is the greatest concept in history, but where do you think it falls down?
 
Kurtzman didn't write the story.

Also as others have said, this belongs in the Fan Fiction section.

Well, I'm not going to re-write the whole first season. I am just using this as an illustration of where the concepts introduced in Picard deviate from the more positive themes of Star Trek.
 
I mean the whole point is that Synths aren't actually dangerous and Starfleet wasn't enslaving sentient androids. It was the Zhat Vash trying to stoke xenophobia and hatred.

Sadly, that kind of feeds into the "false flag" narrative about 9/11 that ruined INTO DARKNESS.

The synths aren't really anything-- just robots. But the show tries to suggest that these brainless devices are an indictment of Data, and, in fact, all thinking machines. I am suggesting that the show could have justified the paranoia about artificial life by showing that the synths were indeed alive, but that they were only dangerous at first because they were an experiment that went out of control, because no one realized how self-awareness would manifest.

As it stands, humanity's over-reaction to the synths is kind of incoherent. There is no reason to believe that the synths acted out of "evil". In the show's logic, they were more like self-driving cars that exceeded the speed limit and crashed into pedestrians.
 
No it doesn't? They say in season one they're not sentient.

Then that is just more incoherence, since the Zhat Vash fear them as intelligent, and obviously the Federation banned them because they thought along similar lines. I am saying that the synths should actually have been sentient, or part of an experiment to create sentience. Then, they are not robots, not are they enslaved Datas. They are just being put to work until their minds emerge.
 
Now, let me continue and redeem the Data story in season one:

Rather than Brent Spiner playing Noonian Soong's made-up son, why not just have it be Data himself? Data's brain has been reconstructed from the recovered positronic neuron (by someone else), but in order for Data to gain the emotions he always wanted, he had to be made mortal, and given a perishable humanoid body (the same kind Picard got). This is his final evolution.

Therefor, we get an actual reunion with Data, but he has essentially become human and wouldn't need any awful make-up or deep-faking.
 
[That look I give everyone who forgets that it's all equally made up]
There is such a thing as "stretching credibility". Y'know-- like when "The Emperor somehow survived"?

If you like the son reveal (What was his name? Beau Soong?), good for you! But it strikes me as a missed opportunity. If you are going to have Brent Spiner return, just make him be Data!

Here, try this on for size:

Picard is told he will now meet the founder of the synth community. He follows a path to a patio, where he hears someone whistling "Pop Goes the Weasel" flawlessly. Picard rounds the corner and... No! It can't be!

"Yes Captain, it's me, Data! I look like an old man because I actually became human, thus fulfilling the "Pinocchio" arc that was set up in the very first episode of TNG."

"My God Data! I'm so happy for you! It's like someone who understood your character wrote the natural conclusion to your journey! Can you imagine if your story had been left in the hands of the guy who wrote Clarice?"

"I'd rather be dipped in latinum and tossed to a pack of Ferengis, sir!"
 
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