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Question for the ST Authors: Is there a ST Style Guide?

Both "Starship Enterprise" and "U.S.S. Enterprise" are trademarked by CBS/Paramount/Viacom/whatever in those formats, as are the other ship names (Defiant, Voyager, Discovery) so they have to be rendered that way.
Ah-ha! So "Starship Enterprise" and "USS Enterprise" would both be technically wrong from a trademark standpoint?
 
Here's how the US Navy Style Guide explains it:


Always bugs me to see ship names written otherwise in novels and in the media. And there are a couple of media outlets that just seem to refer to ANY navy vessel as a "battleship".
The bit about using the reminds of something that's always kind of bothered me. I've never been able to figure out why sometimes they put the in front of ships names, like the Enterprise or the Defiant, but sometimes they don't, like Voyager is always just Voyager, not the Voyager.
 
The bit about using the reminds of something that's always kind of bothered me. I've never been able to figure out why sometimes they put the in front of ships names, like the Enterprise or the Defiant, but sometimes they don't, like Voyager is always just Voyager, not the Voyager.
My uncle, who was a Navy veteran, told me once that the name of a commissioned ship should be treated like a proper name. So, no "the". This is the way I've always approached it. Your mileage may vary, of course.
 
Both "Starship Enterprise" and "U.S.S. Enterprise" are trademarked by CBS/Paramount

I can certainly see "Starship Enterprise", but the fact that "U.S.S. Enterprise" can be trademarked at all sort of surprises me, since it's a real-life ship name, and at least one of them existed well before Star Trek. Does that mean there could be legal repercussions if someone were to create a television show or write a novel set aboard the U.S. aircraft carrier?
 
I can certainly see "Starship Enterprise", but the fact that "U.S.S. Enterprise" can be trademarked at all sort of surprises me, since it's a real-life ship name, and at least one of them existed well before Star Trek. Does that mean there could be legal repercussions if someone were to create a television show or write a novel set aboard the U.S. aircraft carrier?

Trademarks are usually fairly limited (for instance, how there's a record company and a computer company both named "Apple"). And the registrations are public, for obvious reasons, so let's run a search.

I've found three relevant entries (and two others for "Starship Enterprise" that aren't Trek-related. I suspect I'm not using the system correctly, rather than that TPTB neglected to file a comprehensive trademark protection for "Starship Enterprise").

"The Starship Enterprise" for pewter sculptures.

"U.S.S. Enterprise" for pewter sculptures.

"U.S.S. Enterprise" for die cast model spaceships and scale model spaceship kits.
 
^ Just to let you know, when I click on your links, all I get is:

This search session has expired. Please start a search session again by clicking on the TRADEMARK icon, if you wish to continue.
 
What a remarkably lousy website. They should talk to the National Archive or Library of Congress people, their databases are a lot more friendly.

Well it appears I can't link to the search results, but you can try it yourself. You'll have to put "USS Enterprise" rather than "U.S.S. Enterprise," even though the registration is for the latter; the periods caused the search to have an error.
 
I've never been able to figure out why sometimes they put the in front of ships names, like the Enterprise or the Defiant, but sometimes they don't, like Voyager is always just Voyager, not the Voyager.
I think it's just that the VOY writers thought that calling it "Voyager" instead of "the Voyager" sounded better.

The switch didn't bug me until they started doing ENT, and then suddenly all the characters started saying stuff like, "We've got to get you back to Enterprise" instead of "We've got to get you back to the Enterprise." After 30 years of watching the shows where everyone referred to the ship as "the Enterprise", that just sounded so wrong to me.
 
Both "Starship Enterprise" and "U.S.S. Enterprise" are trademarked by CBS/Paramount/Viacom/whatever in those formats, as are the other ship names (Defiant, Voyager, Discovery) so they have to be rendered that way. For consistency, all other ships are designated the same way, but it's only actually required for the "lead" ships.
Is that the same reason the older novels referred to the station as "Deep Space Nine"? I always hated that. I seem to recall that around the time the relaunch began, though, it became just "Deep Space 9," so clearly the stipulation wasn't absolute.

I remember when writing The Tears of Eridanus and A Choice of Catastrophes, whoever did the copy editing went through and replaced all of my "electronic clipboards" (the term ingrained in my head from the 1980s Pocket novels) with "data slates" (which I have an irrational hatred of). So clearly there is a house style held in someone's head if not written down.
 
Is that the same reason the older novels referred to the station as "Deep Space Nine"? I always hated that. I seem to recall that around the time the relaunch began, though, it became just "Deep Space 9," so clearly the stipulation wasn't absolute.

I remembering "DS-Nine" popping up in the more recent novels. I never doubled back to check, but it certainly felt like a new and odd way to write it.
 
I remembering "DS-Nine" popping up in the more recent novels. I never doubled back to check, but it certainly felt like a new and odd way to write it.
Yeah, I don't like that, it just looks weird.
 
I remember when writing The Tears of Eridanus and A Choice of Catastrophes, whoever did the copy editing went through and replaced all of my "electronic clipboards" (the term ingrained in my head from the 1980s Pocket novels) with "data slates" (which I have an irrational hatred of). So clearly there is a house style held in someone's head if not written down.

Oh, there's definitely an attempt to keep things consistent these days. I've learned to use "data slates" instead of "electronic clipboards" as well because that's the preferred term at present. But I've never seen an official style guide or anything.
 
Hmm. I guess we now know who "Stevil2001" is. Greetings, Mr. Mollmann.

Ever since TNG introduced and standardized the nomenclature, I'd always regarded them as simply TOS-era PADDs. After all, they were never actually called anything canonically. Then, of course, there's always the physical clipboards that appeared in "The Cage."
 
Hmm. I guess we now know who "Stevil2001" is. Greetings, Mr. Mollmann.

Ever since TNG introduced and standardized the nomenclature, I'd always regarded them as simply TOS-era PADDs. After all, they were never actually called anything canonically. Then, of course, there's always the physical clipboards that appeared in "The Cage."
Never been a secret, as far as I know! For a long time, my real name was my user name, but I decided that if my students Googled me, they didn't need to find me having arguments about canon.

"Electronic clipboards" has just got that great 1960s cheese vibe that "data slate" and "PADD" lack. It's a clipboard... but ELECTRONIC!
 
I've learned to use "data slates" instead of "electronic clipboards" as well because that's the preferred term at present.
Weird. Any particular reason that they changed it from PADD?
"Electronic clipboards" has just got that great 1960s cheese vibe that "data slate" and "PADD" lack. It's a clipboard... but ELECTRONIC!
Agreed!

So are the preferred spellings currently "Deep Space 9" and "Seven of Nine"? I'd assume that those would be the easier forms to trademark. Sorry if these are obvious questions, but I haven't read any DS9 or VOY novels in forever, so I really don't know.
 
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