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Pick 1 Episode, Add, Modify or Delete One Thing To Improve It

A private Little War SOUNDS great but is horrible to WATCH for two reasons. The horrible wigs on the hill people.....

Almost as bad as these skull rugs....

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I'd change phasers to photon torpedoes in the Balance of Terror and think of a way to make the notion of the ship being a threat with simple impulse power less silly (maybe limited warp drive and the mention of a warp capable vessel hiding just beyond the neutral zone) to avoid taking a decade to travel between targets.
The speed of phasers and photons was never established in TOS, so that's a change that would have meant nothing in the 1960s. The "simple impulse" line is the thing that should have been changed.
 
"The Enemy Within" Add a subplot about launching a shuttlecraft to rescue the landing party to only be destroyed by intense winds, which is something I also would add to the surface stuff, in addition to the extreme cold.

"Mudd's Woman" Add some male prostitute's in addition to the women.

"A Taste of Armageddon" For the love of God, get ride of the funny looking hats.

Jason
 
Eliminate Nona's kind of embarrassing semi-sexual gyrating at every turn in "Private Little War."

No! If anything we nee MORE Nona. Damn that girl is FOIN!

I've always taken it that way anyway. Uhura is unchanged personality-wise afterward, which would be impossible, as personality relies too much on experience to duplicate in the short term. The more she's re-educated, the more she remembers of herself. Nomad's wipe isn't erasure, just the mind protecting itself from the scan Nomad does.

^And if her memory was completely wiped, there's be no way she could revert to Swahili while being taught English.

Bingo...totally agreed!

Perhaps it's like when you delete something on a computer. You don't actually delete it, you just remove the directory pointing to the data allowing the space to be overwritten. You can still recover deleted data.
 
"The Enemy Within" Add a subplot about launching a shuttlecraft to rescue the landing party to only be destroyed by intense winds, which is something I also would add to the surface stuff, in addition to the extreme cold.

You don't even need to go that far. Just add a line of dialog about how the atmosphere prevents using shuttlecraft, reason unstated. Out of universe, it's because they didn't have the shuttlecraft yet, but they knew it was coming. So presage it with a line about how they can't use it. That brings the viewers back to see if it's there yet.
 
You don't even need to go that far. Just add a line of dialog about how the atmosphere prevents using shuttlecraft, reason unstated. Out of universe, it's because they didn't have the shuttlecraft yet, but they knew it was coming. So presage it with a line about how they can't use it. That brings the viewers back to see if it's there yet.

I agree but I think it was just be more exciting to see a shuttle try and mount a rescue only to blow up. I imagine it would be really expensive as well if they did it in the 60's but with modern CGI it could be done much cheaper I suspect.

Jason
 
Give me a real knife in "Errand of Mercy" instead of that little letter opener.
And while we're at it, let Joe Tormolen stab himself with something besides a butter knife in "The Naked Time."
As to what happened to Leighton's face and why, I think the viewer's imagination is more powerful than anything a screenwriter could come up with.
Yep.
The revelation that Balok was really a harmless-looking, childlike alien was kind of the point.
Yep x 2.
Without the clothing switch, when the landing party materialized aboard the Evil Enterprise, they'd have been recognized immediately as a different Kirk, McCoy, Scotty and Uhura.
Yep x 3.
 
The speed of phasers and photons was never established in TOS, so that's a change that would have meant nothing in the 1960s. The "simple impulse" line is the thing that should have been changed.
I meant rather that in subsequent episodes and movies, photon torpedoes need to loaded and explode whereas phaser banks just need to be charged to fire beams at will from the bridge. The effects and purpose of the weapons in the episode look and feel like torpedoes.
 
Phaser control may have been reconfigured due to the events of Balance of Terror. For the rest of the series Sulu just fired them from his station on the bridge.
 
Without the clothing switch, when the landing party materialized aboard the Evil Enterprise, they'd have been recognized immediately as a different Kirk, McCoy, Scotty and Uhura.

Besides, haven't you ever awoken in a strange place wearing someone else's clothes? :)
If Kirk beamed back on board with a different set of clothes the last thing I think of would be that they had the wrong Kirk.
They had the wrong Kirk about 4 times in TOS and no-one seemed to notice for some time until he started a killing spree or something.
I would think as you did that perhaps Kirk got lucky.
 
Have Crewman Green played by a realistically more handsome actor. Also maybe he could have escaped the creature and warned the captain.
 
It was the second knuckle of the forefinger, johnnybear. Watch it again if you wish. The best part of it was it was a bit of business the director came up with to show the audience that the creature was taking on someone else's appearance.
 
If Kirk beamed back on board with a different set of clothes the last thing I think of would be that they had the wrong Kirk.
They had the wrong Kirk about 4 times in TOS and no-one seemed to notice for some time until he started a killing spree or something.
I would think as you did that perhaps Kirk got lucky.

If we'd gotten a fourth season, Spock would've built a Real Kirk Detector.
 
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