Haven't read through the entire thread and it's 1am so this'll be a quickie...
1) Overall, I liked it -- had a very TOS/planetside story feel to it. So nice!
2) The story felt very disjointed so I can't give it high marks; however...
3) The scenes (criminally snipped and cut as I hear they were) between Cornwell and L'Rell were worth their weight in gold-pressed latinum. In just one episode, Jayne Brooks and the writers have made me go from disliking the admiral to fullspeed interest and support. I really hope she ain't dead. As for L'Rell...
4) I think Mary Chieffo is a FIND. Oh My God. She's glorious in this role and this episode was a watershed moment for the character because it gave her a laser-focused inner drive (and life) and tied her fate to what is possibly in the offing in Federation-Klingon relations. Chieffo as L'Rell is compelling to the point of my being unable to move my eyes from her face even when she shares the screen with someone else and makes me actually care about what happens to this possibly untrustworthy, deceitful, passionate, sublime character. She's the best character so far on the show. Give the actor a raise already.
5) Guys, the "romance" between Tyler and Michael ain't working. So please cease and desist with the insipid looks of fake longing. Make them fight each other a bit. Have them have some goddam electricity, yo! I'm really afraid that this is a repeat (again and again) of the old Trek folly of trying to write a romance and failing miserably. Don't do it! If you have to have a romance, have it below deck! Maybe Tilly and someone. Please... no more googoo eyes on the bridge a la Spock and Uhura in the godforsaken Jar Jar movies!
6) Lorca is undergoing a slow and steady revamp of his image LOL. I like it. Either way, don't kill off the dude, please. He's one of the more watchable cast on board.
7) Please! Please stop with the teary eyes and trembling lips act Michael Burnham pulls in Almost. Every. Episode! It's getting old very quickly and isn't a good look on her. Make her as Vulcan as you want, but stop with showing her "inner conflict" via the "I feel your pain" bit. How many goddamn times are you guys gonna make her and Saru fight and then make up? Enough already!
8) I'm following Saru's arc avidly. Excellent stuff with an excellent actor.
Anyway, looking forward to the next installment... grade is 7.5 (had to give it an 8 on the poll).