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q264's Star Trek Novel Review and Discussion Thread

q264

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Greetings Earthlings. I have been a long-time lurker around these parts and I decided it's time for me to start contributing some content. What better time than now? I recently came into possession of some 300 Star Trek novels and in due time I will read the entire Star Trek literary canon. I'm not starting anywhere specific for a particular reason, but I am eagerly awaiting Avatar Book 1 to arrive in the mail so I can begin reading into the relaunch portion of the series ASAP. Recommendations for future novels you think I should read are most welcome. TNG and DS9 are my favourite shows but they all are good in my book. I have seen every episode of every series at least 5 times but have only ever read the first few New Frontier novels as a kid. And so, deciding to skip the novelization of Emissary for now, I have picked up #2 in the DS9 series, The Siege, by the inimitable Mr. Peter David.

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Star Trek: Deep Space Nine - #2 - The Siege - Peter David

***

Peter David prefaces this novel with a bit of a caveat emptor, saying that he had only seen the first five episodes of Season One prior to writing this book, which he did in just a few weeks! While the characterizations are not perfect they are still surprisingly accurate (credence to the DS9 writers bible I suppose), with perhaps the one glaring exception being Odo. Both in his abilities and his demeanor, this Odo seems a little different than the one we know, but the only real distraction is when he constantly refers to Sisko as “Sisko” rather than the more formal and familiar title of “Commander”. The novel speaks of Odo’s problems with authority, but that really doesn’t hold up well seeing how Odo himself is a figure of authority. This inner-conflict is manifested in the aforementioned awkward exchanges with Sisko, which at times make the good Constable seem out of character. Also, Odo’s shape shifting abilities are a little too powerful here, which makes his actions scenes feel more at home in a comic book than in a paperback (or for that matter, on the TV show). Nevertheless, even though Odo is the main focus of the story and his shape shifting abilities play a crucial role in the plot, the discontinuity and apocrypha are nowhere near enough to make this novel a poor outing. In fact, the characterizations and the story tones fit remarkably well into Season One, hitting all the familiar elements we enjoy seeing on the screen.

The A plot of The Siege is Odo trying to capture a serial killer who is hunting people seemingly at random around the station after the wormhole malfunctions and causes several ships to be stranded at Deep Space Nine. As soon as the first victim is found DS9 goes on lockdown and nobody is allowed to leave or enter. This causes all sorts of intrigue after more murders occur and several parties demand answers and insist on conducting their own investigations. While this serial killer plot is nothing original, and is rife with clichés like blood writing dripping from the wall, it is indeed a suspenseful turn by Peter David as he weaves the various plotlines until they come to a head with his perhaps trademark comic-book styled ending. He adds the welcome elements of action, humor, and horror to Star Trek storytelling, which serves both this novel and the Deep Space Nine universe quite well.

The B plot of The Siege is Bashir trying to save Rasa, the son of Edemian religious leader Mas Marko, from a deadly virus that is draining the life energy from his fragile body. The Edemians were on their way to the Gamma Quadrant as missionaries to spread the word of their deity K’olkr, of whom they attribute all great things in life such as destinies and fate. Due to Mas Marko’s deep religious fidelity to the will of K'olkr, he does not allow his son to get medical treatment. This refusal of medical aid because of religious reasoning is somewhat of an allegory to the Mormon faith, and David develops a comical and satirical portrayal of the followers of K'olkr that reflects the earnestness as much as the misguidedness of their beliefs. This plot line also reminds me of the Babylon 5 episode “Believers”, another series in which Peter David wrote for, but the publication of this novel seems to be a year before that early B5 episode.

The C plot of The Siege is Quark’s old business associate Glav coming aboard the station not to seek revenge against Quark for causing his bankruptcy, but to actually purchase DS9 with his new found fortunes. This ties in well with the other plot lines, along with a foreboding visit from the Cardassians, and a thread about Chief O’Brien fumbling around trying to figure out how to perform magic tricks for Molly’s upcoming birthday party. There was also a brief Borg appearance, but other than demonstrating that the wormhole is non-operational due to “sub-space compression”, their cameo seems to be more kitchen sink than we really needed. That ship could have easily been a Bajoran vessel or a Gamma Quadrant visitor, but perhaps David is making a slight acknowledgement to one of his earlier Trek outings about the Borg, the unnumbered TNG "Giant Novel" Vendetta.

What really makes The Siege come together and elevate its quality to above average is the way it accurately depicts the early tones of the show, especially the ethical dilemma of the Bashir story and how Mas Marko ties in with Odo’s murder investigation. As for being the first original Deep Space Nine novel one could not have really asked for much more from Peter David, except perhaps using Odo in less of a super-hero role and making him act more like a detective than a supernatural being. This would have evened-out the characterizations as well as made the novel more consistent with the subsequent episodes. Also, Kira and Dax seem to be portrayed as relatively thin characters in The Siege, but their memorable nude scene in Quark’s holosuite more than makes up for their diminished roles in the novel (even if such a concept would later be ruled out by the Season Three DS9 episode “Meridian”). Overall, this was an enjoyable read that I could easily picture in my mind’s eye as being a filmed episode with only a few minor adjustments here and there. Peter David is clearly a talented author who knows Star Trek, and what stands out most about his writing is his knack for humor. While there were a couple swings and misses that were really quite groan-inducing, most of the witty dialogue David writes is actually funnier than the comedy we see on the show. Overall, this is a solid novel that uses the DS9 characters and setting in a believable way that actually adds to the oeuvre that is Season One of Deep Space Nine.

Up next is #3 in the Deep Space Nine series, cyberpunk author and Dick enthusiast K.W. Jeter’s Bloodletter
(review coming soon…)
 
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Re: Q264's Star Trek Novel Review Thread

Sounds like fun. My podcast Literary Treks has been doing the DS9r and we are at This Gray Spirit so I am interested to hear your thoughts on Avatar.
 
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Sounds like fun. My podcast Literary Treks has been doing the DS9r and we are at This Gray Spirit so I am interested to hear your thoughts on Avatar.

Hey that's a cool I didn't know you guys did a Literary Treks podcast, I am already a big fan of your work on The Orb! Avatar should be here in a couple weeks, just about the time I start Grad School, but I'm sure I'll find some time for Star Trek!
 
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Good luck Q264! If you need help with the order of the books check out my site (in my signature), or Thrawn and 8of5's TrekLit Flowchart.

http://www.thetrekcollective.com/p/trek-lit-reading-order.html

Thanks Ryan. Those are both valuable resources I stumbled upon the other day actually! They will help immensely when I start getting into the real continuity. Speaking of, my one question so far was whether there were any books that I should read before Avatar? I know it begins the DS9 relaunch, but I was wondering if there are any novels published beforehand that would enhance my reading experience (characters, plot threads, etc.)?
 
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You should definitely read The Lives of Dax and A Stitch in Time at some point, and before Avatar would be a good place to do it. Chronologically in universe, Prophecy and Change and The Left Hand of Destiny duology could be worth reading before Avatar as well.
 
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Sounds like fun. My podcast Literary Treks has been doing the DS9r and we are at This Gray Spirit so I am interested to hear your thoughts on Avatar.

Hey that's a cool I didn't know you guys did a Literary Treks podcast, I am already a big fan of your work on The Orb! Avatar should be here in a couple weeks, just about the time I start Grad School, but I'm sure I'll find some time for Star Trek!

Yeah, Literary Treks is the dedicated books and comics podcast at Trek.fm. Thank you so much for the kind words about The Orb. I love being apart of both of them!
 
Your in for a real treat there's a lot of good ds9 novels . The lives od Dax is really good so is The prophecy and change story anthology. Trek FM's The orb and literary treks is really great to hear the authors talking about their books. Avatar is really good you'll enjoy it.
 
Your in for a real treat there's a lot of good ds9 novels . The lives od Dax is really good so is The prophecy and change story anthology. Trek FM's The orb and literary treks is really great to hear the authors talking about their books. Avatar is really good you'll enjoy it.

Yes, indeed I am. DS9 seems like a great place to start, but I'll eventually branch out into the other series' as times goes on. I began listening to the Literary Treks podcast with Kirsten Beyer, it really sounds like she is set on realizing the full potential those Voyager characters actually have. I'm looking forward to reading them some day, probably after I read the Christie Golden books. And now for the review...

Star Trek: Deep Space Nine - #3 - Bloodletter - K.W. Jeter

**

I had not heard of K.W. Jeter prior to reading this novel, but I understand that he has written several sequels to Blade Runner, not Philip K. Dick’s novella Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep, but Ridley Scott’s movie adaptation/reimagining. Apparently Dick was a big fan of Jeter’s novel Dr Adder and said that it was the first cyberpunk novel he had read, but Jeter’s book sat on a shelf for over a decade before being published in 1984. So with this in mind I expected that Jeter would add some film noir style reality-bending cyber thriller story to the Star Trek cannon, complete with disorienting realities, paranoid delusions, and entangled conspiracies. I am sorry to say that I was mostly wrong in my expectations, but Jeter does manage to bring out the darker aspects of the series through his gritty vision of the senior staff’s hostile interpersonal relationships and the subject matter of religious fanaticism and cyber-terrorism. With only having a few episodes to work with Jeter often struggles with the characterization of these now familiar characters, but he does not outright fail as badly as some may suggest. From what I gather this novel was not well received upon its publication and it’s not hard to tell why. Even at such an early stage in the show’s development this novel seems to exist out of step with the rest of the series on a couple levels. This does unfortunately detract from the overall quality of the novel but it does not outright sink it. I can forgive Jeter for his character miscues since I can actually envision these characters acting this way, only under different circumstances in another context. Since these people on Deep Space Nine have not known each other for very long at this point in their timeline, the odd behavior they exhibit (the cutthroat motives, the heavy seeds of mistrust, the flagrant insubordination, etc.) can somewhat be attributed to the lack of familiarity they have with one another and the hostile pretext of the situation on Bajor and Deep Space Nine.

Jeter also seems to be somewhat off on his interpretation of the wormhole, the wormhole aliens, and Star Trek science in general. At the beginning of the novel all ships wanting to go through the wormhole are being forced to be fitted with “impulse-buffers” before entering, as regular impulse engines seem to do a lot of damage to the “wormhole inhabitants”. Since the A plot of Bloodletter revolves around a Bajoran extremist group known as the Redemptorists, one would think that the Prophets would play a large part in their manifesto and in this story, however while the Redemptorists speak of religious zealotry they lack any real philosophical or theological connection to the Prophets or Bajoran religion as we know it. Jeter writes Bloodletter as if most Bajorans are not aware that the inhabitants of the wormhole are the Prophets spoken of in their prophecies, only Kai Opaka seems to know of their true connection. Jeter does however identify the wormhole itself as a central part of Bajoran religion, but there’s something fundamentally missing from the whole equation. The Redemptorists are an interesting group for the Deep Space Nine setting, the writers of the show would have a similar group called The Circle appear in the three episode story arc that begins Season Two. The Redemptorists even have a legitimate party with a few seats in the Bajoran provisional government, but this novel deals with their more fanatical wing. Although the Redemptorists are not mentioned in the show they contextually fit right into the political situation on Bajor which makes them believable enough to provide compelling drama. Their leader is a character named Horen Rygis, who like the shepherd of a cult speaks to the Redemptorist of fire, brimstone, blood and revenge. These parts of the novel would have been great if Jeter had made the Prophet connection and if the DS9 Writer’s Bible had any of the Pah-Wraith material in there yet, but as it stands this plotline feels a little too disconnected from continuity to really make it a solid execution.

The B plot to Bloodletter is the Cardassians attempting to reacquire some of the strategic capital they lost after abandoning DS9. By making a sovereign claim on the Gamma Quadrant side of the wormhole they think they can effectively stop all traffic through the interstellar tunnel and render the Bajoran economy further in ruins. In theory this is a good concept, particularly the Cardassians laying claim to the other side of the wormhole, but so little attention is paid to the Cardassians themselves that the threat of their success is nothing but a looming countdown timer rather than an actual dramatic story arc. The Cardassians that are on the station in the beginning of the novel also act quite strange, particularly towards Odo, of whom they revel in his otherness, as if the good Constable hadn’t been a part of Terok Nor, and acting like they couldn't wrap their spoon-indented heads around such a creature even existing. One extremely troubling scene involves a particular Gul watching Odo while he “slept” in a bathtub as the Gul enjoyed bowl after bowl of pipe tobacco while unbeknownst to him Odo slowly trickled his way down into the drain while simultaneously being replaced by a dark golden fluid to cover his escape. Nevertheless, the idea that the Cardassians are trying to stake a legal claim to the wormhole is a good one, especially this early in the show having just realized what a huge mistake they made in abandoning Deep Space Nine and Bajor in the first place. The problem is that they are largely an afterthought in the plotting of the novel, and besides going through the wormhole and getting a few choice snippets of dialogue they really don’t have any bearing on how the book unfolds at all. Jeter writes the Cardassians surprisingly well, they fit right into the dark and suspicious tones he evokes from the DS9 universe, he just unfortunately does not really know what to do with them once they are there.

These two plot lines are introduced early in Bloodletter and then become fused together rather matter of factly by the end of Part 1. Part 2 of the novel is where the suspense really takes off as Kira is trapped aboard a substation on the Gamma Quadrant side of the wormhole with the psychopathic cult leader bent on killing her even if it means him becoming a martyr. These scenes kind of remind me of another Ridley Scott movie, Alien, but with an obviously less threatening adversary. The cramped spaces and dark corridors of the substation fit the noir genre that Jeter is thematically trying to achieve, and it does admittedly fit well with the DS9 universe. The cult leader Horen Rygis is no pushover so to speak, but he is clearly ill-fit to compete against Kira Nerys, who has both survival skills and the abilities of a well-trained killer. The two plot threads really come together in Bloodletter on account of Kira and her internal struggle with her identity in a post-colonial Bajor. Both the insubordination she shows towards Sisko and the Federation, as well as the turncoat image she inadvertently projects to radicals like Horen Rygis and the Redemptionists gives her these contrasting and conflicting responsibilities as an intercessor between two drastically different worlds. Bloodletter is really a Kira novel and seeing as how she is probably the show’s most complex character I commend K.W. Jeter for tackling her psychological makeup at such in an early stage of Deep Space Nine’s development. He really nails a part of Kira’s personality that the show touches upon and develops throughout the series, but Jeter’s interpretation of the Major is more aligned with what is shown in the pilot episode “Emissary” and the following episode “Past Prologue” - more untrustworthy and prone to volatility, but ultimately dependable. Jeter spends much more time psychoanalyzing the characters and their motivations than Peter David does in The Siege, and in the case of Kira this technique really pays off. Along with Bashir, who is given a command situation due to a technicality in Starfleet protocol, Kira and the young Doctor are given the most page time, especially in Part 2 where they are stuck inside and on the wrong side of the wormhole. Here is where Julian Bashir meets the wormhole inhabitants, again not directly called “Prophets”, and proceeds to have encounters much like Sisko did in the pilot episode. Thankfully, Bashir’s character is as well realized as Kira’s is in Bloodletter, it seems these early novelizations have a better grasp on Bashir than perhaps the show’s writers did at the time. I quite enjoyed the showdown he had with Sisko in his office playing “hardball”, although again that scene reminded me more of something that would have happened later on in the series rather than some fresh face from the Academy trying to overrule his new superior officer from the get-go.

There are more problematic inconsistencies throughout Bloodletter that seriously detract from the overall quality of the novel. For instance, Kira at one point refers to the “wormhole inhabitants” (ie: the Prophets, AKA her Gods) as “our little friends in the sky”, as if they meant so little to her and her beliefs. There was even a point where she and the narrator refer to herself as “human”. My guess is that Kira used such informal phrasing of the Prophets because she is having a bit of a crisis of faith having seen her planet ravaged since she was a child and now the benevolent overlords of the Federation had just waltzed right in. And the references to being human may just have been a way of saying “humanoid”. Nevertheless, these errors are distracting because they add up and make the whole book feel slightly disconnected from the show even after only a handful of episodes had aired. Furthermore, the novel is sometimes difficult to follow as it jumps from scene to scene and disorients the dialogue with excess techno-jargon exposition and bizarre formatting. I believe Jeter was trying to emulate the disorientation felt in many Philip K. Dick stories, but fails to even come close in a literary sense, he probably had too many editorial restrictions to even fully realize such an endeavor. Peter David’s scene transitioning and structure of action sequences in The Siege on the other hand were much more pleasing to read with a much more effective pace and sense of timing. Jeter does however capture the voice of many of the characters in many of the long speeches given throughout the book, particularly with Sisko, who you can just see get oh so excitable over things and becoming very animated in the process. Of course I think my own imagination has inserted these images into the reading of K.W. Jeter’s Bloodletter, but he does do a good job at coming up with some intriguing ideas to work with. Unfortunately, it just doesn’t rise above average quality despite having the right concepts and the style to do so. Overall this does feel like a plausible DS9 story, it could have been reworked and turned into a later season episode that probably would have been great. Jeter is capable writer who knows the proper elements of suspense and drama, but just does not know how to quite put them all together in the Deep Space Nine universe. Bloodletter does have data chips, sensor grids, code signals, and computer sabotage, but still, there is very little cyberpunk about this novel. I do sense the notion of these elements in Jeter’s vision, but they don't coalesce into anything thematically meaningful to the genre. I wouldn’t necessarily call Bloodletter a total dud, but it’s too off the mark to make it a thrilling read and too unfamiliar with Star Trek to make it a necessary venture.

Up next was going to be the pseudonymously scribed The Big Game, #4 in the Deep Space Nine series, but upon your recommendations I am going to re-watch "What You Leave Behind" and crack open the short story anthology The Lives of Dax. These last two novels had very little Dax in them, so I'd say they are about due...

(review coming soon...)
 
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So with this in mind I expected that Jeter would add some film noir style reality-bending cyber thriller story to the Star Trek cannon, complete with disorienting realities, paranoid delusions, and entangled conspiracies.

There's some of that in his second DS9 novel, Warped. But that was so poorly received by the fans that it killed the DS9 hardcover line for quite a few years. That kind of Phildickian reality bending doesn't really fit the rationalist Trek milieu.


Jeter also seems to be somewhat off on his interpretation of the wormhole, the wormhole aliens, and Star Trek science in general. At the beginning of the novel all ships wanting to go through the wormhole are being forced to be fitted with “impulse-buffers” before entering, as regular impulse engines seem to do a lot of damage to the “wormhole inhabitants”.

I believe this was part of the original premise of the show, spelled out in the writers' bible and references that all the novelists would've gotten, but was dropped before it was ever mentioned on air. I guess the idea was to justify why ships would need to stop at the station before passing through the wormhole, but it would've created too many complications.


Jeter writes Bloodletter as if most Bajorans are not aware that the inhabitants of the wormhole are the Prophets spoken of in their prophecies, only Kai Opaka seems to know of their true connection.

To be fair, at the early point when this was written, there was no evidence to the contrary.


There are more problematic inconsistencies throughout Bloodletter that seriously detract from the overall quality of the novel. For instance, Kira at one point refers to the “wormhole inhabitants” (ie: the Prophets, AKA her Gods) as “our little friends in the sky”, as if they meant so little to her and her beliefs. There was even a point where she and the narrator refer to herself as “human”. My guess is that Kira used such informal phrasing of the Prophets because she is having a bit of a crisis of faith having seen her planet ravaged since she was a child and now the benevolent overlords of the Federation had just waltzed right in.

Again, though, at the time the book was written, most of what we now know about Bajoran religion hadn't been defined yet. I don't think Kira had been established as a particularly spiritual person at this point either.


For me, the most annoying misinterpretation was of the wormhole aliens' manifestations. The idea established in "Emissary" was that they were too alien for Sisko to comprehend directly, so his mind used his memories as analogies: He perceived their aggressive element as Locutus, their inquisitive element as Jake, etc., and perceived them and himself as immersed within the memory settings where he'd interacted with those people -- he was on the Saratoga bridge when he saw Locutus, at the fishing hole or baseball field when he saw Jake, etc. It was pretty clearly his own mind that was selecting the images, because the aliens couldn't perceive what they were seeing and what it meant. But in the novel, the wormhole aliens are manifesting in the real world and choosing to adopt illusory disguises -- for instance, Bashir sees one appear before him as Kira (I think) while he's in the runabout. That really disappointed me, because it was taking the cleverest, most fascinatingly subtle idea in "Emissary" -- the human mind filtering the incomprehensible through symbols from its own experience, which actually fits pretty nicely with how human perceptions actually work -- and replacing it with a sci-fi cliche -- godlike aliens choosing to adopt humanoid disguises, like the Organians or the Q.
 
Yes, indeed I am. DS9 seems like a great place to start, but I'll eventually branch out into the other series' as times goes on. I began listening to the Literary Treks podcast with Kirsten Beyer, it really sounds like she is set on realizing the full potential those Voyager characters actually have. I'm looking forward to reading them some day, probably after I read the Christie Golden books. And now for the review...

Kirsten is amazing with Voy, you'll lover her books when you get there!
 
So with this in mind I expected that Jeter would add some film noir style reality-bending cyber thriller story to the Star Trek cannon, complete with disorienting realities, paranoid delusions, and entangled conspiracies.

There's some of that in his second DS9 novel, Warped. But that was so poorly received by the fans that it killed the DS9 hardcover line for quite a few years. That kind of Phildickian reality bending doesn't really fit the rationalist Trek milieu.

That's a good point. Although I would like to read such a Star Trek story I can see where that style diverges from the rational essence of Trek. There were a few TNG episodes I think worthy of the Phildickian tag, a couple Riker episodes come to mind, but other than that Star Trek doesn't really enter that realm all to often. I have Warped on the shelf and will probably read it at some point. It doesn't sound as if the experiment really paid off though.


Jeter also seems to be somewhat off on his interpretation of the wormhole, the wormhole aliens, and Star Trek science in general. At the beginning of the novel all ships wanting to go through the wormhole are being forced to be fitted with “impulse-buffers” before entering, as regular impulse engines seem to do a lot of damage to the “wormhole inhabitants”.

I believe this was part of the original premise of the show, spelled out in the writers' bible and references that all the novelists would've gotten, but was dropped before it was ever mentioned on air. I guess the idea was to justify why ships would need to stop at the station before passing through the wormhole, but it would've created too many complications.

Pretty cool. The plausibility behind the idea didn't particularly bother me, it was more thinking "there is no way they keep this up". There's also a point in the novel when DS9 communicates with the Cardassian ship in the Gamma Quadrant even though the wormhole was shut down on the AQ side. Things like that make me raise my eyebrows, maybe the true distance between the two points wasn't really spelled out in the writer's bible.


Jeter writes Bloodletter as if most Bajorans are not aware that the inhabitants of the wormhole are the Prophets spoken of in their prophecies, only Kai Opaka seems to know of their true connection.

To be fair, at the early point when this was written, there was no evidence to the contrary.

I'd have to rewatch "Emissary" but I was under the impression that by the end of the episode the Bajorans knew that Sisko was in contact with the Prophets and that everyone knew the wormhole was their cosmic temple. If not, it's an interesting piece of early DS9 lore not much explored. What would it be like having the Gods in your prophecies come to life in the sky after decades of oppression? Would rational Bajorans have a difficult time accepting theological doctrine now that physical proof was attainable?


There are more problematic inconsistencies throughout Bloodletter that seriously detract from the overall quality of the novel. For instance, Kira at one point refers to the “wormhole inhabitants” (ie: the Prophets, AKA her Gods) as “our little friends in the sky”, as if they meant so little to her and her beliefs. There was even a point where she and the narrator refer to herself as “human”. My guess is that Kira used such informal phrasing of the Prophets because she is having a bit of a crisis of faith having seen her planet ravaged since she was a child and now the benevolent overlords of the Federation had just waltzed right in.

Again, though, at the time the book was written, most of what we now know about Bajoran religion hadn't been defined yet. I don't think Kira had been established as a particularly spiritual person at this point either.

Yeah many of the weird Bajoran elements can be easily forgiven for this reason, it's just that a sense of Kira's spirituality and a more canonical representation of the Prophets would have really tied this book together. Kira being tempted by the message of the Redemptorists would have really heightened the drama.


For me, the most annoying misinterpretation was of the wormhole aliens' manifestations. The idea established in "Emissary" was that they were too alien for Sisko to comprehend directly, so his mind used his memories as analogies: He perceived their aggressive element as Locutus, their inquisitive element as Jake, etc., and perceived them and himself as immersed within the memory settings where he'd interacted with those people -- he was on the Saratoga bridge when he saw Locutus, at the fishing hole or baseball field when he saw Jake, etc. It was pretty clearly his own mind that was selecting the images, because the aliens couldn't perceive what they were seeing and what it meant. But in the novel, the wormhole aliens are manifesting in the real world and choosing to adopt illusory disguises -- for instance, Bashir sees one appear before him as Kira (I think) while he's in the runabout. That really disappointed me, because it was taking the cleverest, most fascinatingly subtle idea in "Emissary" -- the human mind filtering the incomprehensible through symbols from its own experience, which actually fits pretty nicely with how human perceptions actually work -- and replacing it with a sci-fi cliche -- godlike aliens choosing to adopt humanoid disguises, like the Organians or the Q.

That's another really good point! I hadn't thought of how they used memory as a way to communicate between dimensions. Yeah, in the book it's just a spectral type image of Kira that appears to Bashir, no reflection into Bashir's past. This would have actually really suited the Phildickian element you mentioned earlier, playing with the different realities and Bashir's perceptions of them. In the book they just go on about time & space, and having been wounded by the impulse drives, which isn't necessarily out of step, but they just take on an illusory body rather than tap into their supra-temporal nature.
 
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There were a few TNG episodes I think worthy of the Phildickian tag, a couple Riker episodes come to mind, but other than that Star Trek doesn't really enter that realm all to often.

And when it does, there's at least a nominally scientific explanation for it. In Warped, it's simply a matter of virtual reality bleeding into real reality for no evident reason.


There's also a point in the novel when DS9 communicates with the Cardassian ship in the Gamma Quadrant even though the wormhole was shut down on the AQ side. Things like that make me raise my eyebrows, maybe the true distance between the two points wasn't really spelled out in the writer's bible.

No, the distance was clearly stated from the start, both in the writers' materials and in "Emissary." I suppose it was the range of subspace radio that was less clearly defined.

And as we later learned, with or without the wormhole being open, there was no subspace communication possible until the events of "Destiny."



I'd have to rewatch "Emissary" but I was under the impression that by the end of the episode the Bajorans knew that Sisko was in contact with the Prophets and that everyone knew the wormhole was their cosmic temple. If not, it's an interesting piece of early DS9 lore not much explored. What would it be like having your Gods almost come to life in the sky after decades of oppression?

The religious side of the wormhole isn't discussed at all in the second half of the pilot, and in the first half the Prophets and the Celestial Temple are only brought up by Opaka and another monk, and by Sisko and Dax discussing the legends of the Temple. Aside from an early line by Kira that their religion is all that held the Bajorans together, the pilot is unclear on whether Opaka's beliefs about the Temple are widespread.



That's another really good point! I hadn't thought of how they used memory as a way to communicate between dimensions. Yeah, in the book it's just a spectral type image of Kira that appears to Bashir, no reflection into Bashir's past. This would have actually suited the Phildickian element you mentioned earlier, playing with the different realities and perceptions of them. In the book they just go on about time & space, and having been wounded by the impulse drives, which isn't necessarily out of step, but they just take on disguises rather than tap into their supra-temporal nature.

The point I was making, though, was that it wasn't the Prophets who chose the images from Sisko's past -- it was his own brain struggling to comprehend what he sensed by drawing analogies from his memory. As I said, this is essentially how the brain works: If we get a fragmentary sensory input and aren't sure what it is, our brains will seek some corresponding pattern from its memory and project it onto what we sense. That's why we so often mistake the nature of things out of the corner of our eye or in the dark, or why we tend to imagine patterns in things like clouds or constellations. The brain understands things by analogy with existing referents in its memory.

In this case, Sisko was in a sensory environment so alien that he couldn't see or hear or feel anything -- he just somehow sensed the thoughts, natures, and attitudes of the wormhole aliens as they communicated with him. And his brain filled that sensory void with memories that were conceptually similar to what he was sensing, e.g. when he sensed that one of the aliens was hostile and wanted to destroy him, he found himself reliving his memory of Locutus at Wolf 359.

I mean, it couldn't have been the Prophets themselves selecting the images, because they didn't know what those images meant until Sisko subsequently told them. They made it clear in dialogue that he was the one bringing them to these places in his memory, not the other way around.
 
The religious side of the wormhole isn't discussed at all in the second half of the pilot, and in the first half the Prophets and the Celestial Temple are only brought up by Opaka and another monk, and by Sisko and Dax discussing the legends of the Temple. Aside from an early line by Kira that their religion is all that held the Bajorans together, the pilot is unclear on whether Opaka's beliefs about the Temple are widespread.

The point I was making, though, was that it wasn't the Prophets who chose the images from Sisko's past -- it was his own brain struggling to comprehend what he sensed by drawing analogies from his memory.

I mean, it couldn't have been the Prophets themselves selecting the images, because they didn't know what those images meant until Sisko subsequently told them. They made it clear in dialogue that he was the one bringing them to these places in his memory, not the other way around.

Well, you have convinced me to watch "Emissary" and "What You Leave Behind" back-to-back, paying attention to the finer details of the pilot and getting myself prepared for reading the The Lives of Dax and the DS9 relaunch. Your point about Sisko's memory acting as a medium or a mechanism for experiencing and conceptualizing the presence of the wormhole aliens is well-founded. But why are Sisko's faculties so alien to the Prophets if they had been linked to Bajor all along? Shouldn't the wormhole aliens be at least somewhat familiar with humanoid time-keeping, or are they that far out of joint?
 
But why are Sisko's faculties so alien to the Prophets if they had been linked to Bajor all along?

"All along" isn't meaningful in this context, though. :) The Wormhole Aliens exist outside of time. It's likely that Sisko's penetration of their realm is the primary point of contact with our continuum, the centre from which it all ripples out. Their involvement in Bajor's history, its past, present and future; their creation of Sisko by arranging his birth; their bringing other people like Akorem Laan into the Temple, it all draws back to that contact with Sisko, or so I assume. That is the place at the centre of the web.
 
But why are Sisko's faculties so alien to the Prophets if they had been linked to Bajor all along?

"All along" isn't meaningful in this context, though. :) The Wormhole Aliens exist outside of time. It's likely that Sisko's penetration of their realm is the primary point of contact with our continuum, the centre from which it all ripples out. Their involvement in Bajor's history, its past, present and future; their creation of Sisko by arranging his birth; their bringing other people like Akorem Laan into the Temple, it all draws back to that contact with Sisko, or so I assume. That is the place at the centre of the web.

The Sisko Nexus. He's like the nidus point of a cosmic shift in Bajor's wheel of fortune. I just read the Timeline at the beginning of Avatar and how you've described this is exactly what seems to have unfolded. Nicely done!

So I received a small package in the mail today, lo and behold it was the Star Trek books I had ordered to round out parts of my collection. I will probably start reading Avatar after I'm done with The Lives of Dax, but I'm also interested in getting into #19 The Tempest if only to see Worf's take on Prospero. At this moment I'm really digging the Dax stories, what a brilliant idea for a short story anthology!

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