Wrath of Khan - the Musical

Discussion in 'Star Trek Movies I-X' started by Jesse Mercury, Jul 17, 2014.

  1. Jesse Mercury

    Jesse Mercury Cadet Newbie

    Jul 14, 2014
    I wrote a song from Khan's point of view detailing his exile on Ceti Alpha V and descent into madness as he waits for Kirk to return. I would love some feedback from true Trek fans! I cut together footage of the film to make this music video, I would be grateful to anyone who took the time to check it out.

  2. austen_pierce

    austen_pierce Captain Captain

    Aug 15, 2013
    Virginia Beach, VA
    Very good work!

    The editing you did to fit the lyrics with the movie particularly the instances where the lyrics matched what the actors were saying.... superb.
    I also really liked the interweaving of Space Seed and TWOK footage. Well done.

    I was not crazy about the musical style of the song, but that grew on me as I watched and by the end I was hooked.
    I also got pulled out of things a bit when you sped up the playback, but that's a minor nitpick.

    Thanks for sharing!
    Last edited: Jul 20, 2014