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What do you think of Steven W. Carabatsos' TOS episodes?

Again, can you please start your own thread on Kirk's age in "The Deadly Years" if you want to talk about it so much? Carabatsos was long gone from TOS when that episode was done, so it's a really off-topic digression.
 
The writing staff took many casualties...even Gene Coon only lasted a year. JDF Black, Carabatsos, even Lucas: less than a half season.

Whether it was Carabatsos's decision to leave or not (I suspect it was at best a mutual agreement), he went on to write an episode entitled "Court Martial" for The Big Valley in 1967. And then he went on...to do very little.

I don't think he had the time nor perhaps the talent to appreciate what he was dealing with in those 3 months. But that's, of course, speculation and opiinon.
 
Carabatsos was definitely no DC Fontana but the rewrites seemed better than Arthur Singer's. But that could be from season one having better stories to work off of than season three's. I'll still take "Operation--Annihilate!" over "Turnabout Intruder" any day.
 
Anyone know who wrote the CotEoF scene with McCoy and the hobo in the alley? I think that's my favorite Trek scene.
 
The hobo isn't in the draft Ellison published, nor in the comic adaptation of same. He seems to have been added in place of the Trooper character.
Yes. Which is kind of a shame, IMO. I loved the poignancy of Kirk asking Spock, "You know history... What is Verdun?" right after Trooper had sacrificed his life for them.

It took me ages to realize that the bum that McCoy encounters in the alley is the same guy at the mission who tells Kirk and Spock that listening to Edith Keeler is the price you have to pay for the food.
 
It took me ages to realize that the bum that McCoy encounters in the alley is the same guy at the mission who tells Kirk and Spock that listening to Edith Keeler is the price you have to pay for the food.

Oh. Then that was his "comeuppance" for his remark, I guess. That's disappointing, I don't know why.
 
Considering some of the other reactions respectful silence was sufficient rather than calling him out on another lapse of memory.

No, I still can't buy it. If the situation were happening in the real world, yes, respectful silence would be a reasonable and decent response. But that fails fantastically as drama. If Kirk were supposed to have remembered his age wrong, then that fact has to be communicated to the audience. And that means someone has to tell the audience Kirk's actual age, or the reactions have to make clear everyone but Kirk knows he got it wrong.
 
No, I still can't buy it. If the situation were happening in the real world, yes, respectful silence would be a reasonable and decent response. But that fails fantastically as drama. If Kirk were supposed to have remembered his age wrong, then that fact has to be communicated to the audience. And that means someone has to tell the audience Kirk's actual age, or the reactions have to make clear everyone but Kirk knows he got it wrong.

I think you nailed it. 34 was the intention. The events with Kodos on Tarsus IV occurred when Kirk was a child. I'm not at home now, but if I recall, The Star Trek Chronology presents it that way too.
 
No, I still can't buy it. If the situation were happening in the real world, yes, respectful silence would be a reasonable and decent response. But that fails fantastically as drama. If Kirk were supposed to have remembered his age wrong, then that fact has to be communicated to the audience. And that means someone has to tell the audience Kirk's actual age, or the reactions have to make clear everyone but Kirk knows he got it wrong.
Whatever. I'm just calling it in a way that makes everything else work. Because there is no way whatsoever I buy the idea of a 29-30 year old being given command of a Constitution-class vessel. Thats almost as bad as the ridiculousness of JJtrek.
 
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