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U.S.S. SELEYA : FRAIL BLOOD

Mistral

Vice Admiral
Admiral
Here is the second installment of what has become my ongoing series. I seem to have developed plans for these characters...

PART ONE-Someone’s Knocking At the Door

Captain Niklesh Sanjay sat in the waiting room scratching his nose. Minute flakes of skin twirled off in the slight breeze from the office air conditioning. He’d spent a bit too much time on the south coast of France without proper sun protection and, despite his dark complexion, he’d gotten a bit of a sunburn. The young man behind the reception desk glanced down at his communication panel and looked up at Sanjay.

“You can go in now,” he said, tipping his head towards the double doors emblazoned with the Starfleet emblem. Sanjay rose, nodding his thanks, and made his way into the office beyond. Inside, Admiral Katheryn Janeway was just turning away from the replicator to greet her visitor. Extending one of the two steaming cups she held to Sanjay she said,

“Turkish, if I recall correctly. Please, have a seat.”

“Thank you, Admiral.”

Sanjay took the proffered coffee and made himself comfortable in a nearby chair. Janeway returned to her place behind the desk and for a moment they merely inhaled the fragrance of the strong brews in their hands. Then, after taking a sip and setting her battered steel mug down, Janeway cleared her throat.

“Shore leave seems to have agreed with you, captain. Did you actually get yourself sunburned?”

Sanjay answered a bit ruefully, “Yes, Admiral, I’m afraid I did. I fell asleep on the beach near Marseilles.” He shrugged. “Its not too bad but I am beginning to peel a bit.”

Janeway chuckled. “Well, I hope the experience left you well rested-and a little more aware of the benefits of sunblock.” Her expression became more serious. “I have an assignment for you and your crew. We recently received a request for diplomatic mediation from a pair of planets on the far edge of Cardassian space. The two polities involved are the Miik Regime and the Darnellon Unified State. They have apparently been having a nasty little war and both planets are on the edge of ecological collapse. They’ve asked us to act as mediators to establish some kind of peace between them before their respective planets are rendered uninhabitable. I want to send the Seleya to check the situation over and see if the Federation can be of any help.” Janeway paused, as if waiting for Sanjay’s reaction. It wasn’t long in coming.

“Might I ask why you are sending the Seleya instead of a regular diplomatic team?”

“These are rather special circumstances, Captain. This is an area of space Starfleet really hasn’t explored yet. We need a First Contact team for this job and Commander M’Benga, your First Officer, is fully qualified and experienced in such matters.” Janeway grinned at him, waiting once again. Sanjay looked thoughtfully at her before speaking.

“If they have already requested our help in ending their war, how can this be a First Contact situation?”

The grin on Janeway’s face grew wider. “We received their request on a standard Federation subspace channel just a few days ago. It took the Diplomatic Corps a little while to realize this was a unique situation. You see, Sanjay, we have absolutely no record of any species in that area of space. In fact, although they had claimed it, the Cardassians never really explored that area either. When we cross-checked with them we came up empty. We don’t know who these people are.” She looked at him with a gleam in her eye. Sanjay opened his mouth, hesitated, and then closed it again. A pensive expression crawled across his face. After a few moments of reflection he spoke up.

“How did they know to use that particular transmission frequency?” he asked.

“That’s one of the things we’d like you to find out,” Janeway answered. “You’re scheduled to leave day after tomorrow. We’d like to help these people but your primary mission is to find out who they are and how they used a Federation channel to contact us. There’s something very odd going on here and we’re relying on you and your crew to find some answers.” She added as an afterthought, “It sounds like it could be quite a little adventure.”

“Admiral, I hope it isn’t. It’s been my experience that adventure consists of someone suffering through trying circumstances in a place they would rather not be. I would be happy enough if this mission turns out to be routine and boring.” Sanjay stood and Janeway rose with him, laughing.

“Well, Sanjay, I hope you get your wish. We are Starfleet, though. Routine and boring rarely fit the job description.”

“Don’t I know it,” Sanjay returned, walking to the door. As he left Janeway gave him a parting smile.

“Good luck, Captain. And godspeed,” she said. The cooler air of the outer office gave Sanjay a little chill down his back as he walked away.

***Two Days Later…***


“So what information do we have about these people?” Commander M’Benga looked across the Briefing Room table at Captain Sanjay. The rest of the assembled command crew waited expectantly for his answer.

“The transmission Starfleet received contained some basic information along with the request for help. If you’ll turn your attention to the display,” Sanjay said, gesturing towards the side wall, “This is what the two planets, Mii and Varek, looked like ten years ago right before the war started.” Two M-class planets showed on the display, predominantly blue with swirls of white clouds. Excepting differences in surface features, there was little to distinguish between the two. “And this is what they look like now.” The display changed to show two very different images. Mii, the planet on the left, was almost completely whited over, with a high albedo denoting large quantities of ice. What little water there was that still remained visible was a sickly greenish color, as though coated with pond scum. Varek, the other planet, looked like a large ball of dirt. The clouds were shot through with smears of gray and black. Multiple points on the surface glowed red, as though giant volcanoes were erupting across the planet. “Spectroscopic analysis of these images indicates that Mii is suffering from a ‘nuclear winter’ situation, while Verak has clear-cut evidence of orbital bombardment with anti-matter weapons.” The looks around the table ranged from shocked to sickened. Sgt. Mitchell was the only one who kept a deceptively laconic expression on his face. “The Science Division estimates surface conditions on Mii have rendered about ninety percent of the planet uninhabitable. Verak may well be beyond the point where it is capable of supporting life at all without artificial assistance.”

Lt. Nog spoke up. “And they’re still fighting each other? Where’s the profit in that?”

“That’s precisely why they’ve asked for our help in ending the conflict. Both species,” Sanjay adjusted the display again to show two basically humanoid figures, “Are on the verge of extinction.” The figure on the left, a Miik, had grayish skin with a mane of black hair or fur encircling its head. Above the dark eyes was a heavy sub-orbital ridge. It was dressed in a powder blue outfit that fairly screamed ‘military’. The other figure, a Verakian, was noticeably thinner of build, with creamy brown skin very close in color to Commander M’Benga’s. Its head was hairless, with recessed ears and piercing green eyes. It, too, was wearing some kind of uniform, white with red accents. “The transmission was somewhat generalized as to the cause of the conflict,” Sanjay continued, “But it would seem that the Miik acquired warp capabilities about twenty years ago. The first intelligent species they encountered were the Verakians, who were a pre-warp civilization at the time. Not having a Prime Directive to guide them, the Miik apparently shared warp technology with the Verakians. Somewhere along the line a shooting war erupted, with the results you just saw.”

Dr. Ramirez caught the captain’s attention. “Will we be attempting to render medical aid?”

“At this point,” Sanjay replied, “Starfleet is stretched pretty thin in that area due to the Cardassian situation. Any decisions along those lines will have to happen in the Federation Council. We will help as much as we can if asked, of course, but considering the scale of their disaster anything we do will merely be a drop in the bucket.” Jesus nodded his head as if confirming something he already knew.

“Captain?” Mitchell spoke for the first time. “Do we have any idea of their remaining military capabilities? Whatever they used on each other seemed fairly, ah, energetic.”

Sanjay shook his head. “There wasn’t enough information provided to make even an intelligent guess. They could be capable of mounting a fleet-sized battle group of starships or they could be reduced to shooting at each other with flintlocks. All we know about their current level of technology is that they can still transmit a subspace signal. Your job, when we get there, will be to give me a working threat assessment.” Mitchell nodded thoughtfully.

Sanjay turned towards Commander M’Benga. “Carol, the plan is to bring their delegates aboard for the negotiations. However, we don’t know if that’s their plan. I want you to be prepared to go down to the surface of either planet if necessary. The actual contact end of this mission is entirely in your hands.”

“Can I pick my own team?” she inquired.

“Of course,” Sanjay said.

“Then I’d like to have Mr. Nog with me. I suspect his business acumen will help me ferret out any hidden agendas and such.” Nog smiled, obviously pleased with the compliment.

“Don’t worry, Commander,” he said, “If everything isn’t on the up and up I’ll figure it out for you.”

M’Benga rewarded him with a smile. “I’m sure you will, Mr. Nog.”

Sanjay stood. “Then if there are no more questions this meeting is ended. Let’s get out of spacedock and get moving.” The crew headed for the exit. “And Mr. Nog?”

The Ferengi paused on his way to the door. “Yes, sir?”

“Try not to ram the ship into anything on the way out, ok?” Sanjay’s voice held amusement.

Nog’s ears flushed. “Yes, sir.”


PART TWO-The Delta Has Ears


The first stop was Mii and it was weeks away. As the Seleya made her way there Sgt. Mitchell drilled his Security people incessantly. They would pop up anywhere and everywhere at all times of the day or night to repel simulated boarders. Holodeck One was entirely taken over and Mitchell did his best to teach everything he had learned in the Marines to each member of his department. They battled, physically and mentally, against everything from Jem H’adar to Gorn. When he wasn’t working them out he was stretching their tactical knowledge in firefights against Romulan warbirds, Dominion bugs, Tholian cruisers and even various “rogue” Starfleet vessels. Nobody in Security was bored. Other things, perhaps, but not bored.

For the rest of the crew, though, it was a long trip with duty shifts surrounded by large clumps of downtime. Holodecks could only help so much to alleviate boredom. Within the first couple of days Dr. Ramirez had taken steps to rectify the situation. Since he had full access to all personnel files he tracked down crewmembers with unique knowledge or talents and encouraged them to share what they knew in classroom and group formats. On a ship as big as Seleya there were a lot of hidden talents, which is how the Ten Forward Lounge finally received its name.

It was a Friday night and a couple of crewmen from Life Sciences had cobbled together a band, led by Dr. Ramirez on guitar. They were in the lounge running through some classic numbers, a few songs by the Beatles, a flamenco piece or two. Off-duty crewmembers were scattered around the room. Lt. Nog and Chief Jerix were sharing a table and a drink together.

“They’re not bad,” Jerix said, gesturing towards the musicians, “And the doctor really seems to handle that instrument well.”

Nog took a sip of his root beer and snorted. “I suppose, if you don’t mind the occasional sour note.”

Jerix lifted his bushy eyebrows high. “Am I to understand you to be some kind of expert on Human music?”

“I’m Ferengi. Look at these ears. I’m an expert on almost any kind of music. The doctor’s alright but he’s nothing special,” Nog sneered.

“You think you could do better?” Jerix asked.

“Do greeworms mate in mud?” Nog replied.

“Well, Nog, here’s your chance,” Jerix said, pointing towards the band. The last song had come to a close and Jesus had set his guitar against his stool and made for the bar. “Let us hear what you can do.” The rest of the band members were milling around their instruments, taking sips from their various drinks.

Nog stammered a moment but seeing the challenging look on Jerix’s face he set his root beer down and made for the dais. Picking up the guitar, he plopped onto Jesus’s stool. His feet dangled in the air like a child’s. He strummed the strings once and made a few adjustments. The other musicians just watched with bemusement. Around the lounge people began to notice, nudging each other and pointing towards Nog. Nog looked back at the other players.

“Give me a simple beat, guys,” he said, “And follow me on the change-ups, ok?” The others picked up their instruments and nodded. The drummer began brushing his snare. The bassist came in low and slow. Then Nog played. As the rising strains of “Hellhounds On My Trail” came out of the guitar mouths began to drop open around the room. Jesus stood watching from the bar, a startled look on his face. The Centauran bartender, Mikfin, quietly adjusted the lounge lighting so that the primary source was focused on Nog. Nobody moved, nobody drank, nobody spoke. Nog perfectly reproduced the Robert Johnson classic right down to the fuzzy slides across the strings. As the song’s final note sounded Nog flipped the guitar setting from acoustic to electric and immediately launched into “Crossroad”, the other players struggling to keep up. Feet were tapping all over the lounge. When he finished, Nog went into a Muddy Waters number and then segued into a Roy Harper tune. As he finished the room erupted in applause.

His face shiny with sweat, Nog hopped down off of the stool and made his way to the bar. He handed the guitar to a gaping Jesus. “It was a little out of tune, Doc. It’s alright now.” Then he went back to his seat at the table with Jerix.

“Lieutenant, that was astounding. Wherever did you learn to play like that?” Jerix’s voice was full of admiration.

“When I attended the Academy I used to go to Sisko’s in New Orleans every night for dinner. The owner is my best friend’s grandfather. I’d help him with the dinner rush and he’d feed me and teach me guitar after hours. On the weekends I’d sit in with the house band.” Nog said this matter-of-factly.

“And what style of music was that?” Jerix asked. “It was very powerful but I don’t think I’ve ever heard anything like it.”

Nog took a big drink of his root beer and wiped at his face with a cloth napkin. “It’s called Delta blues. It goes back hundreds of years in Hu-mon history. From back when they still oppressed one another based on skin color. Well, Chief, I have to go on duty soon. I’ll see you later.” Jerix watched him leave through narrowed eyes. Then a grin spread across his face.

The next day when the Ten Forward Lounge re-opened after its cleaning cycle there was a fiber-optic sign above the door. It read:

DELTA LOUNGE



PART THREE-Who’s Kidding Who


The arrival in the Miik system was preceded by continuous hails from the Seleya, all of which were ignored. It was only as the ship made orbit that they received any reply at all. Instead of coming from the surface, though, it came from a small ship that lifted off from one of Miik’s two moons and it was audio only.

[“Greetings Federation vessel. This is First Councilor Toran of the Miik Regime. We are receiving your hail.”]

Sanjay held his hand up to keep Commander M’Benga from opening a response channel.
“Sgt. Mitchell, what do you make of our welcoming party?”

Mitchell answered promptly from his place at Tactical. “It’s a primitive craft, sir, probably no better than warp 4. Lasers of some sort and possible chemical rocket launching tubes. No energy shielding although the hull is a fairly rugged titanium alloy. I doubt it could stand up to one of the old NX ships in combat. No sensors beyond infrared and radar. They’re a negligible threat.”

“Thank you, Sergeant. Commander, open a channel, please.”

“Channel open, sir.”

“Greetings, First Councilor Toran. This is Captain Niklesh Sanjay of the Federation starship Seleya. We are here in response to the message sent to us requesting diplomatic aid.”

[“Ah, yes, of course you are. The delegation from the Darnellon Unified State should be arriving within the hour. Ah, we had hoped to hold our, ah, discussions in our base on Phillo, ah, the moon we just left but your ship…Well, ah, do you have something smaller you can land with? I’m afraid your vessel is larger than our spaceport, ah, you see.”]

“I believe we can find something more accommodating. Shall we meet you in two hours?” Sanjay gave Commander M’Benga a puzzled look.

[“That would be satisfactory. Ah, in two hours then.”] The small ship peeled off and headed back towards the moon in question.

“Captain?” M’Benga asked.

Sanjay turned towards her. “I’m a bit confused here. These people have radar and laser beams. There is no way they could have known when we would arrive, or if we were even coming for that matter. Yet the delegates from the other side will be here in an hour? I want you to be very careful down there, Commander. Something strange is going on, and this far out we are on our own. Be suspicious of everything and everybody.”

“Yes, sir. Did you hear that, Mr. Nog? Oh, sorry. Of course you did.” M’Benga looked embarrassed for a moment. “Sergeant Mitchell, could you assign a couple of your Security people to my Away team? I’d feel better knowing we had some kind of protection down there, just in case.”

Mitchell grinned at her. “I’ll go myself, if you’d like.”

Sanjay intervened. “No, Sergeant. I’d like to hold you back in reserve. There’s something damn peculiar going on and when we finally figure out what it is I may need you to react to it. You can’t do that if you’re already down at their base cut off from the Seleya’s resources.”

“Ok, Captain,” he replied. Turning to M’Benga, he said, “How about I give you Torres and Shandahat?”

“You want to assign me the only Andorian stand-up comic in the quadrant?” Seeing the look that crossed Mitchell’s face she quickly amended herself. “I’m sure they’ll be fine, Sergeant. You’ve trained all of your people to peak perfection.”

Sanjay spoke up. “Good, then its settled. Get your team together and make whatever preparations you see fit.”

M’Benga flashed him a brilliant smile and bounced out of her chair. “I don’t really have any preparations to make, Captain. I like to deal with fluid situations as they develop. But I guess I can go inform my Security detail of our mission. C’mon, Mr. Nog.” She beckoned with her hand as she headed for the turbolift.

Sanjay watched the two of them leave the Bridge and then glanced at Mitchell, who shrugged noncommittally. He sighed and rubbed his temples, then turned back to the viewscreen.
 
This is really a good beginning! You have an intriguing mystery developing and your characters are really unfolding. I loved the scene with Nog playing the blues on guitar. Who'd a thunk it? :)

I think you've got the start to a really fascinating story!
 
PART 3 (cont)

The time passed slowly, but Mitchell finally reported the arrival of the Darnellon ship.

“I just picked her up coming out of the shadow of the seventh planet, Captain. She’s pretty much the same as the Miik ship as far as performance and armament go. Design, too, for that matter.”

“Very good, Sergeant. Let me know if you see anything unusual about her. I don’t relish surprises,” Sanjay responded.

“Yes, sir.”

Sanjay tapped his combadge. “Commander M’Benga, the Darnellon representatives have arrived. Give them thirty minutes and then you are go for departure. And, Commander? I’d like you to discreetly inquire as to how they got here so quickly. I still think there is something funny about this business.”

“Yes, sir, will do. Confirm departure aboard runabout Terra Nova in thirty minutes,” M’Benga replied.

“Be careful down there, Carol. Sanjay out.”


***U.S.S. Terra Nova, thirty minutes later***

Shandahat was the cheeriest Andorian Nog had ever met. While most of his kind tended to be taciturn by nature, Shandahat smiled more than anyone Nog knew, Jerix included. On board ship they rarely interacted with each other but now that they were sharing a runabout Nog desperately wished he could get away from him. Shandahat had decided to sing to pass the time and while M’Benga was watching in amusement every sour note made Nog flinch.

“Oh, a-roving we will go!” Shandahat sang, “A-roving we will go. High-ho! The derry, oh! A-roving we will go!”

“You’re certifiable; you know that, don’t you?” Carol asked rhetorically.

“He can’t help it, ma’am.” Torres, the other security man, piped up, “The doctor dropped him on his head at birth. Seems he caught sight of his face first thing, freaked out and ‘Plop!’, right onto the floor!” Shandahat reached out without missing a beat and smacked Torres on the back of the head. “Ow, hey, what was that for? I was trying to defend you,” he paused and then added with a wicked grin, “Or at least explain you away.” Shandahat was so overwhelmed by gratitude that he rolled his eyes, still singing, and smacked him again. Carol looked from one to the other and shook her head.

“I think, maybe, you’re both crazy.”

Shandahat abruptly stopped singing. “No, Joe’s crazy. I’m silly. That’s why we make such a great team.” He beamed at her.

“No, Shand, today’s Tuesday. You’re crazy and I’m silly,” Torres corrected. Shandahat gave him a slightly bewildered look and then responded,

“You know, Joe, you’re right. It is Tuesday! My mistake.” He stuck his right index finger in his ear and crossed his eyes. “There, that’s better,” he said.

Joe Torres nodded his head vigorously. “Yes, yes it is.”

Carol closed her eyes and pinched the bridge of her nose between her thumb and forefinger. “I must have pissed off Mitchell and not realized it,” she muttered.

“Why, Joe, I think we’ve been insulted!” Shandahat exclaimed.

Torres shook his head. “No, you’ve been insulted,” he said, “I’m not really here.”

“Are you sure about that?” Shandahat asked him. “I can see your boots.” Torres looked down at his footwear suspiciously.

“Just because my boots went on this Away mission doesn’t mean I did,” he answered.

Shandahat grinned. “That’s so true! Why didn’t I think of that?”

“Because you’re an idiot,” Torres replied, grinning back.

“That’s right. I completely forgot. I guess that proves it, huh?”

“Well, I wouldn’t say it proved anything but…” They continued on in this vein, two seemingly endless wells of energy, with no sign of stopping anytime soon.

From the front of the craft Carol could vaguely hear Nog muttering to himself. All she caught was “airlock”. She sighed deeply and settled back into her seat. It was going to be a long flight.



Back aboard Seleya Mitchell had been analyzing the sensor records of the Darnellon ship’s passage.

“Captain, I think you may want to see this.”

“Put it on the main screen, Sergeant.” An overlay of the solar system appeared on the viewscreen. A red line showing the flight path of the Darnellon vessel stretched from the seventh planet in towards the moon, Tylum.

“Sir, I’ve been over this three times. For that ship to follow this trajectory they would have had to have entered the solar system here,” a green line marked a spot at the edge of the system, “And we would have detected them. We didn’t. The only conclusion I can drawn is that they were already here, hiding behind the seventh planet’s sensor shadow.”

Sanjay eyed the diagram on the screen and stroked his beard in thought. “If we were to drift over that way would you be able to trace their trail?”

“Oh, sure, Captain. It would be easily detectable for several more hours.”

“Helm, take us to the seventh planet at one quarter impulse. Sergeant, inform Commander M’Benga of our suspicions and tell her when she lands I want her to keep her combadge on ‘Transmit’.”

“Aye, Captain.”

Sanjay frowned as the Seleya moved off station slowly and quietly.
 
Obviously more going on here than meets the eye, but what? Good job on maintaining the light tension. The Captain and crew are justifiably cautious, despite their own apparent technological advantages. And where did that Darnellon ship originate.
 
There is more here than meets the eye--you'd think that someone is trying to lure the Seleya into a false sense of security... ;)

A good job in slowly building the tension while at the same time showing is a lighter side to your characters. Although I wouldn't describe Andorians as being necessarily grim--look at Kimula or Talana--those women can be positively saucy...
 
I had a good time writing my Security guard sequence. Sometimes, laughing in the "face of death" is the best way to blow off steam. And these two might end up as ongoing characters-but comedy IS harder to write. When I do the next piece you'll see why I was playing things this way onboard the good ship Terra Nova.
 
I have a golden "No Prize" for anyone who can tell me where the title of this, ... um, chapter or episode or whatever came from.
 
Oh wow... Those two guards are awesome... If you can do a stand up gig or something like that between them, You'd be a shoe-in for the challenge...
 
I'm really liking the sophmore effort so far.

The mission is classic Trek: "explain mystery between people we don't really know but who like to blow each other up." And what an intriguing mystery it is.

And I like how you starting to flesh out these characters, even adding to those we are already familar with by giving them a new dimension (Nog). The comic security officers is a refreshing different from the usual stoic, yet doomed redshirts.

A lot to like here, and a lot to look forward to!
 
Big Guy scores the Golden No Prize. "...any taint of vice whose strong corruption/inhabits our frail blood."

and now back to our story:

PART FOUR-Decadence and Deception

The landing pad at Tylum held two ships already. The one Carol had seen approaching the Seleya was next to another of similar design. Only the markings and a few cosmetic differences distinguished one from the other. Nog received brief landing instructions and brought the Terra Nova in neatly next to the other ships. An inflatable docking tunnel extended itself from the main base to the runabout. The base itself sat up against the wall of a large impact crater and seemed to extend into the crater wall. A few moments after the tunnel sealed to the runabout there came a tapping on the door. Shandahat opened it to reveal two Miiks in uniform standing there politely. Although they made no hostile moves Carol noted they were both armed with some kind of hand weapons in holsters.

“We will take you to the First Councilor,” said one, gesturing down the plastic tunnel. The other said nothing, merely turning sideways so as to let them pass. Exchanging a look with Nog, M’Benga said,

“Let’s go, team.” As they walked, Shandahat kept up a running monologue with their uncommunicative guides.

“So these walls are real plastic, huh? Are they made from actual petroleum byproducts? The walls seem strong enough, but couldn’t you have made them translucent? It would be nice to be able to see outside. Is that a military outfit you’re wearing? It looks military. Have you guys been soldiers long?” Neither of the Miiks replied to anything he said but that didn’t seem to bother him. He just kept talking.

“What’s with that guy?” Nog asked M’Benga. “Doesn’t he ever shut up? I thought Mitchell’s people would be more professional than that!”

“He’s very professional,” M’Benga murmured back. “Have you noticed Torres hasn’t said a thing? That’s just the way they operate. Shandahat’s keeping attention focused on himself while Torres scopes the situation out.” A dawning look of comprehension appeared on Nog’s face as they cycled through the air lock into the base. On the other side of the airlock First Councilor Toran and an unknown Varekian stood waiting for them but that wasn’t what caught M’Benga’s and Nog’s eyes first. It was the sheer wealth on display all around them. The corridor leading away from the airlock was lined with paintings, many of which hung in ornate frames. They were a jumble of portraits and landscapes but even to Carol’s untrained eye they looked like works of art. Here and there along the corridor stood a variety of statues as well. The floor was covered in an opulent plush carpet of some sort and the lighting was as ornate as it was practical. Shandahat stood with his mouth hanging open at the sight while Torres glanced suspiciously around as though expecting attackers to pop out from behind the pictures.

“I am First Councilor Toran and this is my counterpart from the Darnellon Unified State, Lead Citizen Juluth.” The tall Varekian made a slight bow. Carol introduced her party to the two representatives. “Thank you for coming. If you’ll come with us to the meeting room we can begin our, ah, discussions.” Toran turned and he and the Lead Citizen began walking down the corridor. The Away team followed with the two taciturn Miiks following them. Torres looked thoughtful while Shandahat gazed at the various works of art with a look of befuddled awe. Carol examined the artwork in the hallway as they walked and came to the conclusion that the being who had decorated suffered from some kind of ocular dysfunction. Nog, walking along side her, whispered,

“This place is amazing.” When Carol frowned at him he looked confused. “What?” She just shook her head.


The trip didn’t take long and Carol figured they hadn’t actually traveled to the portion of the base within the crater wall. Along the way they passed several cross-passages and Carol realized that Torres and Shandahat seemed to take special interest in paintings and sculptures in these areas. She just hoped Toran and Juluth hadn’t noticed the two security guards scoping out the lay of the land. She hadn’t actually identified them as Security and wanted to avoid any misunderstandings. Toran used some kind of data card to open the meeting room door and then gestured them inside. If the corridors had looked a bit overdone the meeting room was only describable as garish. Art in a mish-mash of styles vied for attention along every inch of every wall. Silks, or some similar material, were draped over statues, chairs, and side tables. The main table seemed to have been made from some great tree, carved instead of assembled, and the chairs around it were both extremely expensive in look and totally mismatched. It was like someone had raided a series of museums or art galleries to furnish the room. Toran and Juluth sat at the head of the great table and gestured for the Federation party to take the seats opposite.

“Would you care for, ah, food or drink?” Toran inquired. Carol shook her head.

“I’m afraid that without further research we wouldn’t know what was safe to consume. I suggest we get down to business. Your message said you wished us to mediate a peace between your two peoples. I can see that you and Lead Citizen Juluth are sitting here in an amicable fashion. What was it you needed our help with, exactly?”

Toran didn’t answer immediately. Instead, he signaled to one of the silent Miiks and said,

“Tandool for Citizen Juluth and bring me some paree, please.” The Miik bowed and left the room. “Commander, ah, the situation has changed since the message was sent.” Toran and Juluth both made themselves look sheepish. “When you were contacted the fighting was still fierce. Many of us left alive realized it needed to stop but a few wished only to keep fighting. We despaired, fearful that all would be destroyed. You have seen my home planet. It lies in ruins,” At this his lip curled in scorn. “In ruins, because fools could not see the only proper course. Citizen Juluth and I lead a large band of survivors from both of our planets who, ah, understand the folly of continued warfare. We no longer seek mediation-we have worked out our, ah, differences. What we seek is, ah, transportation. For about twelve thousand persons,” he added.

Carol did her best Vulcan impression, keeping her reaction invisible to onlookers. Nog wasn’t that good. He gaped at their hosts. Torres gave a low whistle and Shandahat could be heard to mutter,” Well, if that’s all…”

“Belay that,” Carol murmured. “Perhaps, Councilor, if you could explain a little further…” she said.

Juluth, who had remained virtually silent since their arrival, now took up the explanation.

“We are not fanciful dreamers, Commander. Our worlds are ruined because of short-sighted fools. We have gathered a large group of clear-thinking peoples of both of our races into a fleet. They are gathered nearby in this system. We wish to start life anew and we have found a suitable planet, a place where we can live together in mutual commerce and peace. Unfortunately, it is a long ways from here. Our ships can only travel at low warp and it would be many decades journeying. Our vessels would break down long before we arrived, our people driven to madness by the close quarters for so long a time.” He paused and exchanged a look with Toran. “You have ships far beyond ours, capable of much greater speeds. With your help we could relocate in a practical and business-like fashion. We can pay for your services. Most of the surviving wealth of two planets is ours to command.” He waved a hand languidly at their surroundings.

Carol kept herself composed. “The Federation does not rent itself out. However, I can bring your request to my superiors as a petition for humanitarian aid. I, of course have no idea how they will react. I do have a question for you, though. Starfleet Command was very curious about the frequency that your message was sent on. How did you happen upon it?”

Both Juluth and Toran looked at each other uneasily. Toran opened his mouth to speak when the base was rocked by a series of detonations. Statues toppled, paintings fell off of the walls and Nog was tossed to the floor. Shandahat and Torres were out of their seats in an instant, phasers appearing in their hands as if by magic. The Miik who had left for refreshments came diving through the hall door in a practiced roll. When he reached his feet a weapon was in his hand. A part of Carol’s mind noted a slowly spreading stain on his shirt, although he didn’t appear hurt. The Miik who had remained behind with the two leaders pulled a similar pistol from his boot. Both took up positions near the door. “I thought you took care of the problem!” Toran screamed above the din.

“I thought I had!” Juluth screamed back at him. Fire from energy weapons could be heard in the distance. Carol tapped her combadge for automatic beam-out to the runabout. Nothing happened. Nog got up off of the floor and looked at her, wide-eyed.

“Councilor! Is this room shielded?” she demanded of Toran. Her voice cut through the noise outside the room.

“Well, of course,” he replied, “It is a meeting room, after all.”

“Then I guess we’re screwed,” remarked Carol.

At their looks of befuddlement she pointed at a vent near the ceiling. A green gas was coming out of it. With a cry, one of the Miik guards opened the door to the hallway. Gas billowed in. Whatever it was, it affected the wide variety of racial types in the room equally. Everyone fell within seconds.
 
Something was bound to go awry here, wasn't it? There was more to this than we first thought and we still don't really know what that is ... good way of keeping up the mystery.

Also, great job of portraying some lively and useful security officers for a change (even if they weren't THAT useful in the end). I still hope they pull through though :lol:
 
I like your portrayal of the two security officers--those who are so often overlooked only to die. These guys are competent and able--too bad they still got snookered! ;)

Nice cliffhanger--keeping us on pins and needles 'til the next part.
 
Wow, and I thought DarKush took his stories in unexpected directions! :lol:

This is great stuff, and I’m especially liking the mystery of what’s really going on in this system.

You characters are very original, and the security/comedy duo are cracking me up. I’m glad to see Captain Sanjay and crew back in action after their last, ill-fated mission. I like how Sanjay & Company are handling the various issues in this system that don’t add up, as the scenario that’s unfolding clearly calls for caution.

You’re doing terrific work, and I’m eager for more.
 
PART FIVE-One of Our Commanders Is Missing


“Captain, I can’t reach Commander M’Benga.” Mitchell sounded slightly peeved.

“Why not, Sergeant?” asked Sanjay.

“The Away team had just entered the Miik facility on Tylum and their signals were traveling in a straight line. As I was about to relay your orders to Commander M’Benga the signals cut-off. It was so abrupt, sir, that I would guess they entered some kind of shielded area.” Sanjay stroked his beard thoughtfully for a moment.

“Very well, Sergeant. Commander M’Benga knows what she is doing. I will have to assume she intends to report in when she has something of substance for us. In the mean time, let’s try to figure out where that Darnellon ship came from.”

“Aye, sir,” Mitchell replied. Seleya continued on towards the seventh planet. Mitchell was running a full sensor suite as they approached. Ensign Perling was carefully analyzing the incoming data from his location at the Science station. When they drew within fifty thousand kilometers of the planet his head came up.

“Captain, I believe we are detecting multiple warp signatures. They are mostly obscured by the planet but I’m picking up a “bleed” effect,” Louis said earnestly.

“How many, Ensign?”

“Well, um, for us to detect anything at this distance, I mean, with the planet between us and the other ships, I’d have to say a lot. Dozens, maybe hundreds of individual sources.”

Sanjay looked at him for a moment. “Helm, put us into high orbit around the planet. Let’s see what’s on the other side.” He turned his attention back to the viewscreen.

The Vulcan ensign manning the helm answered, “Aye, Captain,” and began adjusting the ship’s heading. As they swung into orbit Sanjay left his seat and walked over to Tactical.

“If there’s trouble do you think we can take on hundreds of ships like the ones we saw earlier?” He pitched his voice so only Sergeant Mitchell could hear him. Mitchell gave him a bleak look in return. “I thought as much. Let us hope there is no trouble then.” Mitchell just nodded his head. The Seleya came around the planet.

“Would you look at that?” Mitchell said to no one in particular.

“That” was a vast fleet of ships keeping station which resembled nothing so much as a cloud of fairy dust in the sky. Sunlight reflected off of hundreds of hulls. For a few moments everyone on the Bridge just stared at the viewscreen. Then Sanjay strode back to his seat and broke the silence.

“Mr. Perling, I’d like a life-form count and identification. Sergeant, how many ships are there and are they armed? Full analysis, please.” Looking at the helmsman, he said, “Ensign T’Sal, hold us at the very edge of our sensor window. Keep as much of the planet as you can between us and them. I don’t want to go rushing up to them and risk spooking them.” His people dived into their assignments. Answers were quick in coming.

Ensign Perling was first. “Captain, there are eleven thousand, seven hundred and fourteen life forms aboard those ships. It seems to be more or less evenly split between Miik and Verakians. I thought these people were at war with each other.”

“So did I. Thank you, Ensign. Sergeant Mitchell?”

Mitchell looked up from Tactical. “I’m counting six hundred and forty-one ships. Twenty-one of them are identical to the two ships we encountered at Tylum. The remaining six hundred and twenty seem to be larger, perhaps some form of cargo vessel. Whatever they are carrying, it isn’t people. None of them have more than one or two dozen beings aboard. Interestingly enough, the larger vessels all conform to the same basic design. And before you ask, Captain, no, they are not armed. Only the smaller ones are, and then only with what the earlier ships had. I’d say we are only at risk if all twenty-one were to attack us at once.”

Sanjay sat silently, digesting this information. He stroked his beard and stared off into space. “Can you determine what they are carrying, Sergeant? The cargo ships, that is.”
Mitchell nodded and set to work. After several minutes he cleared his throat and said,

“Many of them are stuffed full of food, if I’m reading this right. Some appear to have heavy machinery, judging by metal composition and energy signatures I’m picking up. If I were to guess, I’d say these people are getting ready to set up in a new home somewhere else.” He stopped for a second as though gathering his thoughts. “Captain, the rest of the cargos are sort of strange. I’m picking up natural fibers, tons of the so-called ‘precious metals’ like gold, silver and platinum and some odd chemical compounds that the computer is identifying as paint, along with chunks of marble, granite, and what looks like jade. Not what I would take on a colonizing expedition.” He sounded puzzled.

Sanjay stroked his beard some more before he spoke. “I suspect Commander M’Benga is closer to the answers than we are. Let’s go back to Tylum and see what she’s found out about the situation. Helm, take us out of orbit and set course back the way we came, one-half impulse.”

“Aye, sir,” Ensign T’Sal confirmed, “Half impulse it is.” The Seleya slipped away from the planet apparently unnoticed by the odd fleet.

**********
As the Seleya once again approached Tylum Captain Sanjay asked,

“Sergeant Mitchell, are you able to detect the Away team’s signal?”

“No, sir. Still nothing. I’d say they are still in a shielded area.”

Sanjay sighed, stroking his beard. “Try hailing the Miik at the lunar base. Maybe they can relay a message to Commander M’Benga for us. Bloody inefficient but its all we have, I suppose.” There was a brief pause as Mitchell worked his board and then,

“Hailing frequencies open, Captain.”

“This is Captain Niklesh Sanjay of the U.S.S. Seleya to Tylum Base, please respond.” He waited a few moments, looking at Mitchell speculatively. Just as Mitchell started to shake his head negatively a voice cut through the air.

[“Captain Sanjay, this is Acting First Councilor Bela. I am afraid I have some bad news for you.”]

“Acting First Councilor?” Sanjay responded. “What happened to Toran? And where is my Away team?”

[“Ah, yes, Captain. I’m afraid they are all dead, along with the previous First Councilor and Citizen Juluth. Very distressing. I hope this will not interfere with our on-going negotiations in any way. I, ah, am very sorry for your loss, of course.”]

Sanjay stood in the middle of the Bridge, stunned. The walls seemed to warp around him for a moment and the top of his head felt as though it had vanished. He could see Ensign Perling with his mouth hanging open. Sanjay took a second to pull himself together before posing his next question.

“What the bloody hell are you talking about?” The anger in his voice surprised even him.

["Ah, Captain, I’m afraid a rebel faction opposed to the, ah, peace process raided our base a short time ago. Your people, along with our leaders, were seized. The rebels escaped. Captain, ah, it has been our experience that they execute all prisoners. Actually, we were hoping that you had intercepted them with your ship. I’m surprised you didn’t notice them fleeing.”] Bela’s tone now was almost accusatory.

Sanjay opened his mouth to utter a harsh retort and then closed it again. He stroked his beard for a moment and then responded. “Councilor Bela, we were temporarily called away by other business and were not in the area to observe these ‘rebels’. Where did they flee to?”

[Well, to the surface of Mii, but it won’t do you any good. We didn’t even know anyone was left alive down there. I couldn’t begin to tell you where to look. And, like I said, they have a tendency to execute all prisoners. You really don’t have a chance of retrieving them.”]

Although Sanjay couldn’t see him, he could hear Mitchell rummaging around behind him in an arms locker. “We’ll just see about that,” he said grimly. “Seleya out.”
 
Interesting cargo those vessels are carrying--if you're looking to make/build monuments and works of art though, that'd be what you'd want. Which of course begs the question of why? Why go through so much trouble? Or are we looking at a form of tribute? Which then begs the question of, to whom? And what has become of the landing party. You've left us lots of mysteries here.
 
The mystery deepens. :D I'm impressed Sanjay kept his cool upon learning of the away team's supposed fate. You're doing great work here.
 
...and now it gets weird.

PART 6 – GRIFTERS, GUILT, and GARBAGE



Carole M’Benga woke up lying on a bed of some kind. She wanted to look around to see where she was but it seemed as though someone had welded her eyes shut. She tried to rub her face with her hand but that same someone had apparently nailed her hand to the bed. When she tried to lift her head tiny gremlins began beating her in the temples with mallets. They were very strong gremlins. Carol groaned. Her mouth felt dry and all that came out was a croak.

“Lay still,” a gentle voice said, “The gas has lingering after effects. They should pass soon. Drink this, it will help.” A cup touched her lips and a warm liquid, salty and slightly sweet, rolled into her mouth. She began to feel better almost immediately. “Rest a while longer,” the voice said. “When you awaken again you should be just fine.” Carol drifted off as the voice was speaking.

When she awoke the second time Carol could open her eyes. Looking around the dimly lit room, she saw a series of beds. Some were empty and some were occupied. “Hospital,” she thought. In the two nearest beds to her left were Torres, still unconscious, and Shandahat, sitting up and looking just fine. On her right lay Nog, still out of it, and then Toran and Juluth. They were also out and strapped securely to their beds as well. As she gingerly sat up a Miik female entered the room. She was wearing a smock that screamed, “Doctor!” She nodded at the Andorian security officer and came up to Carol’s bedside.

“Commander, I’m glad to see you’re feeling better. Any residual effects that you can detect? I’m afraid I’ve never cared for a Human before so I’m not sure what to look for.” Although it was hard to read her face due to a general unfamiliarity with the Miik, Carol thought she detected a note of genuine concern in her voice.

“I seem to be coming along just fine, Doctor…” Carol replied.

“Oh, sorry, um, my name is Leewa. Doctor Leewa Tunish, formerly of the B’ethai Medical Facility. Now, well, I’m a doctor, I’m here and I do what I can under the circumstances.”

Shandahat spoke up. “And a fine job you’re doing, too. I feel good enough to wrestle a sehlat thanks to you!” He beamed at her. Carol wasn’t sure but she thought the slight color change on the doctor’s face indicated some kind of blush. He jerked a thumb towards Torres. “Is he gonna be ok?” he asked. When Leewa nodded he sighed in a melancholy fashion. “Ah, well, what can you do? I guess I have to put up with him a bit longer.” Leewa seemed a bit disconcerted by his last comment. Carol jumped in to help her.

“Ignore him. Those two are a couple of clowns. They’re always going on like that. Just tune it out. I do.” Carol smiled warmly at her and then turned to her right. “How is Lt. Nog?” Leewa gave Shandahat one more sidelong glance before responding.

“The little man worried me at first. The anesthetic seemed to affect him more than the rest of you. I thought we might lose him. He seems to be coming around, though.” Nog put proof to her words by choosing this moment to groan aloud.

“Oooh, my head,” he said, trying to sit up. As he was doing this Torres also began to stir. Looking at Carol, Nog asked, “Commander, what happened? Where are we?” He glanced at the figures in the beds next to him. “How come these guys are tied down?” Leewa’s face clouded over in anger at his question.

“They are restrained because they are criminals awaiting trial!” she said sharply. “They are fortunate that I swore to do no harm. Otherwise I would do things to them…” Her voice trailed off as she struggled for control. “Well, you should save your questions for Treea. She is better equipped to give you answers than I am. She should be here shortly.” She walked over to Torres. “How are you feeling?”

He smiled. “I wasn’t doing too badly until I saw him,” he said, pointing at Shandahat. “Couldn’t you have done some plastic surgery on his face while he was out? Maybe removed it, even?” Shandahat crossed his arms and gave a little sniff, his nose in the air.
Leewa gave a low chuckle and turned towards Carol.

“Now I understand your word ‘clowns’. I will ‘tune out’, as you say. Ah, here is Treea now.” Another Miik female had entered the infirmary. She was wearing a uniform similar to the one in the original transmission, although hers showed signs of wear and hasty repairs. She had a sidearm holstered on her hip and some kind of medals or rank insignia on her left breast. She nodded to Carol and said, “Greetings. I am Treea, Adjunct to the Regime Council. I know you have questions and I would like to start by apologizing for gassing you. We didn’t know you were at Tylum Base for certain.” She pointed at the still-comatose Toran and Juluth. “They were our targets. When we realized who you must be we grabbed you too. It was for your own protection. If you’ll come with me, I can offer you more comfortable accommodations for our discussion. Leewa, return their belongings.” The doctor wheeled a small cart over to the beds and removed a cloth, revealing their phasers, and tricorders. Carol quickly passed everything out to the others. Treea turned to leave, gesturing for the Federation people to follow. They climbed off of their beds and formed up with the two security guards alongside Carol and Nog. Treea led the way out of the room.


The corridor they traveled was markedly different from the one Toran had led them down. The walls were bare, with dirty smears here and there. The light was provided by long white tubes mounted to the ceiling. Parts of the hall were dim where some of the tubes had failed. Paint was peeling on some of the doors they passed. The whole place had a neglected air to it. When they finally reached the meeting room and entered they found mismatched chairs just like at Tylum Base. The difference was that instead of gaudy works of art, the chairs here were a ramshackle collection of mostly battered metal ones. The room itself looked like it had once served a different purpose. Carol could see marks along the walls where some kind of equipment had been torn out. Treea gestured towards the scratched up table and chairs and took a seat. The Away team grabbed seats wherever they felt the chairs would hold them. They looked expectantly at the Miik officer. She cleared her throat.

“I would like to apologize again for how we treated you. We are not in the habit of gassing and kidnapping strangers. You were merely caught up in a pre-planned military operation. When we realized who you must be we grabbed you for your own safety. The Dresga are not known for their consideration towards others. You are not our prisoners, however. You can leave as soon as it is safe to do so.”

The others looked at Carol. “Who are the Dresga?” she asked. Treea sighed.

“That will take some explaining. Some years ago a minor transportation company here on Mii,” Nog gave M’Benga a sharp look, “Announced a great breakthrough. They had taken a ship to warp speed. After a trip to the next closest star system they came back to Mii telling of another intelligent species, the Verakians. This was Dresga Corporation. They contracted with the Regime to conduct trade with the Darnellon Unified State on Verak. Within a couple of years they branched out into computers and electronics. Their products were far superior to anything else available. All of the while, they kept a monopoly on warp technology. The combination of advanced computer systems and sole access to the interplanetary trade soon turned them into the largest conglomerate our society had ever known. They literally touched all aspects of everyday life. Their computers ran everything and their wealth meant that they could beat the competition in the numerous other fields they entered.” Treea stopped and looked off into space.

Carol said, “Well, it makes since that these Dresga control Tylum Base, then. If they had a monopoly on interplanetary travel-“Treea cut her off.

“They didn’t. We had interplanetary ships long before the Dresga became a force to be reckoned with. The Regime had its own ships and so did the Unified State. Dresga just held the monopoly on interstellar flight. They controlled affairs between the two worlds to a far greater degree than most of us realized. Some people became suspicious of their true intentions. A few of these had mysterious accidents. The rest were permitted to travel to Verak aboard Dresga vessels.”

“Let me guess,” Torres interjected, “They liked it so much they decided to stay.”

Treea nodded her head. “That was the way of it. We’ve since learned that affairs proceeded in a similar fashion on Verak. Then, about fifteen years ago, they made their move. They declared themselves the new ruling caste of both planets. I was young but I still remember the broadcast from Tylum Base calling for the dissolution of the Regime Council. My parents,” here a shadow crossed her face, “They were incredulous. The Council reacted the same way. Two days later, all of the computer-controlled transportation services stopped moving. Food rotted in loading bays while supplies ran out in the cities. Commerce ground to a halt. Citizens attacked Dresga offices here on Mii, only to be held off by some kind of force screen shielding no one knew they had.”

Nog nodded. “Makes sense. They would have needed some kind of shielding to handle warp speeds, otherwise their ships would have been shredded by dust particles and micrometeorites.”

Treea picked up her story again. “The Council decided to take drastic steps. They figured that even with a shield if they threw enough nuclear missiles at Tylum Base, which was the center of Dresga operations, something would get through. They didn’t realize how badly the computer network was corrupted. Every missile shut down as soon as it broke out of the atmosphere into space. The Dresga controlled them all. The council took a different approach. They used their own ships to capture or destroy anything capable of taking food from Mii to Tylum. They besieged all Dresga facilities here on the planet. It turned into a two and a half year long stalemate. Thousands died when the Dresga derailed every light-rail system planet wide. More died from starvation before the Council could circumvent the computer-controlled transportation system and get food to the cities.” She looked down at her lap. “I lost my parents during that time. Then the Dresga tried a couple of raids to seize food here on the planet. We knew they were running out up there. It was only a matter of time until they caved in.” Her voice sounded bitter in Carol’s ears. “We didn’t know anything. They used the missiles we had fired at them. In the chaos that followed they seized an entire hydroponics facility and transported it up to Tylum. They saved several thousand of their employees who were trapped here on the ground. Then they sent raiding parties into the museums. At first we didn’t understand, until a few days later when the rest of the missiles arrived. They looted the museums because they had written off the whole planet! “ Treea seemed on the verge of breaking down and the Starfleet officers exchanged uncomfortable looks.

In a soft voice Carol asked the question that was on all of their minds. “How many of you are left, Treea?”

The Miik woman pulled herself together. “We estimate eight or nine percent of the planet is still habitable. We don’t know for sure but we believe thousands survived the attack. Our numbers are dwindling, though. The radiation clouds come through and whole communities get sick and die. What’s left of the Council is virtually helpless. Travel on the surface is almost impossible.”

Shandahat’s antennae twitched a bit. “You must have some kind of intelligence on the Dresga. Otherwise you wouldn’t have been able to raid their facility and capture us.”

“We have a few people infiltrated into Tylum, sleeper agents who turned off the shield for us. It is very dangerous, though. Tylum Base is a small town, really. Suspicious behavior gets noticed quickly.”

“Shand?” Carol asked.

His antennae twitched again. “I’m just doing some fact gathering Commander.” He was lying and he knew she was aware of it. She didn’t call him on it, though. Instead, she asked Treea a question.

“Treea, why didn’t you send another message to the Federation? Ask for disaster relief or something.”

“We couldn’t. The transmitter was very old and it broke after that first message. Also, we knew the Dresga could listen in. It had been their transmitter years before. We just hoped you would send someone to help us. To be our friend, like the message said.”

Nog piped up, “What message?” Puzzled looks were exchanged around the table.

Treea looked confused for a moment. “The one that was-“She broke of and seemed to make a decision. “It might be easier if I showed you. Come with me.” She headed for the door they had come in through. The Away team followed her out into the hall. As they walked along Treea said, “The Dresga have spent years trying to hunt down what’s left of the legitimate government. The first few years after the bombardment we moved from one place to another. Then we stumbled across this facility. It was the original laboratory where they perfected their warp drive, before they used their wealth to establish a larger complex elsewhere. The original work was done in secret. We figured it was the last place they would look for us. So far we haven’t had any problems.” She led them past the infirmary into another wing which somehow looked even more decrepit. They were passed by the occasional Miik going about their tasks. “This place is deep underground and heavily shielded. No transmissions go in or out except through an isolated antennae in one of the labs. After we explored the labs thoroughly we realized why they had hidden it so well.” She stopped in front of a door, opened it and reached in to activate the lights. “You see, the Dresga didn’t invent their warp drive or all of their advanced electronics. They found it.”

Carol stood just inside the large room with her mouth hanging wide open. Nog was sputtering by her side, unable to say anything coherent. Shandahat let out a low whistle. Torres summed up everyone’s reactions. “Holy crap!” he said. It had obviously been stripped of almost all of its useful parts and was cradled on some sawhorse-like braces a few feet off of the ground. The outer plating had been removed and was piled neatly on the ground beneath it. Even from the doorway some fifty meters away the letters inscribed on the plating leaped out at them. FRIENDSHIP 6 .
 
That was a very interesting and feasible history for the Miik. It is not far-fetched at all to believe that a corporation which holds all the monopolies to advanced technology could become more powerful than any government (reminds me a tad of RoboCop)

M'Menga seemed interestingly unconcerend after waking up after being knocked out by gas though, as if nothing out of the ordinary had happened. Concern didn't seem to be necessary here but it would have been waranted.

I was also a bit confused at the end. I thought the revelation that they found warp technology instead of develop it themselves fascinating. But wasn't the Friendship ship launced back in the 60s?

I did enjoy this last segment but I thought you gave us a bit too much exposition too quickly, which leads to these very large pharagraphs which can be difficult to read.

It's a great story though and I wonder what M'Benga and Sajay's next step is going to be now that they are quite obviously involved in these people's development.
 
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