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"The Enemy" Line-by-Line!

CoveTom

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Greetings, programs!

We recently completed our "Deja Q Line-by-Line" thread.

After each completed thread, I, or my youthful ward LeadHead, randomly pick someone who participated in the thread to choose the next episode we do. Random.org selected thread participant MacLeod to be our next chooser. And MacLeod has chosen "The Enemy" as our next line-by-line adventure.

For any unfamiliar with our "game," you are asked to post only a single line (defined as one character speaking without interruption by another character) per message. You can post as often as you like, but someone else must post a line in between your posts.

As before, at the conclusion of this thread, we will pick someone at random from among all the participants to choose the next episode we do.

Enjoy!
 
[Surface of Galorndon Core]

(Riker, LaForge, and Worf beam in.)

RIKER: Placing beam-out marker. Return transport, fourteen minutes, forty seconds. Is your view any better, Geordi?
 
Worf: Communicators are dysfunctional.

(They had to bring the Jerry Springer communicators......)
 
Geordi: Commander! Picking up something on the positron scan. Over here. Some electrically conductive objects.

(Metallic debris)
 
LAFORGE: Picking up traces of ultritium residue. An explosive device must've been used to destroy the craft after it crashed.
 
Riker: All right, lets spread out. 25 meter radius. Our window back closes in 12 minutes.
 
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(They spread out and soon lose sight of each other)

WORF: Commander! (Worf has found a Romulan) Commander Riker!

(The Romulan is alive, and tries to strangle Worf. He knocks him unconscious and Riker arrives. Meanwhile, La Forge falls down a hole into mud. He is out cold and his Visor has come off. Riker and Worf carry the Romulan back to the beam-out marker)

WORF: Four minutes to beam-up.
 
Riker: Where is he? Wait here.

Geordi comes to in the ditch. Geordi gets up and sees how far it is to the surface.
 
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