The capture of the Prometheus, Part 2

[Veers]

A few weeks ago I posted Part One of my story, "A Gift of Fire," about the events leading up to, during, and after the Voyager episode "Message in a Bottle." I have just finished Part Two of "A Gift of Fire." This installment actually deals with the Romulan seizure of the Prometheus and leads up to the events we see in the episode. Two more chapters are coming.

You can read Chapter Two on FanFiction.net, where I've just posted it:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4333656/2/

 

[Mistral]

Its ok to post something like this in the original thread-it will show up as a new addition to the post. I'll read it tomorrow at lunch and give you feedback-as I recall, this is a cool little story.

edit-yes, a very cool story. I liked the way you explained the events we knew from the other side-very well thought out. Looking forward to Chap 3.

 

[smeos]

Nicely done, the Romulans certainly came off as merciless bastards.

A minor thing, but it seemed to me that most of the Starfleet crew studied at the Imperial Stormtrooper school of marksmanship.