SW Episode One: The Clone Wars

[Jedi Marso]

*Mods: Wasn't sure where to put this, since this forum seems to be for Trek fanfic, but since this is a fanfic I went ahead and put it here. Feel free to move it to sci-fi if that's a better place for it. Thanks -JM


Finally finished that Episode 1 fanfic, aptly titled: "The Clone Wars". It came in at just over 100,000 words, and it can be found on post number 7 of this page.

The file was too big to upload as a single pdf; it's broken down into three files, each with 4 chapters.

Just as a quick review, here's what my version of episode 1 is lacking:

Gungans
Midichlorians
Prophecies
Virgin Births

Here's are elements I've changed/added:

The Clone Wars start 10 years earlier than the canon version
Obi-Wan is a thirty-something Jedi Knight
Anakin is 16 years old; his experience as a slave is much worse.
Padme has been revamped- new name, new character.
Antarian Rangers!!
A more "McQuarrie" milieu.
Jedi Order is based off Coruscant and not so involved in politics.
Jedi padawans are recruited when older and more integrated into galactic society as knights- the order is much less 'cloistered.' No 'baby-theft' in this version!
Darth Maul is fleshed out- he's a three-episode villain.

For anyone who's interested, enjoy!!

 

[JPSEric]

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[Jedi Marso]

Registered at WordForge but couldn't access the page.

As far as I know there shouldn't be any reason why you can't. If you are still interested, I'd recommend contacting either Elwood or Tamar over over there; they should be able to fix you up.