Very much enjoyed it!
Here are my cheers and jeers:
Jeers:
"Space- the final frontier..." I don't think if Paramount ever did another
Trek show, short of one about the Enterprise, that they would ever re-do
Kirk's (and Picard's updated) intro speech. I think it's fine that Exeter
made their own version, as they are trying to re-create the TOS feeling, and
Section 31 and Lost Frontier made their twisted versions to illustrate the
twisted Trek universe they take place in, but just re-doing it with a couple
of words changed is getting silly. I wish you and Defiant would come up with
a more original way to open your shows. Please?
Also really dislike the use of Next Gen's opening music/sound fx tacked onto
the beginning of your opening theme song. Unoriginal and unecessary.
Chief Engineer's accent. Sounds like a weirdly bad Scotty... or Sean
Connery. Sorry.
I wished there were more good female roles. I think you only have two? I
like Numi, an enthusiastic young science officer with a friendly but
respectful relationship with the Captain. We haven't gotten to know Palmer
yet.
Total nitpick- When the Romulans were going to ram the ship- shouldn't
someone have ordered "evasive maneuvers"?
Not in love with the crew (yet). A white male Captain, a sarcastic doctor,
an Irish Chief Engineer, and an alien XO- a little too familiar on the
surface, but it's too early to judge them of course.
Have you thought of putting it on iTunes as a podcast? It's a great way of
keeping updated.
Pros-
Very professionally done audio.
Love the movie era correct sound fx. I love the movie era- I wish they
stayed there, but again, too soon to judge why you put a movie era ship &
crew in the 24th century. Hope it's a good reason.
I love that your first episode starts out with EXPLORATION. We get way too little of that in fan productions and modern Trek. Too much war, not enough "strange, new worlds". I hope we get more in upcoming episodes.
The actor playing the Captain really hits the mark. Clearly a professional.
Overall, a very impressive first effort. I hope you go on for a long time. Can't wait 'til episode 2.